LRL FIC: Long Journey of RN(Part17 pg26) 5/05) - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its great.But why did she not want to marry him.Please kisi aur ka chakkar toh nahi....Not that please.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-6(A)

After his class, Raj came to the infirmary as he knew naina would be there where he saw shalini & naina chattering and smiling. Raj came in to join them.

Raj- Hi, lagta hai ek din main aap dono ek doosre se kaafi ghulmil gaye hai.

Shalini- Captain, you should have introduced me to naina much earlier you know! I must say jab maine suna ki aap ki wife aa rahi hai tab mujhe laga tha ki wo aap ki tarah shy and quiet hogi but to my surprise naina is'.

Raj- Just like you right doctor.

Shalini- Exactly, is liye hum dono ki khoob banegi.

Naina- Bilkul, mujhe bhi aisa laga tha ki army main log thode se boring hote hai lekin aap se mil kar laga ki chalo aakhir hamari army main kuch to interesting log hai.

Shalini- By the way, guess captain who naina met earlier in the afternoon.

Raj- Not'''.

Shalini- One & only Major Niar, who were shouting at naina for roaming around in the academy as he thought she was a senior cadet.

Raj(annoyed)- so he was shouting at naina?

Naina- Yeah, but I thought I should play along and I gave him back answer so he was more angry and about to punish me when Brigadier Chandok came with Dr. shalini and he was mad at him for talking to me so rudely like that.

Shalini- Captain, you should have seen the face when Brigadier told Major Niar that naina is your wife. He was dumbstruck at first and then apologized to naina.

Naina- Shayad, un ke saath subah main jo prank hua us se pareshaan hoge.

Shalini & Raj looked at each other surprisingly as how would Naina know anything about the prank as she wasn't present at the time when it happened and none of them told her anything about it.

Raj- But how would you know anything about that prank?

Naina realized that she said something that she shouldn't and as far as she knew Raj he would be able to figure out everything. Shalini was suspicious at her too.

Naina(apologetically with cute face)- All right, I will tell you but promise me that you won't take any action against them as it was my fault because I gave them this plan.

Shalini- Your fault? How and who did what?

Raj- Naina, You didn't do what I think you did.

Naina- Sorry

Shalini- Can any of you speak clearly as I can understand too.

Naina confessed about meeting cadets and giving them a plan to take revenge from Major Niar for their punishments.

Shalini & Raj burst out laughing but they also told naina not to do anything else while she was here which naina agreed to.

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After that all three of them went to the mess for dinner. Shalini & Naina were talking while Raj went to get dinner for all three of them. They were just talking when Dr. Ritu Mishra with a sweet smile on her face came to the table.

"Hi, shalini" She cheerfully said.

"Oh hi, Dr. Mishra; I didn't know you were back as you had a conference didn't you?" Shalini asked Ritu.

"It ended early so I came back." Ritu replied.

And before shalini introduced naina to Dr. Mishra, Raj came with three plates of dinner and he was feeling awkward seeing Ritu there.

Ritu- So Captain, I didn't know that you were so happy & eager to talk to me that you brought one more dinner plate so I wouldn't waste my time getting dinner.

Raj looked at her strangely and so did Shalini as Ritu didn't even bother to look at Naina who were sitting beside Shalini or even ask about her.

Raj also looked at Naina to know that whether she wasn't taking Dr. Ritu's flirting seriously as Raj wasn't interested in her at all, but much to his surprise she was enjoying this.

Raj- Dr. Mishra, it's nice that you are back. Join us for dinner. I will get one more plate.

Ritu(surprised)- One more plate? For whom?

Raj- For you. And then he put three plates on table, and went to get one more plate.

Ritu was surprised and she sat on the chair and she realized that there was one more person on the table and she had thought it was probably some girl who wanted to talk to shalini.

Raj came back hurriedly as he didn't want Naina to take any wrong idea about Dr. Mishra's chattering.

Raj sat next to Naina opposite to Ritu and Ritu was more surprised.

"So, who is this young lady?" Ritu finally asked to shalini.

"I think it would be better if Captain Rajveer would introduce her to you." Shalini replied and Ritu looked at Raj with her confused look.

"Of course I'll introduce you," Raj replied, "Dr Mishra, this is my wife Naina. Naina, this is Dr Ritu Mishra, the academy's psychiatrist."

Ritu was shocked at his sentence while Naina put her hand out in greeting, but as Ritu was in so shock that she didn't realize it, she looked dumbly at Naina who was looking at her smiling like she was enjoying her condition.

Shalini coughed to bring Ritu back to reality and Ritu was normal.

"Oh, I am sorry but you know it is quite a shock as I didn't know Raj was married." Ritu told Naina while shaking her hand.



Raj was uncomfortable but he needed to say something as shalini signed him to clear the misunderstanding as she very well knew that Dr. Mishra can bend any situation in to misunderstanding easily.

Raj- Nobody asked me before so I didn't tell anybody.

Naina (casually) - It's ok, and even if Raj would have told you, you wouldn't be able to meet me because I wasn't here, but I am here now and I think we will have great time knowing each other.

Raj was glad and shalini sighed in relief but there was a big tension for Dr. Mishra while Naina sensed something during dinner about Ritu.

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After the dinner, Raj decided to left right away with Naina as he didn't want to be around with Ritu.

As soon as they were back in the room, Naina decided to have a little fun by teasing Raj.

Naina- Raj, I think you broke Ritu's heart. How could you?

Raj(shocked)- What do you mean?

Naina- You should have told her about your marriage before she hopelessly fell in love with you.

Raj(more shocked)- It's nothing like that, and I know Dr. Mishra for only two months, and we don't even have friendship. I never did anything'''''

Naina- Oh come on Raj, don't tell me that you are not a bit interested in her. She is beautiful, smart and of course tum pe line bhi kaafi marti hai ab aisa mauka tum thodi na jane doge.

Raj- Naina, believe me I would never do that.

Naina bursts out laughing as she saw Raj sweating.

Raj was annoyed at the fact that how easily Naina made a fool out of him but at the same time he was happy too find someone to share his feelings as he realized that even after three years of endless pain he saw at least a glimpse of old cheerful naina which she was before navin's death.

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Preview: Flashback part of Raj & Naina. About their friendship, their marriage and many more things.
Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
wow it was so chweet

luved it

but naina ko jealous karo jaldi(jealousy means love)

so rn lov soon plzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hey another awesome part 😊 😊 pleas bring RN together 😉 Like Naina's behaviour, jolly 😛 cont. ASAP
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
its superb 👏 👏 👏 please conitune soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
so sweeeeett pz update soon
by the way i had doubts
1.wat is naina proffesion here?
2.is she a undercover officer here too
3.is this ff related to ur last one(i dont think sooo but still)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
good part.. going very interesting... 👏 do post the next part soon.. 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please we are waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the next part soon fast asap now only.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: arss

so sweeeeett pz update soon
by the way i had doubts
1.wat is naina proffesion here?
2.is she a undercover officer here too
3.is this ff related to ur last one(i dont think sooo but still)


Well, I know you have a lot of questions but to find out you have to wait a little longer. Naina is not an undercover officer here nor this one is related to my last one but in this ff, naina is different. She has pain about loosing her brother & about her marriage to Rajveer but there are lot more layers of her character which will be coming soon.

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