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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey it's a nice fanfic....do continue soon....I hope your friend writes the next parts faster 😳 ....I can't wait to read more......ina way I like reading some kind of vampire stories too........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part, it was awesomeeee...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so luna is noticing changes i herself...running faster is just the beginning lol 😆 😆 connors a joker...anyways will b waiting 4 the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for comments guys. Next two chapters coming up...in like 2 minutes
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 4

Connor

Something is changing in her. Luna, I mean. She, she's not slow anymore. She's super fast, almost up to the point where you can't see her, cause she's so fast. Believe me, I know it sounds crazy. Also, she's getting really beautiful. Her skin is almost translucent. Yeah, that's how pale she looks. In a ghostly way, she's really beautiful. And her eyes are getting even more purple. Or is it just me? I know it sounds weird coming from her best friend, but it's only the truth. Sharp cheekbones and white teeth. Long lashes that match with her dark hair. Oh my god, am I falling for her?
No, of course not, that's ridiculous! We've been best friends ever since we were born. Of course I am a year older than her. Oh god, I gotta talk to somebody. Is it just me or is she really changing into something that's not of this world? Normal humans just don't look like her. And now with this whole being fast thing, it's really, you know, just weirding me out. She looks like a ... an angel. That's the only way to describe it. It's not just her beauty, you know? It's something else. I can't quite put my finger on it, but I get a weird feeling that her changing is not yet done.
Of course, I wouldn't let our friendship die just because of this. We're almost like siblings, you know?
I lay on my bed, trying to finish my history homework, when my cell phone rang. I looked at the clock and it was almost 12. Who would call this late? I looked at the caller ID and it was Luna. Hm, weird.
"Hey, looney, what's up?" looney was my nickname for her. I had made it up when we were little. I know it's such a stupid name and I only call her that because she hated the name so much. But to my surprise, she was hysterical on the other end. She was crying.
"Hey, hey, what's wrong?" I asked her, now getting a little concerned. She took a big breath and then cleared her throat.
"My mom was in an accident and I'm at the hospital right now. She's in the ER. I'm so scared," she said really fast. Then she started crying again. Oh my god, her mom in an accident. I gotta do something.
"Oh, baby, I'm so sorry, I'll be right there, what hospital?" I asked, while getting dressed.
I hung up the phone, told my mom what happened and she offered to drive me there.
***
When we finally got there, Luna was in the waiting room. She was the only one there. She was wearing jeans, converse and a cotton t-shirt. Apparently, she had stopped crying. I rushed over to her and we hugged. She looked tired and sad.
"What happened?" I asked
"She was coming home from work right? She was driving, but some idiot ran through red light and ... and ..." she trailed off.
"Where is she now?"
"The doctors are operating on her right now, I'm so scared, what if something happens?" she asked me and with that her eyes filled with tears again. I hugged her tightly and told her everything was going to be all right. And we waited like that for about an hour, before Luna's aunt arrived. Aunt Clara was the only relative they had. It was so sad.
"Oh, baby, are you ok?" she asked Luna as she pulled her in for a hug. "Connor, so good to see you again, though I had not imagined it would be like this," she said sadly. She said hello to my mother and said that we should go home.
"No, no, we'll stay, we don't mind," said my mother. She knew how close Luna and I were. Besides, she herself was Elizabeth's close friend.
"No, I really don't wanna cause trouble, please, thank you so much but I'd rather that you guys go home," Aunt Clara insisted, but my mom was just as stubborn. In the end we got to stay.
Just then a doctor came out.
"A close family member to Elizabeth Jones?" he asked. He was a tall guy with thin glasses.
"I'm her sister," Aunt Clara stood up, " and this is her daughter," she pointed to Luna
"Just you, then please," then they walked away to a corner.
"Oh god, what do you think had happened?" asked Luna
"Don't worry, dear, your mother's will to live is strong. I'm sure of it," said my mother
Chapter 5
Luna

