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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
she had 5 guns pointing at her head!er head!

"what d hell are you doing here?"
the'boss' asked her....blunt & rude..

oh man!...c'mon nia think of something!!..
buy yourself time!

"a...a...sir...i know you want to kill me too
coz i saw everything....but trust me...
main apna mooh kholne waalon mein se nahi hoon...
all i care about is drugs & money..."

she went on to say...
"i can attract customers for you too!"

everything sounded so false even to her ears...
she wondered if these guys would believe it....

"hmmm......she's got a point thapar!
atract to yeh kaafi logon ko kar sakti hai..."
he rubbed his chin...

& she found herself being thoroughly assessed...
from top to bottom....

fury rose in the pits of her belly...
but dis time round she knew better than
to divert their thoughts!

maybe her attractiveness would save her life!

"par raheja..."

thapar called the so-called boss

"itni risk leni ki kya zaroorat hai!
we'll find plenty like her...
lets finish her off...!"

her heart hung on every
word dat was being spoken...

she was being discussed as if she was a vegetable &
these guys were deciding if she
was tasty enough to be eaten or not!!

wat an outrageous comparison!!

she felt sick...

there was a brief silence before raheja went on...

"she's a nice piece...lets try her out tonight!
ample time to prove herself!!...
we can have some fun...
aur agar mazaa nahi aaya to uthake phaik denge....
it's easy...."

the knots in her stomach tightened...

wat if dey...she'd rather die!!

"hmmm...maal to accha hai...upar chalte hain...."

she knew she'd been granted life for a few hours...
but she had to escape before they got their hold on her...

"tum dono laash ko yahaan se nikaalo....
charles...hold her back to gunpoint while we escort her
to our room...."
thapar pointed to a man...

she found herself being led through the crowded bar again...
yahaan par shor machaoongi to
na to kisi ko sunaai dene waala hai...
& neither will anyone bother...!

besides inhone firing shuru kar di...to
lots of innocent people will die...

i can't do a thing!...
shit!!...
kaash raj yahaan ruk gaya hota...

he could have forced me....idiot!
yeh ladke samajhte hi nahi hai ki
ladkiyon ki na mein bhi haan hoti hai!

ab main kya karoon?????????????????????

was it sheer coincidence...
or her amazing luck??

how could he be here?....

par main uski attention divert kaise karoon....

on one side of her walked thapar..
& on d other raheja...
they held her tightly by the waist..
squeezing her to them...
caressing her....
she felt pukish...gross...disgusted...!!

right behind her walked 'charles'
holding a silencer fitted gun at her back....

there isn't a way out!

suddenly an idea struck her...
it was too frail to work...
but she had to try...!
...............................................

dil ne tumko ,chun liya hai...
tum bhi dil ko chuno naa...
khaab koi...dekhta hai...
tumbhi sapne buno naa...
dil yeh mera, tumse kuch keh raha hai..
suno na...

i shouldn't have left her...
par main kis hak se rukta...
he wondered as he drove around the streets...

she's one hell of a woman...!
intelligent & warm...
will she be able to handle herself??
.............
when he reached home...
navin stood out in d garden...

"kya hua...tu baahar kyon khada hai?"

"you're alone??...
i thought naina was wid you...!"
he sounded upset..worried..

"she was...i dropped her to the...
the bar..."

"you what??!...kya raj!...
stop pushing & encouraging her
... will you??
she's my sister...
yahaan main tension main uski wait kar raha hoon...
& you've left her stranded at some silly bar...
i thought you cared!!"
he accused him...

"stop it nanoo!...she's my friend too!
& how dare you accuse me of not caring!
kya tu mujhe bas itna hi jaanta hai??"
he fought back...

"she...is...my...sis..!
you don't even have one!
how d hell would you understand
wat i'm goin through?"
he yelled...

"navin!!...you're sick!
& i've had enough of your rubbish accusations...
thanx for trusting me soooooooo much friend!!
i'm leavin..."
he was so angry...his voice dripped with sarcasm...

he walked off to collect his stuff....

after 15 minutes, navin sneaked upto him...

"ah..raj..."

"go away!!"

"sorry yaar.." he murmured...

"i'm sorry dat u'r my best friend!"
he continued descending the stairs...

"look...i'm really sorry...
i didn't mean to be rude yaar!
bas itni tension mein kya bol raha hoon ...
kuch samajh nahi aa raha...
i wouldn't have left her alone there.."

"neither would i!!...
why is it so difficult for you to
believe dat she might find help there?"

"u mean u...."

"exactly...!"

"pehle kyon nahi bataaya?"

"yeah right!...
janaab ko mujh par chillaane se fursat
milti to kuch bolta na!"

"a..oh..yeah..sorry again ...kaun hai wahaan?"
..............................
the place was filled with smoke...so
her chances of being sighted were difficult...

after a few steps...
she began coughing & shaking loudly...
so dat the men were forced to leave her...
& look at her...

meanwhile her hands worked in a frenzy...

her bag ...
she knew had lots of mirrors studded on it...
& she'd placed herself right under a chandelier...

as she shook...a bit too violently...

her bag dangled from her hands...&
the mirrors reflected the light into his face...

