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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really shocking ud...............naina was a mistress , ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

wow gazal, amazing part yaar....naina's character grows more and more fascinating with each update. who is she really?!!! innocent or seductress? spy or patriot? amazing!!!!

u know it soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

It was really very interesting........finally naina's identity is to be revealed.........waiting for it eagerly........great description of the whole episode...........

thanks for comment
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Posted: 16 years ago

"alright ms naina singh ahluwalia...
who the hell are you???
not a reporter for sure!!!"

"you're right..i'm not....
i........................"

suddenly..it started snowing....
rather heavily...

why does everthing go wrong
at the most important time???

naina trembled....

raj stood confused....
not understanding what to do....
should i believe her??
woh photos..real...kabir...

visions flashed through his mind again....

he felt jealousy surge through him...
coz whoever kabir was..don's son or not..

he had been an exceedingly handsome man...
& naina had been close to him...

a little too close for comfort perhaps...

the photos had been taken in a disc...
where the two had been dancing like...
but then ali ke saath bhi to kuch aisa hi...

stop it!!

kya ho gaya hai tujhe raj??
u know your naina...
career ke liye ditch karti to shaayad maan bhi
leta..par for another guy...
no...dat was hard to believe....

he knew her family..
knew the values...
knew everything about her upbringing...
& dat merited nothing but trust....

she was probably doing a sting operation...
or something....

he heard her shiver..
& he realized dat she was freezing ...

meanwhile second thoughts entered her mind...
should i....tell him everthing...
will he understand my position....
what if he???
aur isko involve karna....

she stared hard at him...
she knew he was thinking hard too..

but probably about where their
relationship was heading......

"raj..."
she stammered a bit...


"ghar chal kar baat karte hain..."
he removed his coat & handed it to her...

she took it...covering herself in his warmth....

"taxi!!"
he shouted....

they hailed a cab & got into it...

the journey was obviously a silent one...
but a storm raged in their hearts....

ghar jaa kar baat karna...
matlab sabke saamne...

nanoo...bhi hoga....i..i can't..
not in front of everyone....!!
.......................................

they reached home...

tehzeeb opened the door...
a sudden relief flickered across her face...

& she pulled naina into her arms...
hugging her for a long time...

in a matter of few months..
their relationship had evolved...

they were like sisters...best friends..
confidantes...and even colleagues!!

her eyes fell on the cut on naina's
neck...

"my god!!..how dare they..?
maara kaise unhone tumhe?
i'll kill them!"

naina didn't reply....

"shit nia!..that's quite a nasty scar...anyway..
we'll handle it...
thanks raj...navin bahut daraa hua tha...
agar tum aur 10 minutes mein nahi aate..
to he'd have left to fend for the two of you...."
tazz smiled a bit...

but the cold look on raj's face remained...
he was in a dilemma...
& his reactions came out in the form of anger...

he took naina's arm..clutched it tightly..
& virtually dragged her into the living room...

"pakad apni behen ko...
& ask her wat d hell is she upto??
chaahti kya hai yeh?"

he glared hard at her..tossing him
into navin's arms....

"wat...kya hua?"
he held her protectively...
kissing her forehead...
hugging her tightly...

the tone of raj's voice pinched her terribly...

trying to find solace in navin's arms..
she didn't see the additional member there....

aalekh..huda...abhimanyu
&....



yudi....

he'd risen..& walked upto her....
"naina..."

she looked up....

"yudi!!!..tum yahaan??
tumhe is jagaah ka kaise pata chala??
aur tum headquarters par kyon nahi ho??"
she went upto him...
& they hugged each other tightly....

"yudi??...samir/sam...
hai na yeh to..?"
navin asked...

naina's eyes dropped to the floor...
then met yudi's & finally tehzeeb's....

she nodded her head....
& naina knew wat dat meant....

it was time...

time to reveal every thing..
& be forced to face the consequences..!!.

"c'mon naina...yudi ko maine
yahaan bulaaya hai....
it's time....& you have to do it...."

