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Posted: 16 years ago
dat's all guys...
thoda chota hai.

i hope you're still reading....

gtg..byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow, yaar, don't kill us like this, update soooooon and put us out of our misery
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

wow, yaar, don't kill us like this, update soooooon and put us out of our misery

i,ll update it right know
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Posted: 16 years ago
he was trembling as he inserted the key
into the door.....

his hands not working due
to the mounting tension....

any second he'd said....
kahin mujhe der to nahi ho gayi....??

the house had been engulfed in darkness
wen his car had approached...

& he'd thought of it as a bad sign...

if naina was safe...freshening up...
why the hell were the lights turned off????

(in his panicky state..he'd completely forgotten
to inform navin or aalekh...)

the door opened..he rushed in...
not bothering to switch on the lights..

as he raced past the tables...
he banged right into a pillar..
& hit his head....

"shit!!!.." he clutched his head...
& felt his fingers moistening....
his forehead was bleeding.....

little things would be taken care of later ...
but the task in hand...
or was it out of hand...
petrified him...

rushing up the stairs....he reached her room...
& banged it hard....

"naina!!!...darwaaza kholo!!...
can you hear me.....?....naina??...
naina?? tum theek to ho!!...answer me yaar!"

not a sound came from within...
oh God....please let her be safe....!!
please!!

he took a deep breath &
decided to break the door open...
...........................................
the assassin had seen raj's car halting
outside the house..
& an anger had filled him.....

BLAST KYON NAHI HUA??!!!!

he was furious wid himself...
aaj mera over-confidence mujhe le dooba...
i spoilt my mission...

then he laughed...

that's wat everyone else would think isn't it??

but no one except him knew....
knew dat there was a timer fitted in the bomb...

ab ek ki jagah do log mere nishaane par hain!!!

dear captain!!!
u don't have much time left ....
kaise bachoge??
wen all u have is 13 minutes!!!!!

13 precious minutes...
is mein to tum bas apni girlfriend
ka haal hi pooch paaooge!!!

the countdown begins!!!!!
....................................


meanwhile naina stirred ....

and then bolted up in her bed...

"kya yaar...koi sone bhi nahi deta hai!!"

she rubbed her eyes...got up..
& turned on the lights...

it was 8 p.m....

then she suddenly heard raj's voice....
& the fact dat he was trying
to break the door down!!!

isse kya hua??

she'd stepped out of her quilt and felt a chill
run through her...
wrapping her gown tightly about her..
she approached the door to open it....

she'd just touched the latch...
wen the door broke open..
& raj rushed right into her.....

forcing her back so quickly that she began falling

...in a state of confusion...
she held his jacket so hard...
dat both of dem fell flat on the bed....!!!

he was breathing really hard...&
she could feel the pressure of his body on her....

"r..raj...tum theek to ho??"
she sumhow managed...

"MAIN??!!...NAINA!!...ARE..U...ALRIGHT??!!"
his eyes had widened....
"ah..not really...."

he got up from top of her...
& rolled next to her side..
then sat up...

"ab theek hoon...raj..tum mote ho gaye ho!!"

"shut-up naina!!"
it finally sank in dat she was alright...
he'd reached on time....
she was right here...lively...smiling as usual

& his eyes moistened...
although tears didn't drop...

"I LOVE YOU NIA!!"

he held her by her shoulders...
& forced her up right into his arms....

hugging her so tightly dat
she had to fight to breathe...

he held her for a longtime...
rocking wid her slowly...

forcing himself to believe dat
she was absolutely fine...

assuring his heart dat she lived....
lived to love him...

finally he looked at her...
meeting her eyes....

naina ke saare baal bikhre hue the..
& to him...she looked like an angel roused from sleep...

she didn't see his concerned eyes....
for wat she saw...troubled her...

it was the sinister cut on his forehead....

blood was still oozing out of it...

"raj..yeh cut??..
bahut dard ho raha hai?"

her voice quivered...
& her hand trembled as she reached out
to touch it....

