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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
wow!! awesum prt! cant wait fornext!! especially the ka part!!!!! 👏 😊 contiue aspa!!luv ka!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
awesome part 😊

update soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
Waiting for AK...entry.........loove AK....u know tht dont u..............die hard fan..!!!!cont soon..!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Thx for commenting n liking my ff….heres the next part….n eijaz-anita fan (laraib)...i do obviously noe that u have a very severe crush on angad-kripa....

RECAP:

A: mein soch rahi thi ke kyun naa hum angad aur kripa ko bhi invite kar lein??

K: haan…………excellent idea……..i'll contact angad asap…….

A: n there love story was so cool…wasn't it??…..

K: yeah….….acha………..i'll see for angad's number….

A: okay….see ya then……

K: bye

A: bye….

PART 9:

NEXT DAY:

we see a small cute house which is surrounded by all greenery…… there r two rooms in that house…one has a cute red heart poster on the door while other has a chocolate poster…then we see a girl who is cleaning her bed…she is bended n is folding the blanket…just then, a guy cums n holds the girl from her waist n as soon as they turn around, we find out that the hoxy guy is one n only, ANGAD n the girl is KRIPA…

K: arre…kya kar rahe ho angad??

A: nm……bas aisehi….dil chah raha tha…

Kripa turns around n keeps her arms on his shoulders…

K: kyun??? Aaj bare mood mein ho?!!

A: aisa hi kuch…

Angad makes kripa n himself fall on the bed in a way that kripa is down n angad is on top of her…

A: maza ayaa???

K: angad!!!!!!!!!! Get up!!!

A: naah!!!!!!!

K: plz………

Angad cums more closer to her n now both of their cheeks r touching each others…

K: angad!!!!!!!!! Aab dekho……

Kripa makes angad see in her eyes n she pushes angad in a way that now angad is at bottom n kripa is on him……she does the same as angad did to her…she touches his hair…cheeks….eyes etc etcc……

A: kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Paagal ho gayi ho kya??

K: kyun?? Kya hoa??

A: kripaaaaaaaaa…yeh tum nahin kar sakti!!!

K: kyun?? Jab tum kar sakte ho toh mein kyun nahin…

Then kripa takes off his shirt's buttons……

A: kripa……shaadi se pehle nahin…

K: oohhhh……toh tumhe yeh samajh aa hi gaya ke jo tum kar rahe thhe woh………………shaadi ke baad!!!!

She gets off him…

A: acha bhaiy…sorry (holding his ears)

K: haan haaan….theek hai!!!

A: sunno…kunal ka phone aaya tha aur woh keh raha tha ke humare college mein prom hai n outsiders r even allowed…so…shall we go??

K: sure……isi bahane hum kunal aur anjali se bhi mil lein ge…

A: kaafi arse ke baad millein ge…

K: yeah…hum sab kitna best of frndz thhe na…??

A: thhe?? Hain!!!

K: yeah…so wens the prom??

A: tomorrow…

K: okay…

Now u all must be wondering that how cum angad n kripa r living wid each other widout marriage…that's bcoz…they loved each other since the second yr of college but as their parents wanted them to complete their studies first, so they first finished the studies n they're soon gonna get married…as they cant live widout each other, they asked their parents n now both of them r living in a small house but in two different separate rooms…

In the college…there is a new gang of guys formed recently which even consists of adi (played by jatin shah)…he is not very new but as kt is the most popular girl…he is after kt…so, kt wid 2 of her frndz, including ayesha, r goin in their class… lakshya is sumwhere around the corner waiting for kt…

Kt: ayesha…tu prom pea aye gi??

A: nahin yaar…meri kismet itni achi nahin…tu toh ayi gi naa??

Kt: of course…aur tujhe pata hai kis ke saath??

AD (adi…shouts from the corner): mere saath…

He stands up n in is fuky jacket n cool jeans…he cums near kt…holds her hand tight n says

AD: haan ayesha…yeh mere saath ayi gi…

A: vt?? Kt..aur tumhare saath??

Kt: shut up adi…just get lost…

She releases her hand but he holds it again…

AD: itni jaldi nahin jaanemann…

Kt raises her hand to slap him but he stops her n twists her hand…lakshya sees this…cums in the quarrel…releases kt

L: yeh kya battamizi hai adi!!!

