*Askh Lamhoin Ka* GHT/SG FF Chap 4 [Pg 4] - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow! PPl, really dont like KN and SG around here??? thats disappointing ... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wat happened why u r not continuing with ur fanfic?????
Continue soon......
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please please please i am sorry for late reply. ZPlease continue soon. Can't wait to read. After so much time, i am reading an ff on hiten gauri and that's so interestimg. Romantic thriller., i have all my hops pinned on you. Please don't leave itinbetween 😳 n waiting really for gauri Shilpa and Sandeep's entry. Hituu was just superb. Really liking him out of Karan Virani's image. Please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chap 2


Back after a long break!
So far, the Acharya's are partying over Sid's return. Sumedha gets a calls from Kabir, and is worried…
Ab age…


Sumi is all worried and leaves for her room…she closes the door..and paces around…
She stands at the window and thinks about her conversation with Kabir and is scared of what he might do if she does not get the money.She decides she wont head his threat, gets her confidence back, and leaves her room..as she steps out, she bumps into an invitee…


Su: Oh, I am so sorry…Meine aap ko dekha nahi..(but is stunned to see how handsome and good looking he is)
Man: The pleasure is all mine. Aryan, Aryan Malhotra.
Sumi smiles shyly …
Su: Sumedha Acharya..
Ar: Nice to meet you…Shall we..

He lends her his arm, she puts her arm around his and walks down the stairs..the invitees downstairs are all ball dancing…Aryan holds Sumi's hands are whirls her into a spin and holds her before she can fall and begins to dance with her..Sumi is stunned and very impressed at the same time…they keep dancing..Aryan does not take his eyes off her..and keeps looking at her..he comes very close to her face, moves towards her ears..

Ar: Ap ki khoobsurti, is party ki raunak hai…is par daag lagne mat dijiyega.
Sumi pulls back surprised and embarrassed..
Su: Patana, aapko khoob ata hai..par..mein itni asani se patne waloin mein se nahi huin..thoda aur mahnat karo to shayad kuch sochungi..
Ar: Kya baat hai..kafi confidence hai apko ki, mein apko pata raha huin..what if I am not..
Su: if you were not, to aap mere kanoin mein bole bina, mere samne bolte…
Ar: I like it. Attitude.
Su: yes, and a lot of it…
Before he can say anything..she spins him around this time and holds his hand before he stumbles..and pulls him back..
Su: Sumi jiska haath ek baar tham leti hai, usse chodti nahi hai..
Ar: Yeh to waqt hi batayega..
Su: waqt batayega nahi, mein bataungi…
And they keep dancing..


Siddarth turns around to see who tapped him…
Sid: Do I know?
Parul: Ji nahi, tabhi to introduce kiya..
Sid: Well, I am glad ki is party mein mujhe koi to janta hai..
Parul: Bahut log jante hai, baas kisi Achraya se baat karne ki himmat nahi hai kisi ko, sivay uske..
And points towards where Sumi and Aryan are dancing..
Sid gets furious..and starts to walk towards..but Parul holds his hand and stops him..
Parul: Kya baat hai..problem kya hai?
Sid: Wohh meri bahan kisi ajnabi ke saath dance kar rahi hai..aur aap poochte hain ki problem kya hai?
Parul: Ajnabi se to aap bhi baat kar rahein hain..apko kaise maloom ki apki bahan ke liye wohh ajnabi hai?
Sid thinks for a moment..
Sid: nahi mujhe khud confirm karna hai…
Parul pulls him towards her and starts dancing…
He is shocked but as the dance floor spot light falls on them..he does not say anything but continues to dance..
Sid: Aaj tak kisine mujhe toka nahi hai…apko kya haq banta hai..
Parul: Haq banta nahi hai…banana padta hai..
Sid: Well, apko itna hi dance ka shauk hai to…
He takes her to another man standing ..
Sid: Please kya aap inse dance karenge..
Parul tries to object to it..and is gettinf furious..
The man: Sure Mr.Acharya…Mam..
Parul jerks her hands off him and storms to another corner of the floor..
Sid leaves and goes outside the house..where some guests were having food and drinks…


