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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Gr8 part. Its painful to imagine Raj in pain. But Naina's condition was really touching. They really luv each other a lot n it feels really gud. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment
i,ll update it right know
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Posted: 16 years ago
the doctor would be here real soon....
he wondered....

withstanding the pain
wasn't so troubling anymore....
it was her condition dat saddened him....

he knew it was just fever..but.....

he felt her forehead again....
& dis time she stirred a bit.....

he instantly backed-off....
a little too fast perhaps...
sending a sharp shooting pain
in his waist again....

dammit!!!..he pressed his wound...

nd slowly limped to the little kitchen
in dat cottage....

wat was it???

shit!...
mom kya pilaati thi bukhaar mein...??
he rubbed his chin..lost in thought....

adrak waali chai??
nahi...woh to cold mein....

a..a...

the bell rang...
the doctor had arrived....

he came in..smiling....
"how're u captain?"

"main to theek hoon par..."

"aah!..your wife....
kal inki shakal hi bata rahi thi ki
yeh bimaar hone waali hai....

i told her to rest...but
she insisted on looking after you...

wives!..i tell u!...
meri waali bhi aisi hi hai...."
he felt naina's pulse....

"my God!!...kaafi tez fever hai....
she slept in these wet clothes itself..."
he shook his head...

"yeh li jiye..."
he handed him some medicines...
& told him the necessary details....

"inki saree is dry now..
i'll cover her up with a blanket...
aapke liye zyaada movement theek nahi hai...."

"oh no...it's ok doctor...
main kar loonga....thanx....
aapko subaah-subaah disturb..."

"oh please...meri duty hai...
fulfill to karni hi padegi....
who'll know better dan u...
main chalta hoon..."

& he left....
raj prepared tea for the two of them....

"nia..."
he whispered in her ear....
sitting next to her on the bed.....

she didn't stir....

taking the tendrils off her face..
he tried again..."gud morning"

gently placing her face in his lap....
he kissed her cheek..

"nia...itne pyaar se utha raha hoon...
ab to utho...."

"ummmmm..."
she hugged him in her sleep....
unintentionally touching his bandaged wound...

"shit!!"..he pressed his lips..
eyes tightly shut...
swallowing in the pain....

"kya hua....sone do na ra......"
his name brought back terrible memories...
& she shot up ...wide-awake...

she trembled seeing him there...
"tum...are u alright?"

he smiled....

"i'm so sorry....pata nahin kab aankh
lag gayi....u need something??...
aur tum yahaan kyon baithe ho raj??!!
lie down & rest for god's sake!"

she ordered him....
while he continually looked at her...
lovingly...

"naina...do u have any idea dat
u'r burning with fever?"

"fever?"
to her it was a new term...

"ab yeh mat poochna ki woh kya hota hai?"

"oh c'mon raj!...
mujhe yahaan apne upar sharam aa rahi hai..
& u'r trying to act smart!...
main so kaise gayi yaar???!!"
she questioned herself...frustrated....

"come off it nia!!...
u'r not a superwoman...!

thak gayi to so gayi....
mere hisaab se to tumhaare
jaisa bewakoof nahi hai koi...

tumhe pehle hi so jaana chahiye tha na..."
he sounded angry..

"why d hell are we fighting?"
she wondered aloud...

"for the very simple reason dat
u don't care a bit about your health!"

"as if u do!..kal hero banne ki kya zaroorat thi...
mere aur us aadmi ke beech nahi aana chahiye
tha tumhe! what if..?"

"kuch hua?"...he cut her...

"haan hua!!"

"main zinda hoon na..."

"to marna chaahte the kya??"
she said sarcastically....

"zaroorat padti to shaayad mar bhi jaata..."
he concluded the discussion...seriously...

"chai ki band bajaadi...
thandi ho rahi hai...."
"tumne chai banaai...are u nuts??"

"meri maa..."
he folded his hands...
"no more lectures please..."

she smiled....

he handed her her medicines...
as she brushed ...

