new-FF-Devkajjal magic - London saga

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(FELLOW BHOOTNIS - I HAVE ADDED A FRESH PART - FULL SCENE ON THE LAST PAGE...IN CASE YOU HAVE READ THIS SYNOPSIS...ENJOY😃)

ok guys / fellow bhootnis now that jyo is back...i am feelin all charged up...captains back...yaaayyyyyyy😳

i was watchin the old epis from oct to jan...and kept thinkin...they shudnt have introduced dhruv at all...wahin saari gadbad ho gayee...i will explain///

this FF wil ll be mostly my short synopsis of what shud have happened against what did...and at the end...perhaps...i can ty and continue...lets see...and ifeel that effected trps...see if you guys agree

in the november december epis...DEv was looking...a bit lost...he was struggling for form...they were making his suffering look funny to accomodate Kajus bloopers....though in december devu recovered...but they gave more spotlight to an underserving dhruv all he did was filled up space...and flexed his muscles...and zero expressions....

so here goes....my track...(my interpretation of what the track shud have been since december)

At the moment Kaju is shown describing her rajkumar - no dhruv is shown but Devu...in his pre...suffering days....carefree...funny....laughing...but they show the face of th girl he is with...her face is always out of the screeen or her back to us....and we see a glimpse of devu he used to be....charming, passionate and both NTmom and Devu having a fab relationship...which is why he took it badly...with her ( a bit like simran describing her rajkumar to her mum...and raj is shown palyin football in DDLJ)

then comes all imp ...sangeet scene..when kaju goes to her kadoos boss to ask for leave...(btw it is afunny scene...must see)///...dev..is curious why is she asking time off...aakhir kissi date par toh nahin jaaa rahi hai...he gets worried...despite his 1008time jaap...kaju ko mujhese door rahna hai wagrah...wagrah...he asks casually...and kaju tells him her friedn from mussoorie is gettin married to a mumbai guy...and she is attending sangeet...in fact she is late and must rush....dev asks...where is it...at the door kaju...tells him.///dev...nods....

after shes gone...paris does her act...droppin kajus photos to see his reaction...and the scene goes as in the show...after she gone...devu stares at kajus photo wondering why he is thinkin so mucha bout her...when his mob rings...tusshar his friend is upset he is not coming (all this without dhruv😡)...devu...sighs...then tusshhar says somethin which is like...music to devu ears....yaar...you disappoint me..mere dulhan...ka maika mussoorie hai...poora ka poora mussoorie aa raha hai...and i dont have any of my friends....some friend you are...he switches off....bingo...Devu sist up straight je calls...tusshhae....where it is being held...tuss tells him..devu takes a deep breathe...i will come

then curses himself at his weakenning...and again does the 1008 jaap..but ech time e closes his eyes he can see kajus face...dammit...he flings the photo away...angrily...paces the room like acaged tiger...finally picks up the photo...and a muscle beating in his jaw stares at it

at the sangeet, the actual scene of kaju...dressed up like a bride almost...with her blue dress and high heels is a treat to watch...but instead of dhruv waiting at the top of the stairs it is devu...s lightly at a loss , heart in his mouth if he was mad to come here...lights go off...and teh candle scene when kaju comes up with a candle is witnessed by DEvu...who is shell shocked to see her look so beautiful...he is mesmerised...

then lights come on and they stare at each other...shocked...Kaju is delirious....Devu is shy to dance and pretends...to be aloof with kaju...but she dances and man she dances for him...defeating the boys...and we can have a dream sequence with DK...surrounded by candles...alone and circling each other...eyes locked...when i watched those epis...25-26th dec...i was just thinkin how stupid they were to show dhruv...and kaju...when this was perfect to shake up devu...

after sangeet...devu gets drunk...alone...beats up some guy at the club...gets arrested...and home...he blabbers about how he loves no one and Nt mom hears...she hears the name kaajjal a few times in his uncocncious state and is bemused...in the morn...she wakes him and brings him bed tea..(instead of dadi who was wasted)...lovely mom-son scene...devu is softer...but still aloof...Nt mom...casual...as she enquires...

pannac chhachi gives her the hot news...about kajus dancing and devus reaction...NT mom is shocked devu went to the sangeet...her hopes are renewed...she thanks god that her devu is recovering....

meanwhile...at the office devu despo tries to keep away from kaju...but she is there everywhere especially after sangeet her heart tells her he loves her...so she stalks him...seducing with her eyes...he keeps runnin...wearing lovely pinks and reds...and they have some eye locking session...devu is in deep dharam sankat now😆 ye toh mere peeche padd gayee yaar😆

so he shouts at her...gives her the cold shoulder...but kaju braces it all...determined to make him fall for her...(surely trps would have been sky high)...nikki paris are flabbergasted at her boldness...

