Journey of Hearts(LAST PART IS UP!) - Page 15

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great, plz continue soon
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(FYI:1 or 2 quotes i got from a movie so if they sound familiar they are probably from the movie i got it from)

PART 9

Angad and kripa are still in the same position they were in yesterday and Angad moves his fingers a little and kripa wakes up by that and at first gets scared by the arm but then looks at Angad and realized what must have happened so she wakes him up because the poistion he was sleeping in looks uncomfortable....
K:Angad wake up!!
A(wakes up with a jerk):What?!? what?!? what happened?(and then he realize what is going on)
A:ohh sorry kripa...
K:its k not your fault really..
A:ok i better get going before anyone sees us like this
K(kripa blushes):yeah..okay bye
(angad gets up to go but cant because kripa still has his arm kripa realises it and lets go blushing like crazy...)

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Angad and kripa both get ready and go down and by then everyone is already downstairs...Damini and prithvi and mishty leave for work an dtoday is their last day of work until the marrige is over...
N-so kids how bout we go for some shopping?
K-sure
A-yeah great idea
D-ok we will change and then we can all go shopping....

Angad and kripa are waiting for everyone one to come downstairs and after a whil karthik comes and soon naina and dillip are the only ones left to come Angad was gonna ahout up the stairs for them to hurry-up but he didnt need to because right then Naina and dillip come down looking.......

Naina had on a blue jean mini skirt with a pink tube top and over the tube top she had a blue jean jacket, she was wearing pink flip flops and had her hair down and straight.... 😕
Dillip had on baggy blue jeans and a black shirt that says real guys wear pink...he also had on a pair of red and black etnies.... 😆 .......

Angad, Karthik, and Kripa all had their mouths open really wide... 👎🏼 .....
K:(nudges ANgad) do your parents always dress like that?
A:(embarrased)no i have never seen them like that i wonder what has gotten into them...
(kripa and angad looked at each other and shrugged and then looked at karthik to see his reaction....karthik stood their for a while but then burst out laughing....naina and dillip were confused)
N-beta y r u laughing?
D-yeah y r u?
Ka-What are you wearing?
N-our cool and hip clothes aren't these type of clothes in style now??
A:ughhh....yeah but for us NOT for you...
K:(put her hand over her mouth trying hard not to laugh)
Naina and dillip feeling really embarrased now turned to go back upstairs and yelled from the top that they can go ahead with out them....

Right when they all got outside they burst out laughing at what they had just seen...

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They first go to an American store so that they can buy some clothes that are not indian and while they are there they here two people talking and they could not help over hearing....

Guy 1:How do these pants look on me for hunting?
Guy 2: I dont know why are you asking me? go ask some girl...
Guy 1:(looks around and spots kripa)hey you pointing at kripa how would these pants look on me?
Kripa:where r u gonna wear tehm too?
Guy 1:IN the forest where i am gonna go deer hunting....
Kripa:(gets really mad haring this)Imagine you're a deer. You're prancing around. You get thirsty. You spot a little brook. You put your little deer lips down to the cool, clear water - BAM. A bullet rips off part of your head. Your brains are lying on the ground in little bloody pieces. Now I aks you, do you give a f**k what kind of pants the son-of-a-b**ch who shot you was wearing? (and with saying that she stormed off)

The guy who was trying on the pants looked like he got slapped on the face...
Guy 1:god she made it sown so cruel and disgusting i dont want to go hunting anymore...
Guy 2:dont go i will go she made it sound so awsome and interesting....

Angad this whole time was shocked at what kripa said but was kind of amused to...but after a while of standing there he went out to find kripa and karthik...

Afer they get all their things Karthik wants to go home but kripa and Angad dont so while karthik goes home they go to a small resteraunt to eat something...while they are waiting for their food to come they hear angry voices on the table next to them and they couldnt help but listen....

Girl:I am nervouse
Guy:What are you nervous about?
Girl:What are you nervous about? I'm the one that's under the gun here.
Girl:You wanna know what I'm nervous about? I'll tell you what I'm nervous about! I am in the dark here with all this legal crap. I have no idea what's going on. All I know is that you're screwing up and I can't help.
Guy:You left me a little camera, didn't you?
Girl:I'm watching you go down in flames, and you're bringing me with you and I can't do anything about it!
Guy:And?
Girl:Well I hate to bring it up because I know you've got enough pressure on you already. But, we agreed to get married as soon as you won your first case. Meanwhile, TEN YEARS LATER, my niece, the daughter of my sister, who might i add is 10 years younger then me, is getting married. My biological clock is ticking like this (and she taps her foot real hard on the floor three tiems) I ain't never getting married.
Guy:Lisa, I don't need this. I swear to God, I do not need this right now, okay? I've got a judge that's just aching to throw me in jail. An idiot who wants to fight me for two hundred dollars. Slaughtered pigs. Giant loud whistles. I ain't slept in five days. I got no money, a dress code problem, AND a little murder....not to mention your...(taps is foot three times really hard) your biological clock that wont stop ticking...
Girl: [pause] Maybe it was a bad time to bring it up.

(Angad was dying to know about the "murder" so after they finished eating he went up to the couple and asked them about it)
A:can i know about the murder you were tlking about?
Guy:why?
A:(thinking fast) well, i am a lawyer you might have heard of me Greg Fischer well i might be able to help you...
Guy tell him about an accidental shoot which wasnt interesting at all...

WHen they come out of the resteraunt kripa teases him....
K:so greg fischer how is the law business?
A:(looked at her) oh shut up i only said that because i want to know about the murder case....and plus if they look up greg fischer they will find tons of articles about him.....I even saw him in today's newspaper....
K:oh! really did you read it?
A:nope
K:thats what i thought
A:why?
K:he did last night that....(and with that she walks off in the direction towards the orphanage)

Angad catches up with her...
A:y r u going towards the orphanage?
K:i love kids and i was once an orphan too so i know how they feel....she enter while Angad stayed outside he waitied and waitied but she never came back out so he goes inside only to find that kripa is sitting in the middle of a circle and little kids all arounf her are singing with kripa leading....

I am squishing up my baby bumblebee
wont my mommy be so proud of me

and they kept repeating that over and over and over...finally angad coughed to grab kripa's attention and kripa looked and realized she musst have been in here long so she and Angad leave to go back home....

PREVIEW:angad and kripa share one room and one bed.....

hope you guys liked it!!


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Posted: 20 years ago
sry guys but this will be my only post for today!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
loved it. Continue when you can.
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Posted: 20 years ago
thx happe i will continue tommorow!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey SC 😉 😊

once again, i applaud you and Compliment you on your writing. 👏

u r doing an amazing job 😉 😊

keep it up 😉 👏 😆

now its getting a little more interesting 😉 😆 and am eagerly waiting for the next part 😉 😊 👏

love KP 😉 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow that was amazing 👏2 good. can't wait 2 read the next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow...that part was too good...plzz continue soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: keshp15

hey SC 😉 😊

once again, i applaud you and Compliment you on your writing. 👏

u r doing an amazing job 😉 😊

keep it up 😉 👏 😆

now its getting a little more interesting 😉 😆 and am eagerly waiting for the next part 😉 😊 👏

love KP 😉 😆

the kesh, lil_playa, and baby_princess i really appreciate all your comments and i will continue tommorow there will be a little more romance tommorow!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
👏 👏 👏 awesome part, loved kripa's modern lecture abt deer hunting 😆 😆 😆 n defifnitely CANT WAIT 4 THE NXT PART 😉 pls pls pls continue soon 😛

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