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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
soo cooooooooolllll ll

well i hope the number of ur readers increase everyday 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!!!
the part's really interesting.....pls continue soon dear.... 😛
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Hey!!!
the part's really interesting.....pls continue soon dear.... 😛
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THE NEXT PART:

"oh really!!addicted huh??!!"

his smile disappeared...

" u think i'm a fool don't u?

maanta hoon hum gyaarah
saal baad mil rahe hain naina,
but don't forget dat we've
known each other for 17 years!!

we've literally lived together...
shared our childhood dreams...
had exactly d same upbringing ...

tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki main tumhaari
yeh bakwaas maan loonga!!
c'mon nia...speak up!!...

yeh sab ho kya raha hai??
r u working for someone??"
he shook her hard....
trying to get the truth out...

she jerked his hand away...
freeing herself of his hold..

lost for a while in thought...
she knew the moment had
come to disclose her identity...

atleast dis man..
of all d others deserved to know something...

he'd saved her from needless troubles..

sighing she spoke up....
"woh raj..."
she was having second thoughts about her decision...

"woh kya??!!...trust me naina...
i won't breath a word about it..."

"fine....raaste mein baat karte hain...
i'm too tired & dis place is sick!!"

he chuckled...
"u haven't changed a bit have you??!!"

she smiled at him..."kya matlab?"

"wahi nakhre!!...poori nautanki ho!"
he grinned...

"wat!!...nautanki!...dat was mean!!
i think i'm much mature dan wat i was den!"
she made a silly face...

"mature to i doubt...."
she gave him a cunning look...
"but yes..you've turned pretty sexy!"

"aaah!!...so d quiet brat has finally learnt to flurt!"

"flurt...or main!!...not at all madam..."

he kept his hand on his heart and acted

"you're d fairest of all damsels dat i've ever met!!
the most beautiful angel to have descended the planet...
exceedingly charming...and...and.."

"sexy!!"

"right...sexy!!"

the two of dem laughed aloud...
forgettin d fact dat there
had been a cold war between dem

"ab jisse pehle humaara tamaasha banne...
lets get out of here!!"
she suggested...

"jaldi kya hai??..i like it when you blush...
the last time i saw u blushing was wen i kiss..."

he saw her turning a shade of purple..
deeply embrassed...

"ah...sorry...
by the way..
i'm also sorry for venting my anger out on you dat day..."

"u sure did scare d daylights out of me!!"
her smile had disappeared

"a...'nightlights'.."

"raj.................SHUT-UP!!"

& the two really did shut-up...

conversation between them ceased pretty abruptly...

while naina was lost in deep thought...
raj realised his mistake...

wrong timing!!...
he addressed himself....

she was so happy until i reminded her of all d
insults dat i threw at her d other day!
someone plz remind to me to keep my mouth shut!

all d camaradie..d comfort dat was dere between
old friends had suddenly disappeared ....

well...atleast we're back on talking terms...
& she's no longer angry at me...
dat sure is a beginning!!
i hope slowly she'll forgive me completely....

she didn't say a word throughout d journey &
he dared not ask...

ghar pahunchke to she'll have to be out wid it!!

navin isse aasaani se chodega nahin...
he sighed
...................................

10 minutes later they were at d Ahluwalia mansion...

d same house where dey had grown up...

"a...raj.."
she broke d silence...

"hmmm"..he was snapped out of his reverie...

"aunty-uncle kahaan hai...&
why is your house locked?"

"mom-dad bangalore shift ho gaye hain..
dey sold d house...kaafi time ho gaya.."

"so where did u stay?"
she asked naively..

he smiled..

"initially at d army hostel..aur phir
army camps at different bases...

so did navin for dat matter....
we never needed a permanent place...

but yes....now things are changing...
we're looking for a place...

accha yeh sab chodo...brace yourself...
andar dhamaka hone waala hai...!!"

she nodded,sighed...& walked in...
navin & aalekh were waiting anxiously inside..

the first day itself naina had handed him
a duplicate set of keys to d house...

they stood up...when naina walked in..

navin rushed to her side & held her tightly...

"samajh nahi aa raha ki relieved feel karoon ya tensed...
tujhe hug karoon yaan do thapar maaroon..."
he said very seriously...

"i'm not a kid nanoo!!"

"den stop behaving like one..!!
for god sake naina ...r u insane??"
he shouted..

