FAN FICTION BY SAARRTHI LOVER - Page 11

I would say that this is awesome 👏 .Kya baat hai shaadi ke baad kya likkha hai---marriege ka jadu chal gaya hai lagta hai 😳 .My hearty request to you that pls pls post soon 😭 .

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that was wonderful
poor bhoomi 😳

thank u guys 4 such a great reply. diya7000 i would now surely continue it dont worry!!!!!!!!i was laughing after reading my ff shefalis doalugues were a bit silly

recap:bhumika slapped yuvraj so badly that bloood came out.

present situation:
yuvraj wipes off his blood and in anger he raised his hands to slap bhumika when arjun catches his hand.

Suddenly bhumika feels vomiting and is about to faint when manasvi holds her and bhumika rushes to washroom

Arjun and Mnasvi runs behind her

when bhumika comes out of the wshroom she is surprised to see arjun and manasvi standing on the door.

manasvi:bhumi badhai ho tum maan bannay walee ho.

arjun is quiet(buddhu ko react hi nahin karna ata)

bhumika loooks towards arjun and feels sad.

manasvi:bhumika tumhain us kamray main kisne bulaya tha

arjun is standing with window quietly and is listening to them

bhumika than tells everything what happened in the room:

bhumi:bhabhi mujhe ghanu kaka ne aakar ye bataya ke aap ne mujhe suraj bhaya ke kamre bulaya hai.
(arjun turn towards bhumika when he listens"bhaya" from her mouth)
main kamre main gaee to peeche se yuvraj ke dost ne darwaza band karliya jab main ne usse kaha:
bhumi to yuvraj's friend:ye kya badtameezi hai darwaza kholo.

Y.F.: abhi to band kya hai thodi der main khol doon ga.

bhumi : main ne kaha darwaza kholo

Y.F.:bahut hoshiary dekhati hai

bhumi slapped him.

Y.F.: tum ne mujhe thapad mara aa tujhe dekhta hoon

than he pushed her on the bed bhumi hurts her head. he started touching her when there was a knock on the door
suraj came rushing inside and understood what hapend he started hitting Yuvrajs friend he ran and suraj and bhumika hugged.

arjun was quite shocked

precap:suraj and mansvi hugging arjun angry on someone

Wow your ff is getting interesting day by day 👏 👏 .Pls post soon can't wait to know Arjun's reaction about the baby 😊 .

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awesome work
i agree with diya saarthi lover your ff is getting interesting day by day
plz continue soon 😉

awesome!!!
i double agree with the 2 of them... its really rocking... 👏
plz continue soon

guys its my husband's ff means he is telling me the story and i m writing down as the other part of this ff

recap:bhumika told everything to manasvi and arjun

present situation:
manasvi goes to suraj's room where suraj is standing by the window

manasvi:suraj.......

suraj:manasvi tum yahan, aao na

manasvi:suraj wo jo aaaj

suraj:main samajh gaya manasvi zarroori nahin agar apne galat hon to unka saath dena chahiye, haan manasvi yuvraj mera bhai hai main chahta to yuvraj ka dost ko bhumika ke saath wo harkat karne deta lekin ...

manasvi looks in suraj's eyes and see true kindness and they both hug each other.

while on the other hand arjun and bhumika are left alone.

arjun:hum itne karib hokar bhi atit ki wajah se dhuwida main par jaate hain

bhumika:insaan khud apne aap ko dhuwida mian daal deta hai

arjun:bhavri......

bhumika:arjun bhul jao

then they both hug each other

arjun on the bed when lying with bhumika

arjun:tum jaaanti ho aaj main bahut khush hoon

bhumika:jaanti hoon zaada emotional hone ki zaroorat nahin hai

and than thay share a sweet laugh.

guys i dont know if u like or not

take care bye

sorry for a short part!!!!!!!!!!

i like it!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice part plz write soon.......