LRL FIC: Long Journey of RN(Part17 pg26) 5/05)

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PART- 1

Captain Rajveer Singh shekhawat was back in KMA after four years, and the academy was the same as it had been six years before when he himself and his two best friends Naveen and Abhimanu were graduated. It seemed all the same: tough training, cadets' pranks, BC's discipline & MC's nasty habits. But in last four years, so much had happened that changed his life entirely.

Captain Naveen Singh Ahaluwalia was declared as a traitor four years ago in KMA, and He had lost both of his best friends in that conspiracy. But it wasn't enough pain that the life had given to him. Much was happened in his past, and his future wasn't looking bright either. He did suffer a lot and he still had to suffer more in the future.

Four years later'

Rajveer was back in KMA with new mission in his life. It was his mission to catch the spy and protect the nuclear triggers as the attempt had been made to steal them again, and with this mission he got one last chance to prove Navin's innocence.

In the first month, he had already mixed well enough with Captain Dr. Shalini singhal & Suriji. Brigadier Chandok wasn't very happy about Raj's posting at KMA as they had many issues in the past connected to academy rules and Naveen, but there wasn't much he could do. Major Niar never liked Rajveer and Raj wasn't too keen about him either. In case of Dr. Ritu Mishra, Raj wasn't comfortable enough to begin a friendship like he had with suriji or shalini but they worked well as two professionals.

At one evening, Raj was in the mess drinking his coffee when his cell started to ring. He was shocked to see the number but he picked it up.

"Hello''.." He sounded a little put out.

"Rajveer, How are you beta?" On the other side, there was a lady with loving voice.

"Ma, aap''? When did you get back?" Rajveer sounded quite surprised.

"Kal raat ko''' hum sab wapas aa gaye hai." The lady told him after a long pause.

"Sab matlab Dad or ''''" He didn't finish.

"Ha tumhare Dad bhi hamare saath wapas aaye hai, to batao kab mil rahe ho?" She asked him.

"I will try my best to get there as soon as possible." he hung up the phone.

After the phone call, he was in deep thoughts about whether he should go to meet them or make some excuse. But deep down inside, he wanted to meet them after all it had been three years.

Luckily, it was Friday evening, so he could go for the weekend as there weren't any extra classes during that weekend.

He drove to a big house in Delhi the other morning. He knocked the door somewhat nervously.

After some time the door was opened and an old man looked at him happily.

"Are Rajveer Beta aap aa gaye?" He happily welcomed him. (He was Ramu Kaka who had been working there many years when Raj was so little. Raj respected him a lot because he had brought him up. It was Raj's dad's house.)

Haan'. and Raj touched his feet to get blessing and then came inside.

In the living room, two men and two ladies were talking when Raj entered the living room. Raj looked at them who were all happy to see him.

"Ma, aap kaisi hai?" Raj went to a lady and touched her feet.

"It's so nice to see you after all these years." The lady had happy tears in her eyes.

After that he met his dad who hugged him warmly, and then he also took blessing from the other two elders.

Raj looked around but he didn't find the person who he was looking for and his dad guessed it.

"She is out, and she will be back soon." Raj's dad told him.

"Does she know I was coming?" Raj asked them.

But nobody answered so Raj understood that nobody told her yet about his arrival.


Raj was about to get up when the lady whom he called "Ma.." stopped him.

"Rajveer, tum dono ko aage badna hoga zindagi main, and we all think that the time has come when you two need to think and talk." She told him.

"I think Mrs. Ahaluwalia is right, Rajveer beta. Aakhir tumne aur naina ne shaadi ki hai or unko bhi to apni beti ke future ke bare main chinta hogi na" His dad supported Naina's Mom.

(The lady whom he called "Ma..." was naveen & naina's mother and his mother-in-law.)

Suddenly the other lady who was quiet until now looked at the door and called'.
"Naina!" A young woman was at the door listening to the whole conversation and looking at them shocked

Everybody turned around in the direction including Raj. And there she was'''

After three years''..

His wife Naina Singh Shekhwat. His best friend naveen's sister or he still could say, His best friend.

