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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
very goodd..cool.... 👏 continue soon.. 😊
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formula 420??? ya kaisa formula hai 😕


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o gosh 😆 😆 😆 that bit was too funny 😆 😆 😆 and the song selection was cool too 👏 👏 👏 u rock 😉


ud soon, okay??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
gr8 update yaar but RN ko alag mat karo we want to see more RN scenes plzzzzzzz.............. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
"POINTLESS!!..u can't..do..this..to..me!"
she yelled...

"god dammit!...
i've been sweating so hard on this...
itne saare proofs...
it's the most prestigious
assignment of my career samir!
...you can't kick me out!"

"relax naina..itna personally yeh sab mat lo...
there's a lot of paper work..."

"now u don't give me dat shit!!!
paperwork..my foot!...yeh mera case hain...
& i swear i'll kill anyone who comes in between!"

"par naina..u've just risked your life..
ghar par thode din rest karo..."

furious..she picked up a knife close to her &
began tearing her bandages off!...

the others glanced nervously at her...
"i risked my life..
& i'll do it again!

mere liye yeh decide karne
waale tum hote kaun ho!!
i can very well handle myself
...& i'm still on my case!...
you're not the boss remember!..
we're both heading the unit!"

"fine!..aa jaao...it's your decision...par"

she slammed the phone down...

raj, navin, aalekh rushed forward...

"stop it babes!!...you're not supposed to
open them abhi!" aalekh shrieked..
but she continued..

"main jaa rahi hoon....z..
ziya se milne...i don't know wen i'll be back..."

"tum kahin nahi jaa rahi!!"
navin stopped her...

just her look warned him to stay away...
nothing could stop her dis time...except...


TING-TONG!

"tum dono yahaan?..."

raj had opened the door & was surprised to see
huda & abhi standing at the door....

"kyon?...nahi aa sakte kya?"
huda smiled...

"a...come on in...
mood thoda kharaab hai.." he whispered...

"i heard dat!!...
aur mood thoda nahi bahut kharaab hai!"
nia glared at them...

"it's all because of you guys!
why d hell didn't u lemme talk to samir??!!
they decided to throw me off!"
she accused...

"tumne apni condition dekhi thi nia...!
how d hell could we let u back?!"
navin shouted back...

"alright guys!!....cease fire please...!
naina...actually i forgot to give you this..."
huda handed her bag to her....

"yeh...oh my god!!"

a smile lit up on her face...
"u got my bag back!!..."

as d others wondered what was
so special about her bag..,

nia jumped on the wooden table &
den again to land right in front of huda!

"stop jumping naina!..u'll hurt yourself..."
raj warned..

but she ignored him...
& snatched it from him...

"tumne isse khola to nahin??"
she asked...almost accusing...

"wat?!..n...nahi.."

"gud!....& ...thanks..."
she quickly kissed him on the cheek..
suddenly she ripped it open &
began emptying its contents....

the others were surprised
to find loads of stuff falling out...

& shrugged their shoulders wen huda
looked puzzled!

after all the contents fell out...
she began turning a knob inside her bag...

& finally
with a triumphatic grin took out a digital camera!

but before she could relish the idea...
her sight fell on something & her smile faded....

a weird look came on her face...
"main....abhi..aati hoon!"

leaving almost everything there..
she rushed up the stairs...
& locked herself in....

meanwhile huda felt something strange...

"ah...guys..."
he rubbed his chin...

"woh...don't mind...i actually ...did open
her bag....aur filhaal ..some packets...
stand missing...drugs??"

everyone paled at the thought...

"oh shit!!.."

they rushed up the stairs....

"i thought she was over them.."
aalekh looked worried..

"naina!!...i hope you
remember your promise!!"
raj yelled....

"koi faayda nahin!...
lets break the door..." navin decided...

after a mighty push the door gave way...

naina shrieked &
hid the contents in her hand...

her eyes were bloodshot!

"w...wat?"

"wat!!!...u'r asking me??"

navin pulled her by her arm &

WHACK!...

slapped her hard...!

"navin!!" the others screamed..

"u guys will stay out of this!!"

he commanded...stern & serious...


naina fell on her knees...
not because she was upset...

but simply coz the packet had
fell down from her hand...
& the white powder was spread on the floor!!

the slap didn't affect her a bit!

it was as if she'd gone blind
to everything around her....

"u don't get it do u??"
navin asked calmly...

"theek hain....u can have it...!"
she looked up...
smiling expectantly...
while the others stood bewildered...

"navin yeh tu..."
but abhi was forced to shut-up
wen navin glared back...

