PKR-sk fanfic [part 3] *epilogue*updtdpg75 - Page 46

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow di 😛 ...the part was fabulous 🤗 ...i loved it 😛 ....
lo beti maa par gae hai...yeh dono aapas mein chapad chapad kartay rehtai hain aur bechaaray sujal ko toh kuch samajh mein he nahin aata hoga 😆 😆 ...
yeh sujal bi na shararat kay ilaawa kuch soojhta he nahin hai usko 😆 😳 😳


di plzzzz continue soon.. 😊 😊

luvya ❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago

nice part thank god sujal gave kashish a little attention warna he was so lost in the baby. and hurrah kashish ki dimaag ko tikane mil gaya. but will sujal drink in that bussiness party i hope not as if does there will be another problem bw sujal and kashish ab jaldi se cont me waitin

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Posted: 17 years ago
oh thnx GOD yaar yeh kashish ka mood theek hua ab kahin yeh na ho k party mein jake s drink kare aur phir phada ho ajye 😆 waise i think he willl not drink kyunki ab woh bohat change hogaya hai per gar koi force kare tou ... 😕 khair any ways plz plz plzzzz continue sooooooon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
abb s goes 2 the party

jahan wo bohot bore ho raha hai

tabhi a person comes

person-hello mr garewal

s-hello mr gupta!

g-how r u!

s-gud!

g-arre kya baat hai,aapke haath mein drink nahi!

s-nahi bass aise hi!

g-arre aap hamari party mein aae aur kuch peeye bhi naa!

s-no thanxs!

g-nahi nahi aisa kaisa,!

s-nahi,maine peena chod dia hai!

g-oh wht a sudden change!

s-hmm,yes time changes,person shld change!

g-yes yes i understnd tht,aarre arre main to bhul hi gaya to congratulate the new prod father! congratulations mr grewal!

s-thanku

both shake hands,small smile appears on s ka face hearin the word father
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Posted: 17 years ago
g-to papa banne ki khushi mein to ek jaam to lena hi hoga,as a toast!

s-ok if u insist!uss wajah se! [s takes a peg of whiskey & sips it]

g-to achcha ho gaya,garewal industries ko bhi apna waris mil gaya! the future!

s-haan!

g-abb to u shld be tensed,bass ur son will tak care of the business,aft growin up!

s-no,sorry i think ur mistaken! i hav a daughter!

g-oh ho!a daughter! [the man's smile fades] ladka nahi hua! oh ho! then u shld try 4 another bay naa,a son!ladki to liabilitty ho gai,business kaun sambhalega!phir ladki ki shaadi sab! mrs garewal aapko beta tak nahi de pai!

s ka gussa badd raha hai

s-i am not lik u! i dont regret havin a daughter! & never will! ladkiyan ladkon se kamm nahi hoti hai! meri beti ko main itni capable banaunga,naaki wo mera business sambhale balki mujse behtar sambhale! meri beti,sau beto ke barabar hogi!aise chotte khayal nahi hai mere,mujhe aurat ki izzat karna aata hai,aap jaisa nahi hun main,jo aurat ko devi maanke pujte hain,paar phir aisi baatein karte hain!




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Posted: 17 years ago
hey lovely part sorry 4 the late comments. i just loved the way sujal was proud that ge had a daughter rather than regreting it lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
yara yeh logon ko kyapb hai akhir?har kisi k mamle mein bolte hain 😡 any ways s ne tight answer dia 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
wah wahhh kya jawab diya sujal ne gud very very gud👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼esay lugun ko yahe jawab dyna chaheyplzzz continueeee give a long prt na
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Posted: 17 years ago
abb s cpmes,home still angry with the man's words

k opens the door

s is abt 2 enter

k-wait! u hav drunk!

s-err..plz ..kashsih.. [k ko hatake enters]

k-no..i can smell it!

s-it was jst a peg!

k-i told u not 2!

s-kashsih cut it out i am in mood 2 argue! baby kahan hai so gai?

k-haan,paar tum uske paas nahi jaoge!aise! main nahi chahte,meri bechchi paar koi bura influence ho! u will not touch her until ur sober!

s-i am sober! 1 peg cant do anythin 2 me!

k-whtever! & another thing ,tum aaj hall mein sofe paar so rahe ho yahi tumhari sazza hai!

k goes into room,& locks the door!

s-damn it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
s sits on the sofa,in a foul mood & tired

s-[murmerin] it was jst a drink! cant she understnd!

abb joote-voote utaarke s sofe pe let jaata hai

tryin 2 get some sleep,at such an uncomfy place,pittin arm on his eyes

aise kuch der ho jaati hai

s ki bas kuch second aankh hi lagi thi

ki he feels a nudge

ankhen kholta hai to sees k stndin

k ko dekhke,eyes rub karke,sits on sofa

s-tum?

k-mujhe akele neend nahi aarahi hai,chalo! room mein chalo!

s-nahi nahi,thanku i am comfortable here! aur waise bhi i had a drink naa,1 drink,i am the bad influence naa! i cant touch u naa

k-i said u cant touch baby,u can touch me!

s-sorry,not intrested!

k-come naaaaaaaaa [pullin his arm] sorry!!!!!!!!! i over reacted!!!!!!!!!! but i am missin u naaaaaaaa!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

s gets up

s-ok

k is rubbin her cheeks 2 his chest,while holdin hands & walkin 2 room

k-sorry,it was jst the anger,tumne meri baat nahi maani naa! but 1 peg is ok! hai naa!

s-hmm,today i was also angry,on a man in the party,the ***** ****** was sayin rubbish abt havin a daughter & all!

k-o leave naa,u knw naa how ppl r!

s-hmm

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