"shhhhh....."
he held her fingers wid one hand...
& kept a finger on her lips....
silencing her....

all he wanted to do was to take in her beauty...
the love in those eyes..dat melted his heart....

main mar jaata agar aaj tumhe kuch.....
he shivered at the thought yet again..

he kissed her fingers....
& wid his other arm behind her neck...
pulled her closer...

while she wondered wat had gone wrong...
he kissed her gently on her forehead,
& then on her eyelids.....

as she opened her eyes again....
& stared into his beautiful..black ones..

she realised dat he was in pain..
on the verge of tears...

touching his cheek...
she prodded gently into his mental state....
"i know it isn't the cut....
koi aur baat tumhe tang kar rahi hai raj??
tumhaari aankhon mein aansoon kyon hai?
aisa kya ho gaya jo tum itne pareshaan..."

he brushed away the hair from her face &
slowly replied...
"promise me naina..."

"promise.."
she immediately replied..

he smiled...
"pehle sun to lo..."

"zaroorat nahi hai...."

"hai Nia....promise me dat u'll never leave me...
mujhe chod kar tum kabhi nahi jaaogi..."

"tumhe chodkar??...
hua kya hai raj?"
she demanded again...
"u'r not making sense!!"

"promise me..."
he held her hands tightly in his...

she smiled....not understanding
why this was so important for him...
yet it was....

she would've promised...
if raj hadn't suddenly jerked up....

his face had a ghastly look...

"what is it!!!! ab kya hua??...
tum mujhe kuch bataaoge?"

"u haven't taken a bath as yet have you?"

"nahi...i was too tired ...
jaa rahi thi..but changed my mind at the last minute..."

so the bomb was still here.....
ticking away to glory....

"dhyaan se suno..can u hear sumthing?"

a silence prevailed in the room...

she smiled..."your heartbeats!!"

he gave her a look dat said....
"you've lost it"

& her smile disappeared.....

"yahin ruko..."

he went in the bathroom...

the ticking was louder now...

he stared at the geyser...&
finally found a wire....
a wire dat didn't seem to belong to the set
of switches present around....

grabbing hold of it...
he traced it to its source...
it ended somewhere beneath the wash-basin....

he bent down on his knees...

"tum kar kya rahe ho??"
it was at dat time dat
his eyes fell on the mini-bomb...
right behind a thick pipe...
cleverly concealed....

he picked it up....& looked at it..

it read...

00:01:02.....

"dammit!!...naina get out of here!!"
he screamed...

but her legs didn't budge..
she stood there gaping at the black box in his hands...
"dat's..dat's a bomb?"

"exactly nia!!!...GET OUT!!"

"u know how to diffuse it?"
she asked him..calmly...

he shook his head..

"i've never seen this make before....
40 seconds nia..."

he got up & began pushing her out....

"there are 3 wires here...red, blue & green...
main kisi ek ko kaatne waala hoon..."

he met her eyes.."randomly....
please naina...jaao..."

she smiled...
"main kahin nahi jaa rahi..."

he tried his level best to push her out
but she held him tighter....

"wire cut karo raj...
nahi to hum dono marenge..."

"this isn't a joke!!!
zid mat karo nia...20 seconds...
TIME'S RUNNING OUT!!"

"red wire...."

so dat was her answer...
she wasn't leaving him...

"blue..." he replied...

5 seconds to go...

they gazed into each other's eyes...

&

he cut the green wire!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
WELL...DAT'S IT!

for the time being...
waise abhi fic hasn't reached it's half...
par main jaldi update karne ki soch rahi hoon...
so dat it get's over real soon...

summary
1...raj ghar pahunch gaya
2...assassin has a timer fitted in the bomb
3...nia was sleeping!!
4...bomb mil gaya & she refuses to leave him
5...he's cut the green wire...randomly!

let's see aage kya hota hai!
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow, what a cliffhanger and that too after such an emotional scene, can't wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyme

very jhakas ud.

ud soon

i,ll update it now
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

wow, what a cliffhanger and that too after such an emotional scene, can't wait for the nxt update

thanks for comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
"haath chodo naina"

"huh...."

