WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 72

Originally posted by: arwa72

As usual I love your hindi dialogues and the realism you showed with the repetitions to display certain emotions such as Angad when he was angry.- thanks for appreciating that as im not that gud at Hindi but i do try sometimes and get the right words.

Are you joking Arwa? Then you must watch a lot of movies😛 You're one of the most "shud" hindi writers on the FF section!😃

Congratz on the century!😳

nice part
luved angad and aaliya's relationship

Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

Are you joking Arwa? Then you must watch a lot of movies😛 You're one of the most "shud" hindi writers on the FF section!😃

Congratz on the century!😳

you think so then i guess i do watch a lot of movies.

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice part
luved angad and aaliya's relationship

thanks for appreciating.

hey MSD.........good part........now there is a ray of hope.............
i was expecting for a high point today...............but nothing gr8 happen in this epi......except aaliyah and kripa's convo..........hope next part will be full of dhoom............something good happens in it..................
and haan plz post saumya-pari's parts na...........i m missing my saumya very much............i love the way u write their parts.............

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey MSD.........good part........now there is a ray of hope.............
i was expecting for a high point today...............but nothing gr8 happen in this epi......except aaliyah and kripa's convo..........hope next part will be full of dhoom............something good happens in it..................
and haan plz post saumya-pari's parts na...........i m missing my saumya very much............i love the way u write their parts.............

hey Zahra thanks as always

hmmm so u want more dhoom, well i thought i had some drama in this but i guess i'll need to notch it up a bit.

okays then i'll definitely try and make next part with dhoom and masti

Saumya and Pari scenes wud cum again but for now i'm concentrating on AK.

all the best for ur next parts MSD...hope the coming parts will be of dhoom n masti.......btw i also like AK scenes.woh bhi chalega.till than will wait for SP's cute scenes........ 😃

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

all the best for ur next parts MSD...hope the coming parts will be of dhoom n masti.......btw i also like AK scenes.woh bhi chalega.till than will wait for SP's cute scenes........ 😃

thanks zahra

yeah i'm working on it at the moment let's see if i can please u all.

hi MSD,
when are u going to post the next part??
cant wait...........plz do it at the earliest....

Part hundred six

Aaliyah: Why aeren't you ready yet?

Angad: 😕 kaha jaane ke liye?

Aaliyah: offo college or kaha

Angad: Aali tumhe shayad yaad nahi 😛 per mujhe suspend kardiya gaya hai

Aaliyah: Brother tumhe bhi shayad yaad nahi ke maine kaha tha ke principal se baat ho chukee hai. 😊 Now you just need to go and apologize

Angad: jab ghalati meri hai hee nahi 😒 to phir me maafi kyu maangu?

Aaliyah: sawaal sahi ya ghalat ka nahi hai. The question is of you returning back so this is the only way

Angad: I don't think so

he turns away from her

Aaliyah: theek hai 😳 to phir bhool jao

Angad: Kya bhool jao?

Aaliyah: Pyaar ko bhool jao

Angad: kiske pyaar ko?

Aaliyah: (gritted teeth) 😡 tumne jo Kripa se pyaar kiya ose bhool jao

Angad: 😡 you think this is some kind of joke?

Aaliyah: For you it is. 😔 brother samajh ne kee koshish karo that you need to go back in order to talk to Kripa. Collge hee ek aisee jaga hai jaha tum ose khul ke milsakte ho or wo tumhe roke bhi nahi sakti. 😳 Now stop being the stubborn dufous you are and get your ass down to college.

Angad: Wese tu apna college chore ke yaha kya karahee hai?

Aaliyah: This is more important. 😊 Brother tum jaante ho maine tumhaaree khushi hamesha apni khushi ke aage rakhee hai. To is baar to yeh tumhaaree zindagee ka sawaal hai

Angad: (holds her hand) 😊 Thanks Aali tune hamesha meree bohat madad kee hai

Aaliyah: ha, ha 😛 tum bhi kuch kam nahi. oske badle me tumne bhi to hamesha meree madad kee hai

Angad: You've always deserved it (pinched 😵 her cheek)

Aaliyah: Okay okay ab chalo jaldi se tayaar hojao warna dair hojaaehgee.