God, what was taking them so long? I was itching to know what they were talking about, but I couldn't hear anything. They were too far away. All of a sudden, the world went spinning. Everything was a blur. I thought maybe I was going to faint, but I didn't. I looked at Connor and he was looking at me with a serene expression. So he doesn't see it, then it's just me? Then suddenly everything was back to normal. Well not exactly normal, cause now I could hear what they were talking about. Perhaps, they were talking loudly now or maybe I was closer to them.
"So, she will be able to walk?" Aunt Clara said
"Yes, but it will take some time for her to heal. She was after all in a very bad accident. Leg broken in two places, concussion and internal bleeding aren't exactly counted as minor." the doctor was saying. Then Aunt Clara turned around to look at me with the strangest expression. I looked away, sensing that Aunt Clara knew about me hearing their convo. I looked at Connor and he whispered wondering what they were talking about. Then he couldn't hear it. Great, now I was the freak who could hear for miles. Just then Aunt Clara thanked the doctor and walked back our way. She was smiling. I pretended that I didn't just hear what they were talking about. Though I was astonished at my ability. How did I do that? She told us what I'd just heard, minus her injuries. No details. Just that she was going to have to stay in the hospital for a month or two.
"Can I see her now?" I asked the doctor
"I don't think so, she's resting. The operation just ended so she's very weak now. I suggest you guys should all leave and get some rest yourself," with that the doctor walked off.
Aunt Clara was going to live with me while mom was at the hospital. Awesome.
Edited by Dark Love - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice one Yaar

Do continue soon

This fic is reslly interetsing.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow loved it really exciting intriguing and fascinating i just love vampire stories and i read the whole thing today and later kept on thinking about it in my boring criticism class 😆 loved it pls con soon so is she a vampire or someone from her family is and she has their traits what can i say i cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg, that was fabulouss!! this story is gettin sooo interesting. great work!! it reminds me so much of twilight except in that story the guy was a vampire.... this is justtt awesomeee.... i hope luna doesnt start drinking human blood, lolz... plzz cont soon. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was beautifully written...do ask your friend to continu e soon 😊 and you alos post soon after she gives you the parts 😉


I'll be waiting....



Sumra
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CHAPTER 6

Jamie

I think it was after PE, when I caught up with Lisa. She was walking in front of me with some of her friends. I called after her. She turned around and waved her friends away.

"I think we need to talk," I said to her firmly. I had decided to tell her that I loved her. Maybe that oughta change her mind.

She sighed. "About?"

"What the hell is that supposed to mean? We went out for a year and then you just dump me without any kind of explanation?" I was getting angry with her ignorance. She wasn't wearing her glasses. God, she looked pretty.

"No, Jamie, you don't understand, our relationship was just getting too serious. And I knew that any day now you were going to say-" I cut her off before she could say anything

"I love you"

"Yes, that, that's why I had to finish this before you swore your undying love for me or something."

"I just did,"

"Oh god," she was getting frustrated, "Look, Jamie, this is only high school, and we have our whole futures ahead of us, so don't fool around now, ok?"

"I'm in love with you, Lisa, don't you understand that? Isn't that good enough for you?"

"No, Jamie," she looked up at me with a sad smile, "you're not in love with me, you're in love with the idea of me,"

"What?!"

"You've always had a wicked sense of adventure, I know that, and I know that I'm just a chase. Everybody wants what they can't have, Jamie. You're in love with the idea of the two of us. We can't be together, you know that, right? That's why you want it. I've always told you, my parents expect great things from me. They probably got me engaged with some prime minister of Australia or something when I was born." she was trying to be funny, to lighten the mood. But nothing could lighten what I was about to say.

"So you're just gonna go along with your parents? Do everything they say? Everything they expect? When are you gonna start thinking for yourself? When are you gonna start living your own life, huh?"

"Don't you dare talk to me like that!" I could see the hurt in her eyes. Her mood shifted. "Goodbye, Jamie," she started to walk away. The bell rang for the next period. I grabbed her hand

"Don't walk away when we're talking," I said to her

"We're done talking. It's all over! For whatever reason, you can decide. I explained it to you the best I can, now I have to go. I'm late," she walked away. But she stopped a few feet away

"I'm sorry, Jamie, but you will find someone better than me, I know it," with those words, she walked away. And I was left alone in the hall. The world still went on, but my world had been shattered to tiny pieces, that I had yet to find. It would take a long time for me to find the pieces of my world that Lisa had just walked all over. I was alone.

