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Posted: 16 years ago
dat's all friends!!!!!

i hope it was romantic enough...to last a little long.....
quite a loooooooooong update...

hope it satisfied u guys!!!!

now...we're back to the story line....
don't worry...
u'll still get romance....!

luv u...
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Gr8 part. Full of romance. I just luved it. Each scene was fabulous as always. W8ing eagerly 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow raj is so filmy my god!!! 😕 😆 but the part was too romantic for words...but what is it that naina's hiding? is she more than just a reporter? why do i feel that way?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Gr8 part. Full of romance. I just luved it. Each scene was fabulous as always. W8ing eagerly 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment
i m glad that u like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
they were walkin back to the car...
with his arm around her....

it was den dat his cell rang.....

"kaun hai itni raat ko yaar??"
raj cribbed....

he picked up the phone &
started talkin...
while naina looked around.....

she was lovin everything..
the day had turned out to be brilliant.....

her arm brushed against raj's...

"tumhe thand lag rahi hai?"
she asked..as he talked on d phone...

he silenced her..& continued....

"u'r so cold!"
she took off his coat..&
handed it to him....

he was busy...
so all he did was shake his head...
but nia forced it on his arms...

he just glared back...

the car was parked at a distance....

suddenly...naina turned back.....

yahaan koi tha!....

she saw no one....

she snuggled into him...
holding him tight....

his arm went back around her...&
he caressed her shoulder....

his cold hands...makin her shiver...
but she still loved their feel...

she heard footsteps....
& jolted her head back again...

"gudnight...."
raj meanwhile kept the phone down...
"kya hua??...
baar-baar peeche mudkar kyon dekh rahi ho?"

"mujhe laga koi hai...."

"so what?"

"i thought....nevermind...."


"aur yeh coat....pehno...."

she shook her head...

"tum pehno..u'r feelin cold too....
tumhaare baraf jaise thande hai.."

"i'm used to extreme weather nia...
jaldi pakdo....dekho..."

he saw dat she was about to resist,....
"ab behes mat karna!"
he warned her....

but she remained adamant....
conversing..lost in each other...
dey didn't realise wen a man...
walked by naina from the opposite side...
brushing his arm with her....

the contact made her whirl around....
& seeing her turn..so did he....

all they saw was a man..
dressed in black...
wearing a cap...
so that his face wasn't visible....

all dat was visible was a
sinister smile on his lips....

something wasn't right....!

he stood just a few steps apart from them...
facing them....

"excuse-me...aapko koi problem hai?"
raj asked him....pulling naina closer to him..

the man nodded....
& raised his finger...
pointing at naina.....

her eyes widened in surprise...
& raj looked at her....

his reflexes were sharp..
probably due to his
army training..
& he saw the knife dat the man had taken out..
from his pocket......

he pushed her backwards...
"peeche rehna nia!"

she didn't understand why he asked her to....
but in one second....
found her throat held by a knife....
& she felt the man's hard arms...

a pain surged through her neck...
& she could feel something dropping ..
sliding down her neck....

no points for guessing....

she bled.....

a fear filled her eyes.....
"what...kya chaahte ho?"

there was a change in d man's face....

"aaya kisi kaam se tha....
par...apni ring utaaro...."
no harm in makin a few more bucks...

he snickered....

his eyes fixed on the diamonds in it....

this was the moment dat raj was waitin for...
seeing him distracted....

he kicked the man hard on his shin....
& pulled naina away...as the knife fell down....
tumbling on the roadside..

"you....u'll pay for this!!"
the man shrieked out in pain....

and he was right!
he got off..&
a fist-fight was inevitable....

naina meanwhile...tried callin the police...
but the man kicked the cell off her hand....

"manager nia!!...jaao!"
raj shouted....holding the man by his collar.....

but it proved futile...
cause the moment raj finished
speakin dese words..
he was kicked down on the road...

the man held his knife again...&
rushed towards naina....

raj..a horror fillin him...
ran behind d man...&
got in between the two...

"aaaaaaaaaah!!"

the knife cut through the edge of his waist...

seeing him shriek..
the man realised his mistake....

maine galat aadmi ko...boss will kill me!
pichli baar bhi galati ki thi maine...
panicking..& seeing sumone approaching...
the man ran away....


leaving naina stunned & raj wreathing in pain.....!

her world seemed to have shattered to pieces....

"r..raj..."
she was too petrified to speak....
"tum....oh my God!"

her hands went to her mouth....

"it's nothing ....chota sa cut hai...
car le aao...u drive..."