He goes to one of the drink counters and orders a drink..a man walks upto him from behind…
The man: Abhi tak peene ki aadat gayi nahi?
Sid turns back…and see the man smiling at him…
Sid: Anirban!! Yaar tu…
And they hug each other mele meine bichade hue bhai!
Ani: Sid..tu to ekdum American ban gaya yaar! Na koi mail na koi khabar!
Sid: Kya karta yaar..padhai mein kafi busy tha..
Ani: hain hain..tu kitna padta tha, mujhe maloom hai..exams mein copy mujhse karta, aur marke mein kam lata! Sabhi teachers ko pata rakhi thi..badmashi tu karta aur, daant mujhe padti!! Yaad hai, jab ham panchgani gaye the, 12th std ke trip mein, to tu kaise hamesha sirf Ayesha ke age peeche ghumta tha..kya mast ghumati wohh bhi tujhe..aur bechari Kalpana, jo tujhe itna pasand karti, mere saath gumsum baiti rahti!
Sid: Arey yaar! Kya din the wohh bhi! Waise aab Ayesha hai kahain?
Ani: Sapnoin mein bhi maat soch! Shaadi ho chuki hai uski, shar ke mashoor builders, raheja's ke chote bete ke saath!
Sid: Damn! Missed opportunity!
Ani: Chinta maat kar..Kalpana abhi bhi tera intezaar kar rahi hai..
Sid: Kya baat kar raha hai? Sach mein? Waise…
Ani: Hain hain..bahut khoobsorat ho gayi hai..ladkoin ki to line lagi rahti hai uske, age peeche!
Sid: Sahi mein? Kya baat kar raha hai yaar? Man..panch saal mein kitna kuch badal gaya..school mein, main kabhi usse baat nahi karta, ab karunga, to lagega..ki maksad alag hai..
Ani: Kaisi baat kar raha hai yaar..wohh apni kalpana hai, abhi bhi, waisi hi, bholi aur head strong si..
Sid: Accha..to fir milna padega..ab dekhna to padega, tu kitna fek raha hain, aur kitna saach bol raha hai…hahahah
And they both laugh…
Sid: Tu apna bata..tera kuch hua ki nahi?
Ani: Ladki dekhne jana hai..parsoin..
Sid laughs out hysterically!
Sid: ladki dekhne?? Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega!! Itne saloin mein, koi mili nahi kya??
Ani looks sad..: Mili thi ek..par kahin kho gayi..
Sid: Kaun? Kya mein use janta huin?
Ani: tujhe Aparna Chatterjee yaad hai?
Sid: Wohh, lambe baloin wali, chasmish?
Ani: Sid!
Sid: Arey baba, sorry..par hua kya..
Ani: Wohh, wohh bhi pasand karti thi mujhe..college mein pata chala..
Sid: Hain to fir?
Ani: Par, uske Baba ne usse wada karwaya ki wohh unke pasand kiye ladke se hi shaadi kargei..jab usne wada karne se inkaar kiya, to uske baba ko heart attack agaya..aur aur wohh chal base..Us hadse ke baad se, meri Aparna, wohh nahi rahi…wohh, apne aap ko apne Baba ki maut ka zimmedar samjhne lagi..aur uske pariwar waloin ne bhi usi ko dohi taharaya! Uski Ma ne usse baat karna band kardi ya..aur usne ghar chod diya…ab who Delhi mein rahti hai, meine bahut samjhane ki koshish ki use..par wohh meri ek na mani..aur aaj bhi akele hi rahti hai…
Sid:I am sorry yaar..yeh to kafi tragedy ho gaya!Chal to chinta mat kar..ab drink pi, teri devdas bhari zindagi mein rang, hum dhoond ke layenge!


