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Posted: 19 years ago
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THANX 4 SUCH A GREAT REPLY MOW I WOULD NOT KEEP THE SUSPENSE FOR LONG SO HERE IS THE NEXT PART:

RECAP:LIGHTS TURN ED OFF AJUN COMING CLOSER TO HER BUT BHUMIKA PUSHES HIM BACK

PRESENT SITUATION IS THAT :
BHUMIKA SUDDENLY SAYS:YEH TUM KYA KARNAY JARAHAY HO ???????JAANTE BHI HO??????????? JAB TUM MUJH SE PYAR HI NAHIN KARTAY TO AAJ RAAT YEH

ARJUN:GRABS HER HAND MAKING HER TO FACE HIM AND SAYS:BHAVRI TUMHEIN KYA LAGTA HAI KE MAIN TUM SE PYAR NAHIN KARTA BHAVRI MAIN TUMSE BAHOT PYAR KARTA HOON

BHUMIKA:ARJUN TUMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARJUN:HAN BHAVRI MAIN TUMSE BAHOT PYAR KARTA THA KARTA HOON AUR HAMESHA KAROON GA MAIN NE YE BAAT BAHOT DAIR MAIN BATAI LEKEN YAKEEN MANO YEH BAAT MAIN TUMHAIN BAHOT PEHLE BATA DENA CHAHTA THA

BHUMIKA:ARJUN I LOVE U 😊

ARJUN:BHAVRI I LOVE U TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND THEY HUG EACH OTHER FINALLY!!!!!!!!!

ARJUN PUTS BHUMIKA ON BED AND COME CLOSER TO HER TAKES OFF HER JEWELLERY AND SUDDENLY HER SARI PALU FALLS DOWN ARJUN STARTS TOUCHING HER AND STARTED KISSING ON HER EARS A ND FACE AND NECK THEY COME SO CLOSER THAT THAY LAY ON BED AND ARJUN TURNS OFF THE LIGHT!!!!!!!!!

PRECAP:BHUMIKA WAKES UP , BOYS TOUCHING BHUMIKA!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 😳 😳
that was such a romantic part
i am 😕 with the precap
please write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
😆 ziddi when i read the precap and ur comments i was laughing like a baby i m gonna post the next part soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
aw..........that was such a romantic scene, saarrthi lover u should give yur story 2 a director, it'll b a zabardast hit, yaar, besides contiue, all i can say is simply awesome 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
Awesome saarrthi lover, can't wait for ur next reply...plz don't hold us all in suspense and hurry and post bcoz i'm dying to read the next part, i jus love it 😃 so romantic...awww
We all will be waiting for ur next post. Make it quick 😉

Luv Kashish
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
so i m back with another part of the story:
recap:bhumika and arjun slept together and have become one!!!!!!! 😳

present situation is :
arjun is holding bhumika its a rainy morning and slowly bhumika wakes up she feels something around her body suddenly she realizes its arjun's hand for a moment she is shocked but then she remembers what happened between them last night arjun then also wakes up (just think about the situation if it happened in saarrthi 😳 😳 😳 ) so arjun than sees bhumika and smiles on the other hand bhumika is feeling very shy she is not facing arjun but then suddenly there's a sound of thunder and bhumika gets scared and grabs arjun's body arjun also starts smiling and after a second they hug each other.

next scene:bhumika gets out of the bed arjun also stands up he was about to kiss her neck but manasvi bhabhi's phone comes and :

manasvi bhabhi on phone to arjun:arjun jaldi ghar aajao

arjun:kyun bhabhi kyun batain kya hua

manasvi bhabhi:bas kuch na pucho jaldi aajao!!!!!!!!

arjun:ji bhabhi

manasvi bhabhi:acha main phone rakhti hoon

arjun tells bhumika about it and they go back

guys i want to listen my mom nani and papa's talk to guests about disadvantages of star plus so i will con, after some time!!!!!

precap:boys touching bhumika
arjun holding bhumika
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
that was so good 👏 👏 👏
please write soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
oooooooooo, saarrthi lover, plz that was brilliant 👏 plz continue soon, that was zabardast 👏 , i bet ekta will be getting sleepless nights when she reads yur fan-fics 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
it was great plz cont. as soon as possible
luv,
kashish 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
It's just awesome wonderful etc.etc.Pls pls pls post the next part sooooon.I just can't wait anymore.Once again it was very very very good.

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