’what DESTINY holds’--RA-part19+epilogue.. - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

10 din ho gaye continue kiyee......Jaldi likho na plzz.......Warna main Government se kehke naya law banwaungi ki tumhe apni story roz continue karni hogi....harr din.... 😆



hey vandu jaldise yeh law banwa do

any ways lovely part dear
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Posted: 17 years ago

i just loveeeeeeeeeeeee this part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............finally rahil realized nethra importance in his life!!! ....nethra seems in ultra shock 😆.....aghir rahil ek din main itna kaese badal gaya 😉?????....love the garden scene it was really cute 😛!!!!!!!.................1st time that nethra n rahil enjoy their toghter soo much in the car ......or else they will be quiet!!!!!!!!!!!................. chalo shukar hai rishi nai bhie neha ko apni dil ki baat bata die 😉.....par in rishi style 😛.....wease dono ki jodi achie hai 😉......both r mischvious 😆!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................ hmmmmmmm nethra n rahil toghter, holding hands n blushing .........kya baat hai 😉 😳 😉!!!!!!!!!!!! ...........khas main waha hotie 😕........koy baat nahie imagine tou karsakti hou 😉!!!!!..... did he confess his love 4 her? put some romantic nethra n rahil scene plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...................jaida intezaar mat karwana 😭.............waitting eagerly for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................

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Posted: 17 years ago
mehendi continue soon na dear..me waiting eagerly for the next part... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jaldi continue.......main law banwane wali hoon abhi 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
i hvnt started writting d part yet , my laptop ws nt working frm past 6 days.. 😡 , i will write d part as soon as i can... 😊 😊 ...

n thnx all d reader fr all d replies...i m way too glad 😉

luv ya all,
😊 mehndi 😊
Edited by liquidfantasy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
mehendii...kaha ho..continue soon please... 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
oopss...sorry fr d delay!!

here i m wid the part.. 😊 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago





PART-16



wid that naughty smile they planned something n started moving towards them.

meanwhile the 2 new lovers whr all silent n just gazing each other.suddenly there ws so much hussle-bussle around them that they got scared fr a moment bt sighed as soon as saw the 2 people doing them.

rishi n neha both had greeted them , ordered 2 chairs , n now were sitting besides them...n all this took place in merely 5-7 seconds.their eyes were still seeing them , brain ws still trying to understand d whole thing....

"waiter.."called rishi.
"ur order sir"
"one dal , one shahi paneer , one mattar do pyaza n 8 rotis."
"10 mins sir."
"neha wt will u hv??"
"arrey itna to order kiya.bohot hai hum dono ke liye."
"hum dono"whispered rahil.
"kuchh dessert logi?"rishi askd agn.
"haan , shahi tukda fr me."
"lekin mera shahi tukda to tum ho."n he held her hand , across d table , under their nose.

rahil n nethra stared them blankly.

they started talking agn as if they hvnt seen rahil n nethra yet.

"nautanki puri huyi ya kuchh baki hai??"said frustrated rahil.
"huh??nautanki..."askd rishi wid confused xpressions.
"haan..nautanki...chalo apni table par jao.mujhe pata hai tum dono date par ho!!"
"par yahi order kar diya......."rishi ws cut in between by rahil.
"wahan aa jayega.."n he pointed to oder unoccupied table.
"matlab hum jayein?"rishi askd agn wid a sad face.
"nahi tum log kyu jaoge , hum hi chale jaate hain , chalo nethra!"
"waise aap jahan jayenge hamein wahi payenge??"rishi said wid a mischevious smile.
"aap dusri table par aa kar to dikhaye..."warned rahil wid a raised brow.
"nw u r challenging me bro..."
"yeah...i m!!"
"fine...i will be..."he ws cut agn by rahil.
"watever u decide to do , jst rem that old rahil is back...."

they started to move...bt..

"with full on bang...literally!!"rahil whispered in his ear coming back.
"u mean to scare me?"
"n warn u...or whichever way u take...u know me.."
"if u r saying that wid concern...which u r...then only i m nt gonna follow u..aftr all u r like my elder bro n i completely respect u."
"i m glad fr that."rahil said wid a wink...

n went away his arm arnd his wife's waist n a happy smile.a pair of eyes wr following them.

"tum to sachmuch darr gaye.."askd neha.
"its his happy smile for which i can die for...missed that fr years.."
"i know...i too have!!"she added n gave him a small hug.
"u know it ws a wise decision of rajput sir.i nvr knew it wud turn out to be this way!!"
"yeah...rajput sir has got d vision that only nethra cud get back old rahil."

