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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#111

hi gazal

thks for the pm

sry for the late reply

superb parts

update sooooooooooon

luv soumya

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gazal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: saridena
hi gazal
thks for the pm

sry for the late reply

superb parts

update sooooooooooon

luv soumya

THANKS A LOT

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gazal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sea_nyx
👏 sweet!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks a lot

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 17 years ago

#114

he stopped wen he saw her giving
him a real cold stare....
"this isn't funny raj!!!"

"c'mon nia....look...i'm really sorry...
maine jo us din kaha..
i know it was wrong...."

"please raj...mujhe thodi der akela chod do....
i'm not in a mood to talk to..."

"ruk kyon gayi....
mujhse baat karne ka mann nahi kar raha
to bolo...but atleast stop ignoring me!!!"
his voice had risen...
such that a few people out there...
stopped to stare at them...

"raj...tang mat karo...
we really need a break from each other....
yahaan sabke saamne..."

"tamaasha??...karoonga!!..."

"what???"

"yup!!...mujhe maaf kardo...warna...."

"hadh ho gayi raj!!!
u can't blackmail me like this...!
tumhe har cheez mazaak kyon lagti hain??
when was the last time you were serious in life??!"

"right now!!...i'm perfectly serious nia...
i said i'm sorry!...ab aur kya karoon yaar??"

"jaao yahaan se!!!!"
she yelled

"tum nahi maanogi??"

she looked at him...& began walking....
away...

mar gaya raj!!...yeh to aur gussa ho gayi !....

he rushed to a nearby store..& within 2 minutes...
emptied his purse of all the cash...
buying her every possible thing....

i'll give it one more shot!!

aise naa jaa...
tu ruth ke jaaneja..
ab maan ja oh sanam...
ab maan jaa...

maana hui hai khata..
lekin yeh dil hai teraah...

ab door se aur na aise sataa..

i wanna wanna wanaa take u
home wid me right now right now...

i wanna wanna wanaa take u
home wid me sumhow..sumhow....

this time he sang so loudly dat all those
present began smiling...
cheering for the couple....

he was strolling next to her....
singing...placing gifts in her hand one after the other...
till she could barely carry them...

she whispered...obviously overwhelmed....'

aise na tum bhi tamaashai bano...
kuch zaraa sharam bhi to karo....
log saare hum pe hasenge jaan lo...
soch lo waqt hai soch lo...

kaise main yeh baatein teri maan loon...
sach hai kya..jhooth kya ..kya pata..

chaand taare ..teri gawaahi de magar..
phir bhi yeh dil nahi maanta....

"dil ko..."

"kuch na kaho..."

"dil ko..."

"door hi rakho..."

"dil ko..."

"bas ho gaya...ab chalo..."

"dil ko tere hai yakin..hoton par hain kyon nahin,...
tu hai jahaan main wahin...ab maan jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

he kneeled down on the grass...his hands folded...
a pleading look in his eyes...honest & sincere..

"i'm reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sorryyyyyyyyyy...
tumhe jo karna hai tum karo yaar....
in fact mujhe jo karne ko bologi..
main woh bhi kar loonga...
jhaadu..pocha...bartan dhona...kapde dhona...
anything!!"

finally she broke into a giggle....
"stop!!..stop it!!"
she held her stomach....

"it's ..ok...maaf kiya!"
she shook her head...& laughed again...

"waah...free ki baai milte hi maaf kar diya!!"

this time she shook so hard...
dat she couldn't control the tears
dat sprang up in her eyes...

all the things dat she held in her hands fell on the ground...
& she toppled down along with them....

"aaaaaaahhhhh..."
bringing him down on her!!!

their audience whistled & cheered...

"thank you!..thank you.."
& he blew flying kisses to everyone...
& got a jerk from naina in return....

"tum bilkul paagal ho!!!!"

the crowd had dispersed...

"tumhaare pyaar mein..."

"gande-gande filmy dialogue mat maara karo!"
she made a face..

"waise abhi mera gaana poora nahi hua tha..."

"kya??"

"gaana...chorus baaki hai...

baby..baby..baby..u got to
give me a chance now...

let me show you just
a little romance now......"

he bent down..& gave her a quick kiss...

"u've forgiven me ??"
he looked at her...strangely...as if his
life depended on her answer..

she nodded..lightly touching his cheek...
caressing it...

"i want to take you out tonight...."

"kahaan??"

