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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG!!! That part was superb!!! I just totally loved it. 👏 👏 👏 Hatss off for kittu di! 👏 👏 Excllent work over there hun. 😳 😳
As always... it was fantabulous. 😉 Okk... I can sortaa predict what's on your mind and I am pretty sure where u got the idea.. but oh it cant be! since last time you said that you didnt get the idea from the bathroom... so my prediction is completely wierd,.. 😆 😆 So is this the idea where u got from bathroom? 😕 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Previously -

Kt's Father finds Kt, and leaves with her !
Kt goes to Lakshya's Hotel Room , and helps him bandage his "burn" from saving her !

Kt's Father gets angry at Kt and slaps her !

Part 4 - Kt's Father talks to Lakshya / Hidden Relations

Kt's Father reaches Lakshya's place...

Abhijeet seems to be in with him, in the room, both watching T.V.

KF: Ahemm.....

They both look up at his Father,,

Finally, it has been revealed, who is Kt's Father...

Abhi had to go out the room, as Kt's Father wanted to "discuss" some "Personal Matter" with Lakshya, in Privacy...

Abhi sensed something wrong, but had to leave...

Lakshya and Kt's Father had a long talk, when both were yelling, tensed, at all times...

(we dont hear the private talk)

KF: kya tumhe manzoor hai ?!!

L: mai aisa nahi kar sakta.. aap jaa sakte hai...

He points at the door..

KF: phirse soch lo.. pachtao ge...

L: pachta to aapki beti rahi hai ..uss maasoom ko kya pata, ki uski khushiyaa ushi ke baap ne usse cheen li hain.. aap chahiye ameer (rich) ho, par mereliye, aap do kaudi ki chapal se bhi kam hai...

Kt's Father gets angry...

He begins to leave, but stops..

KF: iska anjaam bahut ghinauna hoga Lakshya... i'm warning you!!

Lakshya ignored his saying, and looks away..

Kt's Father storms out of the room, angry...

***

Later that day...

Tulsi seems to get off the bus, she steps in Mumbai...

A young, beautiful girl, was there to escort her, Lakshya had never met her before,, who was she ?!! perhaps, related to him in some way ?!!!

Tulsi looks at the girl, and shows a big smile, the girl smiles, and come towards Tulsi..

Her face is shown, with a sweet smile...

T: Snehaa.. kaisi hai beta ?!!!

Sn: daadii.. (smiles)

She touches her feet, and takes her blessings..

Sn: mai theek hoon, aap aur Lakshya kaise hain ?!!!

T: Lakshya Mumbai mein hi hai.. Virat Hotel mein thehra hua hai.. pata nahi kaisa ho.. mujhe chinta ho rahi thi, to aana chahti thi, tujhe to batana hi tha...

Sn: daadi.. Lakshya bhaiyaa mujhse bade hai ..par, maine unhe sirf tasveeron (photgraphs) mein dekha hai ..iss baar to mai milungi naa, usse?

T: zaroor... aur iss baar, ushe yeh bhi batana pade ga ki--

??: DAADIII.....

Tulsi turn around and find Abhi standing behind her...

T: aree abhi... aa gaya tu...
Sn: Daadi..? yeh--

T: Yeh? yeh Lakshya ke bachpan ka dost hai ..dost kam, bhai zyaada hai yeh, uska..

A: Hello!! (to Sneha)

Sn: Hi ! ...

A: daadi yeh kaun hai !!?!!

T: lambi kahaani hai Abhi..

A: par.. mujhe jaanna hai...

All three first find a spot to sit on , Tulsi starts explaining there past history to Abhi..

Sneha knew it, but still , tears rolled out of her eyes..

Hearing all the story, everyone was crying...

T: bas ek baar woh darinda mere haath lag jaye,, usse chodoongi nahi maii...

***

Sneha dropped Tulsi and Abhi off at the Hotel, and left for her home...

Tulsi entered Lakshya's room, with Abhi...

T: Lakshya...

Lakshya shockingly turns around, and saw Tulsi smiling standing at the door...

L: daadii...

He runs up to her, takes her blessings and higs her...

They stop hugging..

L: daadi, aap yaha ?!!!

T: haan, tum dono badmaashon ke bigair ghar suna suna sa tha, to mai yaha aa gayi.. kyun nahi aana chahiye tha kya ?!!

