Tears of Love..Sujal&Kashish...Last-part - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
fantastic part yaar... 👏
dono hi ek jaise hai....like made for each other types... 😆
but ab mujhe lagta hai SUJAL kuch karega KASHISH ko sabak sikhane ke liye....
update soon plzzzzzzz...
eager to know SUJAL kya karega.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
i think ki kashish aur sujal ko toh trophy deni chahiye because they are best yaar aik doosre ko neecha dikhane mein aur aik doosre ko barbad karne mein 😭 . i mean unke jaisa toh koi hain hi nahi 😭 . pyaar hai magar gusse se jatate hai, fikar hai magar dikhate nahi hai 😉 . kaise ajeeb logg hai dono bhi sach 😡 . aur yeh kashish itna natak karne ki kya zarurat thi 😡 . arre koi aisi chall chalni thi na jisse use koi takleef aur dard na ho 😭 . tab uski jeet hai 😉 . lekin yeh toh ulta hi kar diya usne . kanch pe chal padi aur takleef dard ussi ko hua 😭 . sujal ka kya kharab hua kuch bhi toh nahi . haan sirf honeymoon jane ka plan cancel ho gaya 😭 . aaj nahi toh kal woh honeymoon ka plan bhi kamyab ho jayega 😳 . lekin iss kahsish ko toh abb woh dard sehena padega na 😭 . she is sooo stupid sometimes na seriously . hey waise the part was rocking 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzz..........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
fantastic part 👏 👏 👏 kashish hurt herself so that they won't go to the honeymoon...nice move 😆 😆 can't wait what sujal is gonna do now 😆 😳 cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😳 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-16

Sujal gusse me office chala jata hai jaha uski office me Akshat uska intzar kar raha hota hai......

Akshat: kya hua........tum pareshan lag rahe ho.......

Sujal: Pareshan nahin balke gusse me hoon..............aur wohi bhi us Kashish ki waje se...........samajti kya hai woh apne aap ko.......

Akshat: Beshak tumhari patni...(

laughs at him).......waise ab kya musibat khadi ki hai meri behen ne.....

Sujal: Yeh puch kya kuch nahi kiya.....jitna main usko kamzor samjta tha lekin woh to bahot hi chalak aurat hai.........aaj tumhare samne kaise haa bolke gayi Paris ke liye..........lekin tumhare jane ke bad aaj usne khud kanch ka glass toda aur uspe chal padi.........aur jab mama aayi to aise bholepan ka natak kar rahi thi jaise mano sab kuch anjane me hua ho......pata nahin ek din main mom aur Charu pe kya jaadu kar diya hai usne .........sab log jab chahe Kashish yeh Kashish woh.........

Akshat: tu sidhe sidhe yeh kyun nahin kehta ki tuje jalan ho rahi hai usse...........

Sujal: Main kisi se nahin jalta.........lekin mere ghar me koi aake meri jagah lena chahe yeh mujse bardasat nahin hota.......

Akshat: Kashish koi aur nahi hai ...........tumhari patni hai aur tumhare jagah lena uska hakk hai.............ab tum yeh sab chodo ......aisi nok joke to chalti rehti hai jab do aise log shadi karte hai.............tum fresh ho jao.........thodi dair bad board meeting hai..........

Sujal: i be right there..........just wait for me...........

Thodi dair ke bad sab log ki board meeting hoti hai aur Sujal sham ko wapas apne ghar ke liye nikalta hai............

(In Kashish's room)

Charu: Hi! bhabhi........kya main andar aa sakti hoon.......

Kashish: aa.......tuje izzat lene ki kab se zaroorat padne lagi........bata aaj ka din kaisa tha...........

Charu: bahot hi achcha.......lekin yeh kya mom bata rahi thi ki aap ke pair me kanch chubh gaya............thodi si to aap apni care kar sakti hai na..........ab bhaiyaa ka sara plan chopat ho gaya na...........

Kashish: Maine jan bujke to nahi kiya na.......per tu bata kaisi chal rahi hai teri college...........