"kaun hai??..."
he wondered...
when the light continuously struck his eyes...

he looked up...trying to find its source...
& saw a bag striking it directly into his eyes...

he would've looked away...
but sumhow he thought he recognised d bag...

his eyes moved upward...
& he was left shocked at her sight!

yeh yahaan kya kar rahi hai!!
& dat too in such a pathetic attire!

she acted as if she'd regained composure once she'd
seen him glance at her...& smiled seductively at
her capturers...

they held her yet again...
& took her to yet another lobby...
where she saw lots of rooms lined out.....

not much time!

she hoped...& prayed dat he hadn't been drunk...
dat he'd recognised her amidst those fumes...

coz if he hadn't...
then the only alternative she had was death!
she wouldn't allow dem to touch her!..
not as long as she lived!


they opened a room...

naina knew d door would be closed....

so she quickly slipped off her ring on d floor...
luckily no one noticed....

"charles...jaa kar dekho laash dispose hui yaan nahin..
we'll be here for a looooooooooong time..."
thapar stepped closer to her...
& pulled her in....

the door was shut...
& her heartbeats thumped faster by the second....
.................................
when she was being taken away....

he'd wondered if she was willingly into all this...

but when he'd seen her pleading eyes...
her pale face...&
most importantly the gun stacked on her...

he'd realised she was in knee-deep trouble..!

setting aside his drink,
he began following them....

he was probably a bit too late...coz
he saw d man wid d gun coming back
...& the others
had disappeared...

charles passed him...
they didn't even glance at each other...

he'd decided to strike the man and
ask him where naina was being held,
when his eyes fell on a ring...

a ring dat was too expensive
to be lying there for a long time...

dat could only mean dat it had
purposely been dropped...but why..?

to attract his attention....he understood...

"u've got brains !...
aisi situation mein bhi dimaag kaam kar raha hai...
himmat ki daat deta hoon...
but now it's time for some action!"
..................................

she was pushed on to the bed....
& a drink was forced in her hands...

she knew it had drugs...but she still drank...
gulping it in one go!

she was sweating profusely with fear now.....
she wasn't even trained in martial arts...
she wondered!

her hands were clutched tightly...

the room was huge...it was a suite....

"main doosre kamre mein hoon....
u have your share...den i will..."
raheja winked at thapar ,
put on d music & left....

great...one's going to be easier to handle...

you touch me & you're dead fella!!

she took a deep breath....
arching one of her
knees a bit higher...
so as to strike him wen he neared...

where d hell is he?!!...
i hope he didn't miss my sign...

she shook a little now....
almost on d verge of tears....

under the man's gaze...she already fell naked...

"don't do this to me...please..."
she finally begged the man...

thapar's eyebrows went up...

"resistance is tempting baby....
but i wonder tumhaara mood
suddenly change kyon ho gaya!
saying so...he clutched her arms....&
bent down to strip her...!

she felt faint...
the drug having its effect...all
her strength disappearing....
her knee went down again...

thapar was about to close in on her
wen d door burst open...

he kicked thapar off her...
& she sighed...calming her heartbeats...
tears falling down ..finally..

"get out of here!"
he shouted at her...

"par tum..."

"leave naina...jaao!... "
he continued kicking him...

"they've got guns...andar bhi ek hai..."

the music was too loud..
so probably raheja hadn't heard a thing..

"u'll pay for this sweetie!..very soon!"

thapar threatened her...
& got a box on his face...

"here's my car keys....
i'll handle them...tum
niklo naina!...."
he shouted...

..........................

she knew he'd handle them....

"oh no!...mera bag to andar...
chuck it...jaan bach gayi yahi bahut hai!"

she clutched her forehead...
she was feeling a bit drowsy again....

........

she was driving wen she realised ki ghar par
kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi hoga....

forget it!...
unhe phone karna matlab 100 gaaliyaan aur khaana!
..............

a truck was following her....
...............

the last thing she heard was the sound of
tearing metal and snapping branches.....


then something hit her head, hard &

the world went blank!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
that was interesting part too good...very well written.. keep up the goof work going... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for it.... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cool....and interesting............. 😳 😳 😳 exciting.......
it was a superb update..thanx a lot...

btw- i'm glad u r back with an update 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Raj's cell was ringing....

it was 2 a.m...

both navin & raj had dozed
off in the living room itself
waitin for naina to return....
........................
a little while back...


the pulp truck's headlights
had been directly behind her now...,
pushing & blinding her...

the foggy winter night didn't
help her either.....

on top of it all...
a heavy downpour had begun.....

her mind was slipping ...
& she tried to regain her composure...

the first crash left her weak & shaken...

something else too was terribly wrong...

her stomach was doing funny things...
she knew
all she needed was fresh air...
but the brakes had failed....!

the second bump...shot her reflexes...!

dizzy & disoriented..

she fumbled with the seat belt...
but it refused to respond to
her clumsy fingers ....

panic slammed into her as she
struggled to free herself,but
her movements were awkward....

this isn't an accident

she heard d words in her head....
as clearly as they were spoken!

her heart hammered...

had everything been staged??

had he purposely helped her?

how otherwise could she explain his presence??

