LRL FIC: Long Journey of RN(Part17 pg26) 5/05) - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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welcome back dear

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part. i read all your fics and those are really good.......... Please continue soon............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part ' 7


Half an hour later, Raj and Naina were at Mr. Sahani's office. Naina told at reception that she had a meeting with Mr. Sahani.

Receptionist called Mr. sahani and then told Raj and Naina to go in to the next room where Mr. Sahani was already waiting for Naina. (Naina and Mr. Sahani know each other from business circles)


Raj already knew Mr. Sahani as he came to the academy twice after his posting.

Mr. Sahani- Captain Shekhawat? Aap yahan pe?

Raj- Yeah, I came here with Naina as you had a meeting with her.

Mr. Sahani- And how do you know her?

Naina- Actually, Mr. sahani, Raj is my husband.

Mr. Sahani looked at Raj in surprise.

Mr. Sahani- Are you Business tycoon Mr. Raghav singh shekhwat's son?

Raj- Yes'..

Mr. Sahani- Then what are you doing in the army? I always tell my son yudi to join business with me as he is only heir of my business. I am sure your father would like that too, captain'

Raj was annoyed at Mr. Sahani's view about army'

Raj- Well, my dad don't mind about me being an army officer and for business, Naina can take care of everything. Waise aap ki beti Neelu bhi to business sambhal sakti hai agar yudi ek army officer banna chahe to'.

Mr. Sahani- Yeah, but I don't want my son to spend his life as an army officer. I think he would become a great business man someday' And I also think that it's just a phase he is going through in his young age. He will leave KMA once he will understand'..

Raj was now almost angry and about to answer back Mr. Sahani but Naina made a sign not to drag this thing anymore so he became silent.

Naina- Why don't we go over the deal Mr. Sahani?

Mr. Sahani- Sure, Naina'..

Raj left from there saying that he will pick her up in the evening but Naina refused saying that she will be back on her own once her work is over.

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Raj was back in the academy for his class with first year cadets just in time'.

He taught them hand to hand combat fight that day, and he made sure that everyone will learn that thoroughly as they will need this training in Major Niar's future drill tests.

After the class, Yudi stayed back as it looked like he wanted to ask something to Rajveer.

Raj- Yes, cadet yudi? Is something I can help you with?

Yudi- Sir, I wanted to ask'''.. Never mind sir, I will see you in next class.

Raj- Cadet Yudi, I know you wanted to ask something'. Please go ahead'..

Yudi- Sir, mujhe aap se poochna to nahi chahiye but I hope mere dad ke saath aap ki meeting achchi rahi ho'. I mean he is not a bad guy from his heart but he and the army'. Just don't click''

Raj(smiled)- Don't worry, yudi' I know your father is a wonderful person and let me tell you something, you never did anything wrong making the decision for your life. I know that you think your father wouldn't understand that but he will respect it the day you prove yourself by becoming the best officer you could'..

Yudi- I hope so' I will try my best sir'

Raj- Now, that is spoken like a soldier.

Yudi left from there to attend the drill that they had with Major Niar.

MC wasn't in the ground yet and his friends were waiting for him to know if something was wrong.

Pooja- Oy yudi, kahan pe tha ab tak?

Yudi- Wo kuch nahi'..

Aalekh- Jane do na ab' wo aa gaya na abhi wo muchchad bhi aa jayega'

Huda- Kya zabaan hai teri kaidi, naam liya or muchchad hazir.

They all saw Major Niar coming to them with anger on his face as usual so they all became silent as nobody wanted an unwanted punishment from him.

The drill was completed with MC's daily bakwas and complains about how cadets don't do any exercises or anything'

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"It's not that bad," she told Raj, as Naina entered the room where Raj was trying to choose between two shirts.

"Well, you came back'" he smiled, "How was your meeting with Mr. Sahani?"


Naina ' Fantastic, after you left' Although he was still in shock, that you are business tycoon, Mr. shekhawat's son, and even more surprised that I married you.

Raj(annoyingly)- Why, is there anything wrong with me? And besides, it doesn't matter what he thinks'

Naina(with smirk)- Oh, I think, it affected you'

Raj- No it didn't'. Anyways, I will prepare some tea for us while you fresh up.

Naina nodded and left to freshen up while Raj prepared both of them Hot tea.

Handling the mug of tea to her, Raj sat on the sofa with his mug.

Naina- How was your day?

Raj- Fine. Actually cadet yudi was asking me about his father's meeting with me.

Naina- Oh yeah but why?

Raj told her the reason and Naina smiled at him.

Naina- I think yudi needs some support to prove himself.

Raj- I think you are right.

Naina- By the way, I want to ask something else Raj.

Raj- Hmmm'

Naina- Did you find out anything about bhaiya in past three months?

Raj(sadly)- Unfortunately, nothing, but I will'.. Have some patience Naina and trust me'

Naina(with slight smile)- I do trust you Raj'.

They both were silent afterwards thinking about old times and Raj thought it would be better if he will lighten the mood between them.

Raj(suddenly)- By the way Naina, how about we go for dinner somewhere out today?

Naina- Out? But why?

Raj- I am bored eating in the mess every day. So if you give me company tonight, I would like to go out.

Naina(smiled)- Sure.. Why not?

After sometime, they both got ready and Raj took Naina to a beautiful restaurant outside the city for dinner.

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On the other side, Ritu was pacing around in her room angrily while somebody called her on her cell phone.

Ritu- You told me that it would be easier for me this time but Captain has a wife.

Person- Well I didn't know that either about how this happened' Anyways think something else' but you have to get those triggers as you already lost your opportunity with Captain Naveen singh ahaluwalia'. We can't afford the mistake this time' Stakes are too high at this time.

Ritu- I will think of something but you have to give me some time'.

Person- You have only four months so you better do something or else'..

Ritu- I will do something.

She hung up the phone and tried to think of a new plan as the old one just destroyed because of Captain Rajveer's wife's arrival.

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Here, the six cadets were talking in the mess. Yudi and Huda made a bet to go outside tonight after lights out. The senior cadets challenged Huda that he won't be able to get out but being over smart fool, Huda accepted the bet and also challenged them as he not only himself, but the whole gang would spend night outside of the academy.

Ali said No but Pooja told him to come along with him so he said Yes

Huda and others crossed the wall through faculty corridors as it was easily being crossed.

They all ended up at the same restaurant where Raj came with Naina for dinner.

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Preview: Captain Rajveer is angry with cadets because they broke academy's rules? But Naina thinks otherwise'. Will Naina and Raj have more differences because of Cadets' issue? What is Ritu's plan? Who is the person Ritu talked to? Will Raj ever find out anything about Naveen?

Edited by nisha1984 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
very interesting... cooll...lovely..very well written.... 👏 do continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cool yaar.....i hope ritu is not trying to make differences b/w raj-naina....and i think that niana will control raj's anger, plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dont u see ur replies

i asked u sumthing
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_twinkling_

dont u see ur replies

i asked u sumthing



Sorry, but I have been busy so I didn't answer your question earlier.

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=655225
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=609802
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I hope you will find that helpful and I hope you will like these fan fics also.
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