"tehzeeb is right naina...
bahut ho gaya...ab bas sach..
nothing else..."

yudi held her shoulders..
& made her sit down.....

"par pehle...yeh bataao..ki tum arrest kaise hui?"

naina's eyes widened...

"pics!!..
the Goddamn idiots got hold of
pictures..."

"kiski?"
tazz asked....

"meri..aur kabir ki...."

"kabir!!..but how d hell is dat possible??"
tehzeeb's eyes widened...in surprise.....

"it is tehzeeb...aur shaayad i know how...
they know about you naina...
woh jaante hain sab...everything...
atleast now...

aur shaayad isiliye tumhaara accident bhi
karwaaya gaya..."

yudi was filling in the blocks in the puzzle....

"hang on guys!!...we've had enough!"
navin yelled....

"do you realise ki tum log jo bol rahe ho...
woh mere liye raddi bhar bhi sense nahi bana raha...

yudi tum ho..to samir kaun hai?

kabir kahaan se aa gaya?

wat accident are u talkin about?

kaun log hain iske peeche...?

and most importantly...

tumhe itna kuch kaise maaloom hai tehzeeb??"


"wait nanoo!..
this is important....
main..main sab bataati hoon...
just give us a second will you??"
naina shut him up!

"yudi..kya jaante hai woh..terrorists?
about my identity?
main reporter hoon yeh..yaan phir.."

"nahi..reporter waali baat
to unhe kaafi pehle hi pata chal
gayi hogi..
dat's why they drove you out
of delhi...via those attacks...

par kashmir mein jo tum par attack hua..
dat's bound to be .....

ek minute!!..."
a thought travelled across his mind..

"tum...tum jail gayi thi na...
kabir se milne?...about 3 months back?"

"haan..."

raj gave her a look of contempt...
so she was still into everything
....two-timimg him...!!
"kya hua tha us din?"

"main jail gayi...
i apologised to him...."

"for what?"
tehzeeb stopped her....

"for not being loyal to him...
they knew i was a reporter right...

maine usse kaha ki main drug trafficking
mein is hadh tak involve ho chuki hoon..
ki ab shaayad baahar kabhi nahi aa paaoongi...."



flashback:

"maaf kar de mujhe kabir...
please....main tujhse yahi kehne aayi thi...
ki main reporter hoon...
maana ki tumhaare khilaaf bheja gaya tha mujhe...
par..par main tujhse pyaar kar baithi..
& now..i can't..can't live without you...."

kabir was behind bars...

he held her tightly
& pulled her closer....hurting her..

"mere bina to tu reh legi...
tera woh aashiq jo mil gaya hai tujhe....
captain hai na...army mein...aur tera bhaai bhi"

naina felt a fear unspoken....unheard of...
& nodded...

"par main pyaar sirf tujhse karti hoon..
isiliye to london se resign karne ke baad...
usko chod kar seedha tere paas aa
gayi hoon...nahi jee sakti tere bina kabir....
i want you.."
tears fell down her eyes....

kabir gazed at her..a long time...
enchanted by her beauty....
& then slowly touched her cheeks....


"enough!!...stop it!!...
whatever be the reason naina...
how the hell could you stoop to such low levels??"
raj yelled...
tears welling up in his eyes....
"mujhe dhokha ....."


enough!...she'd had enough!!
bas ab aur nahi...
bahut jhel liya maine bhi....!!

an anger surged through her body...

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata..
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila..
is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan..
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan...

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar...
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar...

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka...
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka..
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein...
saansein saansein tooti bandishein...

kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai...
kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai...

"shut-up raj!!!..just shut-up!
wat d hell do you think i am??
a prostitute??

yeh hai tumhaara vishwaas mujhpar...
dat's wat u call love?????

i wasn't doing anything willingly.....
it's my duty!!..

i'm under an oath ....nahi sunne ki himmat
hai to chale jaao...

i'm tired of playing around...
with my reputation
but i HAVE TO DO IT!!....
EVER HEARD OF PROTOCOLS????!"
she screamed...tears flowing down her cheeks too...

raj shut up....
so this was it....

she was an officer somewhere....
& this was a case that she was handling....
but..but was it..was it worth all the trouble?

he sat down....unable to meet her eye..
he'd been wrong about her...
his instincts told him...
she'd never fail him....

she continued....

flashback:


"tu sach keh rahi hai?
karti hai pyaar mujhse?"

he wanted her too....
desperately....