"don't you use dat tone wid me!!
i'm not your little sister ...
i know how to handle myself...&
i'm old enough to make my decisions!"

he was so furious dat his hand rose to slap her...
but raj stopped him from doing so...

"no need to stop him raj!
aaj kal mujhe thapad maarna
iski hobby ho gayi hai!"
she retorted back...

navin freed himself...went back to d table..
picked something up...& came back to naina...

holding her wrist tightly..
he slapped stuff in his hand...

"wat d hell is dis??"

"tickets...u'r going back to london tomorrow..
pack ur stuff..."
he added calmly...

naina was so shocked dat no words
came out of her mouth...

"navin....lets atleast hear her out once!"
raj tried...

"no point!!
i'm not interested!...
there is no justification for drug addiction...
is there nia??"

"well!...yes, there is!"
"well!...yes, there is!"

"really!! wow!...i'd sure like to hear dose lies..
why den..go on..tell us!" he added sarcastically...

"God dammit nanoo!!

coz it's my job!...

i'm an undercover reporter for BBC
& this is a sting operation going on!!"

their jaws dropped open...
a pin drop silence surrounded d
house as d news began to sink in....

"u'r lying!...nice try!"

"go ...to...hell!
believe wat u want to den...
but get dis thing straight through dat
large empty head of yours...
i'm not leavin!!"

"lets sit down guys...naina ..
tell us everything clearly..."

raj calmed d atmosphere..
while aalekh poured a
drink for everyone....

navin was fidgeting from one position to another...

"6 months back...i got a job with BBC in london...

for a year i was under a contract not to tell anyone
about it coz i'd be handed undercover assignments....

i was a part of 3 major operations...

d last one involving drug trafficking in england...
i checked out bars, universities, casinos...& lots more....

the operation was a success
....impressed by my performance...
my boss decided to hand me BBC's indian operations ....

i was to track d drug racketeers here initially...

mom-dad ko bata diya maine...
par navin ko nahin...don't look at me like dat!!
i couldn't endanger my task...

i was warned ki main buri tarah fas
jaaoongi if someone in india
recognised me....

so i decided to stay shut for sometime...

ab... jab maine unki ring mein ek position bana li hain...
i thought i could tell u the truth...

it's just dat raj caught me at d disc dat day...
although why he bothered to interfere
is still a mystery to me!!"

she glanced at him...
& saw dat he was embarassed...

navin knew exactly why!!...

raj had been smitten by her looks...
but he kept quiet about it....

"well...koi baat nahin nia...i forgive you"
navin answered ...

"forgive me!!
spare me from dat gratitude...
u should be the one to be sorry...
& i ...don't....forgive ...you"
she stood up...her eyes burning wid anger....

"cut it sis!!...but i still think u should leave...
dis isn't d right job for you.....not for a gi..."

"i swear i'll slap u nanoo if u give me those
sexist remarks!!

not right for a girl!!..yahin kehne lage the na...
to hell wid u!!...keep ur ideas to yourself..."

"actually naina...i think i agree wid navin...
india isn't dat safe..." aalekh added...

& got a furious look back...so instantly shut up...

"criminals have similar minds in all countries
....u too want me to go back....kyon raj?"

he stood silent for a minute then began...

"i don't want to be taking sides...
aalekh & navin are being protective about u...."

when she glared at him....

"but...but if u think your job
satisfies you...
then i see no reason why you should leave it....."

"but i do !!...her job isn't SAFE!!..."navin defied

"yours is??" she asked ...an eyebrow up...

"look..."

"you're in the army!!...dat's more dangerous...
c'mon nanoo leave d army!!...it isn't a safe job!"
she mimcked him..

"FINE!!...do wat pleases you!!"

"you don't have to tell me !..i'll do exactly dat...!"
she smiled...having won the round!
........................................................
somewhere in the future:

as d car roared on d highway.......
lights in d rearview mirror curved behind it....

they were too bright...
& menacingly near by..
belonging to a truck it seemed...

it was raining hard...& d chilly , foggy night
led to a pathetic view...

suddenly the headlights
grew to monstrous proprtions.....

the truck seemed to be pushing d car ahead...

dizziness overwhelmed d driver for a second ...
& d steering wheel was gripped harder...

the driver weaved backward & forward...
struggling to hold on as d truck
slammed it repeatedly...

water rushed through the open window...

d driver's clumsy fingers fumbled for d seat belt....
feet repeatedly hitting the brake paddle..
but to no avail...

all control was lost!

this was a nightmare coming true...

trapped,locked inside...

wid no escape seemingly possible
for d brakes had failed!

