FAN FICTION BY SAARRTHI LOVER - Page 7

plzz post next part soon . U r just great keep it up. 😊

You r just doing a great job.You can open up the truth of Suraj and the factory blust also,make kakashahebs situation worse and obviously do not forget to put romantic dialogues and scences between A-B. 👏

please continue..

Great job.. 👏

u r doing a great job 😊 plzz post soon

guys after such a long time i m back with new story well guys from today onwards u will just see romantic scenes so
next scene:
recap:arjun says to bhumika that he has done very wrong

bhumika answers:aaarrrrrjjjjuuuuunnnn( 😆 )
arjun put his fingers on her lips and come closer to her but bhumika leaves him and about to go when arjun grabs her dupatta she looks back and hug arjun
then arjun says :bhumika plz mujhe maaf kardo main is duniya ka sab se kharab pati hoon
bhumika says:nahin arjun tum is duniya ke sab se ache pati ho ab rona band karo warna phir tumhein suit wala murga bana pade ga and they laugh and hug each other

okay....arjun calls her bhavri..to please bhavri ko bumika nai bulao....but the romance is too good....good to have you back....with the romance

welcome back
great work
please write soon
i also agree with hetal

i like it,keep it up.
but plz write some longer scences.

Where are you?????We all are waiting.

hey i m back and also free from my exams so from tomorrow i m going to start the fic