"doctor aaye the?"
she enquired...
back in the room...
sipping her tea...

"hmm..
by the way...
u didn't change out of your saree?
kuch zyaada hi pasand aa gayi thi kya?"

"don't be dumb!
mujhe jab yahi yaad nahi ki main soyi kab...
to change karna was out of question!"

"really...."
he came close to her ...
"aur mere clothes??
woh change karna yaad tha tumhe?"

his hands pulled her closer &
she snuggled into his arms..

she blushed...
"a...mere paas aur koi ...
option nahi tha..."

her eyes widened...
"but i swear!!..maine kuch nahi dekha!"

he laughed out loudly...
"aankhen band thi kya?"
he chuckled...

"well...sort off..."
she smiled back....

"anyway...bahut romance ho gaya...
ghar chalein...."

"mann to nahi hai...par...."
he kissed her soundly...
"jaana to padega na"..
he winked....

& she shook her head...
looking at him....

"wat?"

her gaze turned naughty...seductive...
& his eyebrow shot up......

crushing her as close as possible...
the wound forgotten...
he whispered..

" aise na mujhe tum dekho,
seene se laga loonga....
tumko main chura loonga tumse...
is dil mein chupa loonga


.....................................................
"whose car is dat??"
she'd driven back home....
with raj by her side....

"mujhe kya pata?...."

they saw a car standing outside her house.....

"raj..bhaiya ko kya bolenge?
obviously he'd have realised ki hum...."

"andar to chalo..
dekhte hai kya hota hai"
he held her by her wrist...

.....................................

"lagta hai dono aa gaye"
navin told sumone sitting next to aalekh....

"raj will be shocked to see you here...

Tehzeeb tum upar jaao....
waise bhi i need to talk to them..."

the lady got up & went upstairs....

he opened the door.....

"& just where d hell were
the two of you??!!"
he didn't even let them enter....

"nanoo!..andar chal ke bataaye.."
naina tried to brush him aside...

"nahi!...wat's goin on?
tum dono saari raat baahar the na?"

"hang on!...tu kab ghar aaya?..."
raj asked him

"kal raat ko hi!"

"what!..but u said u'll be with B.C.
the whole night!"..

"plan change ho gaya!....
ek minute!...
i was d one questioning you guys!...
akele raat ko...."

"romance kar raha tha teri behen ke saath!!"
raj told him boldly..

as naina froze...
stunned by the truth in his words...
atleast a partial truth....

"oof!..bakwaas mat kar...
aao andar..."
navin let them in...

as he walked in front
naina whispered to raj..

"marwaane ka iraada hai kya?
what the hell were u tryin to do?!"

"kisi samajhdar ne kaha hai...
jab sach chilla kar bolo...
to sabko jhooth yaan
mazaak hi lagta hai!"
he winked...

"kisne bola hai?"

"sant rajveer ne!"

"oof!!"
"kya khusar-pusar kar rahe ho dono?"
aalekh asked....

"kuch nahin....baahar car kis ki hai?"
naina stopped navin...

"nia!!...you're havin fever...
aur..."

he just noticed..
"tune saree.....?"

he looked at raj ...troubled...
"are u guys dating each other?"

"a..bhaai...kal raat..."
naina told him about the attack....
& diverted the topic....
smartly changing it....

"what!..."alekh shot up...
"raj...tu theek to hai?"
there was a genuine concern in his
voice....

"absolutely!...thnx to her...
madam ne saari raat meri seva kari hai...
aur ultimately khud bimaar ho gayi!"

"tum dono gaye kahaan the?"
navin asked...

"dat's not important navin!...
police mein complaint file karni chaahiye...
these attacks are becoming too frequent...."
aalekh suggested....

"no!!..."
naina shouted...
"nahin!...police involve nahi hogi is case mein...
end of any discussion!"

"tumne shuru hi kahaan hone di!"
aalekh dropped his face...

"rocky!!...."
she shut him up with her glare....
"pooja ke ghar kya hua?"