"huh...?....shut-up!!"
she was yelling at him....

"naina...relax..main theek hoon...."
he left his waist...which he'd been clutching...
& brought his hand forward to touch her cheek....

nia shrieked!!!

his hand was red....& he bled profusely....

tears filled her eyes...as she wondered what to do....
the panic in her stopped all thoughts of action....

"madam...yeh sab?"
a burly man came running....

"thank god!....shit!...
please...help me...please....
he's bleeding....ambulance...phone..."

"sir...the cut isn't ....deep...
first-aid...box...kahin se" raj managed....

"absolutely..."
the man ran down....

raj..struggled to reach her....
& held on to her for support...
bending...his lips pressed tight..
as if stopping a scream...

as the shock went in tears fell from her eyes...

and he saw them.....
"naina....trust me....main theek hoon...."
he faintly smiled....

"b...bahut..dard...."
she couldn't complete her words...

the man had returned with not only a first -aid box...
but also a stretcher & two men.....

raj lied down on it..& was carried to one of
the cottages at the resort...

"main yahaan ka manager hoon...
one of my men reported a fight to main
check karne aaya tha...
i'm afraid it turned out to be worse....."

naina was shivering badly.....

sab meri galti hai...
it's all because of me....

her tears just didn't stop.....

"ma'am...ambulance ko aane mein time lagega...
we're on the outskirts...yahaan se hospital..."

"wait....it's not that bad....
i know it...." raj told them...

while he saw distrust in her eyes...
the manager questioned...

"are u sure sir?...
aap agar apni shirt utaarenge...
we'll be able to check the wound....."
they were in the room..

he nodded....

"naina...help me with the shirt.."

she nodded...rushed to his side...
& took it off for him....
as he closed his eyes tightly...
trying to stand d torture...for her sake....

as the wound was disclosed...
naina's scream filled the room..&
she slumped to the floor...
seeing so much blood ....

there was a pain in her eyes dat
pained him more dan the
wound.....

he lied down on the bed....
while the hotel physician was called upon....

"nothing to worry...
luckily chot gehri nahi hai...
waist muscles tear ho jaati...
the torn ligaments would've
caused a major problem...."

raj looked at nia...smiling..
"i told you..."

she nodded.....completely upset....

"doctor...ambulance..?"
she asked...

"zaroorat nahi hai...i'll take care of it....
bas bandage karni hai ab...
i'll give him an injection....anasthesia
inke unconscious hote hi main stitching kar doonga..."

he did as he said...
in a matter of few minutes...
raj was asleep.....

naina sat next to him as the
doctor closed the wound after cleaning it...
& she felt his pain....

"there...it's done...mr.."

"captain...captain rajveer singh shekhawat...."
she was proud....

"aah!...captain..no wonder in mein
itni sehenshakti hai...
dekhiye mrs.shekhawat.."

she winced...but didn't correct him...

"inki bandage raat ko ek
baar change karne main phir aaoonga...
& i suggest u go to sleep as well..
aap bimaar ho jaayengi..
u look tired to me....
and one more thing....
he needs to get out of his wet clothes...
u'll manage?"

she nodded....
"a set of clothes?"

"cupboard mein hai ma'am..."
the manager answered....

"doctor...main bandage kar doongi...
u don't need to come..."

"are u sure?..u could use some sleep..."

"i don't think dat's possible tonight..."

the doctor understood...

"alright...inhe subaah tak hosh aa jaayega..."

& they all went away....

..........................

naina sighed.....

tired though she felt...more mentally
dan physically...

she helped him out of his clothes...

finding a set of kurta pyjama
in the cupboard she
put it on him..
not bothering to change her clothes....

she then sat next to him...
holding his hand in hers...
caressing it gently...

tears falling again....
.....................................

she wasn't even winking her eyelids...

it was 2 A.M....
she changed his bandages....

cleaning the blood from his waist....
with trembling hands....

what had happened to the perfect day???
she wondered.....

all through the night...
in the light of a lamp....
she stood awake...
feeling dead..
carrying little errands for him....

washing his shirt off the blood....

drying away his wet clothes.....

.....
meri wajah se yeh sab tumhaare saath ho raha hai...

why did i fall in love with you??

why did i endanger your life?

she lay down close to him...
removing his hair from his forehead...

AAPKE PYAR MEIN HUM SAWARNE LAGE ...
DEKHKE AAPKO HUM NIKHARNE LAGE ...
IS KADAR AAPSE HUMKO MOHABBAT HUYI
IS KADAR AAPSE HUMKO MOHABBAT HUYI...
TOOTKE BAZUON MEIN BIKHARNE LAGE ...


