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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
okay so here is the long waiting fan fic


recap:bhumika and arjun's misunderstandings finished


present situation is :


manasvi is thinking that what she should do to make arjun and bhumi one
suraj comes from behind and says i know what u r thinking

manasvi says if u know everything than please help me !!!!!!!

suraj:ok

manasvi:what should we do make arjun bhumi realize the love 4 each other

suraj:send them alone on a trip

manasvi:do u think they will go??

suraj:why not they will go!!!!!!!

manasvi:how???????????

suraj and manasvi have a discussion that i cannot tell u its a suspense
so the next scene is here:

manasvi comes down where everyone was sitting and says to arjun and bhumika that u both have to go to manali again

arjun:but why?????

manasvi:dont worry not for honeymoon but for something else that i cannot tell u right now

bhumika:but manasvi bhabhi????????????

manasvi:its 4 factory blast now no more questions just go and do pcking

arjun des not understand but he goes to his room but on the other hand bhumika understands why they are sending them alone to manali!!!!!!
stay tuned to see what happens next!!!!!!!!

pecap:arjun and bhumi in the hotel room lights turned off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
This part is good and post soon the next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
hey, that is brillaint, saarrthi lover, u r a awesome writer, let's c what happens after the lights turn out, it is simply lajawab!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
that was fantastic part plzz post next part soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
so i m back
recap:manasvi says to arjun and bhumika to do packing to go to manali

presnt situation is :
bhumika and arjun r in there room bhumika is doing packing and thinking what she should do should she tell arjun about it or ask manasvi bhabhi but than suddenly baisa calls her

baisa:ab to tum dono ki ghalat fehmian door hogai hain to ..................

bhumika:ji baisa

after coming back from baisa she comes and sits front of lk murti(idol)

bhumika to lk:bhagwan main arjun se bahot pyar karti hoon aaj jo baisa ne mujhe kaha hai main arjun ko kaise bataon wo to ye hi samjhe ga ke is main mera hi swart hai main kya karoon na hi baisa ko nirash karsakti hoon to ha hi arjun ko .main kaisay bataon baisa ko mere aur arjun ke beech main pati patni ka rishta nahin hai bhagwan mere aur parikshea na lo main aur sahain nahin karskti

lk to bhumika:bhumika is pariksha ka phal tumhain bahot jald mile ga tumhain kya lagta hai ke sirf tum hi arjun se pyar karti ho tum ye nahin janti ke arjun bhi tumse pyar karta hai laikin zada dair main tumhain rota hua nahin dekh sakta to ye baat bhi tum se zada der nahin chupaon ga

arjun hears everything from back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

arjun and bhumika are in the car they are near manali when manasvi calls them and says dont enter manali as land sliding happened there!!!!!!!

arjun stop the car and suddenly very heavy rain starts they get out of there car and see a hotel they go to the reception amnasvi calls the hotl reception and says them to give them one room only

reception tells them one room is available

arjun and bhumika after sometime agrees

arjun and bhumika are wet especially bhumika who's all cloths are (see through) reading 😳

bhumika is standing front of the window arjun comes from back and wants to say something but suddenly bhumika is leaving the place when arjun grabs her duppata and pushes her closer to himself when lights are turned off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

after a second lights turs on and we.............. see................ that........................
bhumika is standing with the wall arjun is trying to come closer and kiss her when bhumika pushes him back and says.........................

thats a suspense .................

stay tuned to know what happens next............

precap:arjun and bhumika finally hugging
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
wow.....that is brilliant saarrthi lover, wonderful, i wondered what happened when the lights turn off, that was a romantic scene, good, u make better stories than ekta and saarrthi itself 😛 😃 😉
Edited by Shirley - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
Owwww awesome.Can't wait.Pls post soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Awesome saarrthi lover. Keep it up 👏 I just love it 😃 cnt wait for ur nxt part.
I agree with shirley u make better stories than saarrthi and ekta....plz update it soon

Luv Kashish 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
are saarthi please don't keep the suspense
that was brilliant
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
gr8 part...brilliant job...write soon 😊

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