Fan Fiction Pyar - Page 9

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

dnt mind me sayin.. but hw cum dhruv duznt recognise vedika.. he met her @ disha's n dk's weddin...i mean he shud recognise er n no tht her namez Vedika..!!!

because the wedding took place about three or four months ago and they olny met twice. don't worry this part will be later added when they meet again for the engagement.

Suraj character has been changed he is now the childhood friend of Vedika and the Khanna's kids treat him like a family member not a brother.

tht was lovely...plss continue soon.

don't worry guys i have written the rough draft of my story i will post them today 😉

it was reallllllly good ziddi
plz cont soon

that was too good 👏 ziddi plz cont soon.

tomorrow came n went...pls continue soon.

Next Part: 20
Raizada house everyoe eats dinner and goes upstairs she goes into her dhruv bhaiya's room

Dhruv is in his balcony looking at the moon he sees her face, he images her running with her duppta in the rain.

Dhruv: kya wahi meri dream girl yeh yah nahi? i hope i am able to find her. Tara sneeks behind dhruv

Tara: Bhaiya who are you thinking about?

Dhruv 😛 nothing !!

Tara: bhaiya don't lie with me. i know you are thinking about her she must be this tall she shows dhruv with her hand. She must had a yellow earing and a yellow scraf right.

Dhruv: how did you know

Tara: bhaiya her earing was stuck on your chain and why do you have a yellow scraf wrapped around your hand. She laughs and leaves.Good night Bhaiya.
Dhruv: goodnight
Dhruv looks at his chain and takes it out and smilies holds it with his right hand. When i will see this earring i will remember the moments i spend with you. The world is small we will meet again. Dhruv lays on his bed and goes to sleep thinking about ved.

Sorry guys i wrote a short update.
Preview:
ved arrives at her house.

THAT WAS TOO GOOD PLZ CONT SOON. 👏

Part 21
At the khanna farmhouse
Its 6:30pm Mr Khanna is marching back and forth down it the living room and lookin at the clock, the first and second generations kids are backbecause it was raining so they came back and didn't have the time to explorer the farm. The guys are in the living room watching Mr. Khanna march back and forth because he is marching like soliders march when they are in the army. Jassi, Niks, Karu and Malika bring snacks for everyone in the living room they all seat near the fire place.

Bebo (looking at her grandpa) Dadji ap army mein join hoge

Everyone laughs

Arun (going to bebo and bending down) no i am just waiting for ved to come home

Rohan: dadji i though you were pratcing to march so u can fight for our country😆 he runs away to the play room and bebo follows him and Arun continues marching

Prem (to Purab)bhai dad is angry

Vedant: i hope Ved comes soon uncle looks really angry

Prem: Papa ap chitha na karo woh ajayegi, woh koi shelter par ruk gayi hogi

Purab: papa prem is right

Mr. Shegal bhai saab wait for her she will come, you don't worry

Arun: you guys are too much my daughter has gone out since the morning and she hasn't reutned

Niks: papa relax she will be hear

Arun (looks at them in angry way and takes a seat by the fireplace) kyu nahi chitha karu kab se gayi yeh abtak use ajana chaiyetha, kam se kam woh ek phone bi kar sak thi Agar woh 8 bahaje nahin aiye to mehi mandhir jahoga

Niks (to Malika)Malika papa bahut naraaz yeh

Prem (to Jassi and Karu) i hope she comes

Niks (to Malika )why don't you call Vedika and ask her where she is

Malika takes her celphone out, dials veds number and goes in the pation

Meanwhile ved is driving her car and she stops by a indian cusine store and gets some food because she knows that her dad will be mad at her, after paying she goes into her car and then her celphone is ringing. She looks at the caller id and turns on the speaker. Ved is driving right now

Ved: hi malika darling how are you

Malika: not so good

Ved: whats wrong why are you whispering

Malika: uncle is really angry and she tells her what happened

Ved: don't worry i will come home in 30 mins. SHe tells her somehting and they agree. She drives and arrives at her place at 7:30 because of the slow traffice and she had to go to the gas station

Stay tuned

gr8...2 many characters i;ve lost track of hu'z hu... 😕 i'll hav 2 go bk 2 character profile n chek out hu'z hu...gr8 job ziddi plz continue