’what DESTINY holds’--RA-part19+epilogue..

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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awww mehndi...that was such a nice part..rahil calling nethra pari...and waise dekha jaye tho nethra rahil kii life mein rahil kii pari bankar hii aayi hai...the part was very well written..the party scene of rahil & nethra.. aur phir rishi aur rahil ka scene...his friends..all was too goos...perfect...really awesome..amazing.. too good.. i loved it completely from the bottom of my heart...keep up the good work going....simply superb.. fantastic... excellent...par excellence...nice... marvelous... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part damn eagerly.... 😊 😛 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Wow !!! Awesome part............Superb !!!👏👏👏...Loved it........Continue soon !! Y doesnt he forget Asmi😭

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Posted: 17 years ago

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.gr8 part dear.. 👏 .plz continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: togepe30
Hey continue soon........Where r u??? Kabse gayab ho 😭

vandu dear mehndi just posted the 13th part a new part... check page 14....😊

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Originally posted by: sun_423

vandu dear mehndi just posted the 13th part a new part... check page 14....😊

Ya..........I just saw.......Abhi edit kiya apna post.......! I was missing the story soo much😳😃

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

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awesome part yaar! read the last two updates....they are awesome..........rahil is getting back to his nowmal self again, but there still something missing ! ! !......what's that? when r u going to reveal wht happend to asmi!!??......nethra is so sweet..... always looking after rahil, but he's always ignoring her.......though i think rahil has started to build feeling for her, but he's pushing it !!!!!!!!!..............................yaar continue soon plzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!can't wait for the next part!!!!....waitting eagerly.............

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Jaldi continue karo na plzzzz!! 😭

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liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey all..
so i m back..this time i m bit late par itna to chalta hai na..

the weder is f9 arnd here..raining..thandi hawa chal rahi hai...kinda romantic...
so the part shud b romantic too...

thnx everyone 😳 😳...luvd ur replies... 😊
continue wid it n more..

luv ya all,
mehandi 😊

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liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

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PART-14

"ye nethra kahan gayi"he murmered as he entered his house , late frm office n didnt saw her there on d sofa.TV ws also turned off.food ws there on table , bt no nethra.he went in his room to change n thot mayb she is there.

he entered his room , switched on d light bt it ws empty.no trace of her.he ws suddenly restless...

"kaka...kaka...kaha hain aap??"his worried voice made bansi kaka to reply immidiately.
"ji baba...kya hua?aap kuchh pareshaan lag rahe hain!"
"kaka wo nethra nazar nahi aa rahi , itna late ho gaya hai kahan hai wo?"
"arrey beta , shaam ko uske papa ka fone tha.kuchh tabiyat kharab hai unki isliye wahan gayi hai."
"wapas kab aayegi??"
"ye to kuchh bataya nahi usne.beta , khana rakha hai kha lo."
"ji kaka aap aaram kijiye main kha loonga."

he started eating d food , jaise hi shuru ki he cud imagine nethra sitting opposite to him n eating.he smiled.

"kahan thi tum?"he asked wid a bit of anger.

she jst smiled n disappeared.

he realised it ws jst his imagination.

he left the food uneaten n moved towards his room to sleep.as he entered , he saw nethra in her pink gown standing near the balcony n smiling.he too smiled n took a step towards her.bt she again disappeared.

he turned the lights off n went to sleep.lekin kuchh ghanton tak wo bas karwatein hi badalta raha.reh reh kar use nethra ki yaad aa rahi thi.he ws missing her.it has been few hrs since she has gone n that 'alone' feeling ws nt comfortable.he saw d time in mobile it ws 1.00 in d night.aftr thinnking fr few more minutes in he dialled a no. , the bell ws ringing on d oder side.aftr 2-3 bells , a sweet bt sleepy voice answered.