In the hall, Namrata is tending to the guests in the hall..and the phone rings …She picks it up..
N: Hello
Caller: Sumedha hai?
N: Kaun Bol raha hai?
Caller: Uska dost
N: Arey bhai, koi naam to hoga..
Caller: Mein, Arun..
N: Accha beta, line par raho…


In the middle of tending to the guests, Namrata forgets all about the phone, she had not hung up either..Poorab was in his room, he had to call someone, and picks up the phone, but rather than hearing the dial tone, he hears some men conversing..


Man 1: Agar aaj usne hamari baat taal di, to khair nahi
Man 2: nahi talegi! Meine use pahle call kiya tha!
Man 1: Pakka yakeen hai?
Man 2: Hain hai! Paise ajyenge..chinta maat kar..aise, ya waise!
Man1 and Man 2 laugh out…
Man 1: Wiase wohh abhi phone par nahi aye kya?
Man 2: hain, Kafi time laga rahi hai, ghar mein kafi shor hai, koi party chal rahi hai shayad..
All the poorab keeps listening..
Man 1: Agar wohh hamare paise nahi di na..to mein..
Man2: Arey, kaha na maine..mil jayega!
Man 1: Wiase wohh disc tere paas hai na?
Man 2: Hain..hai..chal chote ko phone laga aur pooch, ki wahain, ho kya raha hai!
Bahut intazaar kara rahi hai eh..ab aur nahi..lagta hai sabak sikhana padega..
And the line goes dead..

Poorab is shocked and angry and thinks that someone has been blackmail, someone in his family, but cant figure who, then it hits , it has to be a woman. He thinks, only three people are possible, Ma, Sumi aur Mannu Mausi. But why would someone blackmail any of them..he is confused! He decides to find out before it gets too late..and thinks he has to find out who is in the house keeping an eye on them!


(To Be continued if there are more than 10 comments!)


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Posted: 17 years ago
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seriousy yo, continue NOW 😡 😆 😉
I like the pictures well well organized 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigrl05

seriousy yo, continue NOW 😡 😆 😉
I like the pictures well well organized 😳


Lol...i have continued it over in the kyunki forum..wil post it here too...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chap 3




Next day, A girl is standing at the gas statiom, waiting for a station boy to fill the tank…a boy comes to her and before she can hand him the money for the gas to be filled, Someone comes by the car in a bike, complete with black leather jacket, pants and boots..along with a black-blue helmet…He whistles for the station boy, who looks in his direction and then the bike guy motions the station boy to come towards him with a single finger and hands out a 100 note to the boy.


Guy: Petrol baro bhai..
SB: Sahab, wohh madam pahle aye thi..unka karne ke baad apka..
The guy turns towards the car…and slowly takes off his helmet.
The girl in the car,sees this and is furious! She gets out of the car in a rage.
After he takes the helmet out, the girl comes face to face with him..

Girl: Hey! Kya samjhte ho apne aap ko?
Guy: Admi huin, wohi samjhta huin.
Girl: zayad hoshiyar mat bano.bahut dekha hai tum jaisoin ko, kisi ke time ka aur kisi ka parwah nahi hai! Baas sirf apna sochte ho! Badtameez.
Guy: Hello…Siddarth Acharya. (and gives his hand out for a shake)
Girl: To? Mein kya karuin tumhare naam se?
(she looks towards the station boy) Bhaiya, aap meri pahle bardo..
Sid: Excuse me, apne mujhe badtameez kaha, tameez ki ap mein bhi kami hai.
Girl: Kya? Tumhari himmat kaise hui, mujhse aise baat karne ki.
Sid: Ap hi se, jo jaise deta hai, waise hi lena padta hai. Apke anusar mein badtameez tha, mere anusar, apne wohh favor return kiya. Chali we are same now. O bhaiya, ap unki petrol bar dijiye…oh I mean, unke car ki…
The girl keeps glaring at him.
Girl: Jo jaisa hai, uske saath, waise hi kiya jata hai..
The guy interrupts..
Sid: Ap, teacher hain kya? Jo itna bhasan deti hain?
The Girl has had enough!
Girl: Listen Mr. Whatever Acharya…ek minute…kya naam bataya tumne?
Sid: Bhool bhi gayi? Dimagi problem…Siddarth Acharya.
Girl: Bangru? I mean, DPS Siddhu?
Sid: Bangru? Yeh kya naam hai? Wiase, hain, DPS mein pada huin.
Girl: Tabhi mein kahuin, yeh attitude meine pahle kahin dekha hai!
Sid: Tumne bataya nahi Bangru kya hai?
Girl: Well, nice to meet you, mere car mein gas bhar chukka hai..mein chalti huin….Bangru!
She gets into her car…Sid runs upto the window.
Sid: Aray..suniye to..hello…apne apna naam nahi bataya!
Girl: Gudiya!