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Seeing him, Naina left the room and went outside in the garden. He understood that she still was angry with him or may be she hated him until now. But today, he himself thought that they had to make a decision about their lives. They needed to talk.

He went behind her to find her, and He found her standing all alone in a lonely corner of the garden. He was looking at her. She looked the same as she did three years ago but a lot mature. Her beauty was increased in those three years but every single expression whenever she was angry or upset was the same.

Her anger'' That thought brought a slight smile on Rajveer's face as he knew Naina could get easily angry on anybody at anytime, but the sadness on her face and distance between them that those years had brought was awful for him or yet for both of them.

"Naina'''." Rajveer called her.

Naina looked at him and then looked away.

"I think we have to talk." Rajveer continued ignoring her cold attitude.

"No Raj, please.'''''" She replied with sadness.

"I just can't do this right now." She told him.

"Naina, I am not going to force you but right now I need you more than anything. I need my best friend back." Raj replied with the same sadness.

Naina looked at him questing as in these three years, they both had forgotten that besides being husband-wife, they had a much strong bond between them and it was best and pure friendship which was built way before any unfortunate events that happened in their lives including their marriage.

"Aaj itne saalon baad tumne mujhe dost kaha hai." Naina told him.

"You were, you are and you will always be my best friend Naina. No matter what other name the world had given to our relationship." Raj told her seriously.

For the first time in three years, Naina had realized that she was seeing the old Raj who was her best friend and who understood her more than anyone else.

"Can you come with me at KMA?" Raj asked her.

She was shocked as she didn't know he was posted at KMA.

"KMA? When did you''. For what reason'''.." She couldn't complete.

"A month ago, and yes it's the chance I needed but you being here and your mom and my dad and uncle and aunty are also here. I don't know how to convince them unless you ''." Before he completed the answer was there.

"I will come with you." Naina answered him seriously.

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Here is starting of MY New Fanfic, "LONG JOURNEY OF RN"

Please comment if you like the first part.

Part-1 pg1 Part-2 pg1 Part-3 pg2
Part-4 pg2 Part-5 pg4 Part-6A pg6
Part-6B pg10 Part-7 pg11 Part-8 pg12
Part-9 pg13 Part-10 pg13 Part-11 pg15
Part-12 pg17 Part-13 pg17 Part-14 pg18
Part-15 pg20 Part-16 pg24 Part-17 pg26
Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago

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superb,please continue it as soon as possible.
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wow yaar your new ff....1st part was awesome yaar....plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnn i am preety sure that it will rock 3 as your previous missionnnnnnn 😆
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Part-2

Three years ago,

Rajveer was pacing around in his room, and his dad knocked on the door.

Dad- To kya faisla hai tumhara beta?

Raj- No, dad. I can't do this. Naina is my best friend and that's it. I can't marry her dad'. Try to understand''..

Dad- But, why not tum dono ek doosre ko bahut achi tarah se jante hai aur jahan tak main janta hoon na to tumhari zindagi main koi ladki hai aur na hi naina ki zindagi main aisa koi special some one.

Raj- Lekin uska matlab ye to nahi ki hum dono ek doosre se shaadi kar le.

Dad- You are right, but try to think about the situation. Naveen ke jane ke baad waise bhi mera dost toot chuka hai aur phir dono rishte to usne naina ke liye baat ki thi wo naveen ke haadse ke baad wahan se na ho gayee hai. Aise main mujhe laga ki shayad tum dono mere dost aur naveen ki aakhri khwaish puri kar do?

Raj (shocked)- uncle ki aakhri khwaish aur naveen bhi ye hi chahta tha? Dad what are you talking about?

Dad(with tears)- Naveen ne marte waqt mujhse aur uske papa se kaha tha ki wo tum dono ko hamesha saath dekhna chahta tha aur ye shayad uski kismat main nahi tha aur ab kuch dino pehle Doctors ne kaha ki chetan(naveen's dad) ko heart ki bimari hai aur ab shayad uske paas six months se jyada nahi hai.

Raj- But dad''

Dad- Mujhe jo kehna tha wo maine keh diya ab aage tum dono ki marzi.

