PKR-sk fanfic [part 3] *epilogue*updtdpg75 - Page 48

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Posted: 17 years ago
i just catch all the parts its awomse...plz cont soon dear...
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Posted: 17 years ago
s-can v now go 2 sleep! i am very tired!

k-hmm! 😊

abb s k both go 2 sleep,pehle ki tarah hi bahon mein bahein daalkar

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raat ke karibann 3.30 baje s ki ankh khulti hai,ye dekhkar ki uski bagal mein to k hai hi nahi

wo hadbadake uth jaata hai

with his sleepy eyes sees ki,k baby cot ke paas baithi hui hai

a small smile aapears on his face of satisfaction & reassurance

uthke goes 2 k

s-kya hua? baby uth gai kya?

puts his hand on k ka shoulder,

k-nahi,bohot pehle uthi thi,kabb ki so gai!

so while he comes closer 2 k,he notices tht she has tears rollin frm her eyes

s ghabhra jaata hai

cups her face with his hands

s-kya hua? tum ro kyun rahi ho?

k-naa..kuch ..nahi..

s-kashsih!batao mujhe baat kya hai?

k-[still snifflin]..bachche..ko kuch ho gaya to...!..main achchi maa nahi hun!

s-kahsih! kisne kaha ki tum achchi maa nahi ho haan?..aur..kya hoga hamare bachche ko,kuch nahi hoga!..dekho kitne sukoon se so rahi hai! chalo aao tum bhi so jao!

k-nah! wohi to sote hue kuch ho gaya to!

s-sote hue? kya hoga sote hue?

k-SID!

s-SID?

k-maine ek baby magazine mein pada,SID is sudden infant death syndrome!

s-ye kya hai?

k-it is sudden and unexplained death of an apparently healthy infant aged one month to one year.Typically the infant is found dead after having been put to sleep,with no sighn of suffering. [k is in tears]..baby ko kuch ..ho..gaya to...!

s usse apne seene se lagata hai

s-kashsih kuch nahi hoga hamare baby ko samjhi! kuch nahi!

k-no,i cant tak chances lik this for my baby! kuch to sighn zarur hota hoga! mera bachcha suffre kare aur main soun! nahi!

s-to kya karogi?

k-tum jaake so jao,main baby ke paas hun!u must be tired! go & sleep!

s-kya??????? kya tum puri raat jaagke,baby ki nigraani karogi?

k-haan,maa hone ke naate mein itna precaution to le hi sakti hun naa!

s-kashsih paar kitne din?

k-ye risk jab tak wo 1 saal ki naa ho jae tab tak hai,bass wo sahi salamat 1 saal ki ho jae!

s-kya???????? 1 saal tak tum aise???? sogi kab tum?

k-sona zaruri nahi,sone se zyada mera baby important hai! usse kuch ho gaya to!

s-kuch nahi hoga baby ko! aur kashsih tumhari tabiyat? uska kya? abhi abhi delivery ke baad,tum rest lene ki bajae,ye sab...pata hai tum bimaar pad jaogi,tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jaegi! tab main aur baby kya karenge?

k-meri chinta mat karo,main bimaar padi to thik ho jaungi! paar baby ko kuch nahi hona chahie! wo to kitni nazuk hai,sujal tum thak gae hoge,tum so jao jaake!gud night!


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Posted: 17 years ago

hey gr8 tat u cont hey ya to title bar edit karo ya phir muje pm kardo.

loved this part the emotions showed by kashish as a mother and wife were so diffrent but they were equally beautiful . i loved the way sujal was cincerned abt his wife and child lovely part con soon

Edited by jyothi_cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowowwww 😭 she is a great mother....isse mujhay yaad aagaya kay aisay he meri mumma jaagti hain when =ever i get sick 😭 😭 😭 ......reallllyyy its veryyyyy niceee 👏 aapnay iskay saath hamein ek info bi daydi 😊 ....sujal bhi kashish ka kitna khayal kar raha hai..akhir woh dono se pyaar karta hai 😳 😳 😳 ....i hope kashish kahin bimaar na parh jaayai 😭 😭 ....

di plz cont. sooonnnnn 😛 😛 i will be waiting eagerly 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwww....she really knows ki sujal ko kaab kiski jarurat hai......she really knows ki kaise usse relax feel karvana hai 👏 . hey kitni passionate kiss this yaar 😳 . really nice....sujal ka saaramood acha kar diya aur gandagi uske dimag se nikal pheki.....awesome man seriously 🤗 ....ohhhhhhhhh noooooooo......yeh kya hogaya aikdun se isse 😭 . she is getting insecured of her baby . kause ghatiya magazines padti hai aur padh bhi liya toh not neccessary ki saab ke saath aisa hi ho 😭 . bechari....paar i can understand....bohot insecurity mehssos ki hai na usne apne zindagi mein toh usse yeh bhi daar hai ki kahi uski bachi usse chod na de.....kitni pyaari maa hai yaar 😳 . really nice 👏 . paar in this case sujal ko usse samjhana chahiye ki haar bache ke saath aisa nahi hota hai.....he should make her understand akhir usse bhi rest chahiye na 😳 .waise both the part's rocked 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was so great yaar please do continue i really can't wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
s-no kashsih plz,dont do this to urslf! plz dont do this if u love me! [cups his palm arnd on her face]i knw ur concerned,i am also equally concerned abt the baby! but kashsih,u knw ur weak now,i cant let this! come on,aao take some rest!

k-hmm,i understnd par baby!

s-sabka baby hota hai kashsih,hum hamesha apne bachche ko aise protect karke nahi rakh sakte,kashsih! uski taqdeer mein jo dukh jo takleef hongi,use hamare bachche ko sehna hi padega,hum usse zindagi bhar to protect nahi kar sakte naa,darling!

k-par baby ko kuch ho gaya to!

s-[very business lik,no non sense,serious expression] agar hamari bachchi ko jeena hoga to jeeyegi,nahi to nahi!

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg that was rude but it was true. kashish neede that rest. lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww hw gr888 mother kashish iz,kita pyar karti hai apni beti ko ky khud ki b parwah nahe hai usay n puray 1 sal tak wo un he jagti rahy ge lol hmm n sujal ne kya keh diya kashish ko ky agar hamari beti ko jina hoga toh wo jiye ge warna nahe ufff i knw ky kashish ab koi naya tofan khada kary ge plzzzzzzz yaar do continue i really cnt w8 4 the nxt prt,n the prts were fantastic,awesome very wel written👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely part but to small con't soon...............

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