"jitna khaana hai kha...but sis...
ek baad samajh le...

jitna tu drug intake karegi...
utna main bhi karoonga!!

right here!..right now!!..
we'll do this together...!"

he picked up a pack ,
tore it open
& began sniffing...

naina stood routed...horrified...
her breathing going haywire...

"STOP!!...STOP IT!
IT'LL KILL YOU NANOO!"
she screamed...

"so what!?

apni life ki jab tumhe koi tension nahi hai...

to main apni life ke saath jo bhi karoon...

is se tumhe kya farak padta hai?...

u'r so selfish sis...
thinkin only about yourself...

par koi baat nahi...
ab main bhi tumhaare nakshe-kadam par
hi chaloonga!"

he continued the drug intake...
"nice....feels great!"

"oh hell!!..."
she slapped it out of his hand..&
threw it out of the window....

"main...i couldn't...stop myself....
it's...it'll kill me bhaai!"
a tear trickled down her cheek...

"look nia!!...
you have to do this on your own...
no one can help you...
& i warn you sis...
next time..i see you with this stuff...
i'll drown in drugs!"

"i'm ...sorry..."

"you have to feel sorry nia!
baar-baar bolne se
problem khatam nahi hogi!"

she slouched & he held her...

"i don't want to lose you naina!
ek hi to pyaari si...nakchadi...
nautanki behen hai meri...."

he hugged her tightly &
she held him for a looooooong time...

"chal...ab rona band kar.....and this time round...
i want you to go back to your work...par haan...
bar se tum door rahogi...is dat clear?"
she nodded...

"i...will..."
as soon as the packets vanished from her sight..
she had realised her mistake...

what also hurt her was raj's expression...

"raj...i'm sorry...i didn't mean to
break the promise...trust me...
it won't happen again..."

sumhow she wanted him to believe her...

after a few seconds he nodded...
"i trust you..."

& it came as close as saying 'i love you'


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she went back to the living room...
& the moment she held d camera in her hand...
her hopes rose...
she was once again excited...

the others had followed her down...

she was making a phone call....

"samir...naina here....
ab jisse pehle tumhaari bakwaas shuru ho...
listen to me very carefully...!

i'm going to be mailing you some photos...
yes photos!!....i told u i had proofs!

anyway...in mein jitne bhi log hain...
i want their background information
on my table first thing tomorrow
morning

....nahi...hmmm...
no!....itni jaldi news nahi telecast hogi...
we haven't even reached the head!...

haan...shak nahi ..yakeen hai...
one of them is behind my accident...
gud..bye"

when she turned around...
she saw everyone staring at her
terrified...dazed...

"aise kyon dekh rahe ho?!"

"someone was 'behind' your accident?"
aalekh enquired...

"wat d hell is dat suppose to mean ?"
raj had paled...whitened like navin who found it
difficult to even speak...

"a...a..i guess i forgot to tell u !
mera accident nahi hua tha...
i was d.....driven ..off the road....
in..intentionally!!"

she swallowed...uneasily...&
so did the others....

"u...forgot..to..tell...me..dis!"
navin's voice rose...

"police...we have to file an FIR...immediately"
he suggested...
the first thing that came in his mind....

"no we don't!!
it'll ruin everything...police ko main
beech mein nahi laa sakti...."

&

the discussion went on........

finally ...naina won the round...
as usual...!
....................................
"yes sir...she's doing fine...
much better dan the last time you saw her"

raj stood in B.C's office the following morning...

"gud..glad to hear she's back to work...
i'm goin to meet her today...

anyway....gettin back to our work
..there's a bad news captain...

one of our most reputed officers
passed away a few days back...

he was an undercover officer
...investigating a case...
and was killed by the enemy.

...yaan phir yeh kahein
ki desh ke liye unhone apni jaan dedi...

....unka case ab tumhe handle kiya ja
raha hai...here's d file...
study it & report to me tomorrow"

"right sir...
a....may i know the name & rank of the officer sir?"

"he was from the 63rd commandement..

a pass out of dis academy....
tum nahi jaante hoge..
tumhaari training to KMA se hui hai...right?"

he nodded...
"his name sir?"

"oh...Captain Begh...Ali Begh...!"
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well dat's all for today guys.....
hv to rush....

so naina was back to drugs...
& her job's back...

naina-navin ka scene i hope thek tha!

the camera bit was necessary...
photos kaam aayengi...

& lastly...captain ali begh!

dead before he even arrived!!

lets see aapke reactions kaise hote hain...

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
that was nice..goodd..interesting... 👏 do continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
sorry for late.......
the ud was really cool...i loved the nia-navin part 😳
good jod 👏

ud soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
hey dear plz update it or give its link if u have posted it else where also plz plz plz update it
waiting eagrly 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
as they sat down for a cup of coffee in d evening,
a discussion of d day's events began...