"kuch nahin!...
woh tumhe chod kar kisi par yakin nahi karti!"
aalekh answered...

"she refused to hand over the tape to
us...sirf tumhe degi..."
navin completed....

"maine hi kahaa tha usse...
not to trust anyone else...
i'll tell her ki tum dono
mere saath hi ho..."

"hadh hai!!
ab apne credentials apni behen
se proove karaane padenge!
kya din aa gaye hain!!

anyway...u guys go rest...
pata nahi kitne patthar tod kar aa rahe ho!"
..................................

the woman upstairs
was forgotten....

.................................

TRING-TRING...

her phone rang....

"hi yudi....
haan....wat??!!"

the colour from her face drained away...

"dead!!!...are you ...sure??"
she stammered...

her world reeled....
ek aur murder....woh bhi....

she rushed out to tell everyone...
dropping the phone...

oh God!...
yeh nahi ho sakta!

her face once again masked with fear..
tears rolling down....

.................................

she ran down d stairs....

& wat she saw left her shocked....

there stood raj...hugging a woman...
picking her up...kissing her forehead...

she couldn't see who it was....
but one thing was clear....

this extremely beautiful woman...
dressed up in that gorgeous skirt...
with a model figure...
wrapped away in her fiance's arms...
had evoked her whole-hearted jealousy!

who d hell is she?!
who gave her the right to touch him!!!?

raj..u better back-off or....
i'll strangle her!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
dat's all guys!!!

hope it was light-hearted.....

ab keep guessing kaun mara aur tehzeeb kaun hai!!!

hopin to read ur replies...!!!

muwaaaaaaaaaaaah!!
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg....who died?!!! plz plz plzzzz don't let it be pooja....and who is this simone character?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

omg....who died?!!! plz plz plzzzz don't let it be pooja....and who is this simone character?

u know it soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
her heart lept out wildly....

i hope she's some
cousin of yours raj!!

seeing her come down tehzeeb whispered
something in raj's ear....
but he shook his head.....

"a...naina....meet.."
he was about to introduce her ...

"i'm sorry....
i'll talk to u later..."

she decided to avoid him completely....

there were other pressing matters...
ones dat broke her heart ...
to be dealt with...

she shouted out....
"nanoo...rocky..."

she didn't realise dat all this while...

her face was wet..as tears slipped down....

she was too far away for
others to notice them....

"kya hua???
bukhaar hai naa tujhe....
neeche kya kar rahi hai...?"
aalekh asked...approaching her....

navin came forward....
"nia!!...tu ro kyon rahi hai?
are u alright!!??"

raj's eyes widened in surprise...

shit!!...ab kya ho gaya???
i didn't notice her crying....

"naina..." he stepped forward...
but she stopped him...

taking a deep breath she answered....
"p..pooja's ..dead..."

"wat???!!"
they all exclaimed together...

"samir ka phone aaya tha...
her maid....found her...body....

shit yaar!!...
sab meri galti hai!"

she burst out cryin...
slipping down on the floor...

her face behind her hands....

"i shouldn't have involved her in ..."
she couldn't continue....

navin bent down & took her into his arms....
"shhh..."

he struggled to remove her hands....
& wiped her tears...

"teri galti nahi hai nia...
stop blaming yourself...."

"nanoo...she was so....innocent....
agar main usse ..nahi mili hoti...
i forced her...i'll...
main kabhi khud ko..
maaf nahi kar paaoongi....."
"bakwaas mat kar naina!
we'll get the tape...
pooja ka sacrifice won't be in vain....
sambhaal khud ko babes.."
aalekh consoled her....

"sacrifice.....
dat's all dat couple ever did....
dey could have had...
a beautiful...life...
par....hell!"

she took out her frustration by banging
hard on the table....
& hurt herself....

navin held her shoulders...
"stop it!!!
kisi stranger se itni
attachment theek nahi hai naina...
aise to life mein tujhe kayi log milenge...
death is a part of life dat u've got to face...."

maybe he was right...
but the moment he chose wasn't....

naina..unable to control her anger..
whacked him hard on his face!