CHAPTER 7

Luna

I was confused about the things that were happening to me. First I can run faster than the fastest person in our school. Then I get hypersensitive ears or something. What's next? X-Ray vision? I already don't sleep. My mom and I've been to doctors plenty of times and they could never figure out what was wrong with me. Sure, they prescribed sleeping pills and shit but it never helped. My eyes are getting even more purple. I decided to ask Aunt Clara about it. She was downstairs making breakfast. I had just gotten up and was getting ready to go to school. I still had about half an hour to spare till I had to get out the door.

"Good morning, dear," she said while flipping a pancake. She was wearing her robe and sipping coffee.

"Mornin'," I said and sat down at the kitchen table. She put a plate in front of me with a glass of milk. Pancakes and bacon. I wished for a split second that the bacon wasn't cooked. Bloody and raw is how I would've liked it today. Then I shuddered at what I was thinking.

"What's the matter? You don't like it?" asked Aunt Clara

"Oh no, I was just thinking something, I always like your pancakes, you know that," I said with a smile and dug into my breakfast. I really hated milk. I just didn't like it's taste, but I always drank it because my mom is a doctor and she would make me drink it everyday.

"Um, can I have orange juice instead of the milk?" I asked and her and explained why. She smiled a knowing smile.

Halfway through my pancakes, I decided to ask about these weird transformations. Maybe she knew something about this kind of stuff. After all, she was a scientist.

"Um, Aunt Clara?"

She raised her head from today's newspaper and said yes.

"What would you say if I, um, was-" I didn't get to finish my sentence, because she gave a little screech and said if I didn't leave right now, I would be late to school. She was right. I decided to ask later. It's not like I had the choice.

***

So on the way to school, I decided to test my speed and I ran like a monster was chasing me. And this time I was even faster. I could feel the wind whipping my hair around and it felt good knowing that nothing could catch me. I was in front of the school steps in 2 minutes flat. It usually took me 20 minutes to walk there. Wow.

I saw Connor heading up the steps and ran to catch him.

"Hey," I said. He turned around and said hi

"What's up?" he said in a casual way, "So how was the mall yesterday?"

Oh crap. Only then did I remember that I totally forgot about the mall thing. He looked at me.

"You forgot, didn't you?"

"Oh damn, what am I gonna do?" I panicked. Joanna would be mad. She sort of had a reputation for being a mean girl. I knew it. And everybody else knew it. But oh well. What can I do now except apologize? Damn. It's not like we even talked before.

Since Connor and I were in different classes, we said our goodbyes. He said good luck.

I entered my first class and I immediately saw Joanna and her friend Allison Miller glowering.

Math was hard to concentrate on, especially when you have someone like them glaring into my back. As soon as I got in, the bell rang so I wasn't able to apologize. Even though she was a freshman like me, she had a well-earned reputation throughout the whole school. Even the seniors knew about her. And I was just a bug on the windshield of her life.

"-and when you multiply that by pi, you get the correct answer," Mrs. Maureen went on and on about pi. Finally, a miracle! The bell rang and I tried to run out of the class the first one, but Joanna was already behind me.

"You got some nerve blowing us off yesterday," she said in a calm voice. I glanced up at her, while gathering my stuff.

"Um, yes about that. I totally forgot about it. Is there any chance we can do it today? I'm really sorry," I said back to her

"Not as sorry as you're going to be," she said with a smile.

"All right, that's enough Jo, we gotta go, we're late" said Allison ushering her out the door.

"I said I was sorry," I told them this time louder. Somehow I wasn't so scared of her, even though she was way taller than me.

"You will be," said Joanna and walked away from me.

"I'm really sorry if she got a little, um, rough here," said Allison to me and then she ran out after her. She seemed nice enough. But what was the big deal here anyway? I forgot, I apologized and why couldn't she let me off the hook? And what was all that nonsense about me being more sorry? Agh! Only then I realized that I forgot my history notes for the test in my locker. I quickly ran to my locker to get it. I set the combination and click, it opened. I grabbed the handle to pull it. But then I couldn't pull my hand back. My hand was stuck. Yea, someone had apparently glued the handle. I yanked my hand and it was glued shut. Damn. I looked like a moron. I was standing alone in the hallway, with my right hand glued to my locker door. Brilliant. So this was their little trick.


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