NT mom...is still upset at Veer-ameesha court case thing with the bandra accident...she feels she must goe to kajus family and apologise....funnily she lands up same day it is kajus birthday...and is pleased...to wish kaju...who blushes to see her future MIL...she even touches her feet...

Devu oblivious to the khichdi...learns that kaju has taken a day off as it is her birthday...so din bar he fumes...missin her...frstrated that ek bhi jhalak nahin millie of his RJ...drives everyone icnl..the cool jenny up the wall....

on way back he stops unwittingly at a jewellry still in a to be not to be mode...and buys her a beautiful watch...and the look on his face is so tender...so loving...almost as if he caresses her wrist with his lips while puttin it on....i was dreaming of course.😳of that scene...he thinks he wil slip it in her drawer ...before she gets in...and smiles...a rare one..

when he gets home devu has another shock...(shock theraphy best recevoery😉)NT mom throws a surprise party for kaju...as a way of apology and her birthday at singh mansion...Veer-ameesha are away on a holiday...so no disturbances...

he lands in midst of all the gaiety..is irate...as he hates parties..panna chhachi hs as ecret smie...and tells him innocently...to get changesd be a good boy but he refuses...and suudenly lights go off and the spotlight is on kaju...getting down the stairs...in that gorgeous pink dress...as in the show...devu is mesmerised...his throat is dry...his lips part...his eyes dark with desire...he looks away..flushing...kaju is oblivious..he is thre...and comes to cut the cake...devu slips to his room///

to be contd...

sammy😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sammmmyyyy, what a place for a break!?!?!? 😡

Here i am into your FF and actually viewing the scenes and your to be continued in the next line.... grrrr.....

But a great job done. Yes and I completely agree. All the cameos are wasted to date!!!! whats the use. There could have been millions of twists with DK together and no third parties were required!!!

Superb synopsis and FF. Waiting eagerly for the next part! 👏
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part 2

finally his heart wins against his fears..he dresses into a lovely...cream suit with a pink shirt...btw...his flavour in dec was white....vanilla and strawberry shake with a dark raspberry on top...

as kaju is about to cut the cake...she is nervous as hell...akhir uske kadoos boss ka ghar hai..what if he comes now..she been staring at the watch...for the past few hours...then something makes her look up..devu is standing in fornt of her...she is frozen....buaji nudges her to cut the cake...NT mom watches the eye locking session and is convinced Dev loves kaju...his face said it all....

Hottie makes her to cut the cake and feed it to SP...and buaji...

but kaju slowly goes to over to devu and stands there with another piece...her eyes...soft and inviting ....people are staring...Nt mom is stunned at kajus boldness....devu...is nervous..but he accepts the cake with aloof look...but swallow...s without the cake...first...she looks so ethereal like a princess...he cant take his eyes off her...then the party begins...we have the abhijet sawant...song...and all that...and the dance...Kaju dances with many boys to amke devu jealous and he is as hell....fuming silently...

especialy one good looking boy dances a lot with her...fianlly devu unable to stop his jealousy goes to another room trembling with rage...a pulse is jumpin at his jaw...kaju follows him..and he turns...their eyes are dark in an unspoken message....his anger ebbs away as he moves to her...(we can have the actual scene..duppatta scene...her...tremeulous eyes...quivering lips...thehelpless desire..his own..response....and

fianlly...as if cant help himself...asks her to dance...they really dance...alone...away from the crowd... he has his eyes closed...listening to her heart...against his...