..a mere coincidence...?????????

she drove in utter disbelief....
but why would he???...

it doesn't make sense!

then she remembered her drink...

oh my!!...
so Thapar purposely drugged my drink!
the goddamn son of a b....!!

she knew she was about to die....

her life would be wasted....!!...

she hated the thought..
she hadn't solved her case....
dammit!

it was indeed her worst nightmare
coming to life...!

she stepped down hard on d accelerator...
but her pursuer was faster...

this she knew...for her instincts screamed
...would be the final blow....!

& her instincts were right...!!!
raj told him everything....

"shit!!...wow!..i mean...reporter!...
dat's quite impressive!
she's one hell of a woman..
uski himmat dekhni chahiye thi!"

"main usse chodta nahin..
par jab maine teri car wahaan dekhi,
i thought she'd be safe!...

i was to stay in touch wid u...
par maine yeh nahi socha tha ki
madam itni badi problem mein fas jaayegi...
woh chod...tu hospital mein kaise pahuncha?"
raj asked...concerned...

"one of dem had a gun...
bullet mere shoulder ko graze karke chali gayi...
but i'm fine now!"

"u were shot!!"
both of dem screamed together...

"u don't have to be so modest!.."
raj replied...

"u risked your life for my sis...
main yeh kabhi nahi bhooloonga dost!"
navin thanked him...

"bakwaas mat karo tum dono!...
naina aaye to give me a ring....
main rakhta hoon..."

"absolutely...take care yaar..."
....................................

back to the present....

waitin for her...the two had dozed off...

the ringing of his cell woke raj up...

he rubbed his eyes..& instantly became alert...
shit!...naina abhi tak nahi aayi....

"navin uth!..yaar nia hasn't returned as yet...
kuch gadbad hai...."

"oh hell!...phone utha..."

he put it on loudspeaker....

"r...raj!!"

"abhi??!!!....kya hua...itni raat ko?"

"navin phone kyon nahi uthata!!?"
he shouted...

"why're u shouting yaar?
...sorry...aankh lag gayi thi!
its 2 a.m....why would i be awake??"

he said... sarcastic...
wondering only bout naina....

"wow!!...yahaan your
sis is bleeding away in pain...
& u're sleeping!"
he sounded disgusted...

suddenly raj & navin grew cold & still....
now they could also here the ambulance....

"shit!!...abhi...abhi..nia kaisi??
oh my god!...is she...is she?"
navin was shaking with fear....
"she's alive...i'm so sorry...!
there's a better way to break the news....
guys...bahut khoon beh chuka hai
...i'm taking her to Apollo
hospital...jaldi pahuncho...
i'll tell u everything...
& please don't panic!!..
raj...don't let navin drive...
u do it....raj?...raj?..."

"huh..wat?...yeah...ok!"

he snapped out of his reverie...
he hadn't heard a word
after abhi broke the news...

"damn!!..teri haalat bhi kharaab hai....
aalekh...aalekh kahaan hai?"

"academy...samaan laane gaya hai...
we're all shifting here..."
navin managed...

"drive carefully then...
i'll see you at the hospital...."

..........................................

they had all driven in complete tension...
wondering if she'd survive....

navin felt numb...& so did raj...
he didn't know how he managed to drive....
the trip to the hospital seemed to take hours...
although in reality it would've taken less than 10
minutes...

aalekh,abhimanyu,yudi,huda,B.C,
navin,raj,shalini...
almost everyone had reached to see her....

standing outside the O.T....with folded hands...
they prayed to see her alive....

after 3-4 hours...when navin felt he
just couldn't take it anymore......
when his tears were exhausted...
the doctor came out....

"she's out of danger...
par hosh aane mein time lagega...

maybe a day..maybe a week at maximum...
khoon kaafi beh gaya tha
...par luckily internal injuries zyaada nahi thi....
but yes...she's had multiple fractures...
it'll be a while before she can resume to
jumping around..."

they all sighed with relief...
atleast she was safe....!!

navin went upto the doctor & hugged him...
"thanks doc!"

"thank this young gentleman..
agar yeh time par nahi aaye hote...to..
your sister wouldn't be here..."

raj went upto abhi...& hugged him...
"great job yaar..."

no one noticed his face...except ziya...
& a light smile crept on her face...
after sometime.....

"tujhe aisi haalat mein nahi aana chaahiye tha...
your arm's in bad shape..." raj told him..

"arrey tumhe meri haalat
par taras khaana chahiye...!!
main to academy hi jaa raha tha..
when i saw his car hanging in dat shape...
mujhe to laga yeh gaya!!...
band baj gayi thi meri!...
aur jab darr-darr ke
aage gaya aur naina ko khoon mein
lat-pat dekha
tab to hosh hi ud gaye...!!"
he really did look exhausted...

"teri car ki to waat lag gayi dost...
i'm sorry huda..."
navin replied...tired....& sleepy

"phir shuru ho gaya!
aisi 100 car tujhpe qurbaan hai yaar....
waise bhi saali khataara
chalti hi kahaan thi..."

all of them laughed at his words...

huda was a genius at lightening
difficult situations...!

