WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 76

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Posted: 17 years ago
hellow MSD,
u said tht angad will go to thapar house but than its very risky na.if some1 sees him it will create a problem.
bichaara angad.bahut maar padegi.koi isse bournvita pilado.usse iski zarurat hai. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hellow MSD,
u said tht angad will go to thapar house but than its very risky na.if some1 sees him it will create a problem.
bichaara angad.bahut maar padegi.koi isse bournvita pilado.usse iski zarurat hai. 😆



hehehehehehehehehehehehehe

maar to pare gee lekin itnee bhi buree nahi.

i think ill appoint u to do that.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hello MSD,
i wud love to do that,chal now i m also going to thapar house to make angad drink bournvita hehehehehehehehehe...................
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys im really sorry i havent posted a new part for a long time but ive really been busy with the weddding preps.

well i guess the following week i wont be able to post either as i'll be busy the whole week in the wedding but hopefullu i'll be free by Friday so i'll try and post it till then

but till then please bear with my tardiness.
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Posted: 17 years ago
chhhhhiiiii MSD,wat is this???
chalo koi baat nahi,few more days,but plz try to post as early as possible...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
will be waiting till you update, but plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi MSD,
where are u??
u said tht by friday u will post the part???
its wednesday and no epi.....
yeh toh bahut na insaafi hai re
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Posted: 17 years ago

sorry guys i had written the full part yesterday but it got deleted by listake so ill have to write it all over again so hopefully it will be done today.

sorry for keeping u all waiting.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh goodness, that must be so frustrating! Try auto-recovery if you wrote it in word. And don't worry about posting today, take your time!🥰
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Posted: 17 years ago
part hundred eight
Thaapar house
the whole house was hustling and bustling with women from all over the neighbourhood. There was singing and dancing and fun. Pari was still upstairs getting ready. Angad stood outside the house leaning on his car, waiting for Kripa to arrive. He had been there since the ceremony began so he was aware of that Kripa hadn't come yet. His plan was to grab hold of her as soon as she came and take her into a private corner and force her to listen to everything.
Angad thought: aaj Kripa tumhe meree baat sunnee hee paregee
Just then a few more cars arrived outside the house and he recognised them. They were from Parashar house and he wished Kripa was in one of them.
He stood there watching everyone come out of the car. He saw a couple of women step out with baskets and then there was Kamya but where was she?
His eyes did a quick google search and finally she emerged out of the third car. When he saw her he froze as she looked completely minblowing in an off white embellished pant suit. Her georgette top was embroidered in thread, stones and sequins around the neck, sleeves and front. Never before had she looked that stunning.
Angad was so busy in staring at her that unfortunately he didn't realise that she already had walked into the house and he missed his oppurtunity of talking to her. He cursed himself under his breath and then began thinking of what to do and how to get into the house. Just then he noticed a few delivery guys carrying fruit baskets inside the house.
Angad: BINGO!
Kripa and Kamya entered the house with baskets of mehndi and just then Pari came downstairs all dressed up nicely and sat down on the decorated corner and then the ceremony began with Kamya applying the first mehndi of shagun.
Everything made Kripa teary because she had always imagined she had always imagined her wedding in the same manner and now she knew it was never going to be possible. Even if she did get married she won't be as happy as she always imagined herself to be. She was still busy in her thoughts when she applied mehndi on Pari's hand.
Pari: Kya soch rahee hai
Kripa: (snapping out) kuch nahi bus yuhi
Pari: Me jaantee hu tu kya soch rahee hai. Fikar mat kar bohat jald tere haatho me bhi aisee mehndi lagaoongi me
Kripa: Bhabhi, khulee aakhose sapne dekhna band kardiya hai maine. Ab mujhe aisee koi khwaish nahi
Pari felt sad by her thoughts but didn't feel like probing the matter further so she remained silent whilst Kripa finished apllying the mehndi on the rest of her hand.
Lady 1: Chalo Kripa ek pyaara sa geet sunado. Mehfil ko tumhe hee jamanee hai
Kripa: I'm sorry per mujhse gaa nahi jaaehga
Lady 2: are come on Kripa. khushi ke moke per yu mooh latka ke kyu bethee hai. chal or kuch dhamaal kar.
Kripa: mujhse nahi hoga
Everyone keeps pleading Kripa whilst she clearly refuses but then Pari insists that she goes and sings for her. She relunctantly agrees and goes and sits in between other ladies. The music starts and some begin dancing. Kripa begins singing.
Kripa: Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana
Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana
Sab ki baaraatein aayi

