WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 74

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Posted: 17 years ago
i might not be able to do it today but ill try and get it done tomorrow hopefully.
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Posted: 17 years ago
alrighty arwa, will be waiting for it eagerly then 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Fab Part!! 👏
Especially the end. 😆
Please continue soon. 😳

Anjali

Edited by *angel94* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
josh and his plans specially the artificial rain 😆 😆
hoping ak will get back together very soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Fab Part!! 👏
Especially the end. 😆
Please continue soon. 😳

Anjali

thankyou

for appreciating

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part
josh and his plans specially the artificial rain 😆 😆
hoping ak will get back together very soon

thanks a lot

yeah Josh and his ideas are just funny.

hmm they'll get together pretty soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
so MSD......wen are u going to post the next part???
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey zahra right now its quite difficult to post a part evertday as there is a lot of preparations going on here plus plenty guests so i'll only be able to do an update once a week.

so please guys bear with me for the time being.
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Posted: 17 years ago
now i shud say 'BUSY MSD'.....hehhee
its ok di......btw preparations for wat????are u getting married???oh hello,i din receive invi card....... 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part hundred seven

Kripa went straight to her room and buried her face into the pillow and weeped 😭 her eyes out. Why did she let Angadcome so close to her and why did she feel good in his arms?

Kripa thought: I hate him 😡 nafrat hai mujhe ose, oske ehsaas se. I hate him... 😔 agar me osse nafrat kartee hu to me roh kyu rahee hu 😭 kya yeh mere dil me basee yaadein hai jo aasoo ban ke behrahe hai? 😡 kyu me yaad karahee hu on yaado ko jinhone mujhe dard ke ilawa kuch nahi diya?

She continues crying


Garewal house

Josh:
Are Angad 😛 kya karaha hai

Angad held Josh's arm around his neck really tight from the back nearly choking him

Angad:
tere ghatiya plan 😡 ka inaam de raha hu tujhe

Josh: Ab paani khatam hogaya to is me mera kya kasoor hai 😆

Angad: 😡 saale teree wajese aaj phirse Kripa mujhe ghalat samajh gayee. Tujhe to me...

Josh kept pleading to let him go but Angad was not prepared to do so

Aaliyah: (rushes in to rescue)
My God brother 😲 what are you doing?

Josh: 🤢 Aaliyah help!

she manages to free Josh out of Angad's grip

Aaliyah:
Kyu maar rahe ho is beechaare ko

Angad: Beechaara? 😡 iskee laaparwaahi kee wajese aaj puree garbar hogayee

Aaliyah; Come one give him some slack, ab ghalatiya to sab se hotee hai na. 😊 Anyways tell me ke Kripa ke saath aapkee baat huwee ke nahi?

Angad: (sighs and flops on the couch) Abhi bhi oske dil me mereliye pyaar hai lekin wo accept karna nahi chahtee. Sab kuch theek horaha tha jab yeh duffer (glares 😡 at Josh) ne sab kuch begaar diya

Josh: Maine kaha na I'm sorry 😛 baar baar tu mujhe blame kyu karaha hai

Angad: Abhi bata ta hu tujhe

He stands up to charge on Josh. Josh hides behind Aaliyah 😆 and she tries to hold Angad back

Aaliyah:
ab yeh aapas me jhagar na band karoge please

Angad just shrugs his shoulders iratesly and goes back to sit on the sofa

Angad:
😔 ab to teen din tak osse mulaaqaat nahi hogi kyu ke kal se Saumya bhaiya kee shaadi kee tayaari honewaali hai

Aaliyah: Oh come on Brother aaj jese humne Mishti banke ose park me bulaaya, osee tarha dubaara bula sakte hai

Angad: Nahi Aali 😒 is baar ose pata chaljaehga ke humne bulaaya hai. Pata nahi ab kya karunga mein 😔

Aaliyah: hmmm so far meree thesis yeh kehtee hai 😳 ke Kripa is Mishti se kaafi close hai or aapke or Kripa ke relationship me bhi oska influence kuch ziada hee hai. To pehle is Mishti ko apnee or keech na parega

Angad; Theek hai miss PHD 😛 tujhe jo karna hai kar per is waqt mujhe Kripa se milne ke ilawa kuch nahi sochna

He leaves

Josh:
Are Angad meree baat to sun

Aaliyah: Leave him alone right now Josh 😒 Is waqt brother kisee kee baat nahi sunenge. Abhi jo karna hai wo hame hee karna hai, chalo

Josh: ab kaha jaarahe hai 😕 is waqt?

Aaliyah: Mishti ke ghar

Josh: 😆 You must be joking

[Aaliyah: (glares at him) 😡 kya meree shakal dekh ke aisa lagta hai ke me mazaak karahee hu?