"haath chodo!!...bomb diffuse ho gaya hai...."
he smiled wen he saw how nervous she was....

"a...oh..great..."
she smiled...
but her heart was still beating frantically.....

her speech faltered...
"ab...kya..hoga?"

he chuckled...
then held her shoulder...shook her lightly...

"naina!!...bomb diffuse ho gaya hai!!
u'r safe..!!..calm down!"

& he hugged her tightly once again...
cradling her like a kid....

"thank God u'r safe!!
aaj tumne meri jaan hi nikaal di thi yaar"

he cupped her face....
but his smile disappeared wen he looked at her
teary face....
"shhhhhh...chup ho jaao..."

she wiped her tears & laughed simultaneously...

"shhhhhh...chup ho jaao!!"
she mimicked him...
"i'm not a kid ...hadh hai raj...
tumhe to kisi ko theek se chup
karaana bhi nahi aata..."

"maine tumhe pehle kabhi ...
i mean mere liye...
rote hue nahi dekha...."

"tumhaare liye kaun ro raha hai??!!
main to khud ke liye ro rahi hoon...
mujhe bhi tum jaise laloo ke
chakkar mein hi padna tha!!"
she giggled wen she saw his eyebrows goin up...

he in turn became serious once again...
"why did you stay back??"

"what?"
she asked..not understanding his question....

"wen i told u to leave...
jab tumhe pata tha ki yahaan ek bomb hai...&
i don't know how to diffuse it...
tum yahaan se gayi kyon nahi??"

an anger flared up in her eyes...
"tumhe nahi pata kyon??"

he shook his head...
although he perfectly knew why.....

"jab tumhe pata tha ki yahaan ek bomb hai...
jo kabhi bhi blast ho sakta hai...
tum yahaan aaye kyon raj??"
he saw the anger in her eyes...

"a...sorry...!
wrong question!..."

"exactly!..."she replied

he smiled...

"now what??!!..tumhaare dimaag
mein hamesha kuch chlta rehta hai na?"

"agar tum london nahi gayi hoti to ab
tak humaari shaadi ho chuki hoti...
aur shaayad 10-12 bacche bhi hote..."

her jaw dropped open...
& she blushed...

"mooh to band karlo!!
makhi chali jaayegi..."
he was pulling her leg....

her lips sealed tightly...
& she avoided his eyes....

"main..main..."

"nahi...tumhe kahin nahin janaa...
aur tumhe koi kaam nahi hai!
so come here..."
he pulled her into his lap....

"mujhe tang karne mein mazaa aata hai??"

"bachpan se!!"
he held her tightly..
& kissed her shoulder...

"you're the limit!!
stop pulling my leg !!"

"the day i start pulling your leg...
i mean..practically...us din tumhaara kya hoga??"

he chuckled wen she blushed again...
"bas issi liye tumhe tang karta hoon...
i love your mood swings..
a minute back u were tensed...
then u were angry at me...
aur filhaal..u'r blushing like a school-girl!"

"really!!...aur tum kya ho??
the oh-so handsome dude!!!"
she smiled....

"seriously naina...aaj jab woh phone call aaya...
hang on!!....tumne mujh se jhooth kyon bola??"
it was his turn to be angry...

"jhooth?....kaisa jhooth..."

"why didn't you tell us dat u were attacked??
u know what ...
aaj mujhe jab yeh baat kisi teesre se pata chali...
i hated it...i thought u trusted me yaar!!...
navin aur aalekh galat nahi the nia...
par shaayad main tha..
i think u should step out of the investigation..."

she got up....
"isiliye raj...sirf isiliye maine yeh baat tum teeno se chupaai...
i knew you'd tell me to quit...& i won't.."
she was adamant...
"yeh jaante hue ki your life's in danger....
they want to kill you...
aur kitne saboot chahiye tumhe is baat ke ...
har baar koi tumhe bachaane nahi aayega naina.."