L: nahi daadi, mai sirf pooch raha tha...

They both smile..

L: acha daadi.. college parso se shuroo ho raha hai, mujhe papers lene jaana hai, abhi aur mere liye.. mai wapas aake baat karta hoon..(smiles)

T: theek hai, abhi ko bhi saath leja..

L: nahi,, aap bore ho jayengi, waise bhi itni deri par nahi hai, mai thodi derr mein aa raha hoon..

T: theek hai , jaldi aana..

L: jee!!

Lakshya steps out the door...

***

Sneha reaches her home..

before exiting her car, and walking inside the house, she glances at Lakshya's photograph, Tulsi had given her,

she looks at it, and smiles, she runs her fingers through his picture..and smiles at him,,,

she suddenly glances at Tulsi's bag, she had forgotten in her car, and decides to go and return it, before anyone, at her house finds out where she'd been...

She was driving, when she saw Lakshya standing at the bus stand...

She thought it was her illusion, but looked closely, and realized, it was Lakshya.

Lakshya is waiting to cross the road, when the signal for walking flashes...

Some anonymous man, stood behind him, at a distance, so, he was unable to hear him...

Anonumous man [AM] got on the phone with another anonymous man [AM2]

Their Phone Talk..

AM: kaam theek se hona chahiye, nahi to--

AM2: jaanta hoon, sir!!

AM: koi galati nahi honi chahiye, or you're fired!!

AM2: jee, abhi rakhta hoon, signal aane wala hai..

AM: hmm...

The Signal to walk flashes..

Sneha gets out of the car, to go and meet Lakshya..

Lakshya starts walking..

Just in a second, Sneha was walking, and a fast car, almost mun her over, but missed..

Althought, the car had, run over Lakshya, who blew up in the air, while all the paper's from his hand chattered amongst the road...

Sneha couldn't believe what had just happned...

She runs up to Lakshya's body, amongst the crowd,,

Sn: Bhaiyaa !!!! .....

There Lakshya lies on the floor, his face filled with blood, etc..

Sneha bends down, and sits beside him,, she takes his head, and places it on her lap..

"Bhaiyaa," She says sobbing...

Sn: Hey, bhagwaan, yeh sab kaise--mai daadi ko--

Sneha looks at the crowd muttering "yeh kya ho gaya? kisne kiya? kaise hua? kyun hua? yeh ladki kaun hai?" really fast..

She has help with a bunch of other men helping her escort him to her car, she quickly drives him to the City Hospital...

AM + AM2 back on the phone..

AM: good job!! kaam bahut ache se hua hai...

AM2: par.. mera inaam ?!

AM: mil jayegaa...

AM2: mil JAYEGAA nahi, abhi chaiye, nahi toh, tum jaante ho, ki mai kya kar sakta hoon..

AM: Theek Hai,, ghar ke abhi aa jao.. tumhe tumhare paise mil jayengee...

They Hang Up...

Anonymous Person, turns around, and is seen..

It was none other than Kt's Father...

KF: (talking to self) maine kaha tha na Lakshya, iski keemat bahut badi hogi,, aaj tumhara iss duniya mein aakhri din hai...

He gives an evil grin, and leaves...

There near the accident had taken place, comes out Anonymous Man 2..

He turns around, as his face is seen...

Entry...Eklavya !!!

He grins, and leaves...

***

There back, in the Hotel, Tulsi realizes her bag wasn't seen anywhere near her..

She remembered she had forgotten it in Sneha's car..

Tulsi calls up Sneha's Cell...

***

In The Hospital, Sneha's Cell Rings, while she is taking the fainted Lakshya on the Stretcher, with Doctor's and Nurses around...

She is forbidden to go inside the ICU, she sobs, while sitting on the bench, outide the ICU...

...

Tulsi gets confused, on why Sneha isn't picking up her cell,,

She tries again..

Sneha then picks up her cell..

(Sneha crying at all times)

Sn: Hello...

Tu: (worried) Sneha.. tu ro kyun rahi hai...?!!

Sn: daadi.. woh--

T: kua hua sneha, kuch bol.. sab theek to hai??

Sn: Daadi Lakshya Bhaiyaa ka Accident ho gaya hai...