SLAP!...

"stranger!!...hadh ho gayi nanoo!

kal agar mujhe kuch ho jaaye..&
a stranger sheds tears for me...
tabhi tu yahi kahega????
do you realise what you're saying?

pooja ne kitna kuch jhela tha dammit!!
aur meri wajah se...."

she calmed down a bit....
her sorrow drowned by her frustration..

"do thapad aur maar le naina....
u'll feel better..."
he added...seriously....

"raj....army headquarters phone kar de...
this is our case...police tak nahi jaayega..."
navin told him....

"hold it!!...
what do u mean it's your case...?"
she shot up...

"captain navin singh ahluwalia...!!!
meri aur pooja ki conversation ke baare mein...
tum teeno ko chod kar aur kisse pata tha??"

she stared hard at all three of them...
while they avoided an answer....

"answer me !!!!...
tumhe pata tha ki yeh baat
leak nahi honi chaahiye...
but u guys ignored that didn't u???
i bet army mein sabko yeh baat pata hai by now!!"

when dey merely bowed..not answering her....
"you're d limit!!!!"

she held navin's collar...

"how d hell do u believe we'll lay our hands
on dat bloody tape ab??!!"
she shouted...

"naina..."
raj tried to explain..
"i'm...not..talkin..to..you...
aur jab main bol rahi hoon...
to beech mein mat bolna!!"

she glared angrily at him..
& he shut-up!

"you guys ruined everything!
sab khatam..mera saara...
huda??...does he know?"
it struck her....

raj nodded....
"but dat doesn't mean..."

he was about to refute her thinking...

"let me be the judge of dat!!"
she answered sarcastically....

meanwhile...tehzeeb was forgotten!!!
..........................................

they were standing outside the BEGH mansion...

lots of policemen had crowded
out there along with neighbours who
were tryin to see wat had happened....

while raj, aalekh, & navin tried talkin to the police....
naina decided to slip into the house.....

she just had to see pooja....
had to find dat tape...if ...
it was still there....

"ek minute!...kaun hai aap?
andar jaana allowed nahin hai...."
one of the men stopped him....

"main pooja ki friend.."

"jo bhi ho..dis is a murder case...
evidence ke saath tamper hone ka
risk hai..i can't let u in..."

"look..." she began angrily....
then it struck her...
dat her reporter status could help....

"yeh lijiye....my I-card...
press ko to andar....?"

"you're from the press?"
the man's eyes widened....

"tab to aap bilkul bhi andar nahi jaa sakti....
media!!..please....baahar chaliye..."
he began pushing her out...

"dekhiye.." she tried to resist....

meanwhile these guys got the case transferred'
under the army...

"u guys leave..here on...
we'll handle the case..."

navin talked to the inspector....

"alright...."

raj had been noticing naina's struggle....

why d hell isn't she talkin to me???
could Tazz be right?....he wondered...

referring to the words that tehzeeb
had whispered to him.....

yaar!..yeh ladkiyon ko samajhna is impossible...

he made his way forward.....
"captain shekhawat...."
he showed his ID....

"case army ki jurisdiction mein hai ab...
allow the lady inside..."
he informed the guy...

"she's from the press..."

"jaanta hoon....let her in..."
he smiled at naina....

"thanx.."..she added...rigidly....
& went in.....
before shouting at the crowd....

"drama chal raha hai yahaan koi??
get out of here!"

"naina!....apna gussa in par mat nikaalo....
andar jaao..."
raj stopped her...

& in return got an icy glare from her....
..................................

it was a disgusting sight.....
she shrieked as she saw pooja's lifeless form...
her throat cut....lying on the ground....

her eyes were wide open....
as if in shock....

naina knelt down beside her....