"alright everyone...back to home!...
it's too late...i mean too early..."
they all giggled at navin's words...

it was already 7 a.m....

all the others left...

"main yahin hoon...go catch up wid your sleep....
aalekh...ghar par saara samaan rak diyo yaar"

it was d first time dat 'rockstar' spoke...
he'd been too disturbed by wat had happened...
& a realization had struck him...
"theek hain...don't worry...raj chal.."

"a...nahin...main bhi yahin hoon...
u go ahead...freshen up..."

"raj paagal mat ban...
tu ja..."

"ek kaam karte hain...lets take turns...."
aalekh suggested...
"main jaata hoon..i'll come back in two hours...&
get your clothes along..."

the two agreed...& aalekh left....
..........................................

the entire week paased in the hospital..
with friends dropping in....

raj,aalekh & navin were here almost 24 hours....
lookin after her like nurses...

naina ko hosh nahi aaya tha...

raj went upto the doctor....
he was clearly exhausted...
"wat's wrong doc...
ab tak to naina ko hosh aa jaana chahiye tha?"
he was worried....

"dekhiye...i think i'll need her medical history...
koi aur gadbad zaroor hai...was she...
she was on drugs kya?"
raj nodded....

"oh god!...ab samajh mein aaya !
i'll have to do a series of other tests..
reports?"

"yeh lijiye doctor..."

ziya had got them along wid her....

"i'm her personal doctor & friend...
i thought u'd like to discuss the case with me..."

after about an hour...
ziya came upto raj....

"she was drunk!...
uski drink mein drugs the....
dat would explain her
accident...."

"i shouldn't have let her leave..."
he hid his face in his palms....

"listen to me carefully now....
naina ki medications change ho gayi hai...
usse aaj hosh aa jaana chahiye...
she'd feel sick...
depression mein bhi jaa sakti hai.."

"why?"

"coz her body's used to drugs...
aur aaj usse drugs touch kiye 1 hafta ho gaya hai...
her body's not goin to take this change easily...
kuch bhi ho jaaye...remember...
don't let her touch them!!...

not even a bit....
de-addict hone ka yeh last chance lag raha hai..
she'll need all the support & love...
your love raj..."

he looked up to meet her eyes...
"she's a great friend....
i look upto her...respect her ziya...
& i'll always be with her...."

ziya smiled & shook her head...
"you ought to tell her...."

"what?"

"dat you love her...."

at his shocked expression she laughed..
"dat is if you've realised it...!!"

"a.a..are my feelings dat transparent?"

"to a doctor...yes!...
to others....no...
but i'm sure you care..."

she winked & disappeared...
leaving him confused...
indecisive...
......................................

on the third day of her accident she'd
stirred.... raj had been sitting next to her den...
"w....water....raj"

"i'll just get it...."

..............................

"p..paani...i..thought
...i asked for..water..."

raj was still dere...
"the last time you asked was 3 days back....
jab tak main aaya you were......asleep!..
phir so gayi!"
.................................
he stood at her room's door...
gazing at her...wondering...

"was ziya rght?...kya main..."

it was the first time dat he
found himself looking at her
this way in d hospital....

inspite of her bandaged head,arms...legs...
her face radiated peace & beauty....

she was a remarkable & courageous woman...
witty & humourous...sarcastic & loving...
a versatile personality...

not for a second was she pale...or dull....

some of her tendrils lay loose on her face...
& as if by magic he found himself
inches apart from her .....

he slowly bent down....
feeling her breath..


tujhe chaand chahiye to chaand doonga,
jaan chahiye to jaan bhi doonga,
pyaar chahiye to pyaar doonga main...

dil ka karaar main hi tujhko doonga,
tere paas-paas main rahoonga,

teri dhadkano mein, raahon mein,
teri thandi-thandi aahon mein,
teri behki-behki saanson mein main rahoonga.....

ek pyaas hai,ehsaas hai,
sawaal hai, jawaab ki talaash hai???????



"I LOVE YOU NAINA....
I REALLY DO....i know words aren't enough to
express my feelings for you...
but i want you to know just one thing..
whether you love me or you don't
you'll always find me beside you...
we'll always stand together.....!"

he blew away the tendrils from
her face lightly..

planted a kiss on her forehead
...& den on her eyelids...

smiling he walked away....
unaware...
dat she'd heard him...

dat she'd been planning to surprise him...

but it was she who'd been taken by surprise...

& she knew her answer....


it was......................
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
👏
superb 👏 👏

really nice....
cant wait for the next ud...

plz do it fast 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
smiling he walked away....
unaware...
dat she'd heard him...
dat she'd been planning to surprise him...
but it was she who'd been taken by surprise...
& she knew her answer....it was....

it couldn't be anything else...

it had to be a ...

NO!....

& only she knew the reason...!

she pondered over his words time & again...

& it occurred to her dat her feelings were
perhaps pretty similar to his...

could she go as far as saying it was love??

dat she didn't know!!

but yes...
she too would stand by him in
hard ,turbulent days...

what worried her was d fact dat she would
probably be the one causing dem in his life...!