Angad: Wait a minute 🤔 what did you tell dad?

Aaliyah: Brother 😛 hum dono jo kuch bhi karte hai do we tell dad?

Angad: 😔 ek din sach me marwaaehgee tu

Aaliyah: Wo tab kee baat hai but for now come on we're getting late

Angad; tu bhi saath aarahee hai 😕

Aaliyah: ha

Angad: Lekin tu to yaha...

Aaliyah: Kyu 😳 agar wo Akshat waha aasakta hai to phir me kyu nahi? Don't worry brother I'm just going to be there for moral support 😃

He makes his way towards the bathroom blindly and Roshan runs into him holding a toy gun.

Angad: Woah 😲 My God Roshan you could have given me a heart attack

Roshan; 😆 ha ha ha ha maine pakarliya, maine pakarliya

Mahek: Roshan! 😳 Roshan kaha gaya?

Roshan goes and hides behind Angad but Mahek catches him and he squeals.

Mahek: Badmaash 😡 chal jaldi nahake tayaar hona hai

Roshan: nai, nai, nai

Mahek: Chalo Roshan 😡 mujhe ziada tang mat kar

Roshan: Mamu bachao, mamu bachao

Angad: hey, hey Mahek come on na ab 😒 ab ise itna force kyu karahee ho?

Mahek: Kyu ke har baar aisee hee zidd karta hai. 😳 ab chalo Roshan

He squealed 😲 and kept running away from Mahek clinging onto Angad

Angad: okay, okay. Ek kaam karte hai 😊 (picks Roshan up) kyu na hum dono aaj saath me nahate hai. 😃 khoob masti karenge

Roshan: Sacchi 😃

Angad nodded

Roshan: Yeaaaaaahhhhhhh! chalo

Angad pretends Roshan is an aeroplane and zooms around with him towards the bathroom. both Mahek and Aaliyah smile 😊😊 at their sweet bond.

College

Everyone were in the canteen as it was lunch.
Kripa and Mishti sat on one table and on the table across from them sat Angad, Aaliyah Josh and Manan.

Angad: 😔 pure din osne mujhe ek bhi moka nahi diya osse baat karne ka

Aaliyah: Come on Brother, abhi se aise hojaohge to phir aage kya hoga?

Angad: Mujhe nahi lagta ab wo mujhse koi bhi rishta rakh na chahtee hai 😒

Aaliyah looked over at Kripa's table and saw her turning her gaze away. She smiled 😊 to herself as she knew Kripa was staring at them. She went closer to Angad and wrapped her arm around his shoulder, just to see her reaction.

Aaliyah: Don't worry, everything will be alright

Kripa saw how close Aaliyah was with Angad and from her side it looked like she was kissing him. She didn't know why but she didn't like it

Kripa thought: wo chaahe jiske saath bhi ho 😡 mujhe kya? Jab mujhe oskee koi parwaa nahi to phir kyu mujhe bura lagraha hai 😔

Mishti: Kripa? 😛 earth to Kripa (clicked her fingers in front of her)

She snapped out and turned away from looking at Angad and concentrated on the table, Mishti turned around and saw Angad and Aaliyah together and frowned 😔

Mishti: to aakhir yeh ***** 😡 osse paane me kaam yaab hogayee

Kripa: 😕 kiskee baat karahee hai tu

Mishti: Kripa anjaan banne kee koi zaroorat nahi kyu ke me jaantee hu tu kabse Angad ko dekhrahee thee. Dekha kese ose teree koi parwa nahi to phir bhi kyu tu oskee wajese pareshaan hai?

