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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
the autopsy room had two stainless-steel

examination tables with drainage holes,

a small dissection table..organ scale &
trays of surgical
instuments....

they were all asked to don scrubs ,
gloves & masks before entering....

as the body was brought out yet again
for naina to witness the sight..

threads of chilly air escaped from the refrigerated room...

she started shivering uncontrollably.....

& her shivering turned into a shriek...
as she saw the face of the deadbody....


she would've probably fallen if raj didn't
support her at the last minute...

"rohan...."

"rohan nahi naina...
captain...
captain ali begh from the indian army...."

"wat??!!"

her face paled ...
as she shook violently...

"tumhaara matlab hai yeh...
he was dealing in drugs in d army??"

she stood shocked....

"bilkul nahi!!...that's impossible!...
i've read his file ...yeh bahut dedicated tha nia...

in fact...
i can bet my life on d fact ki yeh exactly wahi kar raha
tha..jo shaayad tum kar rahi thi....."

"main??!!"

"haan...he was working underground...
lagta hai inhe bhi koi traces mile the..some proofs...
something connecting..."

"your case & mine!!"
she'd finally understood.....

"exactly...."

"but how can you be so sure
ki there is a connection??

besides...mere saath rohan..
i mean captain begh ne jaise
behave kiya woh to..."

"perfect acting thi....it's pretty clear nia...
woh toh yahi samajhta hoga ki u were actually involved...
just like you thought about him....
both of you were nothing but drug dealers...
addicts for each other...."
"shit!!...

but dat also means ki thapar aur baaki
logon ko koi information mili hogi....
ali must have made a mistake..
isiliye unhone isse shoot kar diya....
aur unko next target....main..ho
...sakti..hoon..."

she licked her lips dat had gone dry...

"ho sakti hoon nahi nia...thi.....
your accident...
kahin se kuch to leak hua tha...
both about you & ali it seems..."

she wiped the brow of sweat from her forehead...

dat had appeared inspite of the coolness inside....

"& why are our cases connected?"

"dat i'll tell you once we get home...
yahaan se chalein....?"

"kitni ajeeb baat hai raj....
we could've actually worked together...
helped each other out...
par hum dono hi ek doosre se chidte rahe....
door bhaagte rahe...
bhagwaan bhi ajeeb khel khelta hain.."

the smell of the body was intense in d small room...

she started covering her mouth &
her nose even though
they were masked....

but a female stopped her....

"ziya tum??!!"

"yup!...main yahaan par medical examiner
ka bhi kaam karti hoon...
i handle only special autopsies.."

"special matlab..?" naina asked

"criminal..related to the army...stuff like dat...
i started this recently...in fact ..just a week back.."

"par mujhe kyon nahi bataaya?"

"kuch baatein confidential rakhni padti hai nia..
instructions from the army...am i right??"

raj told her on ziya's behalf....

"absolutely...

aur naina...this room's very dirty...
don't touch your face with your hand.....
& trying to stop the smell will only make it worse..
keep breathing or your senses will seem dead.."
she briefly smiled....

"so u heard our conversation too....
autopsy ki report mein kya nikla?"
raj questioned...

"just as she says...he was shot...
.5mm bullet...right through the chest...
nothing special except......"
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
i know yeh bahut kam tha...but sumthing's better dan nothing i hope!!

gtg...cyaaaaaaa
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
hey that was awesome
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
very nice story and the suspence seems to build up with each passing day...good combination of romance and mystery...keep up the good work and thanku for updating....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
"just as she says...
he was shot...
.5mm bullet...right through the chest...

nothing special except......"

"except what??"
dey asked curiously...

"except the very weird fact dat no
drugs were found in his system....
unlike naina's..."

"kya??...par yeh kaise ho sakta hai??
i mean...he...i...oh god!!"

"kya hua nia??"

"i should've noticed!!....
rohan mujhe to drugs de raha tha..
par khud...
khud he wasn't consuming the same thing....
it could've been nything...
koi bhi powder..."

"great!...dekha madam..
dat's called common sense...

tumne to bas apni jaan lene ki thaan hi li thi!"

raj shook his head....
"ali was damn sensible!"

"yeah..guess you're right...
par unhi ke beech reh kar ...
i doubt i could've carried the act!"

"anyway...u guys can discuss all this later....
filhaal yahaan se jaao...
i need to get some
final tests done.."

ziya bade them a goodbye...

naina had recovered from her shock....

as dey rode back...

all plans of raj's surprise taking
a massive back seat...
...............................................
"tum dono samajh kyon nahi rahe ho??
we tried talkin to her..."
aalekh looked disturbed

"woh nahi maan rahi thi sis..
she banged the door on my nose..."

"par bhaai...kuch to kaha hoga...
did u offend her ??"

