°¤Tera Mere Rishta Anjana»Part 5»Page10¤° - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Guys! I'm posting the next part soon today ! It's going to be quite big ! :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: .::Kittu::.

Guys! I'm posting the next part soon today ! It's going to be quite big ! :)



waiting for it...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Previously -

Abhijeet and Lakshya find a cottage to stay in !!

Abhi goes out to get some wood for fire...

Meanwhile ...Lakshya "rescues" Kt , who if fainted on the floor..

Part 3 - Kt's Father's act !

After some time..

Abhijeet comes back and finds an anonymous girl lying on the couch .. his sight shifts over and finds Lakshya sleeping on the chair..

He had come back with wood...He keeps the wood near the fireplace,,

He goes near Lakshya and softly wakes him up by shaking him,,

L: kya hua ??!

A: yeh kaun hai ??!

He points at the girl lying on the couch..

L: pata nahi... mujhe yeh ghayal (fainted) hui mili thi,, kahin aas paas..toh maii....

A: okay, koi baat nahi,, acha mai abhi aata hoon...

L: par kaha jaa raha hai ?!

A: Daadi ko call karne..

Lakshya gets up shocked...

L: kya ?! yu aisa nahi kar sakta..

A: par sun to Lakshya..

L: nahi...tu aisa nahi karega..woh pareshaan ho jayengii..

A: woh aur bhi pareshaan hongi, agar unhe yeh pata chala ki hum Mumbai nahi pahunche...mai unse yehi kahoonga ki hum Mumbai mein hai...

L: mere baare mein poocha toh ?!

A: koi bahaana banaa doonga...

L: nahi,, daadi ko pata lag jayega.. tu rehene de..

A: Lakshya, kuch nahi hoga...mai abhi aata hoon..byee!!

He leaves running out the door...

But, Lakshya seems to follow him out the door ....

When they both return.....

Lakshya seems to find the cottage burning, and the girl screaming for Help.

L: oh my god!! yeh sab kaise...???

A: i know!! jab hum gaye the, aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

Lakshya decides to go in and save the girl...

Lakshya runs towards the burning cottage..

A: (shouting) Lakshya, ruk jao..tumhe kuch ho jayega...LAKSHYA!!!

It was too late, Lakshya had already gone inside...

Inside the Burning Cottage, Happens this;

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BOomafB1AaY

Coming Up Next -

Kt's Father, speaks to Lakshya !

Will Continue after 10+ Comments ! :)

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Okay Guys ! :)

Here is the next part !! :D

Please leave your comments !

Cheers,

- Zinu ! :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
awesome part kittu 😳 !
i've watched that fire scene about 100 times no 😆
( 9 more comments to go ppl! 😉 )
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i always loved that scene! 😛 continue soon!!!! 👏 8 more to go... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
awww nice update!! 👏 👏
really swweeet of laksh to go n ssave her..
waiting for next one!! 😳 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Guys , for all your comments ! 🤗
6 more comments ! :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sweet part Glad that lakshya saves kt!!👏
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳
3 more comments to go!!😛😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sry i dint comment earlier...but dat was an absolutely fab part...continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
hey kittu gr8 update...
it's awsome...
keep going..
👏

Shona

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