FINALLY..
AFTER WAT SEEMED AN ETERNITY...

THE TRUCK SLAMMED INTO THE CAR
SENDING IT ROLLING ONTO THE SLIPPERY ROADS..

THIS WAS NO ACCIDENT,
THIS WAS ATTEMPTED MURDER!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
THANKS FOR UR LOVELY REPLIES.....

I HOPE YOU'RE ENJOYIN THE RIDE...

NAINA'S A REPORTER...

MAZA AAYA?????

&...can anyone plz tell me how to popularize my fic here...
and make it stand out???????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
super coolll.too goodd..... 👏 do continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Woh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank u and also thank God ki Naina is a reporter.
friend ek rasta hai to popularise ur fic. mmmmmmm.
you post ur fic in LRL-forum
I think u'll certainly get a huge reply
to try it
all the updates jo tumne yanha post kiye the, post there and then update regularly there.Ok???
got it???
2day's update-excellent!!!!!!!marvelous job yaar!!!!!!!!
waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
grat going gal....keep it up.... 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
since it had been too late,
aalekh,raj & navin decided to stay
the night over wid naina...

following was a sunday ,
so they didn't have to bother goin back to d academy,
since their lectures had already ended for d session...

they had been residing at the academy
quarters only till they found a place for themselves...

it proved to be a day full of interesting phone calls!!

when naina got up, she was surprised to find
d aroma of coffee fillin the house.,..

she rushed to the kitchen only to find raj
fiddling with stuff to find tea-cups...

"gud-morning...mugs kahaan hai?"...
he tried to remove his eyes from her...
for she looked stunning in her blue night-gown,
her hair falling over her face...
sleeping beauty!!

she mumbled a quick morning...
& took out the cups...

"u guys really do get up early!!
...wat time is it?..
bhaai aur rockstar kahaan hai?"

"rockstar?!...aalekh?"

"hmmm...college days mein we called him dat...."

"its 6.30...we've been up since 5...
woh dono baahar garden mein hai..."
he was put off wen she mentioned aalekh

"aur tum coffee bana rahe ho!!

typical nanoo attitude!!...
throwing his work on others!"

she shook her head...
"tum jao...i'll get the cups...."

"thanx..."he walked away...

raj really did look tired...
deep lines of weariness were sketched on his face...

she took the cups out & joined the gang...

as dey drank in complete silence,
( nanoo & naina completely ignoring each other)

...it suddenly struck nia day their night had passed
pretty uncomfortably...
coz all of them had slept in their formal clothes...

"i'm so sorry!" she shocked everyone wid her outburst...

"i'm glad dat u are!!...
so when r u goin back to london?"
navin asked..hopefully...

"wat!!?..ooooh!..shut up!

i have loads of spare clothes out here...
dad ke bhi aur kuch nanoo ke bhi..
u guys could have slept a bit more peacefully...
in suits & stuff mein uncomfortable lag raha hoga...."

"wow!!...bahut jaldi yaad aaya hai sis!"

"c'mon navin ...she was really exhausted yesterday!"
aalekh sprang to her defence...

it was den dat her cell...
placed on dat table...began to ring...

but before she could pick it up...

navin snatched it away...
& switched on the loudspeaker...

"hello...naina??..u dere?"
a voice called out..

"...yeah....gud morning.."
navin's action had put her off-balance...
& she gave him a threatening look..

"i hope its gud for you!...
but not for us!
u really scared us all yesterday...locked away!"
he sounded disappointed

"u knew about it?...why d hell didn't u get me out ..?"

"i tried to...only to find u'd already been released...
whoever that prince charming was...
u shouldn't have left wid him!"
he was a bit angry

"wat?..why?!"
she looked up at raj...& shrugged her shoulders...

"coz dat puts u under a lot of suspicion!
ur gang's goin to b firing a lot of questions at you!!
kya answer dogi unhe??...who got u out?
anyway dat's your headache .."

he answered not bothered
it seemed...

"we guys are waitin for you...
tum ghar se nikli ho yaan nahin?"
he seemed irritated...

dat was d end of navin's patience...
this was going too far! "look you scum!!...whoever you are..."
navin screamed..

"dat's my sister you're talkin to...
not a doormat!
she's not a machine!!
give her some peace at least!

wat d'ya expect??..
usse jail mein sadne ke liye chod dete?

she's not comin to office today...!!..
& to hell wid ur company policy..."