Josh: 😛 I guess not

Both leave together for Mishti's house

Mishti's house

Mishti:
Tum? 😲 yaha kya lene aayee ho? or tum Josh...

Aaliyah: Listen Mishti 😳 hum yaha tumse bohat zaroori baat karne aaye hai

Mishti: Lekin mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karnee 😒 so please leave.

Josh: Come on Mishti atleast listen

Mishti: Josh please mujhe kuch nahi sunna.Pehle to wo stupid Angad 😡 Kripa ka peecha karta tha or ab yeh (points towards Aaliyah) oska peecha karahee hai

Aaliyah: Dekho aisee baat nahi hai. Please atleast meree baat to suno

Mishti: Josh just take her and leave my house at once 😡 Just do it

She wasn't prepared to listen to anything Aaliyah was saying so both Josh and Aaliyah were forced to leave

Josh:
Dekha maine kaha tha ke is waqt Mishti se milna bekaar hai 😒

Aaliyah: 😍 she's such a loyal friend

Josh: kya? 😕

Aaliyah: Her loyalty towards Kripa shows 😃 how much she'll help us get brother and her together

Josh: Me jo kehraha hu wo tumne sunna nahi?

Aaliyah: Sunna bhi or samjha bhi per tumne shayad nahi sunaa jo maine kaha. 😳 osne hamare saath baat nahi kee kyu ke wo naraaz hai hamare saath. Ab oske saath to humne aisa kuch nahi kiya per kyu ke wo Kripa kee acchi dost hai to hum oske bhi dushman hogaye

Josh: Oh 😛 i see ab kya karenge?

Aaliyah: Filhaal to hum ghar jaarahe hai phir dekhte hai ke kya karna hai

Later at night Angad, Manan and Josh went to the night club and were enjoying themselves when it had to be spoiled.

Akshat arrived there with his gang full of leeching boys and girls who were nothing more than groupies.

Akshat:
Jaante ho Rocky kuch logo kee kismat hee kharaab hotee hai. Jo cheez onkee pohoch se dhoore hoti hai oske peeche hee bhaaga karte hai

Angad ignored Akshat, turned around and continued drinking

Rocky came and stood next to Akshat joining in deriding about Angad

Rocky:
sahi kaha tumne kuch log to hote hee hai besharam. Jaha onko nahi jaana chaheeye, hamesha wahi jaaenge

Josh was going to go and charge on them but Angad put his hand on his shoulder to stop him 😒 He nodded at him and just let it go

Akshat:
Kya huwa Angad 😛 darr gaye?

Angad gave him a mean look 😡

Angad:
Oh God please don't stare at me 😛 Me darr gaya Angad (pretends to hide behind Rocky whilst others chuckled 😆) Please mujhe darrao mat Angad please

Angad was loosing his temper but he controlled it and just sat there drinking his drink

Akshat:
sach baat to yeh hai Angad 😳 that you've always been afraid of me, ke kahi me aake tereekoi cheez cheen na loo. Lekin aaj maine tujhse wo sab kuch cheen liya 😃 Your popularity, your goodness or Kripa bhi

Angad's nostrils flarred 😡 and he had an adrenaline rush due to which he stood up and grabbed Akshat's collar

Akshat:
Sach hamesha chubta hee hai or sach yahi hai ke tu ab kuch bhi nahi. College me to teree position down ho hee gayee hai or ab Kripa to tujhe kabhi nahi milne waali to meree salaah maan, chup chaap waapis Shimla laut ja. Kyu ke yaha pe tu maane ya na maane rehto tu raha hai mere hee tukro pe

Angad gradually released his collar

Akshat:
Yeh mat bhoolna Angad ke jis ghar me tu reh raha hai wo mera hai. Waha ka khaana peena, rehen sehen sab kuch meree diyee huwee bheek hai tujhe, 😡 warna teree itnee aukaat kaha. Teree behen ne mere bhai se shaadi kee hai to iska matlab yeh nahi ke tu hamaree barabari kare. Sach baat to yeh hai that you'll always remain a lower status than us

Angad at first was really angry 😡 but then to everyone's surprise 😲 he began laughing out loud 😆

Angad:
Do take ka kaam to tune kiya hai Akshat. Ab mujhe yrh nahi malum ke mujhe teree is baat pe ghussa karna chaheeye ya phir hasna 😆 chaheeye. Or rahi baat meree aukaat kee 😡 to phir let me tell you my status is way above your reach kyu ke izaatdaar hone ke liye izzat kamanee partee hai. Tere jaise paiso kee numaeish nahi.