(Rajveer's Dad and Naveen's Dad were business partner and good friends and so were their children Rajveer & Naveen. Rajveer always stayed with Naveen after his mother's death, and Naina used to study in Mumbai so she had always stayed with her uncle & aunt until Naveen & Rajveer joined the KMA.)

On the other side, Naina's mom was trying to make her understand the same thing.

Naina- But ma''. Main aur Raj nahi mujhse ye nahi hoga?

Mom- Dekh naina, pehle hi tere do rishte tooth chuke hai aur ab jab anand bhaisaab (Rajveer's Dad) ne ye baat kahi to mujhe aur tere baba ko ye baat sahi lagi.

Naina- Nahi ma'. Main raj se shaadi nahi kar sakti. He is my friend aur phir wo bhi mere bare main aisa kuch nahi sochta hoga.

Mom- Naveen ki bhi ye hi khwaish thi naina aur tere baba ke paas bhi jyada waqt nahi hai. Unhone bete ki maut ka sadma badi muskil se bardast kiya hai aur ab sirf ek aur sapna hai teri shaadi ka. Kya tu unko jaate jaate itni khushi bhi nahi de sakti? Ab aage teri marzi''

Naina- Theek hai ma''. Main ready hoon lekin agar Raj ki marzi na hui to ye shaadi nahi hogi.

Mom- Bilkul is main uski marzi bhi shaamil hogi aur agar usko aitraaz hua to hum ye shaadi nahi karvayenge.

After her mom left, Naina called Raj on his cell phone and told him to meet him.

Raj- Naina, wo''' dad ne aaj hamari shaadi ki baat ki thi!

Naina- Janti hoon, mom ne bhi mujh se yahi baat ki thi lekin Raj tum sachchai jante ho ki main tumse shaadi kyon nahi kar sakti. But I couldn't say No to ma so you have to say No to your dad for my sake.

Raj exactly knew what naina was talking about and he knew why she couldn't marry him. He knew that he had to do something for her as he couldn't see her upset.

He nodded yes and left from there. Naina was relieved that Raj will take care of everything.

Raj was gone for two days as he asked for two days to think about this thoroughly for Naina and for himself. When he arrived back, everyone was at Naina's house waiting for his answer.

Raj looked at his dad and then at Naina's parents. All of their eyes looked at him with a hope that made him weak. He looked at Naina whose eyes had 'trust' on him that he wouldn't let her down.

Raj was in dilemma that what he should do. If he said yes, then it would break Naina but if he said no, then it would break three people whom he respected a lot. He feared that his decision could kill Naveen's parents' only hope and his dad's trust on him, but on the other side Naina whose last hope was based on his decision.

Raj's Dad- To phir kya decision hai tumhara beta?

Raj looked at Naina and then her parents and then to his dad.

Raj- Mujhe is shaadi se koi aitraaz nahi hai Dad. I am ready.

Naina was shocked while all the elders were happy. Naina looked at Raj and those eyes had a lot of questions which answers Raj didn't have.

He knew that Naina was angry or may be she will hate him for this but he didn't have any other choice. He couldn't tell naina the truth nor could he tell their parents the truth. He just had to except the consequences of his decision which he knew going to be worse for him.

They both got married in three days in a temple in presence of their parents and Naina's uncle-aunt. The marriage ceremony was so simple; and during the ceremony he could see sadness in naina's eyes. She wasn't happy at all. Neither was he nor how could he be happy when the person whom he loved the most was sad. Yes, he loved Naina singh ahaluwalia, one who was naveen's sister and one who was his best friend. But the thing was she never loved him. She always considered him as her friend nothing else.

After the marriage, when they were alone Raj tried to talk to Naina.

"Naina, main janta hoon ki tum bahut dukhi ho lekin yakeen mano mera main ye bilkul nahi chahta tha'''. I just had to say yes because''."

"I thought bhaiya ke jane ke baad mera ek dost tha jis pe main apni aankhen bandh kar ke bharosha kar sakti thi lekin aaj pata chala ki wo bhi mera bhram tha. You betrayed my trust Raj. How could you'''.? Sab kuch jante hue bhi tumne meri zindagi kyon barbaad kar di?"