Angad had managed to come inside dressed as a fruit basket guy and now was hiding behind a pillar after hearing her voice. All her pain and hurt was transfused into him too.
Kripa: Chaaha tha maine, socha tha maine
Kya kya the armaan dil nadaan ke
Aankhon mein aansu aaye
Ho, aankhon mein aansu aaye par koi na aaya
Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana
Sab ki baaraatein aayi

She remembers her encounters with Angad and her eyes well up.

Kripa: In aankhon mein thi ek raat saji
Haathon mein kabhi choodi si baji
Par aankh khuli to aaya nazar na raat saji na choodi baji

Angad is also crying remembering all the harshness he had applied on Kripa
Kripa: Mera toota tha dil, uski jhankar thi
Saara voh rang tha mere khoone dil ka
Yeh to hai rona dil ka
Haan, yeh to hai rona dil ka kaahe ka taraana
Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana
Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana
Sab ki baaraatein aayi
By the end of the verse she couldn't hold it back any longer and her silent sobs turned into loud violent ones and she just stood up and rushed out of the hall. everyone stopped and stared after her not knowing what happened to her and why. Kamya was also perplexed and shot a curious look at Pari who didn't know what to tell her. She just assurred with her eyes that don't worry everything is fine. Pari wanted to go after Kripa but she was helpless as mehndi was being applied on her feet.
Angad decided to follow her towards the room.
Kripa ran inside of the rooms and fell onto her knees and burst into tears. They were hurtful tears
Kripa: Why did you do this to me Angad? Why? kyu dee mujhe itnee baree saza?
Angad: Saza to mujhe milee hai Kripa
She became stunned by his voice and turned around with whiplash. then her sorrow turned into fury
Kripa: Tum yaha kya karahe ho
Angad: Me tumse milne aaya hu Kripa. Tumse yeh kehne aaya hu ke...
Kripa: Mujhe tumse kuch nahi sunna
Angad: Kripa please (walks towards her)
Kripa: Mere paas mat aana (steps back) isse pehle ke me shore machao, chale jao yahase
Angad: Kripa please meree baat sunno
Kripa: Maine kaha chalejao. Ab tumhaaree koi bhi baat nahi sunni mujhe
Angad: Sunna parega tumhe samjhi tum, sunna parega
She decided to ignore him and charge out of the room in anger but he held onto her arms and forcibly pushed her against the wall and crushed his weight against her, causing her to wince out in pain.
Angad: aaj me apni baat tumse keh bina nahi janewala
Kripa: aaaw Angad you're hurting me. Jaane do mujhe
He realises what he has done so lessons his grip on her and moves away a few inches allowing her to move out.
She took rapid steps aay from him but instead of leaving she turned towards him.
Kripa: acha huwa jo mujhe tumhaaree asliyat bohat jald pata chalgayee warna...
Angad: Warna? warna kya? Kripa sacchai se tum koso dhoore ho. Please ek baar meree baat suno me... (grabs her upper arm)
Kripa: (jerks him off) haath mat lagao mujhe. Sacchai kee baat tum naa hi karo to acha hai kyu ke ek jhootha hamesha jhootha hee rehta hai. Tum sach me ek jaanwar hee ho. Jaise pehle zabardasti kee mere saath aaj bhi tumne (closes her eyes to suppress the pain)
Angad: Kripa I'm really sorry about what I did. Tum chaahe mujhe maaf karo ya na karo lekin ek baar meree baat to suno. Dekho me tumhe Akshat je baare me warn karne aaya hu. Wo sahi larka nahi hai. wo sirf tumhaara istemaal karaha hai or yeh sab osne...
Kripa: Bus! bohat bakwaas sunli maine tumhaari. Tum koun hote ho dusro pe ungli uthaane waale ha? Koun sahi hai or koun galat me yeh acchi tarhase jaantee hu. Tum mere maamle me naahi paro to acha hai
Angad: Tum bhale mujhse nafrat karo Kripa per Akshat ke saath please koi rishta mat rakhna warna bohat pachtaohgee