"offend?!...
hum aisa kyon karenge?
we just asked her about anything she knew...
if she could help us...
but she simply glared back..."
aalekh explained...

"i guess i know why!...
have you guys thought ki pata nahin kitne logon ne
usse yeh poochne ki koshish kari hogi...
her husband's just died...
she's got kids...i think she needs a..."
raj figured out...

"a woman's sympathy!"
naina concluded...

"exactly!" raj agreed....

"to phir ab kya karein??"
navin asked...

"main jaaoongi..."

"tum??...but why would she meet you?"
navin questioned ...

"she will...i know she will..."
..........................................


she was dying to tell dem wat had happened at
ali's place...

she'd finally found a link between their cases...
a link dat scared her....

it was pretty dark & she wondered why she'd risk
stepping out at night again...

her eyes always went to the rear-view mirror...
fearing an attack...

suddenly her heart thumped...
& then relaxed...

"oh god raj!...u scared d hell out of me!"

the phone had rung...

"pichle do ghante se tum bhi kuch
aisa hi kar rahi ho!

where have you been nia??!!..."

he was furious....
"ek phone nahi kar sakti thi kya?"

"nahi..i mean i was at ali's residence..
talkin to his wife...."

"iss time??"
he looked at his watch..it was 10 p.m.

"haan yaar..kab jaati phir??
office se seeda wahin chali gayi..."

"tumhe darr nahi lagta??
u know wat happened to you the other day...
& you're very well aware ki woh accident nahi tha nia!"
he shouted...
"to kya chaahte ho raj...
darr se ghar mein baithi rahoon?"

she taunted back...t
hough she knew very well dat
he was right...she was scared....


"maine yeh kab kahaa??!!!!
par atleast keep us informed...
navin aur aalekh are absolutely furious wid you..."

"woh to unki puraani aadat hai!"

"nia!!...talk sense for once!...
they're right!...
anyway...kuch mila?"

"haan..i'm driving..
ghar aake bataati hoon..
bye..."
& she kept down the phone...
a bit angry....

"hadh ho gayi!!...
gussa to bas maharaani ke naak par chada rehta hai!
kya beta raj...tujhe bhi yahi mili thi....!"
he smiled at himself...

he knew he loved her immensely...
& she was d best he could've asked for...
.............................................

he moved around uncomfortably in his bed...

a small moan escaped from his lips
as a fire raged in his brain...

he didn't awaken ,though...

it was no nightmare that was assaulting him..

his body was being drained of the
ability to absorb oxygen...

he was being slowly & quietly put to death...

& finally he was motionless....

.........................................

her heartbeats fastened....

"itne saare motorcycles??"

she raised d speed of her car....
but to no avail...

they seemed intent on following her...

"i hope all dey want to do is follow me...
kyon ki agar yeh mere paas aaye..
to meri band baj
jaayegi.."

she licked her lips nervously....

there were about 10 of these...
she quickly counted...

& there was absolutely no way she could tackle
even a single one...
they approached her....&
were quickly on either side of her car,..

"damn!...phone ki battery ko bhi abhi down hona tha!"

she tried to zig-zag out of their way...
but they were smart riders...

she wondered wat they wanted from her...
& then laughed at her stupidity...

"wat do guys want out of women!!"

but wen her car started getting
knocked out from everywhere...

she realised she was so wrong!!

they didn't want her...

they wanted her life....!

in one nerve-wrecking moment....
4 of them swerved forward & stopped....

naina was forced to apply brakes from the fear
of running over them....

& wen she did she realised her mistake...

"ooooh!!...i should've run them over!!"

her car got surrounded in less than a minute......

& ruthless..ugly..scary men...knocked on her
windowscreen....staring hard down at her...

she began to shake in fear....

there wasn't a way out ...

her mind seemed to have blanked out....
koi ideas nahi aa rahe the...

& anyway it was too late for anything now...!

the door was pulled out...& so was she...

by hard & rough hands...
who had no respect for her..
or her modesty...

as she felt her shirt tearing...

"stop it!...chodo mujhe!"
she screamed...
"leave me alone!"
why was it dat whenever she got stuck...
it was on a lonely highway....!!

one of the men brushed against her...
while someone else pulled her hair...

she could do nothing but scream....
her fear mounting like anything
with every breath of hers.....
she was panicky...

"kya chaahte ho tum log??"
her voice quivered...


"apni investigation chodne ka tumhe
ek mauka mila tha...
par doosra hum nahi denge jaan.."

one of them scowled...


as two held her tightly...
a third took out a big butcher knife...

her hands were badly scratched already...,
& she'd been slapped hard too...
her nose & arms already bled..

but this blew her mind to pieces...

with a gleam in his eye...the man
took the knife &

would have slaughtered her like a pig


if they hadn't heard the police siren...
or seen the jeep...

with their attention diverted....

naina struggled herself free of their grasp...