"ah...ah..ok sir...no problem!
i didn't mean to...hurt your sentiments..."
d man seemed scared...
navin sounded so pompous & arrogant!

"ah...samir...don't mind him...
he's just a little mad...main aati hoon"

naina glared at navin...
he knew she was waitin to shout back...

"nahin...absolutely not!!...take a holiday..."

"but.."

"no i insist!!...sleep tight...bye.."
hurriedly he kept down d phone!

"are...you...trying..to..get...my...ass...
kicked...from...my..job????!"

she screamed at the top of her lungs...

"well..i do think that's d best option!"

furious...her eyes reddening...

not understanding how to hit him...
she picked the cup of her boiling hot coffee...&
without realising gulped it down in one go!!

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!"
she screamed...& ran inside ..
fanning her tongue all d while..

while aalekh grinned...
raj beat his forehead wid his hand..
& navin gave a satisfied expression...

..................................

they had all changed into clothes dat naina had
placed out for them...

& when they stepped out to face each other,
they all grinned...

they were all wearing white cotton kurta -pyjamas...
raj looked extremely sexy even in these....
d first few buttons open...

"well...dat was all i could actually find!!
i thought there would be more but there wasn't!"
naina smiled....

eventually aalekh & navin went up to d terrace,

while raj remained in d living room...
reading a newspaper..
& naina in d kitchen...preparing lunch for everyone..

her cell rang again...

"nia ur cell's ringing!!..."

"call receive kar lo...
but handle the conversation carefully!"
she added..

he picked up the phone...

"naina...ziya here...
i've got a horrifying report!"

"ah...may i know who this is?
i'm a friend of naina's..."
raj wondered wat report the woman spoke of...

ziya felt silent....

"well...i'm ziya from Pfizer pharmaceuticals...
i need to talk to naina please...it's a bit urgent!"

"just a sec..."

he kept his hand on the phone...& approached her..

"Pfizer se ziya...
are you ill?...drugs ka effect to nahi ho raha!"
he stood shocked.... while she paled....

"a..a...no..can i talk to her now?"
she asked...

raj raised an eyebrow...

"u obviously can...but..."
he kept the phone out of her raech..
"i'll hear d conversation too!"

"but...oh alright!!"
she added defeated!

he put the cell on the loudspeaker phone....
while she looked amused....&
wondered why he cared....

"hi ziya..."

"hey finally!!...
mujhe to laga aalekh wasn't planning to hand u the phone...."

"aalekh?"

"yeah....dat guy i just spoke to...
it seems u guys are back together...
i hope i didn't spoil a romantic moment..."
she chuckled...

naina blushed...& looked up at raj...
who stood rooted to his place...
an eyebrow up ..but a little uncomfortable...

"a...well...dat was another friend yaar...
& aalekh aur mera connection
to bahut pehle hi khatam ho gaya tha..."

"oh...sorry...so dis was the new guy in ur life..?"

she was hell embarassed now....

"can u shut up!
meri personal life kabhi aur discuss karenge..."
she retorted...

"tujhe kya hua hai??!!...
anyway on d professional front...
dat report's ready...& its not good...."

"not good...hmmm....u mean drugs strong hai...?"

"yup!...specially the ones dat are going around,
being distributed in colleges, universities & discs...
there's just one word for them..."

"wat?"

"LETHAL!!"

"thought so...to ab..?"

"ab ek kaam kar...u come here...
i'll give u d details...
& then we'll talk about those
blackouts dat u'r having so regularly.."

"wat blackouts??" raj spoke aloud..

"a...i'm sorry...it's confidential...
naina...do u want me too?"
ziya paled...
she'd just realised why naina had shouted at her...

"to hell wid dat confidentiality of yours!!
naina ...
why was dis bit hidden in yesterday's conversation....?"
he asked...angry at her...

"ziya ...i'll meet u at 6 in d evening...at ur office...
thanks...bye.."

"bye....all the best!"
she giggled and put the phone down...

she was about to leave the kitchen
without answering him...
but he held her wrist & stopped her...

"i asked u a question...
& i intend to be answered..."
he added seriously..

"stop making a fuss about it!!...
it's nothing really!"
she was fidgeting in her place....

"fine!!..if u want to continue playing
dat super-woman angle...
do dat!...
par main tumhaare saath ziya ke office chal raha hoon!....

& don't u dare refuse me...
nahin to nanoo ko sab bata doonga!"
he was downwright blunt ...