Kripa: Ek baar kisee se rishta rakh ke bohat pachta chukee hu to ab baaki raha hee kya hai. Bus chale jao yahase Angad, mujhe tumse koi waasta nahi rakhna
Angad: Aisa mat karo Kripa please, mera yakeen karo
Kripa: yakeen? (sarcastic laugh) Jis insaan ne mujhe dhoke ke ilawa kuch nahi diya wo mujhse yaken kee baate karaha hai
Angad: Tumhaara yakeen hee to paana chahta hu me
Kripa: wo haq tum kho chuke ho or ab kabhi nahi milega tumhe
Angad comes closer to her and grabs both her hands into his. She struggles in the beginning but soon gives up and begins crying into his arms. He strokes her back to pacify her and then he pulls out and lifts her face by putting his finger under her chin. Then slowly he kisses the salty tear stained cheeks as she shuts her eyes. Then he is just about to advance towards her lips when she pushes him away.
Kripa: NAHI! me dubaara tumhe apne kareeb nahi aane desakti. Chale jao yahase. Just leave me alone!
Angad has no choice and can't continue to see her under duress so he leaves immediately without any further pursuit.
She covers her face with her palms and washes down her pain with her tears.
After the ceremony was over, Pari sat on the terrace drying her hands and feet. She was lost in her thoughts when she felt an arm around her waist. Before she could shriek another hand covered her mouth.
Saumya: (whisper) Sssh... Pari me hoon
She calms down and slowly Saumya let goes of her mouth. Then he sat down in front of her and took both her hands in front of him.
Saumya: Wa meree dulhan to bohat khoob sajee hai. Lagta hai mujhe bohat bara complex dena ka irada hai
Pari: Or nahi to kya. For your kind of information mister shaadi me sab log dulhan ko hee dekh ne aaenge
Saumya: Kiskee majaal hai jo meree dulhan kee taraf aakh uthaake dekhe. Kiseene kiya to wo oska aakhri din hoga. Ha per agar koi dulhe ko dekhna chaahe to I've no problem.
Pari: A, a, a, ha, ha, ha, bare aaye I've no problem waale. Pehlee baat to yeh ke dulhe kee taraf koi dekhega bhi nahi or agar dekhe ga to me oskee aakhe noch loongi
Saumya: he he ab koun horaha hai possessive?
Pari: Ha hu me possessive. Me saaree dunya se kehdungi ke Saumya sirf mere hai, sirf mere
Saumya: Baap re phir to mujhe do baar sochna parega ke kahi me galti to nahi karaha
It took some time for Pari to register it and when she did she got annoyed with him and attempted to hit him whilst he burst into splits of laughter.
Saumya: Are sambhaalo puree mehndi kharaab hojaehgee. Phir aisa na ho ke shaadi kee raat mujhe Pari ke bajai churail miljai
Pari: Saumya aap! (she continued smacking him with her fists not worrying about her mehndi) Chalye jaaye mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karnee (turns away from him)
Saumya: are Pari come on na itna to mazaak chalta hai
She shrugs him off
Saumya: (embraces her from the back and rests his chin on shoulder) acha baba I'm sorry. Wo kya hai itne dino ke baad tum milee to socha thoree chere khaani karde. Itna to haq banta hai na mera
Pari: bohat bure hai aap, aise khushi ke moke pe bhi ruladiya aapne mujhe
Saumya; (turns her face towards him) Tumhaare yeh aasoo bohat keemtee hai mere liye, inhe aise zaye mat kar. Me to kehta hu ke bachake rakhna inhe warna kya pata bidaai ke waqt glycerine lagana pare.
Pari: Saumya please! (she smacked him again but this time with a grin)
Saumya: chalo atleast tum hasee to khara, warna aajkal to sirf ma yusee hee nazar aarahee hai
He moves away from her and dwells into the thoughts of Sujal and the seperation. Instant tears form in his eyes and before they can drop on the ground Pari catches them on her palm.
Pari: Mujhse kehrahe the ke mere aasoo bohat keemtee hai or aap khud...
Saumya: (puts head in her lap) me kya karu Pari, jab bhi thori see khushi miltee hai mujhe sirf Sujal kee yaad aatee hai or wo saaree osse juri baate yaad aatee hai jisse ye aasoo khud ba khud nikal parte hai