NO!..she decided...she'd stay away from him..
from his life...

her accident had taught her a certain lesson...
a lesson dat she'd never forget....

she couldn't trust anyone...
not even herself....

a whirlpool of thoughts
were going around in her mind....

scenes flashed by...

scenes dat shook her...

why d hell hadn't i fought back??

why had i relied on huda to save me??

inspite of the fact that i'm
capable enough to fight...

not in martial arts...

but i do have the basic training to
protect myself!!....

was i ...scared??

for the first time in my life i felt fear...

fear dat chilled my senses...
made me so numb dat i didn't even react!!
she was so surprised by her own reaction!!

"hey...tum uth gayi?"
raj stood dere smiling at her...

just seeing him there made
her heart grow warm..

probably coz she'd just heard
him admit his love for her...or?????

"hmmm...bhaai kahaan hai?
he must be furious wid me?"

"filhaal to nobody's upset wid you...
par yeh thode hi time ki baat hai...
jab madam normal ho jaayengi...
to class li jaayegi...i'll go call navin...
by the way...u still need water?"

she shook her head...
"how long have you been here?"

"almost as long as you have!...
all three of us...
accha ab bolna band karo..."

"order huh?.." she asked weakly...
"raj....main hospital main rehna nahi chaahti...
can i get a discharge today?"

"you sure can young lady..."
d doctor had walked in wid navin & aalekh..

"but only if u promise dat u won't
leave your bed for atleast a week..."

"a week!!"
she sighed...

"mera bas chalein to tujhe
bed se baandh hi doon!!..

tu ghar chal...i'll murder you!"
navin went & hugged her tightly...
slightly teary-eyed...
glad dat naina didn't realise it!

"iska badla main tujhse zaroor loonga...
i'll scare you like dis one day...pakka..."

"ooooh...was my darling bro scared for me?
how sweeeeeeeeeeeeet..."
she pulled his cheek....her tone sarcastic..
yet loving..

"doc...i think you forgot to treat her head...!
bheja abhi bhi khaali hai!!..."

a comment dat made dem all laugh...
except nia of course..who simply glared...
...........................................

while aalekh took out the car..

navin & raj held her...giving her support..
& made her walk out till the car...

all the while she winced in pain...
but not a word came out of her mouth...

she knew she'd already put them into
enough trouble...
they all looked so old & worn-out...

by the time they reached out to the car...
naina was fast asleep on raj's shoulder...
looking tired...
"itni si walk ne isse exhaust kar diya...
navin darwaaza khol yaar.."

as navin opened d door...
raj carefully slid inside..with
naina's head exactly in d same position...

the only difference were her arms dat had
gone around his neck....

"i'll hold her if it's uncomfortable for you raj.."
navin asked him...

"paagal mat ban yaar!
she's sound asleep..."

"maine saara samaan shift kar diya hai...
teeno ka..
& b.c ko bhi bata diya ki
naina's coming home today....
he's been quite tensed..."
aalekh told them...

"you bet he was!!..
i've never seen him like dis...
naina ko apni beti jo maante hain!"

.....................................

it took them time to adjust at home....
raj had picked naina up &
placed her on her bed...

(not forgetting the kiss on her forehead!)...

for 2 days..she stayed in a state of delirium...

getting up at odd times at night...
feeling sweaty..& drawing huge gasps of air...

she slept most of the time in d morning....
& wen she did get up...
the three saw to it dat she didn't
leave her bed...

they weren't only cooking...
but doing lots of other homely stuff....


on the fourth day naina got up...
& sneaked out of her room...

she stifled a laugh wen she saw navin dusting...
& arranging the living room...

aalekh was in d library placing the books in order..
wen a small pile fell on him....

"ouch!!..mar gaya!"

naina was holding her stomach now...
almost on d verge of breaking into a laugh...
she'd barely controlled it wen raj's sight
sent her roaring ....

he stood in the kitchen...
his hair crisp white....
he'd dropped the box of dough on his head....
& he was sneezing repeatedly...

"tum...aanchoo!....yahaan?...aanchoo!
stop laughing!!...aanchoo!!"

& so she did....

she stared at him....for about 5 minutes..

"kya hua naina...?...nia??"
he was truly worried...something
had gone wrong...

she seemed in a distant world...

all of a sudden tears fell from her eyes...
she began sobbing uncontrollably...

navin & aalekh rushed out....

naina clutched her head....tightly....
still crying...

"god!...nia..wat's wrong?
kya ho raha hai?"
navin held her in his arms....

"is your head hurting babes?"
aalekh looked tensed...

she broke away from navin....
& rushed to her room....upstairs...

"i don't get it!!"...

"i think i do!...
shit!...guys upar chalo!"
raj rushed to her room....

she'd locked herself in...
& sounds were coming andar se...

"naina...naina kholo!"
navin & aalekh struck at the door...

"i think darwaaza todna padega"
navin suggested...feeling worried...
"aisa lag raha hai jaise she'll
...she'll do something to herself..."