"B.C ne yeh file di hai...
some new case....
koi officer...
captain ali begh was killed in dis mission..
& its been handed to us...
the three of us...
kal report karne ko kaha tha...
but i got the deadline entended..."

"chalo...accha hai...
kuch to karne ko hoga"
alekh smiled

"seriously...
mujhe to ghar baithe-baithe aisa lag raha tha
ki main koi unemployed insaan hoon...
jo naukri ke liye
bhatakne tak ka kasht nahi kar raha!!..."
navin grinned

"tere office mein kya hua sis...
any progress on those pics??..."

"not much...
bas itna pata chala hai
ki abhi main shaayad kisi middle
man tak hi pahunchi hoon...
the boss is sumone way-up!!
aur jis berehami se unhone rohan ko maara...
i wonder why??...
i think woh unhe blackmail kar raha tha..."
she looked upset...

"a...do u care why he died?"
raj asked her...

"not really..he was ...well...weird!..."

they talked for a while ...

& after dinner they retired to their rooms...
....................................

it was about 11.30
wen raj finally opened the file...
unable to sleep....

the window in his room faced the gardens...
it was a pleasant night ...

he'd just begun grazing through the file...
wen he saw a shadow dart in the garden...

immediately getting up..
he stared hard at it...

was sumone trying to
break into the house??

a cloth flew away from the person's attire...

"dupatta??....
naina!!..what the hell is she upto now?
iska dimaag hamesha
ulta hi kyon chalta hain?!!"

throwing his file on d bed,
he darted down the stairs....

naina was about to step out of the gate
,wen a hand stopped her...

sumone covered her mouth...

feeling helpless,
panicking...she bit it..!

"ouch!!...naina...main hoon !"

"raj!!...i'm sorry!...."
but then her thought changed...

"actually...i'm not!
tumne mujhe daraane
ka theka le rakha hai kya?"
it was den dat he noticed her...
wearing a red churidar...she looked dazzling..
& he just couldn't take his eyes off...!

"oh...a...z...ziya se milne..."
she stammered...

his eyebrow went up...

"abhi??...is time?...
kaise jaane ka iraada tha...?
tumhaari car to yahaan hai nahi..."

"bus..." she answered innocently...

"is time kaun si bus service
chalti hai nia??"
he asked...
obviously unimpressed by her slow answers..

"to phir auto le leti??"

"paune baara baje !...
tum auto kahaan dhoondhti??
now come out with it...!
kahin tum bar..." his eyes widened..

"no!..i told u na..ziya ke ghar...
we thought we'll enjoy a bit there...
aur maine...bhaai ki car keys li hai..."

"churaai hai!!..."

"oh watever!...aur waise bhi...
why do u care?
r u keeping an eye on me??...
aise kyon hota hai ki jab bhi
i try to go out..."

"SNEAK OUT!" he interuppted

"GO...out..tum out of the blue tapak jaate ho!
kuch to gadbad hai..."

he sighed...

"gadbad nahi...
isse concern kehte hain...
u've been scaring us for the last few days...
anyway...
i thought sumone was breaking into the house..."

something struck him...

suddenly he held her waist...
& pulled her closer...

"tum par nazar to rakhni hi padegi na nia!"
he winked...

"and so..i've decided...
ki i'll drop u tonight at ziya's place..."

"NO!"

"kyon?...kahin aur ja rahi ho?"
he asked sarcastically

"....nahi raj..it's too late..
u go sleep..i'll manage..."

"your hand hasn't healed abhi...
i insist..aur waise bhi the weather's
beautiful for a long drive...&..
so is my company.."

a remark dat made her blush..

"fine...chalo!"
she began laughing...

"ab kya hua?"

and she began humming...

paune bara baje ,dono ghar se chale
whats going on ?, what's goin on?

soye hain raaste ,yeh kaha ham chale
whats going on ?,whats going on?

bulaya kisi ne tumhein kya
yaha jo tum lehrake aaye,

kare ham jo chahe tumhein kya
jo aaye hamko samjhane

ham toh chale
peeche tum ho pade
whats going on ?...what's goin on?

paune bara baje
dono ghar se chale
whats goin on - 2
hey hey hey - 2

raj-
chalo chodo nakhre dikhana -dikhana
duniya ka na koi thikana -thikana!

naina-
kahan seekha baatein yeh banana banana
duniya se hamko yu bachana bachana!

raj-
ladki ho tum dekh na patchtaaogi
bandhi hui laut ke phir aaogi....

naina-
seekha hamne jaakar phir na wapas aana
ham toh chale
pitche tum ho pade
whats going on - 2



as dey entered d car...
raj remarked...