Naina was crying and Raj was frustrated.

"Sahi kaha tumne'. You lost your friend today''.. I betrayed you'.. but I can't explain anything as you wouldn't believe me anyway." Raj left the room angrily and frustrated.

On the other day, Raj went to join his duty by making an excuse that Naina would be better off to leave with her parents as he had a lot of work right now, and they all accepted as Naina also had to finish her study as she was doing her MBA.

After six months, Naina's father died and Raj came to attend the funeral but Naina was still angry with him. Naina decided to go to London for further studies and Raj didn't have any objection. Raj's father and Naina's mother could sense the tension between their children but there wasn't anything they could do.

Raj's father and Naina's mother also went to London with Naina as they had another business over there and Raj wanted somebody to be there with Naina. They were in London for almost two and half years until Naina finished her education. Then they sold their business and settled back in Delhi.

In these three years, their parents tried to bring them closer but Naina's hate and Raj's guilt always came in the way.

Now after three years, their parents were adamant about their decision and once again Raj & Naina had to do what their parents wanted. But this time the situation was sensitive as no matter how much Naina was angry at Raj or how much she hated him for what he did she always want him to be safe. She couldn't loose him. And on the other side for raj, he had only two missions: one was to bring back Naveen's pride & honor by proving him innocent and the other was to bring back Naina's happiness no matter how much pain he is going to suffer by doing so.

Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago
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😭 emotional part yaar........i am so sad that raj and naina are so unhappy.... 😭 😭
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hey great story

kya yaar sath me hoke bhi both are unhappy

nahi jaldi update karo

it is fantastic
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nice fic will wait for the next part
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that's coollll... 👏 continue soon.. 😊 😛
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Part-3

Rajveer came back to the KMA but he was alone and Naina wasn't with him as they had still many things to figure out.

He finished his class in that afternoon and every cadet was amused as they found him total lost in the lecture. Even Dr. shalini observed that too and she had many questions as she always worries for people who she knew.

He was passing through corridor when Dr. shalini called for him.

"Yes, doctor" Raj asked, "What is it?"

"I would like to ask what the matter with you is because you look so lost since you came back." Shalini asked him sounding concerned.

"Nothing at all, Dr. shalini. I am perfectly fine." Raj answered her uneasily as he didn't want more questions from her.

But shalini wasn't easy to get rid of and she was about to ask more when an orderly came there asking for Raj as Brigadier Chandok had called him.

Rajveer just went to meet BC instantly as he didn't want to answer any questions that shalini had.

In BC's office:

Rajveer came in and sat in front of Brigadier Chandok who was looking at him sharply.

BC- Captain, I didn't know that you were married?

That question almost shocked Raj; but somehow he handled himself.

Raj- Yes, sir. But how would you know?

BC- I found out last night when I went to the Mr. sinha's party where I meet your dad and your wife Naina.

Raj remembered about the party where his dad wanted him to come with Naina & him but he made an excuse about going back to KMA and he always got bored with business talk; so Naina had to go alone with his dad for the party.

BC- I was quite surprised when your dad introduced me to her as I never knew about your marriage captain.

Raj- Actually, it happened very quickly and then Naina was in London for her studies so I didn't have chance to introduce her to anybody.

BC- Oh, so when you are planning to get her over here?

Raj- I haven't decided yet but she will be here very soon.

BC- That's wonderful.

Raj left the cabin but the news was all over the academy by now as an orderly heard the conversation between BC & him.

He was going back when he stopped in the infirmary to know that why people at the academy was staring him and apparently dr. shalini had all the information ever needed.

"I didn't expect this from you, captain" Shalini told him as he entered the infirmary.

"What did I do?" Raj asked her.

"You are married and you didn't tell me yet." Shalini told him.

Raj was shocked as how would she know about it.

Shalini looked at him and said- Come on, you thought that conversation between you and BC will be private when there are orderlies around. I am surprised that why didn't the whole academy know until now?

"I think it's because cadets are in the classes" Raj replied.

"So, when is she coming & why didn't you tell me until now & why she wasn't with you?" Shalini started bombing on Raj with her questions.