"nahi..wait!!...
nia...nia...!"raj called
"i have what you want....
open d door....yeh lo..."

suddenly there was pin-drop silence.....

the door creaked open..& she peeped...
her hand stretched outside...

raj held it tightly..&
forced himself in...

while the others stared at the codition of
the room...stuff lying on d floor...
broken....curtains torn...everything hay-wire...

raj looked in her eyes....

eyes dat plead...

plead for mercy...

plead for freedom...

plead for a 'high'...

plead for....'drugs'....!!!


"jaldi raj...i'll die if i don't get it !
i'm begging u...please....now!"
her breath was coming in gasps...

she resembled a distraught woman...
hair falling crazily on her head...
her brow having a thin line of sweat...
"oh hell!...
u still crazy about drugs!
u'r addicted!...shit sis!...
u'r disgusting nia!
itna kuch ho gaya...."
navin had raised his hand to slap her...

raj held his hand mid-way...

"hold it!..shut-up navin!!...
get out of here..."

"par raj..navin's right!..."
aalekh added...

"i know he is...
ziya ne kaha tha aisa kuch ho sakta hai..
let me handle her...jaao....trust me!"
he whispered....

"raaaaaj....were you lying?"
she held his collar.....
her eyes filling eith tears yet-again...

"one more minute nia!!
i'll just get it...go guys!"

reluctantly the two left...
leaving them alone...
he closed the door.....& faced her...

"what do u want?..
aaraam se bataao...calm down....

nia!!!"


she was pulling her hair..

"i ...can't calm...down!
i know it'll kill me raj....
but if i don't get it ...
main abhi mar jaaoongi....
it's doing...funny...things to me..."

"listen to me naina...."

he held her shoulders...

"you have to come out of this!..
take a deep breath it'll be fine..
u just have to pass this period...."

she held him tightly....

"you're right....but...
just one ....last time....
one shot raj...one!!"

her hands clutched his tighter....

he shook his head....
tears fell from her eyes....

"main kab addict ho gayi...
i don't know....
it's my only support...
i swear i'm in pain....
my head's hurting...
& so is every part of my body....
every limb....i can't handle it anymore..."
she shook...vigourously...

"i'll fall..." her head was reeling....
"hold me!...main gir rahi hoon...
i need it...it's torturing me!"
she cried...as if a demon had possessed her..

"all you need is me naina...
i love you....we'll go through this together...
i love you a lot!....look at me!"
"love??!!
then save me!...give it to me!!"
she screamed....

he put a hand under her head...,
& pulled her closer...

lifting her mouth to his...
he kissed her....thoroughly..

gingerly...she explored the hollow of his mouth...
participating..drawing strength...

it was indeed one of the most passionate kisses....

his lower lip was full &
when she nipped at it the effect on
him was electric.....

as their tongues entered each other's mouths,
she experienced what seemed a short-circuit....&
he took her into a world of senses!!

my heart it speaks a thousand words,
i feel eternal bliss.....

no drop of rain,
no glowing flame...
has ever felt so pure..
if being in love can feel so good..
then i'm in love for sure!!!!!
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that was good..very nice...cooll.. 👏 continue soon... 😊
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#48
gr8 yaar its too good mindblowing. I just love it plz plz pllllllllllllllz update soon 😊 its rocking.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
wonderful 👏
simply superb 👏 👏

i just love ur ff 😳

cont. soon pls 😃
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#50
although the kiss ended & her hysteria subsided...
her tears still fell....

she continued to cling to him
for what seemed an eternity...

& he continued comforting her...
stroking her...
smoothing out the tendrils from her face..

her eyes were tightly shut
wen she parted from him...

opening them slowly she gazed into his....
& saw nothing but love....

she began to retrace her steps...
moving back..
still looking at him....

& suddenly turned to face away...

standing at the window....
her passive expression not
giving away her thoughts....

she gazed at the sky...
the clouds floating away...
the fog settling down....
the dew drops on the green leaves...

the serene & calm atmosphere was a contrast to
her fast...scary thoughts....

she'd decided to stay away from him...
from his life...
& yet had found solace in his arms...

her anxiety...
her frustration...
her desire for drugs had led her to him...

she was slowly getting addicted...
not to drugs..
but to his presence around her...!

she realised dat she did love him...
yes..i do!
but love was actually a
very small word to express her emotions for him...

she respected him,
cared for him,
wanted him as a partner in whatever she did,
following him wherever he went,

even his presence would last her a lifetime......
she didn't need to hear any words from him..
even silence would suffice...

i think i've loved him since we were kids....
before we even met dat day....

what were dose lines.....


i new i loved you
before i met u...
i've been waiting all my life...


par kya main is relationship ko
aage leja sakti hoon??

how can i make him suffer at my cost?

"don't think about it nia...."

she didn't realise when he'd come behind her...
"i think you need to rest..."

he was facing her now & held her hands...

"it'll take time to drive out of your system...
but you can't afford to be addicted to it...
it's poison for you....

apni zindagi ko apne haathon mein se
itni asaani se mat jaane do....

u might not need yourself...
but there are others who do...
i for one...really..do...!"...he smiled...

for a while she wondered...
was he talking about himself or drugs???