"let dat be a surprise..."

they both remembered wat had happened
wen he'd taken her for a surprise....

she smiled....
"occasion to bataao...??"

"woh bhi pata chal jaayegi..."
he winked.....
.........................................

she was extremely excited about this evening..
& wondered where he'd decided to take her...

she had an hour to dress up....

"main kya pehnu??"

her entire wardrobe lay out on the bed...
& she flipped from one dress to another...
making all sorts of expressions...

"shit!!...kuch bhi accha nahi hai..."

KNOCK-KNOCK....

"is he ready .........already??...."
she wondered....

she opened the door..par wahaan koi bhi nahi tha...

"arrey...helloooooooo??"
she was about to step back when
she saw the parcel lying at her feet....

curious..she took it in & opened it....

her face broke into a wide grin....

"it's beautiful!!..."
her hand felt the cloth of the dazzling black saree....

she read the note wid it.....

TO MY LOVE...

FOR THE GORGEOUS COMPANY
YOU'VE DECIDED TO BLESS ME
WITH THIS EVENING..

WITH LOTS OF LOVE....

FROM YOUR LOVE......

the black saree....
with the sparkling silver work...
was perfectly complementing her fair skin...

the blouse however was more of a tube-top...
leaving her shoulders bare....

the way it draped around her made her
look sexier than she actually was....

she left her hair open...
silky...guarding her back from the cool weather....

she shivered a bit...
but decided not to carry a jacket along...

it was his choice..&
he probably wanted to see her like this.....

..............................................

she climbed down the stairs...
of the quiet house....

he was nowhere in sight....

bhaai aur aalekh ko kya boloongi???
the thought just struck her.....

she was lost in deep thought...

wen the lights of the living room came alive....

scared out of her wits...she swirled...
& time stood still....................

she'd never seen him looking as hot
as he did right now....

dressed in a black suit...

& just his sight made her blush....

meanwhile he stood routed to the ground....

suddenly they were plunged into darkness...
light chali gayi thi...

but this time....
they could clearly see each other...

for they stood close to the window..
& the moonlight poured in..heartily....

the window was open...&
a breeze swirled in..
stirrin her hair....

taking the drape of her saree off her shoulder....
& she fought to control it....

his eyes took in every action..
every movement dat she did....

he felt a sudden desire fuel up in his body...
& he fought to control it..

he ruffled his hands through his hair....
but it was impossible to look away....

it was a bad moment...but she sneezed...
& he was brought back to reality....

"a...naina...
woh...u look..the saree...suits you...
aur...tum bahut...sexy...sweet..i mean..
stunning ..a...lag rahi ho...but..don't u think..
u should cover yourself ...?"

he finally managed...
swallowing hard...as she turned to face away....
embarassed...

"woh....tumne gift....i'll...
i'll get a jacket..."
she stammered...

& would've rushed past him..
if he hadn't held her arm....

"k..kya hua?"
she wondered why she was nervous...

"tum phir mujhse bhaag rahi ho?"
his voice was husky......

& she stopped....
not making a sound.....

he turned her to face him once again....

she trembled...&
it wasn't because of the weather....

he slowly moved his hands across her bare waist....
& pulled her closer....
right into him....

his nearness made her pulse sore...

she looked up & saw his eyes..
filled with a
strong desire....

a desire she was scared to lament to....

their bodies melted into one....
& the contact was bound to be explosive.....

"u'r so cold...."
he whispered...
his face disappearing behind her hair....

feeling the silkiness of them...

"& u're warm..really warm....."
she felt his warmth seeping through her...

as she hid herself into him...
his lips traced the outline of her shoulders...

planting unending kisses...

sending a shiver down her spine......

she didn't know when it happened...
but she found their breaths locked with each other...

a never-ending kiss followed...

so demanding...

sending her nerves alive....

a kiss dat rivaled anything she'd ever sensed
was possible betwwen a man & a woman...

there was a ravaging force
& a hunger in them dat
made them cling to each
other's arms for support...

she moaned at the sensations
dat travelled in her body....

as his hands magically
moved to draw her tighter into him....

i wish this night would go on forever................

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya..
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya...
Chun liya..
Maine Sun liya...

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin...
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin..
Ek kar doon aasmaan aur zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin.....

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se...
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke...
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 17 years ago

#115

dat's all folks!!!!!

hope u liked it....

no summray today...

ist half was cuter side par...