"i know dey're after me!!...
par kisi ko to yeh sab karna hi hai raj...
tum army mein un logon ke khilaaf aawaaz
uthaate ho jo desh
ke baahar hai...par un dushmano ka kya
jo desh ke andar se usse khokhla karne ki
koshish kar rahe hain??...
sumone has to fight them!...
besides...mujhe marne se ab darr nahi lagta..."

he was furious....

"ek baat bataao naina....
agar ek din...mujhe kuch ho jaaye...
& i...u see me dying in front of you...
tum par kya beetegi...??

it's worse dan death nia!!...
agar kahin tumhe kuch ho gaya...
to main kaise zinda rahoonga...
just think about it??"

"mujhe kuch nahi hoga raj!!
end of discussion....
by the way...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha
ki yeh main tumse kaise kahoon....
par raj....mujhe....mujhe...
huda par shak hai...."

"what??!!.."
he stood still....

"dat's impossible!!"
aalekh & naveen yelled together...

they were both standing in the doorway...

"par bhaai..."

"koi par nahi sis...
huda aisa kar hi nahi sakta..."

"hum huda ko acchi tarah jaante hai nia...."
aalekh told her...

"us din bar mein woh..."

"huda nahi ho sakta...in fact
humaari academy mein se koi bhi nahi ho sakta naina...
we all trust each other wid our lives....
main yeh maan hi nahi sakta...."
raj answered....

"fine...."
she sighed...

the fact dat a bomb had just been diffused
remained a secret between raj &
naina....as they all went to sleep....
...................................................
the assassin was furious...
truly furious dis time!!

maine tumhe underestimate kiya captain!

u'r too damn smart!!

is baar nahi to kya hua...
next time....i'll see dat u fail!!

frustrated...he went back....
......................................................

an odd silence had cropped up between raj & naina..
specially since he'd asked her to quit....

she knew he cared..but this was her job...

today again an old feeling returned in her mind...
the same nagging doubt...

kya maine is relationship mein ghus kar sahi kiya??

will i ever be able to keep him happy??

kaash us raat maine raj ko woh baat bata di hoti...
but wen he stopped me...

either way...she knew she was right...
i'm not stepping back!!

she was hurt by the fact dat he asked her to ....
& decided to avoid him for sometime..

maybe we need to rethink somethings!!
...............

raj meanwhile felt guilty...

at night he'd tossed in his bed...

he knew she was right...

in fact agar main uski jagah hota
to shaayad main bhi yahin karta....

tu selfish ho raha hai raj....
u want her solely for yourself....

par mujhe yeh nahi bhoolna chahiye dat
she has some dreams of her own..
she wants to do something for our country....

i'm so lucky to have her....& yet i hurt her....

i'll apologise to her first thing in the morning!!
..................

wen he went downstairs early next morning....
he saw her in the kitchen....

she saw him approaching....

"a..bhaiya...breakfast ready
hai aap sabka,..mujhe office jaldi jaana hai...
bye...."

she picked up her bag in the living room....

"naina...."
"main...late ho rahi ...hoon...bye.."
& she disappeared....

"oh man!!...ab phir se isse pataana padega!!"

...........................

when the same thing continued for two more days...
raj was frustrated....

"naina...stop ignoring me!"

"nahi..not at all....
woh...ziya se milne jaana hai...
....phir...office...bye"

there was a doubt in her eyes....

she rushed out again....

"aaj to main tumhe manaake hi rahoonga...
us din se tumne mujhse theek se baat bhi nahi kari...
par aaj...aaj aisa lag raha tha dat u'r missing me....
besides nia...today's a sunday!!"
he smiled


he began following her...

after about an hour...
she stopped...

it was an almost deserted park...

she got off her car..
& went & sat down on a bench..

her face behind her hands...bowed..

suddenly she heard his voice..

aise naa jaa...
tu ruth ke jaaneja..
ab maan ja oh sanam...
ab maan jaa...

maana hui hai khata..
lekin yeh dil hai teraah...

ab door se aur na aise sataa..

i wanna wanna wanaa take u
home wid me right now right now...

i wanna wanna wanaa take u
home wid me sumhow..sumhow....



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Posted: 16 years ago


dat's all guys...
have to rush...so no summary...
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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