& screamed yet agian..

with all the force she managed...

the bikers realising dey'd lost...
climbed on their bikes & fled...

the last one almost managing the knife through her...

lucky dat she moved...or else....

as dey all ran away...

a jeep halted in front of her...
& a man got out...

"samir....tum?"
she stood confused...

"oh god!! are you alright naina??"

she nodded...
"par sam...tum ...police..siren..."

"fake hai...yahaan se guzar raha tha...saw
these bikers...surrounding your car...aur..."

"thank god!...thanks a ton sam..."

"c'mon naina..yahaan kaun hai??
atleast call me by my real name here!"

"right!..thanks ...'YUDI!'"

it was den dat she felt a staggering pain
on the right side of her belly..



& the world blacked out...



the attacks had finally begun!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
so loads of stuff happening again...

three highlights..

samir=yudi.....

italics waala scene..(future)

and the fact dat this is just the first attack!!

hope you're enjoyin guys..

if you're replying mera dil rakhne ke liye den please stop!
unnecessary hype nahi chahiye guys....
it's not fair for the others....

naina ko kya clues mile hain...
why she blacked out
& ghar pe sabka reaction...
along with the next attacks..

sab next upadte mein....

gtg den
cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
hey Gazal thanks for updating. actually i cannot read the fin through orkut since im not a member so could you please update on IF.
thank you

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: feedback

hey Gazal thanks for updating. actually i cannot read the fin through orkut since im not a member so could you please update on IF.
thank you

glad to know that u like the fic
sure i,ll update it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
"naina!!"

dey all shouted & raced up to her....

"oh my god!!...isse kya hua??"
raj asked d man holding her...

"why is she so heavily bandaged??...
nia...nia...wake up!!"

"relax ...navin?"

"a...i'm raj...her.."

"main navin hoon...
wat's wrong with her??"

he was trembling...
while aalekh held him...

"i'm samir saxena...
main naina ke saath kaam karta hoon...
yeh office aayi thi...&...she fell off the stairs...

abhi she's fine...hum doctor ke paas hi the...
don't worry guys..she's just unconcsious...
isse subaah tak hosh aa jaayega..."

"why did u bring her back?...i mean isse hospital mein..."

"she refused...
iski treatment ke time isse hosh aaya tha..
she compelled me to get her here...
pain killers ki wajaah se car mein hi so gayi..."
he explained....

"elbows to samajh aa rahi hai..
par why is her waist so heavily bandaged?"
raj asked...afraid..

"a...she...got hurt by a statue ...
thoda pointed tha..
the edge brushed across her side..."

they all winced...

"iska room?"

"oh sorry...its upstairs..."
navin mentioned...
"i'll take her..."

"nahi..main hi chala jaata hoon.."

leaving dem stranded in the living room...
all pale & fearful...
he carried nia upstairs...

as he placed her on d bed...
she opened her eyes &
touched his cheek...

"thanx yudi..."

"it's impossible to understand you...
tum bhi jaanti ho nia ki tumhe
is time hospital mein
hona chahiye tha...
u scared me to death!!
itni pain mein tum ghar kyon aana chahti thi??
why did u lie??"
the pain stabbed her again &
she stopped her scream...

"just look at your condition.."

she barely spoke...

"main..theek..hoon..yaar...
i wasn't..really...stabbed...
the knife just ...scratched a bit..."
she lied...

"shut up!!...i saw dat wound!!
hadh ho yaar tum...anyway nahi batana
hai to naa sahi...u'r not leaving the
bed for the next week..."

before she could argue..he added..

"nahi to main sabko sach bata doonga!
clear??"

she nodded..& gave a weak smile...

"good...btw...nice choice.."
he smiled back...

"huh?.."

"raj...kaafi handsome hain..
u guys love each other don't you??"
he grinned

she blushed....

"gudnight yudi..."

"sweet dreams!!"

he bade her a goodbye....

she'd avoided his questions...

kya bataati tumhe??

ki main isliye waapis aayi as i was scared...
yes..i...was...i still am..horrified...

ghar mein to shaayad main safe hoon..
par wahaan..
hospital mein...
i feared another attack...

the faces of those men loomed around her face...
& their voices echoed in her ears...

she'd been given a chance to step out of the case...
but she hadn't...!

and no matter how many more problems...
how much more pain she'd have to face...
she wouldn't leave the case...
not now..not ever!

she promised herself...& went to sleep...
................................................

yet another round of doting around her started...

all of dem took care of her like a kid...

this time was free from any scolding & shouting...as
all of dem felt she wasn't really hurt dat bad...

little did they know...
how hard she had to try to control her freaking screams...
her nightmares.....

no words of work were spoken amongst them all..

they wanted her to have a complete rest...
& she relished the thought coz
she desperately needed it...

all thoughts of the case took a
backseat for a while as
nia began her painful healing...recovery process...
................................................
a week passed & naina finally
decided it was time to get back to her duty...

she'd go to office tomorrow..&
this evening...

she had to disclose all the facts dat
she'd learned from ali's
wife...

since sitting in d room..idle..
while the guys went to the academy had
gotten too boring...

she'd decided to do some stitching...

her dress was almost complete & all she had to do
was give it some finishing touches...

she was absolutely involved wen d
door opened & she screamed...