"dat's blackmail!!"
surprisingly she felt no anger...
only a pleasant sensation...

"when did i say it wasn't!!"
he smiled..& went out...leaving her glaring...
...................................................

it was 4 in d evening...
the weather was certainly cold...but not fiercly.....

nia sat in d garden.....kneeling over some plants....
gardening...

while the sun played hide & seek...
naina didn't realise dat

she looked stunningly feminine....
& quite ravishing
even in her simple pink sleevles kurti &
white patiala salwar..

her wet hair...loosely bound, fell on her pretty face...

raj watched her for a long time...
before he actually approached her..

"u still into this stuff?
somethings never change do they?"

"wat stuff?...oh gardening...
u knew it was always a passion for me...
aur isiliye tumne aur bhaai ne mere
plants ka murder karne mein koi
kasar nahi chodi thi!!" she accused him lightly..

he chuckled...
"u still remember!...ah...
ab itne saal baad to i hope ma'am
isn't holding any grudges against me?"

she laughed softly..."oh yes i am!!
& i plan to punish u severly...."

"accha..kaise?"..he looked amused

"kuch khaas nahin...bas sochti hoon...
how bout boiling u in oil....
then frying u in d pan...
finally chopping u into pieces & eating u??!!"

at her visualisation...raj simply laughed his head off...
"i can assure you i'm not dat tasty!!"

"woh to khaane ke baad pata chalega!
anyway...come sit..."
she patted at a place next to her...on d grass...

"won't this get dirty?"
he pointed at his white kurta..

"chuck it naa!..."& she pulled him down...

dey sat in silence for sometime as naina busied herself...

he watched her intently ..
sitting cross-legged...while
naina sat on her knees..
too close for comfort!!

her cell rang..

"not again!!...
subaah se baj raha hai..."
she made a face...

since her hands were gloved
raj put it on d loudspeaker yet again!!

"hey hottie...wassup?...where have you been?"
a voice called out..

she was completely lost in her work ..
"who is dis?"

"aaah!!...meri aawaaz bhool gayi...
rohan!"

the moment she heard dat name,
she became outright nervous...
the spade in her hand fell & so did she!!losing her balance was one thing...
but falling right into raj's lap another!!

he held her tightly by her shoulders..
wen he realised who it was on d phone....
encouraging her to talk normally...

"oh...hi rohan..."

"kal hum sabko jail mein chod kar
kahaan gaayab ho gayi?"
she heard his accusatory tone....

"i was bailed out...."

"really?!...khaali tum??...
why didn't u try gettin us out of here den?" Jul 25 delete DIPIKA......
raj could sense her wild heartbeats...& his too...
but for a different reason altogether!

"i couldn't!...he..he was a ..customer!"
she slapped the first thing dat came to her mind...

"kitne ka maal becha?"
he was serious again...

"ah...75000..."

"aur saari raat uske saath aish ki..
uska kitna mila?"

she was red with rage now!
her fists clamped in fury....

raj could feel the heat coming out of her!
but couldn't do a thing to make her feel comfortable...

she knew dat she was almost called a prostitute...
& for d first time...
felt a severe hatred towards her profession...

"10...10000..." she answered ..tight-lipped..

"u'r a much better piece of ass...
aage se zyaada maangna...
anyway aaj bar mein ek aur badi deal hone waali hain..
reach at 10....bye"

a tear rolled down her cheek....
& he saw dat she was hurt...badly...

"naina...don't think much about it...
yeh bekaar ki baatein hai..."

she turned in his lap...fully facing him...

they looked at each other for a long time...

before she went straight into those solid arms...
seeking support...strength...

it seemed eternity...they stood hugging each other
for a long time...her tears flowing freely...

unable to resist the temptation...
he bent his mouth to her face..
.& kissed dem away....

every kiss to her was a blessing in disguise...
& a peaceful feeling came over her...

she hugged him tighter...
& he kissed her harder...

this time on her lips...moistening them,
giving her a strength...

it didn't take her long to kiss him back...
with renewed vigour & vitality...

& they stood locked into each other...
with no space even for air to seep in...

it began to rain..& their kiss deepened...
arousing them...
doing things to them dey had never felt before!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God....................
what a exciting moment 4 them
really splendid.
ab to tumhe kal update karna hi hoga...................
reply ke baare me jayda tensed maat ho
just concentrate in ur work and love ur
ok???
then bye
see u 2morrow

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