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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sun_423

kinzu that was an awesome start to your fanfic.. you have written it with perfection... it is so damn good.. me already in love with it... i liked the way you described each & every minute detail.. simply fabulous , amazing , awesome , rocking , marvelous , excellent , par excellence , bindaas , jhakaas , raapchik , too damn dhassu... mazaa aagaya after i read the first part.. i enjoyed the part to the fullest sachchi keh rahii hoon very very very very very very very very damn well-written... keep the good work going yaar...your writing is absolutely super-duper coollll... 👏 dear please post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part very eagerly palkein bichake... 😊 😛 😃

OMG DIIII!!

m sooo honoured to hav ur comment!

dis smile iz jus not dissappearing 4 ma face!!

if u in love wid ma FF....m in love wid ur Comments!!

thnx loadz dii!

i hav ritten da next part on a paper...jus hav to type it!😳

thnx loadz!!🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
loved the first part, and yeah i think angad should have a silver car....lol, the blue one looks more like for guys, anyways continue soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani

hey yaar!

i personally want to say Sorry 2 u!

i waz updating da part in da noon only....wen it waz jus abt to be posted!

da lights went off!😭😭

m rele sorry 4 keep u w8ing!😭

hey its ok..u dun need to be sori..it was worth waiting

nyways it was a mindblowing awesum awesum awesum prt! so different especially i luv d relation of angad and anjali! sujal and kavya! dats so sweeeeett! nyways it was rocking and cant wait to know wat happens further

luvd ti continue asap👏👏👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

loved the first part, and yeah i think angad should have a silver car....lol, the blue one looks more like for guys, anyways continue soon 😉

aaaww!! thnx 4 da sweet comments!

yea so DONE wid da Silver one!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

hey its ok..u dun need to be sori..it was worth waiting

nyways it was a mindblowing awesum awesum awesum prt! so different especially i luv d relation of angad and anjali! sujal and kavya! dats so sweeeeett! nyways it was rocking and cant wait to know wat happens further

luvd ti continue asap👏👏👏

aaww!!

thnx soo much 4 ur lovely comments!

dey rele mean alot!😛

yea...i'l continue soon!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow kinza dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood...just gr8 👏 very interesting gr8 style of writing... i really love the rrelationship btwn sujal angad and saksham....hope to seee more of the jodi's combination...continue soooon can't wait more.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Honii

wow kinza dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood...just gr8 👏 very interesting gr8 style of writing... i really love the rrelationship btwn sujal angad and saksham....hope to seee more of the jodi's combination...continue soooon can't wait more.... 👏 👏 👏

aaawww!!!

thnk u loadz 4 ur wonderful comments!

n even i love their frndship,...its shooo cute! i jus wish it waz real😳

thnx!!!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

Well Ppl!

Thanx loadz 4 awl ur wonderful comments!

da Next part wil be up in 30 minz!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2:

Last time…it waz mostly da guyz part!..so dis tyme it wud be of our beautiful GIRLS!

Neha Bamb fanz..dere iz also a lil mention of Kripa in dis part!

UNI:

Now the camera rolls on to Girls Campus!

n there v see…loadz of galz chattin…studying…n sum talking on theit cell phones! Eve1 waz stil xcited abt Uni! Coz it waz stil da 1st week 4 awl Semesterz!

Now….V see….a gal runnin towardz a bench…….

Wearing this::

(ppl plzz take this embroidery az a print:D)

Girl:: Ohhh….ufff….(still breathing loudly) ….m so Sorry DJ!!!

DJ jusn turn their faces away!!

G: Acha baba!! M rele rele sorry dat m late!! Ab khush

DJ : hmmm…P2 …u alwayzzzzzzz do dat1!

P2: yaar….sorry….slept late last nite….n bdw…u ppl also din't call to wake me up!!!

(B4 u ppl get confused!.....i wanna xplain u dat….DJ are Dhara n Jwala……P2'z 2 bestfrndz…so she calls dem az D-&-J! hope dat clears ur confusion!)

Jwala stands up n sayz: jus chek ur cell phone!!

P2's cell……..lol!!!

P2 cheks it….n views da Missd call option..n hits her head lightly….

: oops sorry…I guess I waz too dozed off in ma sleep!!

Now the 3 of dem…..go to da cafeteria to grab sum breakfast( dis iz cuz….the 3 ofd dem always hav their breakfast 2geda!)

Cafeteria::

P2: so bestfrndz..lets start wid our yesterdayz events..in one word updates!

Dhara: hmmm……well….nuffin such special happnd Yesterday….n she blushes on dat!!

Jwala: y u blushin???

Dhara: me …ahnmm,..no..m not!

P2: ohhooo Jwala…az if u don't knw….isko apna MR.RIGHT milgaya hoga….(winking Jwala)…..tellus Dhara…y u hidin…4rm us!!

Jwala: u ryte P2..sumfin iz surely up!! Yesterday wen I went to her place…az Chachu invited us 4 Dinner….she waz lost in her own world!!