"hello..kaun hai."
"baat mat karna tum mujhse."an angry male voice woke her out of her sleep.
"rahil , aap , itni raat ko sab theek to hai?"she ws worried.
"kuchh theek nahi hai , tummne bataya kyu nahi ki tumhe jana hai."
"maine kaka ko kaha tha..."
"kaka ko batana zaruri samjha , mujhe nahi."
"aisa nahi hai rahil , tum jante ho , papa bohot yaad kar rahe the isliye thoda BP bhi high ho gaya tha to mujhe aana pada."
"to bata to sakti thi , tumhe to fikr hi nahi hai meri , janti tumhe jab drawing room mein nahi dekha to kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha main."
"sorry rahil , aur main 2 din main to aa jaungi na."she really felt bad fr nt telling him.
"2 din..."he panicked."itne din kya karogi wahan."
"rahil papa ki tabiyat..."
"ohh...kaise hain papa ab...??"his anger calmed down a little.
"papa theek hain , dawayi di hai , ab so rahe hain."
"main bhi unse milne aa jata hoon fir ek saath hi wahan se aayenge theek hai."
"haan , papa bhi puchh rahe the ki aap kaise hain."
"theek hai fir main kal raat tak pohonch jaunga..theek hai."
"haan ye sahi hai."she ws also happy.
"theek hai fir , dhyaan rakhna apna aur papa ka bhi.gd nt."
"gd nt rahil , aur suno , i missed u too."
"gd nt."he said again.
"gd nt."she replied.
"gd nt."
"haan gd nt."
"gd nt nethra fone rakho."
"ohh...gd nt , bye."n she blushed.

he ws laying on his bed , had a sweet smile.n thinking of her , he slept.

it ws morning.

"baba..baba...utho , baba....mera haath to chhodo..rahil baba..."

he opened his eyes , half n saw an old man sitiing near him wid a smile.

"arrey kaka aap..??"he woke up.
"haan , tumhe uthane aaya tha , lekin tum pichhle 1 ghante se mera haath pakad kar bas hase hi ja rahe ho."

he saw his in kaka's hand n left that immidiately.

"ohh..wo to.."
"haan samajhta hoon , roz to nethra bitiya uthati hogi na tumhe.9 baj chuke hain office nahi jana??"
"kya 9 baj gaye , oh god..itna late kaise ho gaya..!!"

kaka left to do his work.since nethra had left , he had to do work more..

in his room rahil had brushed n ws standing in front of wardrobe n wondering how come he had so many clothes , if he had y didnt he noticed it b4??

a shelf ws full of suits of all brands n colors , the oder had matching shirts n ties.he took out a suit bt then shirt didnt matched , then shirt matched bt tie didnt n where the hell are his socks??oh god...

"nethra to 1 min mein hi kapde nikal deti hai , ab kya karoon.mumma to aaram kar rahi hogi aur kaka se kya puchhoon.1 hi din ki baat hai pehan jaata hoon kuchh bhi."he thot aloud.

he closed his eyes n randomly picked one suit , shirt n tie...he didnt even glanced back wat he ws to wear in few mins frm now.

he ws back n started changing.

"ohh shit aaj to nethra ke ghar bhi jaana hai...fir aise kapde kaise pehnoonga??"he thot again.

he had chose agn a mismatch of suit n shirt...bt this time it ws terrible!!

he zeroed on to wear casuals fr change today.he took out a blue shaded denims , with white collared shirt n he had seen RANVIJAY[frm roadies , i love him 😉] donning a waist coat in newspaper previous day.so he too took out a black colored waist coat n wore it over shirt n truly it rocked!!

stll socks were a problem...

"kaka , zara upar aana plzz.."
"ji baba..kahiye??"he came aftr 2 mins n replied.he ws surprised to see rahil in casuals.
"wo..nethra socks kahan rakhti hai??"

kaka ws seeing him questioningly bt wid a small smile..

"yahi rakhti hain..."he said pointing towards d drawer at d bottom of cupboard.
"theek hai aap breakfast lagao main aa raha hoon."

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"goodmorn...."ms mehandi[dats me] his secretary saw him n forgot to wish him..
"goodmorning mehandi...hw u doing?"he said in hurry n entered his cabin , he too ws blushing at d secret glances of his secretary.

in cabin , rishi n huda wr waiting to discuss something...

"ye rahil ko kya hua , pehle to itna late nahi hua.."
"aa jayega , tum bekaar hi itna pareshaan ho rahe ho rishi."
"haan , lekin..."