Kripa: 😒 Mujhe kyu pareshaani hogi? I don't care what he does 😡

Just then her gaze falls on Angad again who apparently is enjoying himself with Aaliyah and his friends. She had been so use to getting attention from him that now his ignorance was making her very unhappy 😔 She couldn't take it anymore so she got up really hot headed 😡 and began walking away when all of a sudden she falls and twists her ankle. she cries out with pain and struggles to get up when one hand comes forward. She stares at it and then at the person who it belonged to and burns with anger 😡 as it's none other than Angad.

Just then another hand comes forward and immediately Angad's blood boils 😡😡 Kripa ponders between both hands and then gladly accepts the other hand as it belonged to Akshat. She stood up and Angad turned his open palm into a tight fist refraining himself from attacking Akshat

On the other hand Akshat looks at Kripa with concern and gives her support to walk out by holding her hand.

Kripa: thanks

Akshat: 😒 hey we're friends to us me no thankyou okay

both smile 😊 and walk off. Angad looks over with jealous 😡 eyes and he was going to charge on Akshat but Aaliyah and Josh come to him on time and prevent him from doing anything of the sort.

Garewal House

Mahek: yeh aap ne kya kardiya di? 😒 Mujhe to laga tha ke Saumya bhaiya ke liye aapkee jo nafrat hai wo itnee baree nahi hai or ek din aap onhe zaroor maaf kardegee 😔 lekin aap ne to...

Kashish: Mahek maine jo bhi kiya wo Sujal ke liye kiya hai. Oskee khushi ke liye.

Mahek: nahi di 😒 aapne
Sujal bhaiya kee khushi ke liye kuch bhi nahi kiya. Agar aapko unkee khushi kee thori bhi parwa hotee to phir aap Saumya bhaiya ke saat aisa nahi kartee

Kashish: Saumya ko oske kiye kee saza milee hai 😡 Mahek tum nahi jaantee ke osne kya kiya hai 😔 osee kee wajese Sujal ka...

Mahek: 😔 wo ek haadsa tha di koi sochi samjhi saazish nahi. Jab Sujal bhaiya ne onse koi shikayat nahi kee to phir aap kyu?

Kashish: Sujal kee aakho pe Saumya kee jhootee dosti kee patti bandhee thee 😳 aur waqt aagaya tha ke me ose hatadu isse pehle ke
Saumya koi aur nuksaan kare 😡

Mahek: Nuksaan to aapne kiya hai di. Aapne do aise dosto ko alag kiya hai jo ek dusre kee jaan the 😔 ek dusre kee parchai the. Meree baat yaad rakhna di ke pehle to thori dhoori huwi thee aapke or Sujal bhaiya ke beech lekin ab to aap onko puree tarhaase khodegee.

Kashish: 😡😡 MAHEK!!!! (was going to slap her but stops midway)

Mahek: Sacchai hamesha karwee hee lagtee hai di. Aaj aap pe is baat ka koi asar nahi horaha lekin ek din aap zaroor is baat ko samjhengee

She leaves Kashish alone

Parashar house

At home Akshat drops Kripa near her room and is glad that no one else is at home.

Akshat: Me koi dawa laga doo?

Kripa; nahi 😒 it's okay. Me ab theek hu. Okay bye.

Akshat: (hesitant to leave) Kripa are you sure?

Kripa: Yes I am.

Akshat: (helpless) okay, see you. 😊 take care.

As she disappears inside her room he develops an evil grin 😈 on his face

Akshat thought: aakhir me titli jaal me phas hee gayee

Garewal house

Angad: 😡 I'm going to kill that ******* 🤬

Josh: Calm down Angad warna fiada nahi hoga

Angad: Fiada? 😡 mujhe to yaha sirf nuksaan hee nuksaan nazar aaraha hai 😡

Aaliyah: Wo isliye kyu ke tum wo nahi dekhrahe jo hum dekhrahe hai

Angad: Oh yeah and whats that

Aaliyah: Sit down (pushes him back on the sofa) Dekho brother is waqt
Kripa aisee haalat me hai jahape ose khud samjh me nahi aaraha ke kya sahi hai or kya ghalat. Aaj jo canteen me huwa osse wo saaf zaahir hai