Pari: (carressing his hair) me aapkee takleef ko mehsoos kartee hu Saumya or jaantee hu ke aapko wo her waade yaad aate hai jo Sujal ne aapse kiye the. Isiliye kehrahee hu ke mat kijye ye apne saath yeh. Apne aapko itnee baree saza mat dijye
Saumya: Nahi Pari me apne aapke liye apne parivaar ko saza nahi desakta
Pari: Sujal bhi to aapka parivaar hai to phir...
Saumya: Ossee ke liye hee to karaha hu. Pari agar me yeh qadam nahi uthata to phir Kashish Sujal ka jeena haraam kardetee. She would have continued manipulating and scheming against me that ke Sujal ko or takleef pohochti or... (shut his eyes)
Pari: To kya ab aap jo karahe hai osse onka dil nahi toot raha? Onhe takleef nahi horahi
Saumya: Me janata hu ose kitnee takleed horahee hai lekin wo sirf kuch hee dino kee baat hai. Phir sab kuch theek hojaehga magar agar me aisa nahi karunga to phir yeh takleef zindagi bhar rahegi
Pari: Ek saal pehle dunya kitnee alag thee. Log kitne alag the, haalaat kitne alag the.
Saumya: Mujhe to wo shaadi ka hungama abhi tak yaad hai kaise maine or Sujal ne badmashiya kee thee or kese Sujal chup, chup ke Kashish she milta tha...
FLASHBACK
It's Kashish's mehndi ceremony and the women are still waiting for the mehndi woman to arrive.
Saumya: Tu paagal hogaya hai Sujal. Abhe saale apne saath mujhe bhi marwaehga
Sujal: Kesa dost hai tu, mere liye itna bhi nahi karsakta. Or ziada kya karna hai, sirf ander jaaker Kashish ko mehndi lagani hai bus.
Saumya: Bus? saaree aurto ke beech jaake Kashish ko mehndi lagaehga
Sujal: Ha lekin koi hame dekhega nahi
Saumya: kya matlab?
Sujal: hum waha hokar bhi nahi honge
Saumya: Tu kya bakwaas karaha hai
Sujal: Tu bus mere saath chal, khud ba khud samajh jaehga
Inside everyone are still waiting complaining about where the mehndi woman was and just then two women covered in burkhas arrive through the doorway into the hall.
Lady 1: Lo aagayee. Itnee dair kese hogayee?
Burkha lady 1: Maaf kijyega per meree khaala paitse hai (pointing towards the burkha lady next to her) isiliye thoree dheere aana para
Lady 1: Theek hai, ab aap jaldi aake mehndi lagaye
Both the burkha ladies walk over to Kashish. The pregnant one takes time to sit down and the other one keeps staring at Kashish continuously. Pari notices this and becoems curious
Pari: aise kya ghoore rahee hai aap
Burkha lady 1: umm, um, wo dulhan kitnee khoobsurat hai wo dekhrahee thee. Beechaare dulhe ka kya hoga wo to dulhan ke saamne thik hee nahi paaehga.
She took Kashish's hand and at that touch Kashish twitched as if an electric current ran through her. She stared at the woman who in return winked at her. Kashish opened her mouth in amazement and a smile developed on her face as she knew who it was exactly.
Pari: Aapko yaha kaam karne ke liye boolaya gaya hai, bekaar kee baate karne ke liye nahi
Pregnant lady: zara bhi tameez nahi seekhaee tumhe tumhaare maa baap ne ke baro se kese baat kee jaatee hai
Pari: mere maa baap ne mujhe khoob sikhaaya hai, aap apne kaam se matlab rakhye
Pregnant lady: bohat hee batameze larki hai yeh. Pata nahi is nak chari ke saath koi shaadi karega bhi ke nahi.
Pari: (mouth half open) aap hotee koun hai mere baare me aisa faisla karne waali? Pata nahi kahase do namune aagaye hai
Pregnant lady: hum yaha tumhaaree saheli ko sajaane aaye hai or namune hum nahi tum ho namuni
Pari was going to retaliate but Kashish intervened and told Pari to just forget it. All three except for Pari were laughing to themselves as they knew the truth. Sujal made intricate designs stealing chances of squeezing her hand or just teasing her by a light tickle. It was like they were playing aakh me choli with each other.
Sometime later the pregnant lady began leaning onto Pari and she kept annoyed.