then the dream dance...also happens as they are alone...Nt mom watches with a smile...knowin...she was right...Devu...then comes to..as he reaslises whats he done...abruptly moves...away//he is flustered...tries to cover it up...tryin to cound aloof..and formal..but kaju smiles secretly her heart knows..but is willing to be patient and play the game...along....he gives her the gift rather casually...kaju doesnt open it....(and i dreamt of how DPS tosses whole nite thinkin of the dance and kajus reaction on seeing the gift waking up in cold sweat a few times)

but end of the party veer ameesha tapkofy suddenly...ameesha is livid to se kajus birthday party in her hosue...she remembers the way dev...fought with her, the court case...veer is embarrassed....ameesha charmingly wishes kaju happy birthday...kaju says nothing for Nt moms sake...afterwards...everyone leaves....Ameesha has a evil smile on...she doesnt know about DK dance...but she has a plan....

unknown to veer AMeesha has a habit to go to tanriks..(and gets a manik...to destroy singh family...it is a wel guarded secret...and the mahadasha thing could be shown here starting)

next day....Devu finds a single stem red rose ona his desk and a note...Kaju saying

thanks for the gift love kajjal...he groans...hating his pleasure..and himself...but he cant bring himself to upset her again.....so he stays aloof even finding an excuse to stay in the corporate office....par dil hai ki maanta nahin...😆

the manik starts doing its dirty business as devs anger incrases and becomes more irrational...he jumps at everyone incl...kaju...the most...she is in tears...and equally determined not to lose heart beneath the anger is the heart of the man who loves her no matter how hard he wants to run from her...

NT mom gets worried at his behavious and decides to do a pooja...for a good effect on dev...he scoffs...ameesha smiles evilly knowing whats goin on....and then Kaju comes on NT moms invitatin...despite her wariness of devs anger...which of late is at its peak...like mussoorrie...

then the scene where he throws her out...SP ji is livid and tells her to leave the job...kau is angry...bass...she can bear anything but not insult to her self respect...so we have that...scene when she throws her resgination at devu...devus kidnapping of her the cliff scene....(as in the real show)

but when kaju pulls him up..the cliff...(no payal is mentioned here)....but....it slips out of his mouth....I love you kaajjal...and she hugs him back confessing her feelings...later as they are in hosp..devu reggrets his impulse knowing what effect it will have on kaju..so far he isnt aware of the mahadasha.....

at this stage...he begins to see the irrationality of his fear...when he has such strong feelings for kaju....he begins to soften towards her....as they are back to truce he wants to make up for his earlier....nasty behaviour...(we can have the coffee shop scene..and his bumbling apology...😆the inflappable DPS getting nervous was a rare treat to watch),...and yes one cant forget the famous scene where kaju throws the bucket of water on him....yes the first bouquet of mumbai roses drenched in musssoorie rains😆)...Kaju feels more confident as days go by...they even land at the dhabha...and we finally have the much awaited...restaurant scene...in my imagination,...Devu turns his mobile off😆....he holds her hand and is feeling shy about telling her...he wants to marry her...instead they dance...and we have (in my imagination of course) another beautiful dance...where Kaju is simply lost...in his feel, his fragrance..as much as DPS...a perfect oneness....of course...he still hesitates about proposing to her....

Kajus mobile rings....at that point...some problem at home...Buaji.///has to rush to ajmer...or something...and DPS regretfully has to abhort his propose to kaju mission...

he drops her home...and still with a dreamy look in his eyes goes home...NT mom sees him...and he finally confessed to his mom..he loves Kaju and wants to marry her/...NT mom is delirious...she tells dev ki mein kal hi jhaakar ke...rishtha paakhi karti hoon...dev blushes but is so happy...like a little boy he lifts NT mom and dances..mom tussi great ho....she laughs...DEv put me down...never seen him so happy....

next day...NT mom tells the family the decision...Ameesha is shocked...she has to act fast...but how...DEv agrees to come home early and get changed before accompanying NT mom to Kajus residence...

at the office...Kaju and devu exchange long dreamy looks..he even holds her hand one stage and pulls her to him...she protests softly...as he looks deep into her eyes...he tells her softly...aaj koi tum hare ghar aaane walle hain...thayaar rehna...her breathe stops....his face coming close...but a knock on his office door splits them...and they move back...flushing....NT mom and Panna chhachi have already left for Kajus home...DEvu arrives and that reaction to the manik happens...choking etc...at that point Ameesha...screams...dev...and pretends to help him...then she acts evasive..as is she knows...what it is..and he forces her to tell him...ameesha plays another card....PAYAL..and mahadasha...devu is devastated...just when life seems to be going well...and he has another life...NOW THIS...slowly he changes his clothers...

at Kajus home everyone waits for DEV...but he doesnt turn up..NT mom apologises...Kaju is worried...what is happening...