& the second sexier....

take ur pick...but i hope u like both!!!

cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#116

hi gazal
thks for the pm dear
lovely part
loved it
soo sweet raj pleasing naina
update soooon
luv soumya

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

hey thanx so much for the pm, i'm sorry it took me so long to comment but i was out of town. i loved the part, like u said, cute as well as sexy. the last bit especially was mind-blowing 😍, if a bit kuch kuch hota-ish 😉

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

Hey I read ur FF today. Its really nice. Last part was tremendous. Pls continue soon.

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

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Posted: 16 years ago

#119

hey gazal!! thanks for the pm...

the part was too amazing.. and romantic too :P

ud soon!!

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#120

he knew she was drugged by the
movements of his hands....

& a naughty thought flashed thru his mind.....

his fingers tickled her back...
& he slid the drape of her saree...
slowly of her shoulder....

"a...nia...."

"hmmmmm"...
she was lost in his touch.....

"turn around....
tumhaare blouse ka ek hook khul gaya hai"

she saw him smile..
as he turned his dark eyes to her top...
while she blushed....
wondering how his words always
carrried a seductive tone with them....

she held the drape in one hand & turned about....

with a leisurely stroke of his hands....
he brushed her hair in front...
exposing the perfectly closed blouse to his eyes....

lightly holding her waist he pulled her into him...
as his lips tickled her back...

she fidgeted...

"raj..kya kar rahe ho??...
hook band karo....stop!!!"

she screamed in glee...as his kisses
sent delightful sensations into her...

"nia!!...hilna band karo..."
the moment she stopped...

his fingers clutched her tighter...
& he bit her lightly at the nape of her neck...

"ouch!!!...raaaaaaaaaj!!!
u'r such a moron!!..."

she separated from him...&
rubbed her neck....

"iski kya zaroorat thi???
dat hurt!!!"

"mera koi to nishaan tum
par hona chaahiye na!!
a little lovebite won't make
much of a difference!!!"

he chuckled at her outrageous expression..

"tumse baaton mein koi
nahi jeet sakta!!!
ab chalein yaan dinner yahin
karne ka iraada hai??"

"soch lo....eventually dinner
ke baad yahi sab to karna hai....
time bachega!!" he grinned....

"khwaab dekhte rehna laloo!!...."
she pulled his cheeks...

while he shook his head....

"mujhe koi seriously kyon nahi
leta!!!!!????"

but at the same time...
he held her hand....
adjusted her saree for her...
& walked her out to the car...

"yeh lo.."
he took off his jacket &
handed it out to her...

"aur tum???" she asked...
rubbing her arms in d cold weather..

"tum ho na!!"
he winked as they got in...

......................

"ab to bataao kahaan jaa rahe hai??"

"dinner karne!!"

"raj!!...where??!!!"
she avoided his sarcasm...

"baccho ki tarah behave mat karo...!
have patience!!....nahi to waapis le jaaonga!"
he acted as if scolding her...

"wat??!!...to hell wid you!!!"
she made a face...

"uff !! nakhre to dekho madam ke!
accha baba...mazaak kar raha tha!..."

naina ko bhaav khaane mein mazaa aa
raha tha...& she remained silent...

"meri maa!!!"
he folded his hands...
leaving the steering wheel!
"galti ho gayi...
gustaakhi maaf kar do....!"

"raaaaj!!"
she instantly held the steering wheel for him....
"marne ka iraada hai kya??"

"tumhaare pyaar mein..."
he'd taken the steering back...

"nahi!!!"
she closed her ears..
"not your ghise hue dialogues again!!"

he chuckled....

"mazaak chodo...
bhaai aur aalekh kahaan hai??
i mean...it's a sunday..&
i haven't seen them after lunch..."

"oh...tumhe nahi pata....
woh pooja se milne gaye hain....
brigadier wants that the tape should be in
the posession of the army....
phir academy jaayenge....
so don't worry...humme disturb karne
waala aaj raat bhar koi nahi hoga.."

"raat bhar??"

"yup!!...kal subaah waapis aayenge dono..."

"oh...tum kyon nahi gaye??"

"hadh ho gayi ab to!!!
tumhaari wajah se !...
i promised to take you out tonight..."
he added lightly....

"aaah!!...sacrifice!!..."
she smiled...

then held his arm...&
sat closer to him...

"thank you..."
there was a sincere note in her voice...

"anything for you..."
he gave her a peck on the forehead....