"shit!!...tumne to mujhe dara hi diya!!
like always!"

he chuckled...

"kamaal hai yaar...maine to suna tha
ki pyaar mein log ek doosre ki aahat
bhi pehchaan lete hain...phir bhi tum..."

he stopped wen she glared back at him..

"ekta kapoor se milkar aaye ho kya..
jo aise ghise hue dialogue maar rahe ho??"

"sorry to disappoint you...
but i've got better things to do!!
meri chodo..wat's dat in ur hand??"

"a dress dat i stitched...kaisi hai??"

he held it & let it slither to her knee....

"beautiful...can i see it on you??...
dat's provided you don't hv trouble getting up..."

"absolutely not....main ab bilkul theek hoon..."

she went to the bathroom...wore d dress &
looked critically in d mirror...

the narrow double straps over the shoulders looked
good on her fair skin...

it nipped at her waist...emphasizing its slimness...

the skirt length looked just right...

she paused in d doorway, raised one arm
& put the other on her hip...

walking on the carpet in exaggerated model style
she did some swirling..hip-swinging turns...

"like it?"
"love it,..."

he drew her down on to his lap...
& she tucked her head under his chin...

one of his hands stroked her upper arm..
while the other held her's tightly...

he bent his head to kiss the smooth skin of
her shoulder..

pushing her hair out of the way...
he kissed her nape..
sending a delicate shiver all down her spine...

her half-closed eyes could see the tanned
skin of his shirt just inches away...

one of her hands was trapped against his chest...
as she touched him with the tips of her fingers...

unconsciously..undoing the buttons of his shirt..
while she felt his hand tracing the line of her spine..

she explored him with fascination...

as their bodies melted into each other
& his collar slid down...
giving way to a kiss from her lips...

she loved his masculine fragrance.....

when her hand reached his waist...
he tugged gently at her hair...
making her face him...

her lips parted anticipating a kiss...

but his mouth went to the shallow
groove below her ear...

& then to the small hollow at the base of her throat...

she spread her fingers on his midriff...
& felt him take a quick, uneven breath...

revelling in the movements of his mouth
against her throat,
her shoulders,
her cleavage..above the low front of her dress..

their pulses went crazy as her flimsy strap slid down....
& his mouth opened against her skin...

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan .
the zip of her top slid down...&
she shied away..stiffening a bit...

"what are you doing??" she demanded...

his head came up,
and she saw the deepened colour under his tan...
his blush....

the glitter of desire behind the laughter in his eyes...
"undressing you..." he added mildly..
"kyon...koi problem hain??"

"of course!!..." she said..flustered...

& he laughed aloud...

"why??..mere saath bhi to tumne yahi kiya na..
you've just done it to me!!"

she looked at his open shirt..&
took her hand away..
as if stung..

"that's different!!"
her already flushed cheeks grew hotter....

"accha ...why??"
his voice almost coaxed...
but his eyes danced with humour...!

"because you're a man!!"
she snapped & tried to wriggle away from him..
"and i'm ...not!"

he held her firmly...grinning with enjoyment...

"no,you're definetly not!!...& dat's exactly
why i'd like to look at you!"

"look??" she added sarcasticaaly...

" and perhaps...a little more...
no?" he raise his eyebrows enquiringly...

"no!!.." her body ached to let him look & touch..
& do whatever he wanted...
but her mind was horrified
by her own desire...

"itna mat socho...
abhi main mazaak kar raha tha...
although i agree i got carried away ...as usual!"

reluctantly..he pulled the strap back on her shoulder...

she got up...lightly kissed his cheek..
as he grinned away..

"i'll go & take this dress off..."
she muttered...trying to collect her thoughts...

"now, dat's just wat i was suggesting a
moment ago..." he mocked..

" par tum sunti kahaan ho!"

away from his arms..she felt safer..

"shut-up!!"
she grinned.....

& he blew her a kiss...winking....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
well dat's all for today guys!!

so how was d surprise??

attack tha par love attack!! ;)

hope you didn't mind.....

..
i'm sorry...

anyway..gtg...
cyaaaaaaaaaa
byeeeeeeeeeeeee

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