Akshat: Paiso se hee izzat hotee hai or paiso se hee sab kuch haasil hota hai

Angad: Paiso se tum sirf cheez khareed sakoge, pyaar, rishte aur dost kabhi nahi 😒

Akshat: Bohat ghamund hai na tujhe apne aap pe 😡 Aakhir tere paas aisa hai hee kya jo tu mujhe challenge karaha hai

Angad smirked 😊 put his galss down on the counter then he put is arms around both Josh and Manan's shoulders. Then he began singing

Angad:
Tum jo phirte ho lambhi caaro me
rehte ho mehlo se makaano me
tum bura kehte ho humko yaaro
jhaaklo, apne gare baalo me
Phir sawaal, or jawaab karlo tum


Claps hs hands

Angad:
aaj hamse hisaab karlo tum

He stood in front of Akshat and rolled his tongue in his cheek. Then he began going round him.

Angad:
Kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamare haath hai
Kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamare haath hai
(pointed towards everyone)
Saath hai dunya tumhaare
Saath hai dunya tumhaare
dil hamare saath hai


His friends join in with him- Kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamare haath hai

Angad: hai saath hai dunya tumhaare dil hamare saath hai

Chorus: Saath hai dunya tumhaare dil hamare saath hai

Angad: kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamare haath hai

Akshat shrugged Angad off and left with his gang towards a table. Angad followed and bent down resting his elbows on the table.

Angad:
tumne khushiya khareedee hai bazaar mein
humne rangineeya paayee hai pyaar me


Chorus: paayee hai pyaar me
paayee hai pyaar me


Angad: tumko jo sukh te bikhte hai saare mile
humko yaari milee, dost pyaare mile
(hugged all his friends)

Chorus:
dost pyaare mile
dost pyaare mile


Angad: tumko paisa mila to yeh andaaz hai
humko apne hee upar magar naaz hai
humko apne hee upar magar naaz hai


Chorus: humko apne hee upar magar naaz hai

Angad: tum chale to saath yeh darr hai ke tum loot jaoge

Chorus: tum chale to saath yeh darr hai ke tum loot jaoge

Angad: hum chale to saath umeedo kee ek baraat hai

He forms a train with people following behind him

Chorus:
hum chale to saath umeedo kee ek baraat hai

Angad: kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamare haath hai

Akshat stands and turns Angad towards him.

Akshat:
Tumne maana ke tum lootere ho
per bura humko kehte rehte ho
Hum bure kyu hai tum bhale kyu ho
tum jo kehte ho kyu wo kehte ho


Angad:(chuckled and sat up onto the bar counter) Tum sharafat ke parde ke peeche chupe
so gunaho kee mehfil sajaate rahe


chorus: sajaate rahe
sajaate rahe


Angad: humne jo bhi kiya saaf khul ke kiya
hum hai kya hum yeh sab ko batate rahe


Chorus: batate rahe
batate rahe


In between Angad was referring to what Akshat did with Simmone to seperate him and Kripa. He challenged him that he knows everything and won't let him go easily

Angad:
tumne jo bhi kiya jurm hai wo bara
humne to wo kiya hai jo karna para
humne to wo kiya hai jo karna para


Chorus: humne to wo kiya hai jo karna para
humne to wo kiya hai jo karna para


Angad: hai humne jo bhi hai kiya wo din dhahare hai kiya

Chorus: hai humne jo bhi hai kiya wo din dhahare hai kiya

Angad: tumne sab kuch hai kiya jab chaayee kaali raat hai

Chorus: tumne sab kuch hai kiya jab chaayee kaali raat hai

Angad: kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamaare haath hai
hai
kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamaare haath hai
Saath hai dunya tumhaare
dil hamare saath hai
Saath hai dunya tumhaare
dil hamare saath hai
kuch tumhaare haath hai or kuch hamaare haath hai
hai


Josh and Manan had joined in with Angad and now all of them were making fun of Akshat and his group. Eventually forcing them to leave the club. The three gave each other high fives 👍🏼

Next day Parashar house

The whole house was being decorated and everyone were busy in the wedding preparations. Saumya stepped out of his room and came to the stairs and saw everything. These days were meant to be his happiest 😃 days but he wasn't happy. He was sad 😔, sad because the one person he soully wanted to be part of his happiness wasn't present and probably never will be. He remembered how things were completely different one year back...

FLASHBACK


Saumya was busy at Garewal house making sure all the decorations were done perfectly

Sujal:
Are Saumya tu yeh sab kyu karaha hai?