"Shalini, she is coming next week so you will meet her then and ask questions to her instead of me, all right?" Raj replied.

"So it means she talks just like me & not like you." Shalini further asked.

"You have to find that out on your own when you meet her," Raj replied and then left to go to his next class.

Raj's day was hectic as so many things happened today. The whole academy now knew that he was married. Everyone was anxious to meet his wife.

The week passed lot quickly then he thought. Finally the day had been arrived when Naina was coming. He didn't have pick her up as knowing her he knew she will be here on her own without anybody's help. Naina was independent person, and she never liked anybody helping her in small matters.

Raj was about to go to his class, when shalini stopped him from behind.

"Captain, I thought your wife was coming today and you are still here. Where are you going? Don't you have to pick her up?" Shalini again started her questions.

"Well for your information, I am going to my class & Yes, she is coming today but she is not a child as she can find her way to come to KMA perfectly by herself, so don't worry about it." Raj replied her with a smirk on his face.

Shalini was confused but Raj left to teach his class leaving confuse shalini behind.

Then the scene shifts to KMA gate:

Naina is shown with a bag-pack on her shoulders. She enters in KMA and she is wearing a blue jeans, white shirt with blue jacket. As she enters into the academy, she sees six young people discussing something in corner while running around with rifles in their hands. It looks like that they had been punished.

"Yaar, this is not fair. Galati kare huda aur sazaa bhugte hum sab log?" A young girl pointed out to a guy who was running lousily.

"Oy idea mera tha, lekin saath to huda ka tum sab ne diya tha riya." The guy points out to the girl her mistake.

"No, chief it was your fault this time." Another guy told huda.

"Zaasti sazaa kya mili yudi aur riya ki nataunki shuru ho gayee," A very bindast type guy had said.

"Sahi kaha aapne aalekh bhai, shararat karte hai lekin sazaa nahi bhugat sakte." A very serious looking guy supported him.

"Oy tu chup kar ali, hamesha usool leke baith jaata hai. Yahan battery dead hone ko aayee hai aur tu''" Another girl shouted.

"Haan pooja tu sahi kah rahi hai in logo ka kya shararat karte rehte hai aur wo muchchad hamesha punish karta rehta hai lekin uska bhi kuch karna padega," Riya told the girl who was angry.

"Lekin karen to bhi kya har baar hum kuch karne jate hai aur pakde jate hai." Huda complained.

Hearing this conversation, Naina smiled & went up to them.

"So, Major Niar ne punish kiya hai tum logo ko?" Naina questioned.

"Nahi, punishment to mere shah rukh ne di hai agar major niar hote to poora connection hi kat ho gaya hota, but who are you?" Pooja questioned.

"Oy jo bhi ho aap, bahut khoobsurat ho. First year cadet to nahi." Huda tried to flirt as usual.

"Thanks for compliment, but I don't look as young as you guys so obviously I am not a cadet here." Naina replied with a smile.

"Wo to aap ne sahi kaha'''" Yudi said & then corrected himself, "But you are not as old as our teachers either''' I mean there are young teachers here like Rajveer sir & shalini maam''.. I mean you are not old'''. I mean never mind." He confused himself with a little embarrassment.

"Oy rajveer sir to veer matalab shah rukh matalab hero hai hero, wo old nahi hai." Pooja again interrupted.

"Lekin bole to aap kaun hai?" Aalekh finally asked.

"Wo sab chodo, Major Niar ko ullu banana bahut simple hain & aur wo bhi bina pakde gaye, Then she said something to them and left smiling."

"Jo bhi ho, baat uski bilkul sahi thi." Aalekh said to others.

"Aise pakde jane ka koi chance nahi hai guru." Ali finally spoke.

"Agar ali manta hai to plan main zarror dum hai." Riya & Pooja both agreed.

Huda was ready already & Yudi had to drag himself in that no matter what.

Preview: What did Naina tell to the six cadets? What will happen to Major Niar? How will everyone react when they will find out Naina is Captain Rajveer's wife? What will be Rajveer's expression against the prank that Naina just had taught to the cadets?
Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago
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hwy awesome yaar...plz continue soonnnnnn, want to see what naina said to those 666666

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