"the song fits the situation...
& wat i'm saying is perfectly correct!
u'll regret venturing out alone like dis!"


chalo hamein itna batao batao
parwaah tumhein kyon yeh sunaoo sunaao??

raj- (shaking his head..)
parwaah kise hain jaao jaao ha jaao
reh lo akeli jo reh paao reh paao!!..

naina(smiling ...)
rehna pade toh chalo reh jaayenge
thodi kami yeh chalo seh jaayenge...

raj-( getting off d car ...this time seriously)

toh fir jao-jao,
rehlo sehlo phir batlaao !!


"arrey!...it's just a song raj..
nautanki mat karo aur chalo!..."

"u sure u don't mind my presence?"
he was sarcastic...

"oof!...wat attitude!...chalein??"

he smiled & entered d car yet again...

"thode nakhre to karoonga na!!"
.....................................

"take d highway..."

"highway!...par ziya ka ghar to....
aah..long drive ka mood
madam ko bhi ho hi gaya..."

"hmmmm..."

she avoided answering him &
closed her eyes...
her head resting easily on the seat...
but her mind worked at a great speed
... complementing her thoughts raj
increased the speed....

loving the way her hair flew .....
caressing her face...

after a while she opened her eyes...&
saw him slow down a bit...

"kya hua?"

he pointed at a couple.......
kissing each other...
right in the middle of the road...

she blushed profusely...

"wat's dat supposed to mean!"
she asked..her eyes widening...

"huh!!...oh god!...jo tum soch rahi ho..
woh to bilkul hi nahin....
don't u remember??...PDA!!"

"PDA??...yeh kya....oh man!...
tumhe abhi bhi yaad hai??"

& she broke into a hysteric laughter...
joined by him...

"PUBLIC DISPLAY OF AFFECTION-
PDA....!
nanoo ko humne kitna tease kiya tha..."
she laughed...

"arrey yaar...
poore school ke samne usne
apni so-called girlfriend ko kiss kiya tha!
kya himmat thi!!"

"himmat!...
ghar par jo thapad pada tha...
dat was one of my happiest moments...
bahut mazaa aaya tha!...."

"haan-haan school se hi madam
ne aunty ko phone kar diya tha!
bechaare ki ghar par jo phati thi..."

they grinned....
unaware of a speed-breaker right in front!

"ouch!..." she fell right into him..

"i..i'm sorry..."
her smile was wiped off...
as she collected herself

"i'm not!..
he whisperd to himself &
stopped the car...
jerking her back into him....
this time he didn't let her move...
or let's say she didn'T want to move!

she knew wat was on his mind as he held her tighter...
she enjoyed his touch,
loved d feel of his fingers on her neck...,
on her shoulder from where her dupatta had slid....

"raj...."

he looked up..meeting her eyes...

"i'm...thirsty..woh shop khuli hain...
can u get me a bisleri please..."
she avoided his eyes altogether....

he moved back...& she straightened....
"a...yeah...sure.."

he got off d car...took a deep breath...
slid his hands through his ruffled hair...
& went away...

meanwhile naina regained her composure...

thank god i stopped!
she wondered how she'd done that...
pushing him away had been most difficult for her,
when she herself had been dying for it...
par utna hi zaroori tha..

she stepped out of the car & l
ooked around...

taking out the only pin from her
almost loosened hair...
she bent & punctured the tyre !

& quickly slid back...
..............................

"par yeh suddenly hua kaise?"

raj frowned wen he looked at the tyre....

"no clue..raj..main late ho rahi hoon"
her phone rang...

"hello..haan..bas pahunchne waali hoon..."
she got of the car...

"just hold on ....raj..u want to come along?"
she already knew his answer....was sure of it...

"nahi...main puncture theek karke 15 minutes
mein, tumhe drop kar doon..den i'll go back..."

"uh..ek kaam karo...
ziya will pick me up us corner se..
u leave...."

"alright...cya kal..."

she waved & returned to her phone...
walkin away...

he saw the beautiful figure distancing
herself from him....& felt a pinch..

last time you left her alone ...
she almost got killed...
ab fir se main...

he locked the car...&
began following her....

she didn't realise wen he'd
crept behind her..

he was just inches away
wen wat he heard ...
left him stunned!

"i know wahaan par
chori karna mushkil hai ...
but i'll do it!

i can do the impossible samir!

i ...will...steal...from...the...police station!!"



dat's all guys....
thanx for reading....
cya
byeeeeeeeeee
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PRENA
the link is



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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
ow....thanks a lot for updating...cool ud as usual! 👏 👏 👏


but the link's not working is this the correct link??? 😕

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