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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
😲 😲 😲 That was soooo good! Awesome job girl... specially the part where kt found out the truth... soooo awesome... Excellent job... I like the way Kt's father is the villian.. it actually gives the story a great twist then keeping the story at the status quo. 😃 ....... 👏 ...... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
OH MY GODDDDDD!!! that was a terrific part zinu your too good and amazing that was sooo interesting my eyes were glued to the screen and the bit about hidden realtionships that was superb i wish i had your brains 😳

anyway update soon, hun

-tuba 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73

Previously -

Kt's Father and Eklavya in a plan to kill Lakshya..

Lakshya goes through a car accident..

Sneha escorts Lakshya to the Hospital..

Tulsi and Abhi find out about Lakshya's Accident..

Eklavya back-talks to Kt's Father..

Kt overhear's about Lakshya's Accident..

Part 5 - New Entries/ More Hidden Relations/Lakshya's Condition/Kt's Father's Real Truth..

Tulsi and Abhi reach the Hospital...

They ask for Lakshya at the counter, and find out he is in the ICU,,

They both walk, when they see Sneha, tensed and sobbing on the chair..

T: Sneha..

Sneha looks at Tulsi who stands infront of her,,

She stands up saying "Daadi," and hugs her..

T: Yeh sab kaise hua..

Sneha explains everything she had seen, of how the accident took place,

Abhi and Tulsi shocked..

Meanwhile, the doctor comes out of the ICU...

Sn: Doctor!! Doctor, Lakshya--

Before she could continue the doctor nods as a "no"..

All Three Shocked...

D: woh back to gaye (he is still alive), par--

T: Par....!!!!!

D: He has lost his past memory...

*echo: He has lost his past memory...

*echo: He has lost his past memory...

*echo: He has lost his past memory...

D: i'm sorry..we tried our best...

***

Kt walks up to her father,,,

Kt speaking angrily/yelling at all times...

Kt's Father turns around, pissed off at Eklavya, and looks at his "daughter" all angry at him...

KF: Kt--

K: ENOUGH DAD!! aapne kyun maara us maasoom ko? (holds his collar/starts shaking him) KYUN KIYA AAPNE AISA??? KYA BIGADA THA USNE AAPKA?? KYUN, MR.KHANNA, KYUN?? MUJHE JAWAAB CHAHIYE, KYUN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KF: KT !!!!

K: CHILAYIEE, AUR CHILAIYEE, LEKIN YEH SUN LIJIYE, KE AGAR USKO KUCH HO GAYA, TO MAI AAPKE AGAINST CASE FILE KAR DOONGI... YAAD RAKHIYE GA MR. KHANNA,, I AM WARNING YOU..!!!!!!!

She starts to leave out the door, but her father holds her arms, tightly..

KF: (fake crying) beta maine yeh sab tumhari khatir kiya hai,, woh tumhe maarna chahta tha...to maine usko hi--

K: KEH DIYA?? HO GAYI AAPKI SAFAAII ??? MERA HAATH CHODIYE ABHI.. ARREY AAPKPE KAUN BHAROSA KAREGA?? AAPNE APNE HAATHON SE MERI MOM KI, APNI PATNI KI JAAN LE LI.. AAPKO LAGTA HAI, MAI TUM JAISE GHOOTE INSAAN PE VISHWAAS KAROONGI ??? NAHI.. MERA HAATH CHODIYE, NAHI TO MAI POLICE KO ABHI AAPKE BAARE MEIN SAB KUCH BATA DOONGI...CHODIYE MERA HAATH...

Her Father lets go of her.. Kt storms out of the house, and tells him, she'll never return, ever...

***

Later That Day...

Kt had searched almost every hospital in Mumbai,, no sign of Lakshya..

as she was walking towards the City Hospital, she bumps into Abhi, who was going to gather up some medicines...

A: aap?

K: app?

A: haan, aap yaha?

K: woh chodiye.. aapka dost.. Lakshya?? woh kaha hai.. uska accident hua tha.. kaha hai woh?? kaisa hai??

A: aap iss sab ke baare mein kaise jaanti hai??

K: woh sab zaroori nahi hai.. mujhe, app, please le chaliye much uske paas...

A: jee, aayiee...

***

Inside the Hospital,,

Kt and Abhi reach to where Tulsi and Sneha sat, crying...

Kt looks at Abhi, signs him asking which room..

Abhi points to the ICU...

Kt goes forward and looks through the window of the ICU, looks at Lakshya's condition..

She goes back to Abhi, who stands infront of Tulsi and Sneha..

K: yeh--yeh, theek to hai naa?? (tears roll out of her eyes)

Abhi nods as a no, looking down...

Tulsi and Sneha get up shocked..

T: Abhi, yeh--yeh Lakshya ko kaise jaanti hai??

Abhit had no option but to tell them what had happened on the way to Mumbai..

He Explains how they had been stuck in a forest, etc, etc.

K: (to tulsi) auntie..auntie, please bataiyee naa, kya hua has unko?? please...

Tulsi looks away..

K: (to sneha) aap batayiee naa...

Sneha aswell looks away...

K: Abhi--(now crying)

Abhi takes her in a corner, far away from Tulsi and Sneha..

A: usko memory loss ho gaya hai...

Kt's Reaction...

K: (thinking) ab papa ke against mujhe case file karna hi padhegaa...

K: Abhi..tum mere saath challo...

(..To Be Continued..)

Coming Up Next: Lakshya's Sazish !

Will Continue after 10+ Comments !

Cheers ,

- Zinu ! :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

wow, wat a gunda type father😡

i hope lakshu is okay😭

plz continue soon!!

-jhanvi

Edited by desigrl05 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
hey that was awesome. can't believe laksh lost his memory. anyway plz continue soon. can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
hey!!! zinu i think ekta i supposed to cum for tutions near u for DRAMA!! 😆 ...gr8 part continue soon!! 👏 👏 👏

-abhi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
awsome part kittu...gr8 job.. 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
gr8 part kittu! 👏 👏 👏
update soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
YAAAA!!! [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] Party Time! Only because Kt is going to file a case! but if I look at lakshu's memory loss... that part was sooo sad kittu. 😭 😭 but preferably... I just loved this part... Way to go!!! I hope kt wins the case... and KF is seriously a gunda. Well... Continue soon whenever you get time. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
aww, i cant believe my lakshu lost his memory 😭
plz continue soon di. 😊 👏 😳

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