"haan kabir...
warna yahaan kyon aati..
tujhe sach kyon bolti?"

"chaal bhi to ho sakti hai??
jo baat mujhe pehle se hi pata thi...
wahi mujhe tu khud bata rahi hai...
fassana chaahti hai mujhe??"

"jaan pyaari hai mujhe meri ...
aur fas to main chuki hoon...
ek taraf woh channel waale peeche pade hue hain....
aur doosri taraf tu hai...
jiske bina...."

"tujhe meri parwaah nahi hai
naina...u want my money....
yaan phir woh drugs...
jiski lat maine tujhe lagwaai thi..."

"paisa to nahi kabir...
par haan...
addiction to mujhe hua un
drugs ka...
aur shaayad hosh bhi khoye apne...
par behosh ho kar bhi to sirf.....
sirf ...teri baahon mein aayi na..."

she entwined her fingers with his....

"....please jaan..trust me"

his eyes lit up ...
a fire through them....

he pulled her closer...caressing her cheeks....

he could feel his need for her...

"theek hai...kiya tujhe maaf...
nikalwa mujhe kisi tarah yahaan se....
aur phir....sirf tu aur main...."

she nodded...

"main chalti hoon..
nahi to kisi ko shak ho jaayega...."


"so it was all an act??"
raj asked...still uncomfortable...

"YES!...obviously....!"

"par itna involvement kyon naina??"

"try & understand raj
...he was the only one who could help me reach
the top man behind the drug scandal....

his father!!...'DON'!

& captain rajveer singh
shekhawat....agar maine yeh sab naa kiya
hota...usse na yakeen dilaaya hota
ki main ussi se pyaar karti hoon...
to ab tak tum aur navin..zinda na hote...

he would've killed you in delhi...
we were lucky we escaped those attacks...
par now...the tables have turned again...."
she was hurt....
he could atleast wait to hear me out completely...
before..before...

only she was aware...
aware of how she'd played with her self-respect....
but someone had to do it...

besides...i never crossed my boundaries...
never allowed him to come closer...

i was begged to be a part
of the mission...but i'm not making excuses...

i wanted to be a part of it...
wanted to steer my nation free of drugs..
& even terrorism...

gandagi saaf karne ke liye..
khud bhi ganda hona padta hai...

keechad ki kuch cheetein
khud par bhi girti hain....

only she knew how she'd spent
those terrible nights..
alone ..afraid ..

dat kabir would do something horrible to her...
come to her place...

crying..cursing herself...

it needed courage...sabki bas ki baat nahi thi...
par..meri haalat kisi ko nazar
nahi aayegi..kabhi nahi...

koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko..
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko...

aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein....
tooti footi sab farmaaishein...

kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai....
kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain...

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar...
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar...


"jail se baahar aane ke baad tera bag chori hua
tha na nia...remember you called me?"
tehzeeb was thinking along a certain line......

"haan...par how is that related...."

"ek minute!..naina...by any chance...
were you carrying...
your badge with you dat day??"
yudi asked....

"shit!!!...oh hell!...yes..i was...
iska matlab...."

"iska matlab..however hard u'd tried....
you failed to impress kabir...

he sent someone after you....
got hold of your bag...saw the badge...
& the truth was out....!
"
yudi was linking lots of things now.....
& the conclusion disappointed him..terribly...

"no wonder i got attacked
the same day!!!...par..par phir yeh dono..
abhi tak .."

"raj aur navin ko maarne ki zaroorat
hi kahaan thi..with you dead...
all proofs were gone...

aur itna to unhe pata hi tha...
ki tumhaare bina naa to hum kuch kar sakte the..
aur na yeh dono...

remember those bugs planted ghar par...
i guess they knew all along ki raj aur navin ko
tumhaare baare mein kuch pata hi nahin tha....!!"
yudi told her...