"good morning gentlemen!!"he came n greeted.
"'gentlemen'??"said a confused rishi.
"jaldi bolo kaun ho tum aur mera wo thaka hua dost rahil kahan hai?"huda said wid shockd expressions.
"thaka hua...abhi batata hoon..."said rahil n walked towards huda..
"sach batao kaun ho tum , itne smart aur handsome , rahil to aisa na tha.matlab pehle tha fir wo jaldi hi budha ho gaya ab...khair..waise fr a change achhe lag rahe ho!"
"thnx.."he said."achha chalo meeting shuru karte hain."he said to change d topic.

aftr d meeting , he went fr lunch n told his frnds the reason fr this sudden change in him n that he is going to his sasural n will return nxt day wid her.while in cafetaria , the CD player ws playing this b'ful song n he
ws so absorbed in d lyrics that he slowed down on his lunch..

na hai ye paana , na khona hi hai,
tera na hona jaane.....kyu hona hi hai,

[he remembers how he imagined her previous night while eating his food alone]

tumse hi din hota hai,
surmayi shaam aati hai,

tumse hi , tumse hi

[he remembers her waking him up every morning bt this morning it ws kaka n how shockd he ws to not to see nethra]

har ghadi saans aati hai,
zindagi kehlati hai,

tumse hi , tumse hi

aankhon mein aankhein teri,
baahon mein baahein teri,
mera na mujh mein kuchh raha....hua kya
baaton mein baatein teri,
raatein saugaatein teri,
kyu tera sab ye ho gaya...hua kya

[he remembers her non stop talking n this time he missed it]

main kahin bhi jaata hoon,
tumse hi mil jaata hoon,

tumse hi , tumse hi

[he remembers that he ws imagining her everytime since last night.at the dining table , in his bedroom n in d morning]

shor mein khamoshi hai,
thodi se behoshi hai

tumse hi , tumse hi

"arrey rahil tumhe bhabhi ko lene jaana hai na , to fir tum jao main sab dekh loonga."said rishi n made him to leave office.

it ws 7 in d evening.he didnt knew how time went by bt he wantd to finish the work as soon as possible n then drive to her.it wud tk arnd 3 hrs drive to reach there.he started driving d car n switched on d radio n song that ws playing ws same as he ws listening during d lunch.

he agn ws so engrossed in lyrics as he ws in d morning.suddenly all the words started making sense.he cud easily relate his situation to that song.it ws true fr him right now.

aadha sa vaada kabhi,
aadhe se zyada kabhi,
jee chahe main kar loon is tarah...wafa ka
chhode na chhute kabhi,
tode na tute kabhi,
jo dhaaga tumse hai jud gaya....wafa ka

[he decides that he will tell her how much he missed her n wud nvr ever allow her to go newhr without telling him.he mentally makes a promise to tell her all this , definately.he also remembered his simple marriage to her.n now hw much delighted he is now fr d same.]

main tera sarmaya hoon,
jo bhi main ban paya hoon,

tumse hi , tumse hi

[he remembers her in d hospital.her taking care of him , talking to him fr hrs n hrs , always being there whenever he needed.it ws coz of her that he ws alright.he smiled at his luck n thanked god.]

raastein mil jaatein hain,
manzilein mil jaati hain,

tumse hi , tumse hi.

[movie:jab we met]

finally crossing d long way , he reached her home in dehradun.he wanted to rush , ring the bell n pour all his thots that he had in car.he did the 1st part , d 2nd part bt stopped suddenly...he rem something..

"'rahil pehli baar apne sasural ja raha hai , aur tere papa ki tabiyat bhi kharab hai to fruits or flowers le jana mat bhoolna...ho sake to nethra ke liye gift..'"that ws rishi advicing him in d lunch.

"shit.."
"kya hua rahil..??"askd nethra , they both wr standing at door itself.
"main bas 5 min mein aaya.."
"par rahil..ja kahanrahe ho??"
"abhi aaya..bohot baatein karni hain tumse.bas 5 min.."he acted n showed her 5 mins wid his hand n drove to nearest market.

he ws back again in few mins , nethra ws standing there only waiting fr him.he came wid a very b'ful bouquet of carnations...

"ye kya..??"askd nethra.she ws happy obviously.
"andar se kisiko bhej do...car mein thoda samaan aur hai.."
"par ye sab..??"
"anadar nahi bulaogi?"
"ohh..haan andar aao.."
"pehle papa se mil lete hain."

they went to his dad's room , rahil took aashirwaad n askd abt his health.nethra's dad ws very happy seeing d old rahil back jst as rajput had promised!!

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Edited by liquidfantasy - 17 years ago