Pari: Yeh kya karahee hai aap?
Pregnant lady: kamar me thora dard horaha tha betee, isee liye taika lerahee thee
Pari: To wo taika kahi or jaake dhoondhye (shrugs her off)
The pregnant lady comes near her again and leans futher. Pari kept moving away but the lady didn't give up.
Sujal: Betee meree khaala pait se hai to onhe kamar ka dard bohat rehta hai
Pari: Agar yeh aapki khaala hai to phir aap kee umar kya hogi
Sujal: ehem eo uhh...hamare yaha larkiyo kee umar nahi poochee jaatee
Pari: aapkee khaala aapke saath kyu aayee aisee haalat me
Sujal: aisee haalat me onko akele kese chore sakti thi. Please aap onka khayaal rakhye
Khaala leaned on even further onto Pari and she made a disgusted look. Her closeness was freaking her out and she really wanted to escape from it.
Sujal: Khaala aap upar jaake kuch dair lait kyu nahi jaatee (he signals with his eyes telling Saumya to go up with Pari)
Kashish: ha, ha, yeh theek rahega. Pari tum inhe upar lejao
Pari: Lekin Kashish me yaha...
Kashish: inhe upar kamre me chore ke aajaana. Chalo jao
Pari relunctantly stood up and literally got held back by Saumya's weight. He on purpose put all his weight on her as he had to pretend he was pregnant and plus that was the only way he could get close to her.
She carried him all the way upstairs and lead him towards one of the bedrooms and then once she showed it she wanted to leave.
Saumya: Are betee zara hame bistar tak sahara to de do
Pari: (under her breath) Itna bhaaree wazan hai ke inhe sahara dene ke liye sahare kee zaroorat hai (out loud) Kyu nahi
She pouted with anger and helped him till the bed and then just as she was leaving he held her hand
Saumya: Betee zara hame bistar pe laitne me to mada karo
she huffed with aggitation and helped him lie down and on purpose he took his beauty time. He was enjoying her red face with anger, it made her look even more cute.
Whilst back downstairs Sujal was busily finishing Kashish's hands. Kashish was amused that no one had figured out yet who he was and the person behind the burkha was in fact a man and not a woman
He came closer at a whisper distance
Kashish: tum yaha aaye kyu?
Sujal: Maine tumse waada liya tha na ke jab tum meree dulhan banogee to me hee tumhe sajaoonga. To phir me kese bhool tha
she just carried on looking at him lovingly and falling in love with him even more. She felt luckyto have such a wonderful husband.
Upstairs in the bedroom khaala (Saumya) wasn't prepared to let go of Pari's hand.
Pari: Dekhye me kehrahee hu ke mera haath choreye
Saumya: or agar nahi chora to
Pari: kis kisam kee aurat hai aap, yu zabardasti kyu karahee hai mere saath
Saumya: Zabardasti kaha betee. Ye to hamara pyaar dikhaane ka andaaz hai
Pari: Mujhe aapse koi pyaar nahi chaheeye. ab chore ye mujhe
Saumya: oho thoree dair hamare paas betho to sahi
Pari: mujhe aapke paas nahi rehna. ab choreye
Saumya: soch lo agar abhi haath chora to phir zindagi bhar ka saath choote jaaehga
Pari couldn't acknowledge what he was saying and just wanted to get away from the freaking lady.
Saumya wasn't planning on letting go anytime soon as he was enjoying seeing her in distress. He could just imagine her reaction when she would find out who he was and she'll probably kill him in the beginning but then will shower him with her love.
Saumya: Aah! lagta hai dard shuroo hogaya
Pari: (panicked) kya? kesa dard?
Saumya: Are bacche ka dard (holds Pari's hand tight) kuch karo, kuch karo
Pari: aap thairye me kisee ko bulaake laatee hu
Saumya: are nahi is dard ka ilaaj sirf tum hee karsakti ho (pretends to wince in pain)
Pari: dekhye mujhe nahi pata ke kya karna hai. Me jaake kisee ko bulaatee hu
Saumya: nahi mujhe akela mat chorna. Tumhe hee karna hai betee. Me dekha ti hu ke kya karna hai