And drives off…Sid notices that she drives a Silver Honda City. He smiles to himself..and at the same time is confused that she knew him and he couldn't find out who she was…he fills gas and leaves too…


At BMS college, Mumbai , Sumedha is attended her class of Maths. She suddenly gets a call in her cell phone, which was in silent mode. She does not recognize the number and cuts the call..The phone rings again..she checks the number and lets it ring until it goes to her voicemail. A minute later she gets a voice message. About 15 minutes later, after class, she leaves the class room, having completely forgotten about the voice mail…she walks with her best friend Akanksha Mehra to the caf..The order lunch and take a seat near the TV. The news is going on in the TV..they have their food served and Kanksha just happens to notice the TV..there was a flash news.Akanksha reads the news aloud to Sumedha…


"Aaj, dopar ko, Bandra bustand ke paas, Acharya enterprises ke ek karmachari ko din dahade gundoin ne mara.Kaha jata hai ki, uska underworld ke saath connection tha, aur yeah unki andarooni ladai hai…"


Sumedha looks up and stops Akanksha, as they both listen to the news reader continue..


"Sutroin se pata chala hai ki, ghayal hone wale ka chara itni buri tarah se bigad gaya hai, ki use, ab tak police ne, identify nahi kiya hai. Hamein yeh bhi pata chala hai ki, Acharya Enterprises ke Malik, Rajbeer Acharya ne gahri shok jatate hue, yeh bhi kaha hai ki, is hadse ke zimedar logoin ko pakda jayega aur kadi se kadi sazza milegi. Khabar abhi zari hai..dekhte rahi ye Aaj Tak ."


Sumedha suddenly remembers the voice mail…She picks up the phone and looks at the screen," 2 missed calls, 1 voicemail, 1 New message." She decides to check the text message first. She frets as the message takes some time to load. Akanksha looks on confused…finally when the message loads…Sumedha, almost throws up…she covers her mouth and runs to the rest room!Akanksha behind her…she catches up Sumi in the restroom, who cant stop throwing up..Akanksha calms her down..and takes the cell phone from Sumi's hand before she can stop..and looks at the screen..it was a picture message with the same picture they just saw on TV of the injured man. The man had a chain around his neck..with a pendant, she immediately recognized and was horrified when she realized what had happened….
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i already read this part there, but o well, its always fun to read again

Girl: Hey! Kya samjhte ho apne aap ko?
Guy: Admi huin, wohi samjhta huin.

HAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHASDLKFJAS;LDKFJA;SLDF 🤣 best line 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigrl05

i already read this part there, but o well, its always fun to read again

Girl: Hey! Kya samjhte ho apne aap ko?
Guy: Admi huin, wohi samjhta huin.

HAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHASDLKFJAS;LDKFJA;SLDF 🤣 best line 😆


Lol! yeah, i found tht out after writing...but see ppl dont seem to like it 😒..i wish they would leave a comment, even a criticizing one, i dont care, if i dont know whts lacking, how do i make it better?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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try changing your title from KN to GHT im sure you'll get bunches of readers 😉 😆

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