AD: hey u choze…stay out of this…

Lakshya n adi get into a fight…sum of the other students gather around lakshya n adi…if adi gives lakshya a punch…lakshya gives him twice…both the cool dudes r bleeding n ayesha n kt trying their level best to stop lakshya n adi but they aren't…kt gets in b/w of them n grabs lakshya's arm to stop him…

Kt: lakshya…plz stop…chalo…

L (releases his arm from her hand): nahin kt…is adi ne tumpe galat nazre dali…isse toh saza mil ke rahe gi…

Some guy from the college announces in every class that lakshya n adi r having a fight n as both of them r the cute hunks of the college…evry1, including saksham n p2 go to the main ground…

P2: saksham…mujhe bohat tension ho rahi hai…pata nahin bhaiyya kaise hoge??

S: adi tuhara bhai hai!?!?!?!

P2: nhain…lakshya…

S: don't worry p2…hum dekhte hain…

They enter the main ground n both, especially p2, is shocked to see that lakshya is bleeding like hell……principles, guards…evry1 was tryin to stop them but they didn't…p2 started to cry n so was kt…

P2: saksham………saksham!!! Bhai ko bachao saksham…bhaiyya!!!

S: dunt worry p2…mein bachaon ga…

He goes in the circle n stops adi as well as lakshya…

Saksham takes lakshya in a smooth quite corner

L: thx for saving me…saksham…

S: no thx yaar…p2 ke tum bhai ho toh mere bhi bhai hoye…

Kt: thx saksham…agar tum nahin rokte lakshya aur adi ko toh aaj toh pata nahin kya hota!!!

P2 sits by lakshya n hugs him tight…

P2: bhaiyya!!!! Aap bhi na!!! gussa bari jaldi aata hai…

L: now im fine p2…don't worry…jao tum apni class mein jao…

P2: u take care bhaiyya…

L: I surely will…tum jao…saksham…take care of my sis…

S: sure lakshya…

P2 n saksham leave…now theres only lakshya n kt…kt sits by lakshya who is putting medicine on his arm…

Kt: kya aafat aa rahi thi yeh sab karne ki???

L: us adi ne tumhare saath battamezi ki aur mein bardaasht kar leta…

Kt: lakshya…tum toh jante ho ke woh adi aisa hi hai…phir bhi…

L: toh mein kya karta??

Kt: aur agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh?? (getting in tears again)

L: toh??

Kt: toh mera kya hota??

L: kt!!!!!!!!! (wiping her tears off) mujhe kuch nahin hota…

Kt: aur agar ho jata toh…aur waise bhi tumhe toh pata tha ke adi ki gundoo se kitni dosti hai…tumhe kuch…

L (interrupts): bhaiy….kuch nahin hota!!! Aur agar hot abhi toh…

Kt (now kt interrupts n puts her hand on his mouth): aisa kabhi mat bolna…

N she breaks into his arms…lakshya even hugs him back…just then, ayesha cums…

A: *coughs*

Kt n lakshya get back to normal…

A: lakshya…aab tum kaise ho??

L: theek hoon…

Kt: khaak theek ho?? Yeh dekho… (she shows ayesha the cuts he had)

A: lakshya…yeh toh bohat hain yaar…

Kt: haan…aur aab hum kal prom pe bhi nahin jaenge…

L: vt??

A: kyun??

Kt: kyun kya matlab!!! Tumhe itni chotte ayi hain…is halat mein hum nahin jaenge…

L: nahin kt!!!!!! Mein bilkul fit hoon…plzzzzzzzz…don't refuse…

Kt: no lakshya…ur not fit…

L: par…

Kt: no ifs n buts…

A: kt yaar……..maan bhi jaa

Kt: we'll see…

-to be cont…

PRECAP: prom night…love confession…

Hope u all liked the new entry (adi)…n also this part….so plz comment…n stay tuned…

Luv

hoor

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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
awesome part liked it continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
awsome part do cont. soon... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
awesome fanfic i luv it. plz continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
loved the part great!!!!
update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
nice prt 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8t part especially AK they r too cute!!!!!!!!!

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