Pari has no choice but to agree so she comes next to him slowly worried about what to do.
Saumya: Pehle mere paas aake peeche se yeh burkha uthaaro
She obliged
Saumya: ab dheere dheere meree peete ko malo
she found it strange but had no choice so she put her hands under his shirt and began massaging.
The very touch of her fingers on his bare skin sent an electric shock throughout his body arousing his male senses.
He made soft groans making her feel even more uncomfortable.
Pari: aap...aap ko farak paraha hai
Saumya: Ummm...tum jaantee nahi ise kya asar horaha hai
Pari: Ji?
Saumya: umm mera matlab hai ke... chalo ab theek hogaya (turns to lie back on his back) Tumhaare haatho me to jaadoo hai betee. Ji chahta hai ke inhe choomloo.
Takes both her palms and lays kisses. she pulls them away abruptly outraged by his disgusting behaviour
Pari: Bus bohat hogaya, aap hadd se aage bar gayee hai
Saumya: hadd to tumne dekhee kaha hai betee
Pari: Mera haath choreye or kisee or ko apnee takleef sunaye
Saumya: are... theek hai chalo ek aakhri kaam to kardo hamare liye
Pari: kya karna hai?
Saumya: zara hamara burkha utaarne me hamaree madad to karo. Bohat ghabrahat horahee hai.
Absent mindedly she stripped the burkha off him and didn't even bother to look at his face. she just wanted to escape as fast as possible.
Pari: Chalye aapka kaam hogaya, ab me chaltee hu
Saumya: Are itnee jaldi bhi kya hai. Tum mujhse itna ghabra kyu rahi ho
Pari: Me kyu aapse ghabrao?
Saumya: To phir meree taraf dekhtee kyu nahi
Pari: Kyu ke...kyu ke mujhe jaana hai
Saumya: ruko! ek baar idhar dekh to lo oske baad jaana ho to chalee jaana
Pari: aap kee problem kya... (turns around towards him and freezes when sees Saumya lying with his head leaned on his hands. He had a smirk and winked at her.)
Saumya: Kya huwa betee. tumhaaree bolti kyu band hogayee
There wasn't much movement in the beginning but all of a sudden Pari jumped onto the bed and literally attacked Saumya.
Pari: Saumya aap kabse mera mazaak ura rahe the or... (she continues giving him blows wherever she could whilst he kept defending himself and rolled with laughter)
Saumya: Are are Pari bus karo (continues laughing) bohat gudgudee horahee hai
Pari: Gudgudee... (gets annoyed again and starts with the attacks) gudgudee aarahee hai, gudgudee aarahee hai
Saumya grabs both her assailing hands and then pulls her on top of her. Both pf them keep staring at each other as if time froze. Saumya moved the falling tresses away from her face and thenn carressed her soft velvet lips with his thumbs tantalizing her already heaightened senses.
Pari: aap yaha kya karahe hai?
Saumya: dikhai nahi deta, ek aashiq apnee mehbooba ke saath bistar pe lya karta hai
Pari: hathye choreye mujhe, besharam kahee ke (she attempts to get up but gets pulled down by his weight)
Saumya: Are bhai hum to hai hee aise besharam. Ab tum decide karlo ke tumhe is besharam ke saath rehna hai ya to phir...
Pari: Choreye mujhe, koi aake dekhega to kya samjhega
Saumya: yahi ke khaala bohat beemaar hai or tum oskee dawa ose derahee ho
She became nervous by the mischievious glint in his eyes. They were alone in the room and all her defenses were down so there was no way of surviving his attack.
Saumya: Tum to aise ghabra rahee hi jaise pehlee baar milee ho mujhse
Pari: Pehlee baar aapke itne kareeb aayee hu isliye darr...darr lagraha hai
Saumya: ghabrao mat me aisa kuch nahi karunga jisse tumhe takleef ho. Kya tumhe apne Saumya pe bharosa nahi?
Pari: khud se bhi ziada. Lekin me apne aap pe bharosa nahi karti. Agar me behek gayee to
Saumya: me tumhaara khayaal rakhoonga
He rolled over sending Pari below him and then he gradually bent down and finally both the lips united into a passionate encounter.
He was hungry for her taste and she was desperate for his male essence.