"par main bach gayi...."

"exactly..aur police ko tumhaare aur kabir
ke rishtey ke baare mein bataana....
was a simple trick to get rid of you...
kabir's revenge...although i can bet
that he's got bigger plans for you..
& this boils down to one thing..."
yudi continued

"kya?"
naina asked...

"they know where you are....
unhe ab...
tumhaari position ke baare mein sab pata hai..."

raj replied...getting somethings...
understanding the gravity of the situation....

"and dat means...ki hum sabki jaan
khatre mein hai....!"

tehzeeb sat down..shocked....

"nahi...sabki nahi!!....
except one....."
naina looked at huda....

"kya matlab sis?"

"matlab yeh...ki
tum logon ke kashmir pahunchte hi...
mujhe arrest kar liya jaata hai...

woh bhi usi din..wen i step out of my coma..
hum sab mein ek gaddar chupa hua hai bhaai...


there's a traitor amongst us!!"

na poocho dard bandon se..
hansi kaisi khushi kaisi..
musibat sar pe rehati hain..
kabhi kaisi ,kabhi kaisi...



they all stood numb..
looking at each other....

"and i think i know who it is..."

but she didn't look at him...

"kaun?"
abhimanyu asked....

"main nahi bataoongi...
whoever it is..
i challenge him right now...!!

kar le jo karna hai...

par main..case crack karke rahoongi...
even if i have to lay my life for it..."

"ek minute..woh sab theek hai naina...
par the most important
question still remains unanswered..."
raj asked...

"wat question??"

"tumhaara kaam?
who do you work for?"

she sighed...
"wat if i say i work for kabir??"

"naina..sach chahiye...
i think all of us have had enough for a day!!"
raj answered...

"tehzeeb..bag pass karna..."

tazz handed her purse to her...

she took out wat seemed like a
sleeve of a shirt..with a sign on it...

& a badge...& threw it on the table...

everyone crowded around it....

"tum...GOD DAMMIT...!!!"
raj's mouth fell open...
"you're...you're a part of the...!!"

everyone was stunned...
horrified..yet..enthralled...

naina nodded...

"this is yadhuvansh shaani...aka yudi
a colleague...


this here...is tehzeeb hassan...
psychologist working with us..
& me..well...


special agent naina singh ahluwalia...
working for

CENTRAL BUREAU OF NARCOTICS...
DRUG ENFORCEMENT ADMINISTRATION...(DEA)

while simultaneously heading...
(atleast now i am...)

undercover INTERPOL operations in india..."


...



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Posted: 16 years ago
well...dat's all guys...
i guess dat's quite a lot...

so the biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig secret is out....

i hope to see replies this time..
& wish to see how many of you hate naina's
ways !!

she's out & out positve..
par haan ghee ungli tedhi karke nikaalti hain..!!!

ab kal yaan parso mein aapka waaala
romantic scene bhi aa jaayega..
provided i get satisfactory replies this time!!! ;)

gtg...luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow gazal....FANTASTIC!!!!! the big secret was DEFINITELY worth the big wait....lol. waise, i'm perfectly ok with naina's methods since u asked. i can't understand society's stupid double standards. now if it was raj getting close to some gangster's moll or daughter, then everyone would have said....oh he's just doing his work so why only naina should be blamed????
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

wow gazal....FANTASTIC!!!!! the big secret was DEFINITELY worth the big wait....lol. waise, i'm perfectly ok with naina's methods since u asked. i can't understand society's stupid double standards. now if it was raj getting close to some gangster's moll or daughter, then everyone would have said....oh he's just doing his work so why only naina should be blamed????

ya u r right
i m glad to know that
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud plz contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Gosh its dam mysterious. Yet we luv it coz its gr8 fun to witness mysteries getting unfolded. W8ing 4 the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Gosh its dam mysterious. Yet we luv it coz its gr8 fun to witness mysteries getting unfolded. W8ing 4 the next part.

i ll update know

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