AAPJO IS TARHA SE TADPAAYENGE
AISE AALAM MEIN PAGAL HO JAYENGE ...

WOH MIL GAYA JISKI HUME KABSE TALAASH THI
BECHAINI SI IN SANSON MEIN JANMO KI PYAS THI ....

JISM SE ROOH MEIN HUM UTARNE LAGE
JISM SE ROOH MEIN HUM UTARNE LAGE ...
IS KADAR AAPSE HUMKO MOHABBAT HUYI ...
TOOTKE BAZUON MEIN BIKHARNE LAGE ....
AAPKE PYAR MEIN HUM SAWARNE LAGE...

ROOPKI AANCH SE TAN PIGHAL JAYEGA
AAG LAG JAYEGI MAN MACHAL JAYEGA ......

YEH LAB ZARA TAKRAYEGI JO DILBAR KE HONTH SE....
CHINGARIYA UDNE LAGI SHABNAM KI CHOT SE ...
HUM SANAM HADKE AAGE GUZARNE LAGE
HUM SANAM HADKE AAGE GUZARNE LAGE....

IS KADAR AAPSE HUMKO MOHABBAT HUYI
TOOTKE BAZUON MEIN BIKHARNE LAGE
AAPKE PYAR MEIN HUM SAWARNE LAGE ....

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she fell asleep at 5 in the morning...
her pillow wet with tears....

& her hand clasping his....

...................................

he stirred.....

& slowly opened his eyes....
tryin to adjust to the lamp light in the room....

he looked at his watch....

it was 5.30....

where am i??

he suddenly remembered....
oh God!!...

no wonder he felt so heavy....

he tried gettin up...but a pain shot in his waist...

something else was pulling him back....

he turned around...& saw Nia holding him tight....
a smile lit up on his face........

he shook his head slightly...

"bacchi hai bilkul!"

he kissed her on her forehead...
& noticed that her pillow was wet....

yeh ab jaa kar soyi hai!!!
he slapped his forehead....
kyon itni tension leti hai???

but at the same time his
heart gave out a leap...

i'm so lucky to have you in my life.....
tum mujh se itna pyaar kyon karti ho?

he held her wrist to free his hand...
& was disturbed.....

shit!!...she's burning!
isse to bukhaar ho gaya hai!

it struck him dat his clothes weren't wet...
in fact he wasn't in his own clothes....

aur yeh madam...
ab tak apni geeli saree mein wrapped thi..!

pressing his waist tightly...

he got up from the bed....
& went out to get his phone...

"manager...captain rajveer..i...
i'm fine....wife?...oh....actually...
isi liye phone kiya tha...
she's down with fever..can u....
doctor...thank you.."
he replaced the receiver....

wife.....wow!!!

MRS. NAINA SINGH SHEKHAWAT...
I LOVE YOU!......

he smiled........a worry in his eyes....
& just a minute back i
was sayin ki 'yeh' itni tension kyon leti hai!!!

main koi kam hoon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
well..dat's all for today..
actually kuch zyaada hi ho gaya...!

i hope their bond seems to be beyond physical!!!

they really do love each other!!!!

so howz d update??????????????
boring to nahi ho gayi?????
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

wow raj is so filmy my god!!! 😕 😆 but the part was too romantic for words...but what is it that naina's hiding? is she more than just a reporter? why do i feel that way?

what is naina hiding. it is surprise
you guess right
she is more than a repoter
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Posted: 16 years ago

hmmm.....Mrs. Naina is it? well, have to admit is certainly has a ring to it....raj certainly thought so anyway 😉 😆 so naina is something more than a reporter....hah! i knew it all along, something in her behavior said more "spy" than "journalist" even one for the BBC. anyway fantastic update!👏👏👏 though i was really worried for a minute there that raj might have been really hurt 🤢 thanx so much for the pm

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Posted: 16 years ago
Gr8 part. Its painful to imagine Raj in pain. But Naina's condition was really touching. They really luv each other a lot n it feels really gud. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

hmmm.....Mrs. Naina is it? well, have to admit is certainly has a ring to it....raj certainly thought so anyway 😉 😆 so naina is something more than a reporter....hah! i knew it all along, something in her behavior said more "spy" than "journalist" even one for the BBC. anyway fantastic update!👏👏👏 though i was really worried for a minute there that raj might have been really hurt 🤢 thanx so much for the pm

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