( Dhara n Jwala are cuzins! Their fathers are brothers!)

{[Dhara iz more a lil girly type..n w8s 4 her Prince Charming…

Jwala iz a flirt type gal..she believes in havin boyfrndz!

P2…iz da neutral one..lol….shebelieves,,,abt da Prince Charming thing too…buh shez lyk…love will jus happen….n ofcurse until the marriage..dey wud be az BF n GF!]}

Dhara's face iz awl Pink…da oda 2 galz see..dat she iz lukin at sumfin or sum1 behind dem…..

They both r abt to turn bak n see….buh b4 dat Dhara starts to speak up!

Dhara: ahnmm,…who actually….i don't knw how to say it

Jwala: uff…stop annoyin n say it…jaldi!

P2: shut up Jwala…usse bolne tou dou!!

Dhara: well….ahnmm..actually…yesterday I saw a guy playin basketball in da basketball court

Jwala makes a face n laughs on dat: hhehehahah…DUHH!! Who basketball court mein hee basketball khelega….!! Hehehehheehhee

P2: Jwala!! Stop it yaar…let her speak…n plzz madam,..ab spill it out!!

Dhara: f9!!!! Well….idon't hiz name…..buh I waz kind of attracted to him..n da way he smiled at me..i jus drooled ova dat!

Jwala n P2 laugh on dat!!

Jwala: temme sumfin knw….u fall 4 eve oda guy!

Dhara: no way!! I don't …shut ur crap up!!

Jwala: wateva…..kaun harladke ko dekh kar bolta hai…OMG!! Hezz shoo cute(mimickin Dhara)

Dhara: no..i don't say it in dat way….if sum1 iz cute….v jus can't chng da truth….if dat sum1 iz cute..so iz cute!! Can u chngit??????? In a annoyed n angry tone!

P2: SHUT UP U BOTH!! ….uughh….u too…jab mauqa mille…u both start fightin!..P2 gets up n leaves!!

Jwala n Dhara … : PPP2222!!..W888!!

Dey run to her n apologize….n da 3 of de smile n hug az a trio!

P2: plzz u both..don't fight

Jwala: buhh P2…u only say dat ….jin ke beech pyaar hota hai..they mostly fight~

Dhara: haan P2!!

P2: yeaahh well…u guyz r rite!!

Jwala in a teasin face n grin on her face says: yeaah….so usee..it so clearly states…whom v more love…..lyk u neva fight(teasin her…dat dey both don't love her much az dey do to eachoda)

P2: haann….hmmmm

Dhara n Jwala laugh

P2 jus recalled in her mind wat Jwala said!

P2: YOU………………n she runs afta dem

The 2 galz r laughin n P2 iz catchin dem!

************

Inside da Campus…..

2 girls are sittin in da corridor in front of their classes!

(dey are sittin on da windows lyk wen windows r open…da space dere..)

G1:lstn yaar…m rele missin Kripa…..its been so long since v last talkd to her!..

G2:yeah Kashish…even I hav been thinking abt her lately!

Kashish Wearing dis::

Kashish: hmmm…Anjali…so v'll call her 2nite!! Remind me haan!

Anjali Wearing dis..(its da white gypsy!)

Anjali: yeahh…I waz thinking….dat poor her….she had to go thru so much at such a small age! She had to sacrifice abt so many stuff + leaving her frndz n shifting 2 London!

Kashish: well …rele sis…thumbs up 2 her! Bdw….do u rememba da last tyme v had a convo wid her..she told dat her brother studies here…in sum University!

Anajli: kooooooooool!!....hhhmmmmm…dat meanz…..

Kashish:did u read ma mind already

Anjali : lol yeah!! Yea…so dat meanz....dere are also chances of her coming here!!

Kashish…: yepp!!! Hope sooo………

TTTTRRRRIIIIIIINNNNNNGGGG!!

Anjali:Welll Kash….da bell haz rung….lets go towards r classes…so C ya later!

Kashish:: huh?

Anjali: wat??

Kashish: buh weren't our classes togeda!!

Anjali: yeah kash..buh dat waz last semester…dis time dey are separate!

Kashish: ohhhh

Anjali….nywayz…..Bye

Kashish: Bye!!

Afta 2 classes….dey both meet in da cafeteria 4 a refreshment…dey are jus abt to leave…wen Anjali receives a text msg!

Takes her cell out of her purse….n sees da msg…n jus smiles in a cute way!

Anjali's Cell:

Kashish: itna kyun smile kar rahi ho…kis ka hai??

Anjali: jus off a frnd….

Kashish: frnd ya??? In a teasin way

Anjali.: Kashishh……n wid dat…she drags her out da cafeteria……………………………………………………………..

*****

well…hope u ppl enjoyed dis part! In da next part….dere wud be both Boyz n Girlz!

Hopin too see loadz of comments!~

Thnx n love u awl!

Edited by SujalkiDeewani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
sorry 4 da delay guyz!! it tuk long to type!! 😳 😳 😳

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