--

"aapne to sachmuch rishi ko dara diyaa."askd nethra sitting on a faraway table.
"wo dara nahi...mujhe janta hai."
"pata hai rishi , huda , neha ali , pooja sab aapko bohot miss karte the.everyone used to pray fr u , ask me wen u will get well , hw u r...bt rishi always stand in silence.his eyes asking silent question."
"he is like a bro to me."
"i can sense that."she said wid a smile.
"ab uski hi baatein karti rahogi ya dinner bhi order karogi."

**

"thnx rahil fr a wunderful evening."nethra said , keeping hand on his heart and standing close to him while in they entered d room.

it ws late. 1.30...they wr sleepy bt at the same time were not.their close proximity ws d reason.as if the things startd happening on their own...she dragged him out to d balcony.it ws dark n silent bt d moon ws giving them enuff light to see each oder...

baadlon mein chhup raha hai chand kyu,
apni husn ki zaya se puchh lo,
chandani padi hua hai maand kyu,
apni hi kisi ada se puchh lo...

baadlon mein chhup raha hai chand kyu,
apni husn ki zaya se puchh lo,
chandani padi hua hai maand kyu,
apni hi kisi ada se puchh lo...

she askd looking at d b'ful moon who ws playing hide n seek wid dem , hiding behind a cloud.n he answered her back , holding her frm behind.they both looking at d moon.

meri hasraton pe bekhudi se chha gayi,
tumko dekh kar nigaah ladkhada gayi,

meri hasraton pe bekhudi se chha gayi,
tumko dekh kar nigaah ladkhada gayi,
nigaah ladkhada gayi,
nigaah ladkhada gayi,
nigaah ladkhada gayi...
ho raha hoon mein nashe mein chur kyu,
jhoomti hui faza se puchh lo,
ho raha hai ye suroor kyu,
meri zulf ki ghata se puchh lo...

she said swaying in the slowly flowing wind.he came forward , held her hands , then travelled his hand , to her shoulder n then playing wid her long black hair.


baadlon mein chhup raha hai chand kyu,
apni husn ki zaya se puchh lo,
chandani padi hua hai maand kyu,
apni hi kisi ada se puchh lo...


door mujhse gham hai aur khushi kareeb hai,
aaj mera pyaar kitna khushnaseeb hai,

door mujhse gham hai aur khushi kareeb hai,
aaj mera pyaar kitna khushnaseeb hai,
kitna khushnaseeb hai,
kitna khushnaseeb hai,
kitna khushnaseeb hai,
jhoomta hai mera ang ang kyu,
apni ruuh ki sada se puchh lo,
baj rahe hain dil mein jaltarang kyu,
geet chhedti hawa se puchhlo....

they were hugging each oder , her head buried in his chest h his head buried somewhere around her neck.they remained there fr some time.

baadlon mein chhup raha hai chand kyu,
apni husn ki zaya se puchh lo,
chandani padi hua hai maand kyu,
apni hi kisi ada se puchh lo...

[movie:fir teri kahani yaad aayi.]


they slowly came back to their room.he made her sit on the bed n he himself settled next to her , eyes locked , slowly the distance ws lessening....heart beating faster , eyes closed...hands travelling to neck...lips coming closer every second...more seconds...few more...n...his hold lossened...she opened her eyes.....

he sat their looking glum..n damn upset.nethra ws suddenly worried seeing him like this.she put her hand on his cheek.he looked towards her...his eyes said that saomething ws wrong....wat??then again looked down.he knew the question in her eyes...bt he said nothing.he remembered how he kissed asmi...n he had a sudden pain in his heart...he relived all d pain...6 yrs in few seconds...y??

"rahil , kya hua??"

he walked away frm there near d window , staring the moon...the same moon they were admiring few minutes b4....he started remembering b'ful time he had wid nethra....at her home...time wen he missed her...at restaurant...and then..wen he ws close...so close..wt he ws doing...he needed to tell her everything.the load of grudge he carried ws becoming heavier every secon now...he had to let out d past...past abt him n asmi...bt is this d right time...he thot...bt sometime he has to tell....he turned..n saw her standing....worried...upset..he knew he ws punishing her of nothing.she is his wife n has every right to feel him...he too wantd...to touch her , feel her....kiss her...

he ws nt able to make his mind...now or some oder time...some oder time he made a mental note to tell her soon.

"sorry nethra!!"he said.
"par..hua kya??"she demanded an answer.
"bataunga...zarur bataunga...aur bohot jald...par is waqt mujhe maaf kar do."

she smiled...

"i will wait!!"


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Posted: 17 years ago
so posted part-16!! 😊 😆

this fic is gonna end in 2-3 more parts!!hvnt planned d end yet...bt definately romance is on d cards!! 😉 😉


thnx all d readers...i luv u all!! 😊 😆
😊 😆 mehendi 😆 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg amazing part 👏 bt rahil's behaviour was really hurting 😭

bt plz continue soon i can't wait for nxt part

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