Dev starts drinking in his room...he thinks about his impending death.....totally shattered...he remembers the cliff scene...and feels it is true....the past replays in his mind...the 1008 jaap..is reenforced...how he made a mistake of letting it slip he loved kaju...so decides to nip it....

When he doesnt come to work next day and there is no message....as to why he didnt come to her home ealrier...she goes to madh house feeling he might be there....and we have the madh house scene where he tells her ...it was a big error, on his part.....he tells her about PAYAL and how he cant let go of the past....that he still has strong feelings for her......Kaju wont believe it...she shouts...cries...pleads..bullies him..all her...kasamgiri,...gandhigiri....but he is firm..holding Payals bangles..that he loves only PAYAL...and will continue to do so...(and then we have the scene...Kaju heartbroken returns home)....and he tells her that PAYAL was no ordinary girl...she was his wife...at this Point Kaju is devastated...what could she say...what chance did she have...he still loves his 1st wife...his 1st love...and torn between the past and the present....she leaves...with a sob...all this time dev has his back to her...when she leaves..he breaks down with a sob apologising to Payal for using her name in this ways...but he had no other choice...for Kajus life...he had to do it...

dev becomes the ole devu...cold, angry and NTmom is shocked...how did it revert back to all that.....she is worried...and tells panna chhachi she wants to find out what is goin on with dev...why is he behaving so strangely...till kajus birthday he was fine and even seemed something positive was happening.....PC is clueless....and with his own mouth had admitted he loved Kaju...and wants to marry her...so why this about turn...something has happened...drastically...she is determined to get to the bottom of it....

she decides to ask kaju but shocked to see kajus lacklustre eyes...she gives her a hug...kaju is resigned...to her fate..it is awkward at work...with her and DK playing the ole...song dance..like mussoorrie...he is cold, rude and unapproachable...nothings she does at work goes right...she is losing hope...maybe she had imagined it all...he was the ole beast again....a stone wall....Kaju cries a lot ...during all this..and devu also cries...but alone...knowing how badly he hurt kaju...but he was hurting more knowing of his impending death....(all this without dhruv😡)and we have some heart wrenching scenes from DK...

to be contd

sammy😛

Edited by dudleysam - 18 years ago
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Wowwwwww Sammmyyyyy I shall not say anything but just this.....

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Yes they caould have done all this without gadhaa...... 😆 😆 😆
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part 3

another near accident...takes plaec...amidst devs...bad behaviour...towards....kaju...outside the office his car breaks down beech sadak at nite...kaju is returning home...sees the truck...and pulls him to saftey like in the real...show...they hug...dev...cant hide his feelings ...Kaju...closes her eyes...in sheer relief and joy....also pain....for she is wary...what next ...but continues to enjoy the moment of being in his arms...there they are beech sadak..oblivious to the traffic passing by...enjoying their heartbeats....Dev smiles again but later as he comes home...ameeshas manik starts working and he gets angry at the way...he weakened another time...he is despo...now...he must do somethin...to keep kaju away from him...but what...

meanwhile -

Ameesha is talking to someone her secret about the maanik...and PC overhears...she is shocked and tells Nt mom...who wants to shake the truth out of Ameesha...but PC stops her ...sayin she must get the bottom of this...as they dont know who it is for and what it can do...NT moms ays she knows a sidhbaba..and he can advice maybe....

they set off...but crafty witch Ameesha suspects...and overhears...them...she is worried if ...NTmom finds out about the manik...her plans will be lost...so she pays the goons to do teh accident..(and we have the actual scene....nt mom in hosp) Dev...runs there...his anger ebss away...in...worry...Kaju lands there...as people in office tell her...DK...look at each other iwth pain...yet...love...as ever...NT mom sees that in her weakened state and insists Kaju stay with her...for sometime..as she looks at her as her own daughter now...devu is stunned...no choice...MIL ka order hai...Kaju is reluctant ....par maanna padegaa...kaju agrees as she loves Nt mom....despite SP jis protests she moves...in...