.....................................

situated on the borders of the city...
close to a lake..
was a magnificent inn...
surrounded by acres of rolling green lawns..
elegantly landscaped with flower beds...

a flagstone path ...
connected the restaurant & the lake..
with a tiny bridge.....

although cool..
it was a starry night....
so romantic dat she sighed....

seeing the look in her eyes....
he smiled...

"like it?"

"loooooooooove it!!!...
it's wonderful..
par mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise...
i've been here before..."
she handed him his jacket...

"dat's coz u have!...
naina!!...yaad karo..."

she tried real hard...
but didn't recollect...

"nahi!...oh God!
naina...
dis was the very lake you fell in
when we were kids....
humaari families yahin to dine
karne aayi thi..."

a blush rose to her cheeks...

"tumhe...u remember???....
abhi tak!!"

"of course i do...!!
navin aur main kitne khush hue the...
in fact we cheered seeing you drown.."

he chuckled..as she began giggling....

" u really hated me ...didn't you??"

"c'mon nia!!
i was a kid...& i must admit..
u weren't so sexy back then!"
he teased her....

"accha!...aur ab??"

"ab..well..
abhi ghar par ek namoona dikhaaya toh...
baaki dinner ke baad...let's go in..."

he escorted her in....

the restaurant was large..
having magnificent chandeliers.....,
a polished marble floor....
& a massive fireplace...

it was darker inside...
and the logs crackled on the hearth....
a soft music played....

he had a reservation..&
they were seated in an intimate booth...
a shadowy corner near the tiny dance floor....

she admired him as he placed the order...
...
hers weren't the only pair
of eyes admiring him though....

in fact...every woman in the room...
betwwen the age of 12 & 90...
watched him with rapt interest....

she felt a pang of jealosy surge
through her...&

deliberately turned her attention to the dance floor...

the drinks had arrived....

as he stretched comfortably in his chair...
his knee bumped against hers...&
he left it there...

a sizzling reminder dat he was
a male & she was a female..

& something...hot..exciting ..
& frightening was happening between them....

she took a deep breath...

his eyes lowered down as she saw him intently
gazing at her...

she felt wordless...
as his fingers brushed a tendril off her face gently....
loving the contact...

"dance??"
he asked,...his voice drowned in passion....

"dance??"

"aren't you hungry?"
she asked him...

"are u??"

she shook her head.....

hungry?...
when she was shaking so hard she could hardly speak?

maybe dancing would be easier....
atleast it didn't require any intelligent conversation...

"chalo..."

he took her hand & escorted her to the floor....

wat was most amazing about dis place was d fact
dat inspite of it being a public place..
the chandeliers were lit so low...
dat it gave the place a solitary look...

it was faintly dark inside &
a place suited solely for romantic couples...

all lost into each other...

although a fair amount of families too turned up usually....

the instant he took her in his arms,
she realised she'd been so wrong....

everything came rushing back to her....

the way she'd thrown herself at him....

the stolen kisses under a star-studded sky...

their compactness in the closet...

the thrill of his hands touching forbidden places....

her throat went dry....

god....he smelled really good...

just a faint fragrance of some subtle...
unrecognizable cologne...
& beneath it the scent of a warm & sexy man
...

she was getting light-headed...
not from the wine she'd barely sipped...
but from his nearness....

the soft rythmn of the music & the gentle light
of the moon through a skylight combined to make her
feel as if she'd transcended this world...

his words brought her back to earth...

but she hadn't heard a word ....

as she turned to ask him wat..
she was shocked at her reaction wen
her lips brushed his cheek...

dancing in public..she felt a little too
aware of his warm skin & cold body....

he tightened his hands around her waist....
& drew her closer until she could feel
the muscles of his thighs against his own....

the hardness of his chest against her heart...
& a burning imprint of his fingers against her hand....

her breath caught in her throat yet again...

i should have never come here...

she thought..helplessly...
it's becoming too complicated...
too involving...
too dangerous....

but the moment he whispered his words again...
she went rigid in his arms.....

"u don't like my proposal....?"

"what?"

"kahaan khoyi hui ho?"

"haan...woh..kuch nahi....sorry.."

"nevermind...i love the music...
perfectly expresses my feelings for you...."

it was d first time dat she strained to
concentrate on the song...

but it was his humming dat she solely heard...

as their eyes locked with each other..

a sexual tension was bound to rise....

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua....

Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua....

Chhaayi hai betaabi..
Meri jaan, kaho main kya karoon....

