Tears of Love..Sujal&Kashish...Last-part

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

awesome part... hope sujal changes soon.. jaldi continue karo wait nahi hota 😉
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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#142

wow kashish dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood vechari kashish uski dadi sahi kehti hai apne hi pairon par gulati lol 😆 😆 😆 abbh sujal aur kashish harrozh subha shaam shuru hojate hai choti choti baton par fighting kind a its cute lekin kabi kabi serious hojate hai...i liked kashish's relationship with veena she has surely created a strong bond between them fairly to say i think her bond is even stronger than sujal's 😳 😳 😳 ...veena acts as if she knew kashish before sujal...finally after the incident with veena and kashish taking care of her sujal said sorry to her but still he doesn't realise how it feels to be far from your parents and going through their hatred..but hope he realises soooon ...wah kashish neh kya lecture diya hai too gooood 👏 👏 👏 continue sooon dear can't wait more 👏

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nikita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#143

kashish what a part yaar 👏 . mein tumhare harr part pe fida ho jati hu yaar. itne ache parts kaise likhti ho tum sach....samaj hi nahi aata 😉 . it's like you know puri link laag jati hai parts padhte waqt they are that good 👏 . ohhhhhh hoooooooo toh sujal ne kashish ki baatein chori chupe sunn li huhhh.....about she talking to herself 😆 .i am damn sure usse uss waqt bura laga hoga kashish ke liye, uska dard dekhkar usse bhi dard hua hoga 😭 .u know woh keheta nahi ya dikhata nahi isska matlab yeh nahi ki sujal ko kuch feel nahi hota ya emotions nahi hai 😭 . balki he is more emotional that kashish 😉 . that i can see from his behaviour and nature 😳 . ohhhhh wowwwwwwwwww and the best thing was when veena gets that heart pain 🤗 . kehete hai na joh hota hai ache ke liye hota hai 👏 !!! that's soooooo true 😉 . i mean i agar veena ke saath aisa nahi hota toh naa kashish ko kabhi veena ka itna khayal rakhne ko mauka milta 😳 . aur agar moka nahi milta toh sujal kabhi dekh hi nahi pata ki kashish ke dil mein uske parivaar ke liye kya jazbaat hai 😉 . lekin aaj joh hua bohot acha hua . veena ki iss halat mein kashish ne uska itna khayal rakha that was toh fully expected lekin yeh expected nahi tha that sujal will listen to what kashish is saying and how is she recovering veena from her bad health 👏 . kitne pyaar se khana khilaya veena ko yeh dekhkar toh sujal ko bohot andar se acha aur bura dono laga hoga 100% sure 😉 . hmmmmmmmmmmm............and i loved the way kashish gave a long but a true lecture to sujal about how one should be in life 😳 . that was aaaammmaaazzziiinnngggg !!! kashish itna sab kuch keheti hai aur sujal uski baatein sunn raha hota hai and then he keeps on staring at her 😳 .i know and i am definately sure ki sujal ko bhi yeh saari baatein pata hogi 😉 . it's like just ki sujal ki pecheli zindagi bohot kharab gayi hai 😭 . it's not like kashish na ki bada parivaar jismein underatandings hai, khushiyan hai, pyaar hai and all .usse naa aik baap ka pyaar mill paya aur aik maa ka pyaar hai joh woh lena nahi chahata aur dekhna nahi chahata cause he is broken somewhere from inside really badly ki abb harr jeez usse dikhawa lagta hai 😭 . lekin yeh kashish hey na yeh zarur sujal ko thik karegi 😳 .infact kahsish hi sujal ke saare dard aur takleefen mitayegi aur apne pyaar, apnepaan uske saare zakham mita degi aur usse sahi mayno mein jeena sikhayegi 😳 .this story is damn and very very veryyyyyyyy interesting 👏 .hmmmm....lekin tum india jaa rahi ho na .that's a good news yaar 👏 . i wish mein tumhari jagha jaa sakti thi . i would loveeee to cause i don't like here at all 😭 .leki koi baat nahi u enjoyyyy you vacations to the fullest 🥳 . haan ho sake toh waha se continue karna 😭 .atleast one or two parts of every fanfic of yours 😭 .okkk....soooo happy journey and have a wonderful vacation in india 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzz..............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#144

superb.very good going..i'am completely loving it.. story bohat achcha jaa raha hai..super-duper cooll...nice.. amazing...👏 you have a good holiday...and me waiting for the next part of your fanfic eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#145

Hi! Friends.......I am back from my trip.........i like to thank those friends who remembered me when i wasnt here........i am glad to say thaht i am going to continue my story from now............thanks you all for your support and love.....

love

Kashish

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Faiza Sait

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Posted: 17 years ago

#146

continue soon yaar,

missing u and ur ff a lot.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#147

welcome back..hope you had a great holiday.. 😊 continue soon me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😛

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part-18

Suraj ki pehli kiran Kashish ke sunhare baaloin ko aur bhi sunhara bana rahi thi...........Kashish jo puri raat Veena ke pass bethi huyi thi dheere se apni aankhein kholti hai...........Kashish jab apni aankhein kholti hai to pure kamre me Sujal ka koi pata nahin hota.......