Charu: waise to firstclass lekin ek choti si problem hai............muje apne final collection ke liye kuch nayi theme chahiye..........ek aisa collection jisko dekhkar sab log ki aankhein chok jaye........kyunki yeh mera final collection hoga........and i have to be the best bhabhi............

Kashish: ok.......ok..........main samaj gayi..........muje kuch samay dedo.......main soch ke bataungi .........thik hai......

Charu: jee bhabhi.......you are the best bhabhi ever............thank you so much......

Kashish: Yeh apna thanks tum apne pass hi rakho...........waise yeh bata mama kya kar rahe hai.................

Charu: woh aapke liye khana bana rahi hai.............

Kashish: kya.........chal main chalti hoon mama ki madad karne..........

Charu: jee nahin......mama ne order diya hai ki aap complete aaram karenge aur aapka khana bhi aap ke kamre tak pahuncha diya jaye........

Kashish: thik hai...........main mama ke order ke khilaf kaise ja sakti hoon.........

Jab Sujal andar aata hai........

Sujal: kya baatein ho rahi hai.....

Charu: kuch nahin bas aise hi........Main chalti hoon.......bhaiyaa aap khana khane aajana...........aur bhabhi aapka main bhijwati hoon..........

Kashish: tum aisa karo tumhare bhaiyaa jab khale tab unhi ki haath bhijwa dena..........kyun thik kaha na maine............

Sujal; hmmmmm........

Sujal Kashish ko gusse se dekhta hai.......charu waha se bahir chali jati hai......

Sujal: are u out of your mind........main khana leke aao aur woh bhi tumhare liye.........no way...........yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta............

Kashish: khana bhi aayega aur woh bhi tum khud leke aaoge..........ab jao mama tumhara intzaar kar rahi hogi.......

Sujal: tumhari yeh dhamki tumpe bahot bhari padegi......

Kashish: dhamki denewale dhamki se darte nahi.........jao muje bahot bhukh lag rahi hai........

Sujal gusse me apna coat phek ke chala jata hai................aur kashish sirf apne aap muskurati hai.......

Sujal neeche dining table pe sab ke saath dinner karke uth raha hota hai jab Veena use rokti hai........

Veena: kaha ja raha hai..........yeh plate upper leja aur kashish ko apne samne yeh pura khana khila dena............subah se kuch nahi khaya...........aur main koi fariyad sunnewali nahi tum dono ki aur se............ab jaa khana thanda ho raha hai.........

Sujal gusse me woh plate uthake kashish ke kamre me aake zor se table pe rakhta hai..........

Kashish: kaha tha na ki tum khud mera khana muj tak pahuchaonge............dekha.........

Sujal: woh to mama ne kaha is liye...........warna muje koi shaukh nahi tumhari dekhbhal karne ka...........

Kashish: mama ke liye hi sahi lekin tum ne aaj mere liye neeche se upper khana laye.............sujal garewal jiske liye dus dus naukar kaam kar rahe hai woh aaj mera khana leke aaya hai ab to muje khana hi hoga..........kya tum meri plate muje yaha tak de sakte ho ki main mama ko bhulau.......woh kya hai na mere pair me bahot dard ho raha hai...........

Sujal: You............

Kashish: Kashish.......naam nahin maloom......

Sujal kashish ke haath me plate dekar samne sofe pe apne file padhne beth jata hai.............

Kashish: aaj dal me namak kuch kam hai ...........kyun........

Sujal: kya.......

Kashish: muje namak chahiye..........

Sujal: to......

Kashish: tum ja rahe ho ki main mama ko bhulao........

Sujal: tumhe kya lagta hai ki main tumhari dhamki se darta hoon.......

Kashish: thik hai............Mama............Mama..........

Veena

(enters): kya hai...........tum thik to ho.....

Kashish: dekhiye na mama..........Maine sirf Sujal se namak lane ko kaha lekin usne kaha ki uske liye mere liye waqt hi nahi.........ab aap hi kuch kahiye na..........

Sujal: mama yeh........

Veena: maine kya kaha tha............tumhe yaad hai ki nahin............ab jao aur kashish ke liye namak leke aao..............

Sujal: jee..........