Oh, kho gaya main khayaalon mein....
Ab neend bhi nahin aankhon mein...
Karvatein bas badalta hoon....
Ab jaagta hoon main raaton mein...

Ab doori na sehni, har lamha kehta hai...
Na jaane haal mera aisa kyoon rehta hai..
Main deewana tera ban gaya jaane jaana...
Main fasaana tera ban gaya jaane jaana....

Aarzoo hai mere sapnon ki...
Baitha rahoon teri baahon mein...
Sirf tu mujhe chaahe ab....
Itna asar ho meri aahon mein....

Tu keh de haske to tod doon main rasmon ko...
Marke bhi na bhooloon main teri kasmon ko...
Main to aaya hoon yahan pe bas tere liye...
Tera tan mann sab hai mere liye...

Hai kya haseen nazaara,
sama hai pyaara pyaara
Gale laga le yaara yaara yaara yaara yaara..

for her..
it was as good as him singing it loud...
& she blushed...

"aaj kal yeh kuch zyaada nahi ho raha?"

"kya?..romance..?"

"nahi...woh to kabhi zyaada nahi ho sakta...
i meant..tumhaara blush karna!!"

he chuckled as she looked around..
fearing someone might hear him....

"u'r too sexy to resist..."

she said softly..
her eyes dancing...

"who's asking you too??!"
his eyebrow had risen....

a silence took place as the song ended....
& they came back...

the food turned out to be great....
& they relished it...

as d meal came to an end..
naina asked him...
"chalein??"

"chalein!!!...
itni jaldi!....
i still have a surprise for you..."

"ab kya hai???...
i don't think is jagah se zyaada
special kuch ho sakta hai...!"

"you're wrong...
ek jagah hai...jo tum bhool chuki ho....
so don't strain your brains much...
just follow me.."
he winked.....

he clasped her hand...
took her out....

they climbed dat bridge again....
and nia's hair fluttered in the wind....

"ab jacket nahi doge?"

"nahi...kyonki jahaan hum jaa rahe hain..
wahaan u won't need one...."

he suddenly turned left...
towards what seemed to be a row of
distant cottages....

"tum kya karne waale ho??"
a fear rose in her...

was she ready for this....??

"kya karne waala hoon??"
he was confused at her question...

wen he looked at her....he burst out laughing....
"nia!!!...u'r impossible!!
main aisa kuch bhi nahi soch raha..
jo shaayad tum....rain disc yaad hai?"

"rain disc.....ummmm...nahi...."

"kamaal hai yaar!!
i remember so much aur tum..."

"hang on!!!...woh artificial rain waala...dance competition
hua tha jahaan??..."
she looked at him...almost sulking...

"finally!!!..."

"& i came second!!"
she passed him a big smile.....

"we were in school naina!!!!...
so get dat win out of your head!...."

"ha!!..you must have lost...
isiliye ro rahe ho..."

she sounded childish & cute....

"lost!!...madam...
dimaag par zor daalengi...
to aapko shaayad yaad aayega,
ki navin aur maine first position ke liye tie
kiya tha!...u were so upset..
dat u threw your trophy in this very lake...."

"bas-bas....& threw myself in well!!
yaad aa gaya!!..."
she made a face....

"you're so cute!"

he pulled her cheeks..

"shut-up!...chalo..."
she took his arms.....

it was a plane disc..
without a bar....with the only speciality dat the area
was divided into one big floor..
& smaller ones for privacy....

"you want to step into the rain..."
she looked at her saree...

"women!!!...main romantic ho raha hoon..
aur tumhe saree ki padi hai!!...c'mon..."

he dragged her onto the middle big floor..
where other couples danced too....

an exceedingly sensual song was going on....

and she loved the feel of the drops hitting her face...
the water wasn't cool...&
she felt blissfull peace enter her....

he stood there watching her...
with a smile planted on his face....

wen she opened her eyes..
his expression was one of desire...
sensuality....

there was a tension between them as he
saw the drops residing on her soft creamy skin...
on her shoulders....

he wanted to kiss them away...
as did she...
wen she looked at his wet hair...
& the water dripping at the sides of his cheek...

her saree cling to her showing off her
sensuous curves...

& her hair mingled with his fingers..
as he soothed the drops away from them....

he took her in his arms...
closed her eyes...
touched his face with hers...

& slipped a ring on her finger...
whispering...

"marry me naina..."