Kashish
(apne aap se): itni subah subah yeh Sujal kaha chale gaye.........kahi kal raat ki baat ka uspe bura asar to nahin hua........muje kuch kehna hi nahin chahiye tha.........muje kya ferk padta hai ki woh kaise bhi rahe..........main kuch jyada hi bol gayi........pata nahin ab mama uthegi to main use kya bataungi.......
Voice: Coffee.........

Kashish looks up and it is non another than Sujal.........

Kashish (
surprized): Sujal tum........
Sujal: haa main.........kyun mere haath ki coffee ab nahin piogi........

Kashish bas use dekhte hi reh jati hai.........

Sujal: hello.......kaha kho gayi aap.........

Kashish: kuch nahi........bas soch rahi thi ki yeh coffee pio ya nahi.......

Sujal: maine isme koi zeher nahin milaya........

Kashish: janti hoon.......main to sirf soch rahi hoon ki Sujal Garewal aaj bina kuch mange muje coffee ke liye keh raha hai to thodi sochnewali baat to hai waise aaj itni subah subah koi khas baat..........

Sujal (
embarrased): tum bhi na kuch bhi sochti rehti ho...........woh darsal kuch waqt pehle tulsimasi ka phone tha ki woh aur uske saath sia aur ria bhi aa rahe hai.............
Kashish: tulsi masi......

Sujal: haa........mama ki saheli hai pune me rehti hai.........jab use is baat ka pata chala to woh khud ko rok nahi payi.........isliye kuch hi waqt me bas aate hi honge......

Kashish: aur yeh ria aur sia kaun.........

Sujal: Woh masi ke bete Karan bhaiyaa ki betiyaa............dono twins hai ..........koi 4 ya 5 saal ki.........lekin main ek baat tumhe abhi se bata deta hoon dono bahot hi shaitani hai........usse zara bachke rehna......

Kashish: ok
.......(takes the cup)...........thanks for the coffee.........
Sujal: it is ok..........waise tumse kuch kehna tha........

Kashish: haa kaho.............

Sujal: kal tumhare kehne ke baad main puri raat sochta raha..........waise tum thik hi keh rahi thi .........main apne swabhimaan me itna andha ho gaya tha ki mama aur charu ki khushiyaan ka kabhi khayal hi nahi aaya..............lekin ab se uski puri jimedari meri........

Kashish: achcha hai dair se hi sahi..........main abhi aati hoon.........doctor se milke tab tak tum yaha mama ke pass betho...........

Sujal: hmmm.................

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After some time Kashish and Sujal come home with Veena..........Jab woh ghar aate hai to Tulsi already ghar me aa gayi hoti hai.........

Veena: tulsi tum........

Tulsi: kya Veena...........itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tumne muje bataya bhi nahi.........woh to achacha hai ki Charu ka phone aaya............Veena tum itni laparwah kaise ho sakti ho...........

Veena: bas bas...........abhi to aate hi...........waise tera gussa thanda karne ke liye kuch hai...........inse milo...........yeh hai Kashish meri bahu...........

Kashish goes and takes the blessings.......

Tulsi: jiti raho.........bhagwan tumhari har manokamna puri kare..........

Charu: kaisi lagi hamari Bhabhi aapko........

Tulsi: chandni jaisi sheetal aur ganga ki tarah pavitra............lekin yeh kya Sujal ne to muje aaj subah kuch nahi bataya............shayad sharma raha hoga.......lekin yeh kya muje shaadi ki khabar hi nahi huyi.........

Veena: woh sab kuch itna jaldi hua ki...............lekin yeh sab chod yeh bata ki Karan aur Nandini kaise hai........aur kaha hai woh dono..........

Tulsi: Aur kaha ho sakte hai.........Sujal ke Kamre me uska intzaar kar rahe hai..........keh rahi thi ki apne chachu se bahot naraz hai.........kitne din ho gaye lekin milne hi nahi aate..........

