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jyothilakshmi

@jyothilakshmi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

hey please update yaar.have u again forgetten to update.pleeeeeeease update karo na. waiting to hear more about rajveer and naina romance and more.

Please, Please, Please, update soon. Do not leave the story in the middle.

UPDATE SOOOOOOOON YAAR.

Jyothi

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jyothilakshmi

@jyothilakshmi

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#142

hey please update yaar.have u again forgetten to update.pleeeeeeease update karo na. waiting to hear more about rajveer and naina romance and more.

Please, Please, Please, update soon. Do not leave the story in the middle.

UPDATE SOOOOOOOON YAAR.

Jyothi

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#143

hey just read it all.... UPDATE YAAR!!!!!!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Hello Sunaina jee , i think u know me na?
Today i started reading ur fic n know i will soon read it the fullest n give my reply but b/w that tell me have u stopped uding it?
Because so much time has been passed but i saw only a few ud's here.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Yipeeeeeeeeee is me at least pata hai ki Raj is still alive.
Naina ki baat par abhi kisi ko bharosa nahi hai na but i know jaldi hi ye log bhi maanenge that he is alive.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#146

awesome yaar,
third n fourth parts were also good.
Finally Naina was right that he must had left a clue for her n that's Bunty Chaubey.
Now Naina had to find him n she would meet Raj soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Huda is really vow, kitne aaram se us ne kuch minutes me itna bada kaam kar diya na jo ki bilkul easy nahi tha.
Sab k sab fir se us jagah pe gaye jahan Raj ki jeep giri hue the aur is baar kuch log us jeep ka skeleton bhi utha k le gaye, no doubt Lala aur us k kameene aadmi kar bhi kya sakte hain aur?
Naina ko sach me thoda bhi intejaar nahi karna aata hai, poor Huda us se ek baar bhi nahi poocha ki kaisa hai vo?
Har baar us ko Raj k apne aas paas hone ka ehsaas hota hai.
I think sach me vo kahin aas paas hi hai Naina k.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Clever Naina kitne aaram se us ne Abhi se gun nikalwa li. Koi aur hota to abhi tak us ka gussa fat gaya hota par Naina k baare me vo jaanta hai na ki koi galat kadam nahi uthayegi vo.
Vaise ek baat maani padegi vo Chaubey k saath code waala scene tum ne bahut accha likha hai.
Hat's off to u for that.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#149

oye hoye kudi sharmaa rahi hai apne aashiq k naam se, oho pyaar to hua hi hai. Zikr pe ye haal hai to milne pe na jaane ki hoga?
But indeed Naina is very brave varna koi bhi ladki aise bina kisi ko liye apni jaan khatre me daal k apne pyaar ko dhoondhne nahi nikalti hai.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#150

amazing dear,
the way u xpressed Naina's bravery was amazing n really the same thing v expect from her.
I think she met Rajveer finally n he is standing in front of her.