Saumya: kyu ke 😊 teree shaadi hai or isme saara kaam me hee karunga

Sujal; Ha per yeh sab tujhe karne kee koi zaroorat nahi 😒

Saumya: (jumped off the stool) Zaroorat or na zaroorat kee baat mat kar mujhse. Mere bhai kee shaadi 😃 koi aisee waisee nahi hai. Puree dunya ko dikhaana hai ke shaadi ho to aisee

Sujal: (puts arm on Saumya's shoulder) Itna pyaar karta hai mujhse?

Saumya: Bilkul aakhir tu hee to hai jiskee wajese main hoon

Sujal: hmm to phir mister 😛 teree shaadi kee tayaari bhi me hee karunga

Saumya: Of course, shuroo se lekar aakhir tak tujhe hee sambhaalna hai meree her choti choti cheez. Yaad rakhna Sujal tere bina mera her kaam adhura hai, meree shaadi bhi

END OF FLASHBACK


He wiped off a trickle of tear which appeared on his cheek and watched his mother busily giving orders to everyone. All of a sudden he imagined 😍 Sujal in her place doing the exact same thing. Then Sujal stared at him abd gave him a cute smile 😊 Saumya retaliated back with a smile 😊 and a wave

Kamya:
Saumya! 😕 Saumya!

He snapped out and came back to reality and saw that Sujal wasn't anywhere and his mother was calling him.

Kamya:
Saumya kabse bula rahi hu tujhe

Saumya: ha wo mama wo aise...

kamya: kya baat hai 😔 teree tabiyat kuch theek nahi lagrahi

Saumya: kuch nahi mama wo bus halka sa ser dard tha

Kamya: Tu jaake aaraam kar or wese bhi tujhe koi kaam nahi karna hai. Jaa.

He obeyed her and went back to his room. As soon as he entered his cell rang.

Saumya:
Hello?

Pari: Shaadi kee kya baat hogayee 😛 aap to hame bhool hee gaye

Saumya: Pari tum yeh...😕

Pari: 😆 Are baba me to mazaak karahee thee or aap hai ke serious hogaye

Saumya: nahi Pari wo bus...😔 kuch nahi

Pari: kya huwa? aap itna upset sound karahe hai?

Saumya: kuch nahi Pari 😒 bus sar me thora dard hai or kuch nahi

Pari: Samajh gayee 😳 me jaantee hu kya problem hai or me yeh bhi jaantee hu ke aap mujhe phone pe kuch nahi bataenge

Saumya: Ab to sirf tum hi ho jo mujhe mujhse ziada samajh tee ho. Me milna chahta hu tumse

Pari: Saumya teen din baad hamaree shaadi hai 😛 or aap mujhse milna chahte hai. kese hoga yeh? Mera to ghar ke bahaar jaana bandh hai

Saumya: Me to waha aasakta hu na. Dekho aaj mehndi kee rasam hai to oske baad me tumse milne aaoonga

Pari: Paagal hogaye hai 😲 aap? Agar Danima ne aapko mere saat mere ghar me dekh liya to phir hum dono kee to chutti 😛

Saumya: Mere saath itne saal rehke abhi bhi darr ti ho? Bhool gayee humne isse bhi ziada kuch kiya hai to phir is me kya hai. Me kuch nahi jaanta 😳 mujhe tumse milna hai to bus aaj raat me aaraha hu or koi mujhe nahi roke sakta

Pari: aapse to behas karna bekaar hai

Both cut the phone

Garewal house

Angad:
Aaj raat me waha jaaraha hu

Aaliyah: Are you mad 😲 brother? Shair ke gufa me jaake khud khushi karne ka iraada hai kya?

Angad:Pyaar me koi kisee se nahi darr ta. Shair to kya, me haathi takse larne ko tayaar hu

Aaliyah: Josh me aake baat mat karo 😳 Is waqt hosh ka kaam hai

Angad: Abhi abhi to hosh me aaya hu 😊 ab me peeche nahi hath ne waala

Aaliyah: This is not the right time 😒 Aap agar waha jaaenge to bohot baree garbar hojaehgee or sabse baree garbar hai Saumya bhaiya 😲

Angad: Tu shayad bhool rahee hai ke aaj raat ko mehndi hai to sab log Thaapar house pe honge or Saumya bhaiya nahi honge. itnee bheere hogi waha ke koun dekhega mujhe

Aaliyah: Per why can't you wait?

Angad: [;x] kyu ke wo Akshat ka baccha bhi waha jaane waala hai. isse pehle ke wo Kripa ko or koi bhi ultee pattee paraeh me ose sab kuch bata doonga. or ose sunna hee hoga 😳

Aaliyah: but...

Angad: (raised his ahnd to shun her) Mujhe osse milna hai to bus. aaj raat me jaaraha hu or koi mujhe nahi roke sakta

Aaliyah: Aapse to behas karna bekaar hai.

End of part.




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