*echo: Lakshya Bhaiyya ka Accident ho gaya hai...

*echo: Lakshya Bhaiyaa ka Accident ho gaya hai...

*echo: Lakshya Bhaiyaa ka Accident..Accident..Accident..

Tulsi drops the phone, as tears roll down her cheeks...

Abhi notices something was wrong.. he picks up the phone...

A: Hello...

Sn: Abhi..

A: Sneha ?!!

Sn: tum daadi ko leke, abhi City Hospital aa jao... it's an emergency,,,

A: par--

Sneha disconnects the phone...

A: (now worried) Daadi, Hospital mein kaun hai? Kya hua ?! Kya kaha Sneha ne ?!!! KUCH TO KAHIYEE....

A: (shakes Tulsi) (yelling/worried) DAADI, KUCH KAHIYEE NAAA... KYAA HUA????

T: (life less tone) Lakshya ka accident.......

*same sentence repeats as an echo 3 times....

***

At the Khanna's House...

Kt still seemed to be in her room.. since the past night,,

Eklavya reaches the Khanna Mansion...

Kt decides to finally get out of her room, and go to the kitchen to grab a glass of water,,

She passes the Living Room and over hears their talk...

KF: Yeh raha tumhara inaam..

He hands over the money to Eklavya...

E: yeh kam hai..

KF: KYA ?!!!

E: pura dena hai to do, warna--

KF: theek hai...

He gives him the full amount...

KF: ab suno.. Lakshya ke accident ke baare mein kisi ko KUCH nahi pata chalna chahiye...

Kt Horrified.....

E: bura naa maane to ek baat poochoo?

KF: poocho..

E: jab lakshya ne aapka kuch bigada nahi tha, to aapne usko jaan se kyun maara? usne jungle mein aapki beti ko bachaya, twice.. phir bhi--

KF: OUT!! iska jawaab tumhe jaanna zaroori nahi hai... tumne kaam kiya, tumhe inaam mila, ab tum jaa sakte hoo...

Eklavya gives him a dirty look, throws the money at his feet..

E: yeh rahe aapke paise.. aapke jaise ghinauna insaan maine aaj taq nahi dekha..mai aapke against case file nahi karoonga, par agar, aapne mujhko koi nuksaan pahunchaane ki koshish ki, to mera moo (mouth) zaroora khule ga... samajh gaye aap!!!

He leaves with anger...

Kt over hears all this, and is horrified...

what will she do now??

Coming Up Next:

Kt takes a step !

New Entries/More Hidden Relations...

Lakshya's Condition...

Kt's Father's Real Truth...

10+ More Comments and i will Continue ! :)

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OOO!! so tell me.. was this filled with suspence or no ?!!! 😲

😆 Okay, here is the next part..

Leave your predictions, and comments ! :)

Cheers,

- Zinu ! :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
OMG! 😭 😭 😭 Di, Zinu Di, Lakshya ka accident ho gaya??? 😭 Shocking Part!! Jaldi se continue karo, di, and how is sneha related to Laksh? 😕 please continue soon, im waiting. 😳
👏 👏 👏 - prachi. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
great update!!! continue soon!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
Zinu Di! That was so sad! Touched my heart! I Hope Lakshya is fit n fine! 😭 😳 😊 n yeah, "My wishes are with di's fanfic!" 😆 😆 😳 Please Continue Soon.. 👏 😳 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
wow!!zinu such a long part 👏 👏 ...while my lakshu hurt!! 😭 😭 😭 ....(see i commented 😉 )continue soon!!


-abhi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
omg-so much suspense,laksh getting hurt 😭 n eku's entry 😉
cnt w8 to find out wat happens next 😳 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
arre kittu kya fanfic hai yaar 😛 ...............I just became your fan now...............I usually don't read fanfics but this is your first FF that I have read..................and sereously it's mindblowing 😃 .......................just can't wait till the next part comes 😛 😛 😛 .................plz let me know when u write the next part yaar..................well done..............u r awsome 😉


lov ya

me 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
4 More Comments to Go ! :)

@Asha: My Jannuu !! You commented/read a ff of mine ! 🤗 😳 😳 Thankoooo ! 🤗 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
great hope lakshya is ok!!😭
Can't wait for the next part!!😛
Plzzzz continue soon!!😳
3 more to go!!

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