Sujal: main use dekh ke aata hoon.........

Sujal runs to his room........

Tulsi; Agar un dono ko kisi ne bigada ho to woh Sujal hai...........bahot sir pe chadhake rakha hai...............waise main tumhe itna bata sakti hoon ki Sujal ko bache bahot pasand hai is liye tumhe koi taklif nahi hogi bache sambhalne me............

Kashish: Main abhi aati hoon........

Kashish apne kamre me chali jati hai.......

Tulsi: ise kya hua..........

Veena: tu beth main tuje sab kuch batati hoon.........

Veena tells her everything........

Tulsi: Sach main veena Kashish ki jitni bhi tarife hum kare itni kum hai...........sach main heera hai heera.........

Veena: Lekin Sujal uski kadar nahi janta.......

Tulsi: Lekin heere ki asli pehchan to zaveri hi janta hai............mana hamara zaveri bewfok hai lekin shayad hume use koi madad karni hogi...........

Veena: humne apni aur se puri koshish ki lekin kuch ferk hi nahi hota.........

Tulsi: yeh sab tum mujpe chod.......ab main aa gayi hoon na ab sab kuch thik ho jayega...........

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Lets check in sujal's room........there are two sweet girls are fighting for one doll and sujal is trying his best to stop them.......

Sujal: Sia.........ple kuch diar ke liye tum is teddy se khelo...........

Sia: nahi main apni doll se hi khelungi......

Sujal: Ria .............ple tum yeh doll thodi dair ke liye Sia ko de do........woh khel ke tumhe wapas de dengi.........

Ria: nahi main nahi dungi.........

Sujal: dekho........tum dono bahot hi shaitani kar rahe ho..........ple man jao........main tumhe chocolate dunga........ple...........

Sia & Ria: nahin ...........

Kashish: Hmmmmm................hmmmmmmmmmmm

Sujal: Kashish tum..........

Kashish: main kuch madad kar doon.........

Sujal: ple help your self......

Kashish: hi!........mera naam Kashish hai aur aapka.........

Sia: main Sia aur yeh Ria hai.......

Kashish: bahot hi pyara naam hai............

Ria: lekin aap kaun ho........aapko pehli bar dekha..........

Kashish: main aap logo ki chachi hoon........

Sia: Aap Sujalchachu ki wife ho..........

Kashish: haa..........lekin yeh kya aap log zagad rahe ho kyun .........sia ria aap dono ko doll chahiye na..........lekin aaplogo ko pata hai doll ko kya chahiye...........

Sia: kya chachi.......

Kashish: doll aap dono ke saath khelna chahti hai......

Ria: sach......

Kashish: haa.........kyun na aap teno hi ek saath milke khelo.............

Sia aur Ria doll ke saath khelne lagti hai.............

Sujal: yeh to kamal ho gaya.........tumne is shaitano ki bolti bandh kardi...........

Kashish: Kabhi kabhi bacho ke saath hume khud bache banna padata hai..............kabhi kabhi hume woh sab kuch nahi milta jo hume chahiye aur milbaat ke khelne me jo pyaar badhta hai woh ..........lekin tum yeh sab chodo yeh tum nahi samjoge..........kyunki tumne to aaj tak sab kuch hasil karna hi shikha hai................khair yeh sab chodo .........Akshat bata raha tha ki aaj tumhari koi important meeting hai.........usne muje tumhe yaad karne ko kaha tha...........is liye main to sirf keh rahi hoon...............

Sujal: thanks yaad karane ke liye..........main chalta hoon...........sham ko khane pe Akshat saath me hoga woh shaam ko naye project ki reporting karni hai.........

Kashish: thik hai main raghukaka ko bol dungi..........

Sujal: achcha main chalta hoon..........mama ka khayal rakhna..........bye.........

Kashish: bye...........

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It is dinner time aur sab log khana khane bethte hai.........

Charu: wow bhabhi ..........kheer............aapne banai hai.....

Raghukaka: aaj ka saara khana Kashish bahurani ne hi banaya hai............

Tulsi: muje to bahot bhukh lagi hai........khusboo kaisi lajawaab aa rahi hai.............

Akshat: Sach me Kashish tum khana bahot hi achcha banati ho...............Lucky you Sujal..........

Sujal Kashish ki aur dekhta hai..........

Veena: yeh kya Sujal tumne Kheer nahin li...........kheer to teri manpasand hai...........

Sujal: nahin aaj maan nahi hai........