Sujal: Saumya! Saumya! abhe saale kaha gaya tu
Saumya let go of Pari immediately but still remained on top of her. He could hear Sujal shouting from outside the window.
Saumya: ache khaase romantic mood ko kharaab kardiya kambhakth ne
He got off the bed allowing Pari to straighten her dishevelled self and for her to gain composure on her face once again. He went over to the window and saw a desperate Sujal waiting for him outside
Saumya: Kya hai itna chilaa raha hai. marwaaehga kya?
Sujal: Abhe maut to hum dono kee kuch dair me aane waalee hai. Tu neeche aah yaar
Saumya: theek hai me aaraha hu
He began climbing out of the window
Pari: yeh kya karahe hai aap?
Saumya: Sorry sweetheart jaana parega
Pari: To kya khirkee se kud ke jaenge?
Saumya looked down towards the ground and realised he was two storey high
Saumya: tum mera kitna khayaal rakhti ho Pari. Tum na hoti to mera kya hota
Pari: Ab ziada faltoo baate karna choreye or waapis andar aaye
He climbed back inside continuing to fool around with her.
Sujal: Tu waapis andar kaha chalagaya. Neche utar
Saumya: to kya aeroplane lagakar teree gode me kudoo
Sujal: You dumbo teree khirkee ke baajoo me seeree rakhi hai. ose me lagata hu or osse neeche utar. Ab jaldi kar.
Sujal began moving the ladder under the window and then instructed Saumya to climb down. He did startto come down but kept fooling around with Pari, constantly sending her kisses and love messages. Sujal became more irritated by his behaviour and felt like climbing the ladder and pulling him down. He knew if Saumya continued to take his beauty time then they won't be able to get out as they came.
Luck wasn't with them as what Sujal was afraid of became true. Saumya wasn't evben half way when a fat lady came and created havoc.
Fat lady: Chore! Chore! pakro osse! Chore! chore!
Sujal and Saumya both panicked. Saumya tried to cover up and tell the lady to silence down but she didn't listen. He expected Sujal to come to his rescue but he seemed to have disappeared somehwere. Sujal did think of helping Saumya but at that time he didn't want to get caught so he chipped out of there just in time, feeling sorry for Saumya but then again he deserved it for wasting so much time.
Pari came to the ledge and panicked too. She didn't want a crowd around here as many things would come out of it. She had to do somthing but what? At an impulse she grabbed onto the ladder from the top and slightly moved it away from the wall.
Saumya: are Pari kya karahee ho. Gir jaaoonga me
Fat lady: Theek karahee ho, gira do ise, phir dekhtee hu is naalayak ko
Pari couldn't think of what to do so she pushed the ladder away from the wall sending Saumya to the opposite side. it happened so quickly that no one realised what happened. He fell into a pool of mud drenching him from top till toe. He moaned and groaned as he moved the ladder off him and sat up. Then he could hear the sound of dogs in the near distance. His heartbeats raced as anxiety took over him. He shot up and now he looked even more like a thief.
Fat lady: Wo raha, pakro ose
She instructed to a couple of security guards who had gathered together. They began chasing Saumya who from up above did unfortunately look like a low life thief covered in dirt.
Poor Saumya had no way out. The place was like a maze and no one to help him. Finally he reached the main gate and he got his ticket out of there
END OF FLASHBACK

End of part.
okay guys heres the next part finally. Sorry about such a long delay but i was busy and plus too many people in the house means less access to the computer.
so guys i dont know when the next update will be but i'll try my level best to do it asap.


Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago

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