Veena: aur ek baat..........kashish ab kuch bhi chahiye to tum sujal ko bejijak bata dena woh wahi karega jo tum kahogi..........sujal tum samaj rahe ho na.........

Sujal: jee mama.........

Veena; ab main chalti hoon.........meri bahu ka achche se khayal rakhna..........

Sujal namak lane neeche chala jata hai.........aur veena wapas apne kamre me......thodi dair bad sujal wapas aata hai namak ke saath........

Sujal: yeh lo...........aur thoda jyada hi khana kyunki tumhe iski jyada zaroorat hai...........

Kashish: woh to main khaoungi lekin woh meri dal thandi ho gayi aur muje thandi dal bilkul pasand nahi..........tum aisa karo mere liye ise garam karke lao..........

Sujal: kya,........tumhara dimag to thik hai.......main aur tumhare liye dal garam karoo............

Kashish; thik hai.........mam..

Sujal: thik hai.........thik hai.........do ab.............ab aur kuch chahiye tumhe...........

Kashish: nahin to.........lekin apne liye kharid sako to ek aaina zaroor kharidna.............tumhari yeh sakal dekhne me kaam aayega..........

Sujal: what nonsense......

Kashish: meri dal............

Sujal neeche jake dal ko garam karke aata hai.......

Sujal: yeh lo...........aur khao jab tak tumhara jee nahi bharta............

Sujal wapas apne kaam me lag jata hai.............

Kashish: yaha pe garmi kuch jyada hi badh gayi hai..........Sujal..........jake zara mere liye khidki khol doge.........

Sujal: ab itna AC chal raha hai aur tumhe garmi lag rahi hai.............

Kashish: tum kholte ho ki main mama ko bhulao......

Sujal: tum mama ke aad me mujse dushmani mod rahi ho..........

Kashish: to tumhe kisne roka hai.........

Sujal: dekh lunga tumhe...........

Kashish: abhi bhi wahi ho..........jao bhi.......

Sujal khidki kholta hai aur tez hawa aane se Sujal ke sare papers pure kamre me bhikhar jate hai aur kashish yeh dekhke bahot hi muskurati hai.......sujal jaldi se sare papers collect karta hai........

Sujal: janti thi tum ki aisa hoga........phir bhi..........

Kashish: aaj dekh liya ki kitne bade bewafok bhi ho tum...........

Sujal: tum apna kam karo aur main apna...........aur bewafoki to tum baat hi mat karo..........kyunki tumse badi bewafoki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi.......

Kashish: maine kya kiya............

Sujal: mujse shadi jo ki.........

Kashish: woh meri bewafoki nahi meri majbori thi........

Sujal: jo bhi tum socho.........lekin tum bewafok hi ho aur rahogi............

Kashish: tum ab bhi galat soch rahe ho.........

Sujal: kaun kya sochta hai woh to waqt aane pe hi pata lagega..............

Kashish: waqt to kab ka shuru ho gaya.........dair se tum jag rahe ho.............

Sujal: lagta hai tumne jung chedne ka elan kar hi diya hai............to muje manzor hai tumhara yeh challenge........dekhte hai kaun jitta hai aur kaun harta hai..........

Kashish: zaroor.........dekhte hai is jung ka ant kaha hota hai..........

Kashish yeh kehke apne aur ki light off karke so jati hai aur sujal bhi sofe pe jake so jata hai.........................

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey yeh kashish ki toh mein how rude hey make her fall in love with sujal plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........

hey lovely part cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part yaar yeh dono kitna bachon ki tarh larte hain 😡 huh!kkkkoi aik bhi samjhdar nahi hai pata nahi kya hoga is rishte ka?????/ 😕 😭 ne ways try 2 cont Asap 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey awesome part.... loved the way kashish was ordering sujal around.. hope sujal soon gives away his "attitude problem" and accepts kashish..

do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
very good going..yeh sujal , kashish ka attitude na... uff.. meri tho samaj mein hii nahii aatha..problem yeh hai kii both of them are equally egoistic..and their attitude..they seriously fight like small kids..i dont know kab bade honge dono...keep up the good work going... cooll...👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting eagerly to read the next part... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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