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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey....tht was coooool......full on drama types....kinda filmi.....but very cuuteee.....plzzzzz do continue sooooon....and plzzzzzzzzzz can u plzzz put in sum gud scenes between armaan n riddhima....nice...cute.....romantic scenes....plzzzzzzzzzzzz.....thanks....

luv
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue! you have got to continue you know that.
I simply can't wait for the next part.
hope you continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
can't wait 4 the next part gr8 part 👏 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
I couldn't read your last updates because I was moving to uni and had no connection 😡 But thank you sooo much for them all - I've just read them and they have really cheered me up and made me forget for a few moments about my homesickness. I love your work - please continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
ur ff is full of suspense nd ups nd downs which i really njoy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great fanfic just caught up continue soon...cant wait lol...i hope armaan and riddz have a cute little scene because rite now ridzz is mentally upset and all. lol... so now would be the perfect time..hint..hint
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow i read your first part
i forgot to comment
so her i am, the parts are really good 👏 👏 👏
keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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maya.....as i eagrly await for the episode updates...i was waiting with same anticipation for ur nxt part of ff.....i jus luv it...

keep the gud work goin
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well here is the next part 😉

every1 was quite........ridds eyes were full of tears!!!
shasank leaves the placa an goes towards his cabin.dr shabanker,dr keerti, all follw shsank.ridds was still in shock.she was wantd 2 cry.she had lost her identity.
angie looks at ridds.....with disgest
u kno....u were always dads favorite.....even tho u were neva his daughter...oh god.riddhima tumhari tu ab koi identity hi nahi...tum kabhi meri behan thi hi nahi
dad wastd soooo much money on u,on ur education an all...i dont believe it....why did he take u...this is just weird.tumhen yahan hone ka koi haq nahi hai.tum ne hamesha mera haq cheena...tum
but ridds was running at full speed towards the stairs.
RIDDHIMA!!! cry atul,sapna and armaan .they all run after her.....armaan at the lead.sis padma stares at angie ang goes of 2 inform shasank
ridds was running tears falling rapidly 4rom her eyes.she didnt kno wat she was doing.she ran out 2 the car parking.she could hear her name being calld from behind but she didnt stop.
she sat into the car she and angie ownd and drove off.
armaan sees her and quickly gets his car and follows ridds.he knew she was in a bad mental condition
ridds was driving very fast and uncarefully.armaan calld her name.she was not in her senses.
ridds was heading out of town.armaan followd closely.ridds was crying nonstop.she nearly hit a car.
then ridds took a turn and was driving on bare land towards the cliff.armaan realisd wat she was doing an took a different route and camie in between ridds and the fall.ridds doesnt stop but armaan doesnt move .at the last minuite she puts her foot on the break and turns the steering wheel.the car turns around and stops.....
armaan jumps out of the car and runs towards ridds car.he opens the door and pulls her out...
KYA KAR RAHI THI TUM he yells at her were u gone mad....agar tumhe kuch ho jata tu....tumhe hosh bhi hai...but he stops.ridds was crying.he couldnt bare that.ridds looks up and armaan hugs her.then he wipes her tears and says
ridds dont take this burden....cry if u need 2...
ridds nearly drops down on the ground and crys.armaans phone rings.it was sahsank.armaan tells him that she was fine and they might come late but not to worry.

7;06pm it was getting darker.ridds sat on the front of her car,while armaan was leaning against his car.he moves closer 2 ridds an says
riddhima u kno wat ....i kno exactly how u feel...my dad neva has time 4 me...all he cares 4 is his buisness.
i hardly ever get 2 see him.....but ur dad loves u.u should b happy.he didnt tell u this before cause he didint wantd 2 hurt u
....
tanx armaan ....i didnt knew wat i was doin back there ...tanx.she looks up and finds herself looking into armaan deep blue eyes.armaan takes his hand and moves her hair 4rom her face.he had the temptation of leaning 4ward an kissing her cheek....BUT THE PHONE RINGS 😡
it was shasnk.after talking 2 him armaan said..i tink we should go now...
riddds moves towards her car but he stops her an says..after all this NO WAY m i goin to let u drive....u r going in my car...we,ll tell someone 2 pickup the car.ridds moves towards his car but then he grabbs her dupatta she turns around an he says
aaj tu tum ne meri jaan hi lay li thi....ek bar bhi nahi socha mere bare mein....he moves closer to her an says....if anything happend 2 u...then .....
he takes her hand an puts it on his heart...do u hear my heartbeats...they stop wen somthing happens to u.....say u ll neva do that again....
ridds was close 2 tears....so much love....but she controlld herself an said i wont.....

ridds an armaan come back at sanjeevani.every1 surronds riddhima..asking if she was ok.but she couldnt take her eyes off armaan............who was also staring at her........

sorry guys the precap said somthing else but that will come in next few days 😕 i hadnt expectd this part 2 b long but once u start..it gets hard 2 stop 😆
hope u forgive me 😉
hope u hear 4rom u soooooonn 😉
Edited by maya_2u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
will hav the kidnap part.....hopefully in the nxt part

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