(we have all those DK moments as in the real show...) also in the kitchen instead of stupid dhruv catching her it is devu...and another....phase of eye locking session begins...but devs heartis heavy...he is frusttrated as he knows by now he loves kaju deeply...as she loves him...only their eyes speak....this time...he sees the pain there...and feels helpless...

NT mom decides that she will ask SP ji for kajus hand in marriage...she had enuf of devus denial and mom-son have it out...in a big row...NT mom gives him an ultimatum for a change...like it orn not kaju is her bahu from now..and she will stay at singh mansion....dev is shocked....hes never seen his mother like that...his heart clenches...he is in catch 22...

SPji is worried about DEv silence on the matter so is kaju ...but continues to give her prince sweet smiles loving glances...even cooks for him his fav dishes...and now since she is under the same roof he sees her 24/7...as if it wasnt enuf to see her at work...he goes crazy, wanting her lovin her but knowin what fate awatied them....so he plans the hotel scene with his pyaari bhabhi ameesha...who happily complies.....

and we have the ghastly hotel scene where kaju is completely heart broken...SP ji is furious...and decides bahut khilwaad ho gayee of his izzat...and plans to return to mussoorie...in the meanwhile...hottie parents arrive...and have a surprise package...a fiance...hottie is delirious her beau has returned from ...america....kaju is happy for hottie...there is going to be a wedding and kaju insists....why not have it in mumbai and request her father to postpone leaving mussoorie....he agrees...

amidst hotties wedding...kaju is miserable and (we can have those scenes as in the show...where she sees dev everywhere...how could he do that to her...how could she have been so wrong about him...part of her wants to run to him and part of her...hates him...for what he did in the hotel)//...is beech she goes to gannu bhaiyya temple....

by this time NT mom shockingly comes to hear ...from Ameesha...why she hid the truth about the manik and tamapatra...ameesha as usual ...cries croc tears and tells how she only had devs benevolence at heart and to her delight dev himself supports Ameesha...NT mom has no choice but to accept the explanation given by ameesha...that she tried hard...to ward the effect of the tamapatra and the manik is only a tool to tell them when the shanni mahadash wil reach its peak...

what she doesnt tell people (this is my intreepretation) is how...the manik is the realcuplprit and the mahadash though is real...can be only...turned if he marries a gurl of he dreams who will love him more than life itself...a pure, true, unselfish love....

what ameesha does tell the family theree is a upaay - if a irl who loves dev...more than anything marries him...then he can be free of the mahadasha...Nt mom is happy so is devu...but he is frozen into shock when ameesha lies and says...that it will then pass on to the girl and she will die...pushing her PAYAL card..to the fullest.....everybody is shocked...and depressed...Dev makes up his mind...at that point....

ameesha wont tell the truth...and is secretly amused how dev tadpofies...for all he does...NT mom-devu scenes...dev decides to leave the country...and put as much distance between him and kaju...thats the only way...she is hating him now anyways afters hes gone...she wont know...the reason...

Kaju...just before the day of hotties wedding feels restless...that nite flight dev is due to leave for london/.....he is all set NT mom-son have heart wrenching scene...both cry....DEvu is depressed looking at kajus momentoes..even the rose is pressed into his book...and now in his wallet....he cries...

kaju goes to GB..SPji has booked tickets for mussoorie next day...she will be leaving mumbai for good...but her heart was heavy she cud only think of DEv...and (then teh scenee how she finds out about the mahadasha)///...on way back...GB...visarjan...roads are blocked...DEvu...is....stuck in traffic...he is in a taxi...impatient to get to the airport....kaju sees him...

then we have the scene(my fav) where she runs after him in the ruins...

to be contd

sammy😛

Edited by dudleysam - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am very much hooked, Sammy, continue, continue. You are going great!!! 👏
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Part 4

Kaju makes him tell the truth about the mahadash and admit to her he loves her...and he does...another hug(my interpertation)...for moment dev wants to forget....the impending danger..than feels disgusted,,..he is thiinking about his own happiness...at cost to kajus life....

he puls away stubbornly...kaju pleads...she doesnt care is she spends two hours or two days..with him...that is enuf to carrry with her rest of her life....then devu...in his most passioante voice, eyes

cups her face and says...if it if was just that my dearest i would have put my head on your lap...for i wouldnt want to die anywhere else than your arms and to see you in front of my eyes,,...as my life ebbs away is my only desire....