Angad raises his eyebrows 😕 in front of Aaliyah as he didn't know what she was on about

Aaliyah: When I was talking to you she had her eyes only on you and her expressions clearly showed that she didn't like me being close to you

Angad: Kya? 😲 Per Aaliyah tum meree behen ho

Aaliyah: 😛 ha per ose yeh pata nahi

Angad: Mujhe aisa kyu lagraha hai ke tum dono ne kuch garbar waala kaam kiya hai

Josh:Don't look at me man 😛 kyu ke Aaliyah ne hee sab kuch kiya hai

Aaliyah: Forget what i did. abhi baat yeh hai ke osse bardaasht nahi huwa ke tum kisee or larki ke saat the. osee ghusse me aake wo uth ke chalee gayee or phir...

Angad: 😔 ose jore kee chote lagayee. pata nahi kitna dard horaha hoga ose

Aaliyah: Don't worry brother 😊 wo theek hee hogi. Khair ab yeh baat to hai ke she's jealous 👍🏼

Angad: To iska matlab kya?

Aaliyah: Iska matlab yeh ke she still loves you 😃 per kyu ke abhi bhi sacchai per se parda nahi hata she's in a dilemma 🤔

Josh: or tumhe yeh sab sirf ek nazar me samajh me aagaya?

Aaliyah: Josh darling 😎 you're looking at an expert in this field ⭐️

Angad: yeah yeah 😛 ab khud kee shekhee maarna band kar or yeh bata ke ab aage kya karna hai

The T.V was on and Josh was seeing a movie where the hero heroine were standing and all of sudden thunder strucks amd she clings onto him out of fear. The closeness brings them together

Josh: Perfect! 😃 👍🏼

Angad/Aaliyah: What?

Josh: Pehle to hame yeh test karna hai ke Kripa kya sach much me abhi bhi Angad se pyaar kartee hai. to iske liye onkee ek mulaaqaat karanee zarooree hai jahape koi or na ho

Angad: 😔 per yeh kese hoga?

Josh: Aaj shaam ko hum ose Shivaji Park me bulaaenge or waha pe...

Angad: or tumhe lagta hai ke tum kahoge or wo aajaehgee 😛

Aaliyah: Actually brother Josh has a good idea 😊 ose bulaane ka solution bhi hai mere paas. Tum bas osse milne kee tayaari karo.

All three of them discuss of how they'll call her and then what they'll do

Parashar house

Kripa receives a call from Mishti

Mishti: Kripa tera pair kesa hai?

Kripa: me theek hu ab, sirf halkee see moch hai

Mishti: Good 😊 kyu ke tu thoree dair me mujhe Shivaji park me milrahee hai

Kripa: kyu? 😔 Mishti please mujhe kahi jaane ka mann nahi, tujhe yaha aana hai to aaja or wese bhi kal se mujhe shaadi kee tayaari karnee hai

Mishti: kal karnee hai 😛 to aaj to tu aa sakti hai. Me koi excuse nahi sunoongee. Tu mujhe milrahee hai to bus 😳

Kripa as usual didn't have a choice so she got ready soon and made her way downstairs.

Kamya: Kripa kaha jaarahee ho?

Kripa: Wo mama Mishti bhi na ek baar kuch thaan leti hai to karke rehtee hai. Ab osne Shivaji park me bulaaya hai or agar me nahi gayee to pura ghar sir pe uthaalegee

Kamya: theek hai jao per jaldi waapas aajaana

Shivaji Park

Kripa arrived in the spot Mishti told her to come and looked around for her but couldn't find her. Just then the hairs at the back of her neck stood up which tensed her up 😲 She felt his presence and became afraid as to what will happen now.