"talk to me pooja...
give me some clue..."

naina knew she sounded desperate....
"kahaan hai tape?...who killed you??
did u know him?"

there were so many questions dat perturbed her.....
& the one who had all the answers lay dead....

i have a feeling u've met your killer before....
my instincts tell me.....
i hope i'm right.....
.....
all the others came in too....

a frantic search...for about 2 hours...
proved futile..as the tape wasn't found...

"har kona chaan maara hai yaar...
nothing!...."
aalekh heaved..clearly exhausted...
just like the others.....

"ditto!..." navin answered....

"kuch milega bhi nahin.....
dat tape was the motive for murder...."
raj concluded.....

..................................

tehzeeb was stayin at a hotel....
& the atmosphere was such...
dat no one dared mention her....

whenever they tried...
naina either changed the topic...
or backed off to some place...

2 days later...
pooja was buried......

since dat day...sumthing in naina died...
not only had she lost a dear friend....
she lost all hope from life...

she began to stay a bit depressed....

raj noticed the change in her....

"yeh gadbad hai!...
she's too gloomy....kuch karna padega....
tehzeeb!!!"

.........................
a moaning could be heard....
breathing inside seemed difficult...
impossible..

but the door was jammed....
there was no other way to go in....

but the one inside had to be saved....
while the one outside knew
dat death lurked close.....

maybe a few steps away..
in dat darkness....

there was a heaviness felt in the lungs....

and a scream dat escaped the person's lips...
the one outside...
felt the cold tendrils of death slip down
the shoulder.....

i have to go on...
i can't stop here....

don't do this to me!!!
you've got to live...even if i die!!!!

................................

tehzeeb was invited to dinner.....

"i'm ready to face them today..."
naina sighed....

..........................

"naina...aao...
u guys haven't met theek se....
have you??"

navin took her to tehzeeb...
who stood next to raj...

"oh...hi...naina ..right?"

"hi..."

c'mon nia!..u can do better dan dis...
yeh monosyllabic language mein baat mat karo..
show dat u'r least bothered!


"i'm tehzeeb...TAZZ for friends....pronounced as Jazz"
she smiled...& winked....

why is she so sweeet??
iske paas zyaada der rahi
to mujhe diabetes ho jaayengi....

"nice name....i mean tehzeeb...
u guys know each other...?"

she finally pulled out the strength to ask.....
still not making an eye-contact with raj....

"ek minute!!
raj ne tumhe mere baare mein bataaya nahin kya??..."
she slipped his arms around her waist...
while raj knew dat the moment had come....

i'm sorry for hurting u naina....
par sach to yahi hai ki.....

"we're engaged....raj's my fiance"
she smiled .....

maine dil se kaha...
dhoondh laana khushi...
na samajh laaya gum..
toh yeh gum hi sahi......


as the words sank in....
her world reeled....

he..cheated on..me....

tears welled up in her eyes......
& dis time...she looked at him strangely....
as if she'd never known him...

she loved a stranger....
no!!!!......

her world blacked out........
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Posted: 16 years ago
dat's all guys!!!

i hope jhatke dheere se lage!

pooja dead....i had to guys!!

tehzeeb is raj's fiance....
(well.....)

bold lines ke baare mein jald pata chal jaayega!!

gtg....

loooooooooooooooooved ur replies....
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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if this is some crazy plan of tezeeb to bring naina out of her depression then all i can say is the woman deserves a tight slap and so does raj for going along with it....but why pooja yaar?!!!! logically i guess i can understand they storyline demanded it but emotionally...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Well sorry 4 not commenting on the previous part. But it was brilliant specially when Raj told the truth boldly. It was WOW.
But I wonder who this Tehzeeb is. Well watever. I knw this is sum silly prank on Naina. But feeling sad abt Pooja. The story is getting on really well.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

if this is some crazy plan of tezeeb to bring naina out of her depression then all i can say is the woman deserves a tight slap and so does raj for going along with it....but why pooja yaar?!!!! logically i guess i can understand they storyline demanded it but emotionally...

sort of
u know it in tthis episode

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