but it is isnt the question of my life"...she is momentatrily stunned when he reveals the cold truth about her life risk...but she doesnt blink an eye lid...and tries to force him to marry her....he is stbborn in his refusall....i wont discuss it even tum he meri kasam hai..he puts her hand on his head....so kaju is back to mussoorie goonda gardi...

so kasamgiri...after kasamgiri flies...you will marry me...in 24 hours...dev...mein vaada karti hoon she shouts...then...(now this is my version) she takes his hand and even brings him to hotties...wedding....everybody is shocked...when Kaju request the pundit to read the mantras....and Devu is livid...puling away...kaju even brings a pinch of sindoor...and grabs his hand...and as they struggle...with 200 gaping faces watching..tries to make him put it on her maang he slaps her hard....she cries...please DEv...

no one knows what is goin on incl hottie and her groom

DEv leaves...the place...kaju tries goin after him but SPji become s wall of china...he wont let Kaju marry Dev...no matter what...we dont have the ek dujhe ke liye...Kaju mania thankfully but ...she slips away to radiocity...and then the scene when she announces on radio...her lover is DPS...he is livid...of course london cancel karna padda as he is worried about that glint in kajus eyes....thats as far as she gets...

what wil she do now...he knows what she was capable of...

than the terrace scene...now my interpretation...dev fires her from the job...so that she cant misuse Radiocity equipment to stalk him😆

so...veeru like (from sholay style) Kaju goes to TV...who are now interested in the unique...lovestory....where laila becomes majnu....she climbs the top of radio cities topmost towers and has a TV camera posted on her...a garland around her neck and one in hand for devu....telling to the world that if DPS doesnt marry her..on the rooftop she is jumpin..so we have hundreds of people pleading with kaju not to jump...except she isnt drunk like veeru in sholay.....SPji, ntmom arrive helpless...the door to the terrace is locked from inside...finally DPs arrives...he has his heart in his mouth...he calls her on the mob...she picks it up/

dammit kaajjal...what the hell is going on...hav you gone mad...she replies quietly...10 mins dev..there are...10 floors..you have to come up here ...alone...and ,marry me or i jump...he shouts...what the hell you know about dyin...ye sab khel lag raha hai...she switches off...he is pale and runs up///a helicopter is hovering up...police and fire engines are awarimg the palce...

she opens the door for him and locks it ...he grabs his arm..and drags her to the door..she refuses...Dev...i will kill myself...he stops...she has a knife in her hand...her eyes are determined he shocked...and hugs her passionately his eyes moist...as he knows she is doing it for she loves him like mad......dammit kaajjal...whats wrong with you...why are you doing this...you know i cant let you die....

she doesnt soften...and does her jaap...first marry me..then baad mein..sab kuch...kehna...he does the hug..however.. to trick her into giving the knife...the strides towards the door certain she wont jump itna aasaan nahin to jump ffrom 10 storeys....

then he turns to see her walking on the edge...he runs she falls...he screams kaajjal...he is ashen...but she hanging...with one hand...as he has tricked her once....she wont give her hand...so he he closes his eyes and says..resignedly....OK...kaajjal ...lets both jump then...you want to die...why leave me behind...let me join you...he climbs on the edge...she is shocked..to see he is serious...a resigned look on his face...the TV...is shocked...everybody si shocked into silence...

finally with tears flowing down her cheeks...you win DEv...pull me up...i cant see you die...he pulls her up...and taking her arms angrily.....good now get back to work...Kaajjal behl...bahut tamasha hua hai... i dont have time..to deal with this silly nonsense....

he is back to being cold, distant..DPS..death is not a joke...i know what i am goin thru...no more dhamakhis...from you he wags a finger...angrily....for i am serious kaajjal if you try to kill yourself...i am goin too...so you decide...if its worth it.....she is silent...what could she say...

