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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part soni. loving it. continue soon.
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that was great, plz continue soon
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He swings into the seat and gasp,he takes a fleeting look at the girl seated next to him,she shakes her hair, thus a few droplets land on Angad's face, the girl realizes this and turns to apologize but is lost in his eyes. Her stomach churns with butterflies and her pulse races faster. They both look away.
Girl: uh..I..I..am sorry
Angad opens his mouth but no words come out. he opens his mouth and closes it, but jerks slantedly as the rikshaw driver slams the brakes in front of a huge mansion.
He takes out a few crisp notes from his wallet and hands it over to the driver, then gets out
Not hearing the rikshaw driver call out to him
sir, apka change, change, finally giving up he sets the change in his pocket and sets off to drop the girl off to her destination.
The girl chances a quick look at the guy (Angad's) retreating back and feels as if he isn't a stranger but someone close...very close
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Angad lost in his thoughts, roams around his palace-like mansion, recollecting every feature of the girl's face, every feeling he stored inside him.
brrrrrrrrrring
the phone rings jolting him out of his daydreams
Angad absently picks up the phone, half listening to whatever Mishti is saying, he imagines his "dreamgirl" sitting on the swings with her hair flying behind her or her in a garden of red roses that matches her rosy lips.
Mishti on the phone:toh mai kerahi thi, Angaddddd, tum sunrahe ho ke nahi?
Angad still dazed: haan sun raha hoon
Mishti. the irritation now apparent in her voice:tumhe aaj ho kya gaya hai, mai tumhe kabse batein karahi hoon aur tum ho ki..
kher jaane do, tumhe batha hain na ki mummy toh bas mere shaadi ko leke peeche hi padgayi hai
Angad confused: huh?
Mishti:tumse to baath karna hi bekaar hai aaj, mai tumhe kal canteen mai milthi hoon, okay
Angad:teek hai
Mishti: bye
with that she clicks off the phone

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It's now late at night. Angad lies down on his pillow, with his eyes wide open, flashes of the girl keep playing back and forth in his mind. He rolls over but still can't get himself to sleep, he tossed and turns but with no luck.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great parts soni. I am waiting to read more.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome.... 👏 ...continue soon plzzzz
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Next morning, morning sunshine shines on Angad's face, creating a sort of a rainbow on his skin. From the half open window,a small gust of wind wafts through his hair.
Angad gets up with a start,he shakes his clock and realizes the alarm didn't go off and he's late for college, hurriedly he grabs a towel, faded blue jeans, black shirt and other needed materials and shuts himself up in the bathroom to shower. Getting ready in a record time of fifteen minutes, because of his mom's umpteen protests, he shoves a piece of toast in his mouth, and gulps down a glass of orange juice (urgh I hate orange juice, anyways).
he rushes out to his car...his car..Oh oh
Angad: meri gaadi...oh no mai toh gaadi ke bareme bhool hi gaya, ab mai kya karu, dad bhi office chale gaye aur mom goosa hojayegi...hmmm.
picking up his network box (cellphone) he dials a familiar number and within a few minutes, a red sports car parks in front of him.
he gets in and witnesses the smirk on his best friend's face
Mishti: tumhe to mai ek din sabak seeka ke rahungi, kal tum mujhse mere problem ke bareme baath hi nahi karna chahte aur jab tum problem mai ayye toh jat se mai yaad agayi,
Angad holds his ears: acha baba sorry

getting out of her car:ab chale Mushy
Mishti hits with her books: tum na...urgh!

In the canteen
Mishti huddles secretively with Angad.: bathanahi mai kya karu, mom toh bas mere peeche hi padgayi hai tumhari aur meri shaadi ko leke
Angad's eyes pop open, he waves his hands in front of his chest signaling to indicate himself:mai...par kyu???
Mishti: avey, agar mujhe batha hotha..toh mai tumhe nahi bathathi kya? acha suno
Angad signals for her to stop: mai jaantha hoon...mai jaantha hoon

A creaking noise is heard and they both turn to see Karthik pull out a chair and sit down: kya jaanthe ho??zarra hume bhi enlighten karo
Angad: yehi ki, tum dono ek doosre ko chahte ho, par najane kyu iski mummy hum dono ki yani meri aur Mishti ki shaadi ko leke peeche hi padgayi hai
Mishti inhales sharply: what???meri mummy arre meri mummy ko nahi..Naina aunty ko jaldi hai aur upar se Karthik ke mummy-papa ko kaun samjaaye ki hum dono,,you know
Angad puts his head down: oh no!
Mishti and karthik together: Oh yes
Angad: mujhse ye nahi hoga
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice! i love it... cont soon! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kewl kewl soni. I gtg now so I will read u r continuation tomorrow.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
gr8 story. continue soon, just love it 😛

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