Even when she wasn't looking she could feel him walking towards her from the back. Her heartbeats ❤️ increased creating havoc in her chest and it felt as if it would burst. Why was he here? When he walked around her and came in front she turned away and walked

Angad: Kripa please ruko 😔 mujhe tumse baat karnee hai

Kripa: Maine pehle bhi kaha tha 😡 ke ab hamare beech kuch bhi kehne sunne ko nahi bacha

Angad: Kripa me jaanta hu ke aaj bhi tum mujhse naraaz ho 😔 kyu ke maine jo kiya wo sarasar maafi ke laayak nahi lekin ab mujhe meree ghalati ka ehsaas hogaya hai. Tumhaaree ehmeeyat mujhe samajh me aagayee hai

Kripa: Jab tumhaare paas me dil leke aayee thee tub to tumne ose behrehmee se thukradiya 😡 mere pyaar ko gaali dee or phir mere saat 😭 Tumne jo mere saath kiya oske liye me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karsakti. Kabhi nahi 😒

Angad: Meree baat to sun saktee ho na. Kripa jo bhi huwa osme meree puree ghalati nahi thi 😒 wo haalaat hee kuch logo ne hamare aas paas aise khare kardiye the jiskee wajese maine wo qadam uthaaya

Kripa: Kitna asaan hai na 😭 tumhaare liye yeh sab kehna. Is me to sirf har taraf se meree haar huwee hai, maine hee sab kuch khoya hai lekin ab bus 😡 me dubara tum jese insaan pe vishwaas nahi karsakti

Angad: Me jaanta hu Kripa tum aaj bhi mujhse utna hee pyaar kartee ho

Just then it starts raining

Kripa: Tum pyaar ke baare me kya jaanoge Angad kyu ke tumne to wo shabd kee kabhi izzat hee nahi kee. 😔 wo tumhaare liye sirf lafz ke ilawa kuch nahi

Angad: ab mujhe iske mayeene samajh me aagaye hai Kripa (comes closer to her and makes her stare into his eyes)

She stared at him 😍 with water dripping down his hair onto his face giving him a really sultry look. No matter how much she tried she still found the man deadly gorgeous. Then she cursed herself 😡 for going down that forbidden lane again.

Angad: (held her wet hand) Batao mujhe Kripa ke aaj bhi jab me tumhe chootha hu to tumhe kuch nahi hota

Kripa: nahi hota 😒

Angad: (lightly kisses her fingers) ke aaj bhi jab me tumhe choomta hu, tumhe kuch nahi hota

Kripa: nahi hota

She was slowly melting as the proximity increased between them. Her eyes were closed. Just then loud thunder struck due to which she clung onto Angad very tight out of fright. At first he was surprised 😲 and hesitated to hold her from the back but when he saw she wasn't letting go he gradually wrapped 🤗 his arms around her and burried his face in the curve of her neck.

Just then reality struck her and she realised what she was doing so she sprang apart from him as if lightning had struck her. Both of them stared 😍😍 at each other with their emotions in turmoil. All of a sudden the rain stopped which made Kripa doubt the whole situation

Angad; Kya huwa? 😕

Josh; (from up a two storey building) kya yaar tankee khaalee hogayee

Angad began chuckling 😆 but then when he saw Kripa's outraged 😲😡 expression he stopped.

Kripa: 😡 to yeh sab tumhaara drama tha?

Angad: Kripa let me explain wo...

Kripa: kya karne kee koshish karahe the tum? 😡 😡 Phirse mera mazaak banane kee koshish. Gosh you can stoop so low

Angad:Aisa nahi hai Kripa 😒 please meree baat sunno wo...

Kripa: enough! 😡 (points finger at him) You disgust me Angad Khanna 🤢 Just leave me alone.

She runs away from there. Angad is upset 😔 about everything then it turns into anger 😡 when he looks at Josh on the roof.

Angad: You better start running kyu ke aaj me tujhe nahi chorunga 😆

Josh becomes worried so began running away 😆 as Angad always did what he said.

End of part.