"r..raj...i...can't...
i don't...love ..you"

her voice was quivering...
but she'd regained a control over herself..

she saw a shadow settle behind his eyes....
saw the hurt...
wanted to tell him it was all a lie...
but she turned away...

"take your time nia..."
he added slowly...
his voice not hiding his feelings...

"main tumse pyaar karta hoon...
dat doesn't mean you have to reciprocate it...
filhaal..all you need is a good sleep...
shut your mind to everything else..."
he led her to her bed.....

she lied down & he covered her with a blanket...

kissing her lightly on the forehead he whispered....

"whatever tomorrow brings...
i'll be there for you...as a friend...
as your love...as your support...

whatever you want ....

i'll be standing next to you whenever you feel low...
with open eyes & open arms....

i hope it'll compensate for your
desire to take drugs...
tum dobaara yeh bewakoofi nahin karogi...
ab so jaao..."

he smiled ....sat next to her....
stroking her hair...like a child...
till she'd gone off to sleep...
& then went out....sullen..& saddened...

but he'd not reveal his feelings to her...
for her sake....
he'll continue smiling...
..............................................
the same scenario occurred again
for the next 3-4 days...

she would suddenly burst into tears..&
the three would support & comfort her....

even wen her hysteria faded away
she remained depressed,
talking to herself in isolation...

the usual chatty liveliness had
completely disappeared
& the mood too was depressing...

her injuries had mostly healed
but the bandages were still on...

they irritated her...
but she'd been forced to keep them intact...
one of her legs still hurt for she'd run up the stairs
when she'd got her first attack...

the term 'attack' scared her but she'd
overheard the three talk of her
condition in those terms....

she knew they were trying
to lighten the atmosphere whenever
she was wid dem...
but her foul mood refused to lift....

am i losing it?
am i going beserk?

...or was it simply the lack
of activity dat made her feel alone in this world.....

"guys...bahut din ho gaye hain yaar...
wen will she be out of dat dead-state?"
aalekh looked vexed...

"kuch to karna padega....
she has to step out of her delirium...
na theek se kuch khaati hain..
na theek se baat kar rahi hai...
bus apne room mein locked padi rehti hain..."
raj was apprehensive...

"ek hi raasta hai...
formula 420!.." navin smiled...

"yeh kya hai...?"
aalekh wondered aloud...

"navin!..tu paagal to nahi ho raha hai..
main usse depression se baahar
nikaalne ki baat kar raha hoon..
usme dhakelne ki nahin!"
he looked shocked....

"try karte hain...kya pata !!"
.................................... the next morning ...as naina lay in her room
flipping through the pages of a magazine...

her thoughts reeling ...

i need to get back on my case....

the room burst open...
"oh..sorry..woh haath mein plate thi so
door ko kick karna pada..."

"aalekh?..wat is it?"
she sounded unpleasant...

"kuch nahin...breakfast..
london mein tumhaare liye
kitni baar to cook kiya hai...
yeh lo..your favourite pasta"

she smiled...faintly...
"main neeche aa jaati..."

"madam...yeh sirf tumhaare liye banaaya hai..
un dono namoonon ke liye nahin...
wait..main khilata hoon..."

"i'll manage rocky!
mere haath salaamat hain...."

but he insisted...

she opened her mouth...
& the moment the pasta touched her tongue...
she let out a scream!!

"mirchiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!...
ssss....aaahh.....paani...paaaaaniiii...."

he handed her a glass immediately...
and she kept asking for more...

"bas bhi karo!
pet hain yaan kuaan...
paani se pet bharne ka iraada hai
kya?"

"u idiot!!...mirchi ki poori bottle ulat di kya??
paani nahi to kya isse khaaoon...!!.."

she was wringing her hands...
& covering her ears...fanning her tongue...

"get out!!...aur haan...
paani ka jug rakh kar jaana....
duffer kahin ka!...jaa ab...."

"i thought you relished spicy food!"
he looked hurt....

"yes my lord!!...par khaali spice nahin...
it has to be 'added' to food...."
she answered sarcastically...

he was leaving when he collided with navin...

"tu yahaan kya kar raha hai?"

"i cooked pasta for her...
aur madam nakhre kar rahi hai!"

"nakhre!!..aalekh!!!
khud khaa kar dekh...
kaan se dhuaan nikal raha hai!!"
she looked furious...but her colour was returning...

"to hell wid ur pasta...
yeh le chowmein sis...my speciality...
just for you!"

"kya baat hai?..bada pyaar phoot raha hai?"

"waise wat a coincidence na.
aaj hum dono ne hi cooking ka socha!....
anyway...jab tak raj gets your tea...tu yeh kha lena!"

very smartly...he avoided her question!
the aroma was filling the room..&
she realised dat she'd been really hungry...

she picked up her plate...and began eating...

"yummy..."

the second time she picked up the fork...
her wail filled the house.....

she shrieked like a maniac...
& raj came running inside...

"shit nia!
kya hua??....r u alright?...
having an attack again?"

"yes!!...a fury attack...
wat d hell is dis?"
she pointed at her fork....disgusted!