Tulsi: maan kaise nahi...........jab itni pyaar karnewali patni ne apne pyaare haathoin se banaya ho to tumhe khani to chahiye...........suno Kashish tum khud uske plate me dal do.........main dekhti hoon kaise nahin khata.........

Kashish looks at Sujal helpless..........

Akshat: Kashish...........dekh kya rahi ho..........woh intzaar kar raha hai...........

Kashish puts Kheer in his plate.........

Charu: ab chakh ke to dekho..........kaisi bani hai........

Sujal eats it........

Veena: meri bahu ki tarif nahi karega......

Sujal: kheer achchi bani hai..........

Akshat: achchi ya bahot achchi..........

Sujal: bahot achchi.......

Tulsi: agar bahot achchi hai to kuch aur le.........

Sujal: nahin itna kafi hai........

Tulsi: aise kya..........Kashish.........dal na.....

Kashish: main......

Tulsi: are bhai..........tera to hakk banta hai........ab aise dekh kya rahi ho...........dal de ...........

Kashish bahot hichkichat ke saath kheer dalti hai.........

Charu: yeh huyi na baat..........

Tulsi: wake hi Kashish tumhare khane me koi jaadu hai.........

Veena: sach me Kashish aaj to khane me maja aa gaya............

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Sab log khana khake ke hall me bethe huye the.........

Tulsi: Aur sunao........business me sab kuch kaisa chal raha hai........

Sujal: bahot hi achche se...........hum bas kuch hi waqt me apni ek nayi hotel launch kar rahe hai...........

Tulsi: kaha yeh tumne tai kiya......

Akshat: abhi location tai nahi hua lekin soch rahe hai ki yahi mumbai me kare.........waise aap sab ka kya opinion hai.......

Charu: Hotel ke business me mujse na hi pucho to achcha......

Akshat: tumse koi puch bhi nahi raha..........Kashish tum batao tumhari kya rai hai........

Kashish: Main to ............main......

Veena: haa beta........is faisle me tumhari rai bhi bahot mayne rakhti hai...........

Kashish: Muje lagta hai ki hume yeh Hotel mumbai se kahi durr ek aisi jagah kholna chahiye jaha pe sirf or sirf hum hi business kar sake.......kyunki agar hum yahaan Mumbai me apna hotel kholenge to competitors bahot hi honge aur agar hum koi aisi jagah pe apna hotel khole ki logo ko sirf wahi pe rukna pade...........hamari yaha ki hotel me jyadatar kaun hote hai NRI..........NRI Hamari hotel me kyun aate hai........kyunki hum unhe woh sari facilities puri karte hai jo woh log chahte hai..........mere hisab se aap dekhe to mumbai me hum yeh business teen saal tak bahot achche se kar sakte hai jab tak koi naya hotel nahin khulta lekin hum koi aisi jagah khole jaha kai saalo tak hum hi business kare to hume bahot sara profit mil sakta hai...........

Akshat: wow..........that's a great idea.........kya kehte ho Sujal.........

Sujal: aur woh Jagah........

Kashish: Jaisalmer.......Rajsthan........

Sujal: Jaisalmer hi kyun.......

Kashish: they have the higest NRI turiosts...........

Sujal: that's a great point of business........

Akshat: Sujal.........maine hamesha suna tha ki sher pe ek sava sher bhi hota hai aaj dekh bhi liya..........main yeh to janta tha ki tum bahot hi achche businessman ho lekin tumhari biwi to hum se do kadam aage nikli.............kya kismat payi hai tumne...........aur Kashish tum.......kya kuch nahin janti..........bahot hi achcha khana banati ho..........bahot hi achcha gati ho..........aur aaj dekha ki tum bahot hi achacha business bhi karti ho............i am impress........

Kashish: aisi koi baat nahi.........main to sirf.....

Veena: Nahin Akshat bilkul thik keh raha hai.........aaj muje bhi kuch janne ko mila ki meri bahu kitni kamyab hai.........aaj se is project me tum Sujal ke saath saath kam karogi...........kyun Sujal thik kaha na...........

Sujal: je.....

Kashish: lekin main.........mera matlab ghar pe sab kuch......

Tulsi: gahr pe to sabkuch chalta rehta hai............tumhara yeh ferz hai ki tum apne pati ke kamo me uska haath batao.........tum kal se hi office joint karogi.........ghar pe hum sab log hai na............ab jaldi se haa keh do........

Kashish: thik hai aap log itna keh rahe hai to............

Kashish sirf Sujal ki aur dekhti hi reh jati hai................

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