to be contd

sammy

hey autums how its is so far

Edited by dudleysam - 18 years ago
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Fabulous. Who wants to watch the circus anyways! Go ahead, going steadily and great!!! Continue dearie, I am still here!!! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sammy dear looks like u had the entire Apu-potion milk from Nupur 😛 ...u r in full-form right now 😉 ...I liked the way how u hv changed all those dhruv-kajal scenarios into DK scenarios 😛...As it is Dhruv and Adi and Shivaansh hv all directly come out from some circus to ruin this beautiful love story 😡 😭 ...So I was thinking of preparing some zoo for the kaajjal animals...we hv the horse ameesha,werewolf dhruv,goat Adi and monkey shivaansh 😕 ...so now mayb we can keep all these endangered speciaes in Kaajjal memorials 😳

And as far as DK romance is concerned ..well its everlasting and eternal and cannot b captured in any memorial 😳 ,so we can just watch the old episodes and continue with our never-ending drooling sessions 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10

Part 5

now everybody is talking about the Dk romance...nikki paris have a field day...harassing Kaju...whose head is downbent...if there was way to convince Dev...she didnt even knew how long he has....to live...while on her show..a lady comes on sayin...that her husband wants to divorse her cause she is carrying illegitimate child of her lover...but it isnt true...if kaju can convince her husband of her saccha pyaar....

kaju has her idea...how to convince devu....it is late he is working...a call comes on his mobile...mr DPS...we have your girlfriend Kaajjal behl with us...if you want to free her...then come with 20 lacs to ...versova...at first DPs thinks it is kajus...another plan...and scoffs at the man...calls off...then he has doubts and and calls SPji..who is sounding worried...Devu frowns what if it was true...now the whole city was talking about them...swearing...he runs to his car....

he goes home...and asks his mom t give him 20 lacs...she agrees...but he doent tell her why...he rushes to versova...it is a desserted,,,..cottage dark inside....he stands there...now what...a door opens and a man says....come inside...MR DPS..when he comes in...something comes hard on his head and everything goes blank....

Kaju slolwly drags Devu to the middle of the room...she looks around...ok..to set the scene...she dunks him with...whiskey...and then....makes him lie on nicely laid mattress...now what...she takes his jacket, shoes off...hides his mobile, wallet/////

he will come to soon....it wsnt a hard bump.....outside she punctures all wheeels...of his car...gets rid of the....4th wheel...

and waits till he comes too...hopeing she has some...ideas...to keep him...theere whole nite....he starts to come thru...kaju has the log fire goin....he groans and trie to sit up...she helps him...he is stunned to see her...then livid...he shouts///what goddamed you are you raving mad.....he runs out and sees the puncture...kicks the car...no mobile his pockets are empyt..runs inside...and grabs her arms...hurtingly...give me te mobile now kaajjal..she refuses the glint in her eyes...and tears...he is frustrated...dammit kaajjal...

he holds his head in his hands...her heart wrenches...she wants to take him in her arms love him tell him it is alright...but stand there dtermindedly...remembering how he trciked her withthe knife....

he is thirsty but loathe to ask her for anything he is really angry with her...she makes them some ta..but he is khafaa...so she smiles..to herself...loving his rootha...pan./..//he finally accepts the tea...for a moment their eyes meet...adn verything fades aaway...then he shakes the feelin angry again...btw lookig like rasgulla in his white suit, shirt and cherry red tie...

she wears a lovelypurple pink..dress..and a red duppatta loking like mussoorie cherry pop..he has a hard time keepin his eyes off her...

she has mixed a medicine in his tea and he feels drowsy...too late he realises she tricked him...when he fast asleep...she strips him ...and puts the covers over him....sits at his side whole night....before morning she changes into another dress...and strews her last nites...clothes on the floor amidst his...she has a change of clothes for him....

the she sits outside watching the waves...waiting...he comes to..groaning holding his head...everything is hazy.....then slowly horrifed as he sees their clothes...and his state of undress...he goes cold at the thougt...there is a fresh change of clothes on the bed for him...and a note///witha single red rose....

it was beautiful...didnt know marriage would be so wonderful

love kaajjal

he freezes...helplessly angry as he cant remeber much of lst nite he racks his brains....he smells whiskey on his clothes...and groans...pee lee hogee...and look what happened....his main concern for kaju.//..he showers changes...in a sombre mood...and goes out...he feels a very tender...feeliong seeing her...actually shy at what happenende..but stil angry...

coldly...so you...maipulated the whole thing...she turns and gives him such a tender smile he melts he hugs her...damn kaajjal what have you done...damn you

to be contd....

sammy😉

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