"chipkali...kyon?"
sooooooooo innocent!!

"raaaaj!!...
mere khaane mein chipkali kya kar rahi hai!!.."
she was red with rage ....

"quite obvious isn't it??!!
share kar rahi hai..."

"kya?..share?"

"haan..tumhaara khaana!"
he grinned....

"really!..u find dis very funny....
bhaaaaaaaaaaai!!"
she screamed...& navin rushed up...

"ab kya hua?...saare ghar ko sar par kyon
utha liya hai?"

"come...here...!" she ordered rigidly...

the moment he stepped forward...
she took the entire plate
& smashed it on his head....

raj began laughing...

"awesome hairstyle nanoo!!
yeh lo nia...iced-tea...
should cool your head...!
god navin!...u look so cuteeeeee..."

& he patted his cheeks....

"thnx raj...aaj to hadh hi ho rahi hai...
dono ki recipes mein panga...
i wonder kahin yeh...."

she gulped down her 'ice-tea'....
and her reaction...

well i bet you guessed it...!!
it was yet another scream....

dis time so huge
dat the guys felt the walls would fall-down!!

"i...wondered...right!!...
fooling me!!....raaaaaaaaaaaj...
u're dead!!..."

she jumped off her bed &
what began was a chase around the house...

naina limping around throwing
curses at all 3 of them...

"ek mirchi khilaata hai...doosra chipkali...
aur teesra!!...
meri jali hui tongue pe ice-tea bol kar mujhe
boiling hot tea pilaata hai!...

where's d world heading too!..
bhaagte kyon ho!!...

i'm here to murder the three of you...
bigde...batameez...scoundrels...!"
she tried her level best to catch them...
but to no avail...they were just too fast for her!

tired & defeated...she went out to the garden..&
sat down on a chair...

"don't u dare show me your faces!
hadh hi kar di...!
acting like 10 year olds!

oh hell!!...i should've guessed...
formula 420!!...DAMN U !"

They came out laughing...
glad to see her reacting like her usual self...
throwing acid words at them...!

"wow navin!...it worked...
even after so many years!.."
raj smiled...

"dat's coz our dear nia hasn't grown up a bit!"

he answered...loud enough for her to hear dem...

"go...to...hell!"

they all stepped closer to her....&
circled her chair...

"a SORRY...won't work!...
so...GOOOOOOOOOO!........AAAAAAAAH!..
PUT ME DOWN!!"

She yelled...they'd picked up her chair...&
were whirling it around in a circle...
giggling all d while....& finally broke into a song....


aalekh- ishq mohabbat...pyaar ki baatein..
bekaar ki baatein...jhoote hai saare waadein...
( putting her down)

navin- rasmein na jaane, kasmein na maane....
kare jo hum chaahe...
(pulling her by the waist)

raj- hum to bigde shehzaade.....
hey..hey...baby...baby...
jee lene de is pal ko..
hey..hey...baby...baby...
kal ki sochenge kal ko...

aa jaa yahaan mere sang aake
zaraa jhoom le jaanejaan...
( dancing with her)

aalekh- kis ko pata jaane dhal
jaaye kab jawaaniyon ka nasha...

navin- ho madhoshi mein kho jaane de...

raj- hota hai jo bhi yaara ho jaane de...

doori rahein naa darmiyaan.....

( pulling her closer...& winking at her)

this time she couldn't control her smile....


"NAUTANKI!!...POORE NAUTANKI HO!!
KABHI KUCH TO NORMALLY KAR LIYA KARO.!!"
"chal nia...bahut ho gaya!
itna bhav to main apni
girlfriend ko bhi na doon!"

navin lifted his collar...like a 'gunda'..

"abbey chal-chal!
kisi ki kismat itni kharaab nahi
hai ki tere saath 'lafda' kare...

girls have a better taste!"

she put his collar down...
as if putting him in his place....

the day thus ended brightly for them with nia..
(it seemed!!)...back to her usual chilled out self!

in d evening....
restless she decided it was high time to get back to work...
So she called up samir..

"hi...kaisi ho?"
his voice sounded weird...

"badi jaldi yaad aaya hai poochna?"
she'd been wondering why no one from her office had
contacted her...it'd been so long...&
yet not even a phone-call had come

"don't give me dat shit atleast!
i've been trying to get to u for the last 10 days...!

par tumhaara cell kaam nahi kar raha hain..&
your so- called 'protectors' didn't lemme talk to u!"

so...this was it!!
no wonder...she turned around
& glared back at them...

probably comprehending her reaction..
they all looked away!

"not again!..i'm sorry...anyway...
main kal se field work mein return karti hoon!"

"sorry!"

"wat?"

"nia...we're ...
we've handed it to someone else...
waise bhi tum bar mein kaam
nahi kar sakti thi ab....
we all decided to replace you on the project..
it was pointless..."

she'd been sitting in d living room..
and the shock she felt jolted her out of the sofa...
they were all sitting there....
& wondered what had gone wrong!



hope you enjoyed the initial RN bit...
formula 420..., the song ;)
& the last bit...well..she's fired it seems!!

anyway gtg...
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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