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Awesome Parts Hoor it's a cute story I read it all today
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Thx evry1, especially anam, for liking n commenting on my ff….this part is late as I had my skool n tests goin on so…sorry for the delay…heres the next:

RECAP:

Kt: haan…aur aab hum kal prom pe bhi nahin jaenge…

L: vt??

A: kyun??

Kt: kyun kya matlab!!! Tumhe itni chotte ayi hain…is halat mein hum nahin jaenge…

L: nahin kt!!!!!! Mein bilkul fit hoon…plzzzzzzzz…don't refuse…

Kt: no lakshya…ur not fit…

L: par…

Kt: no ifs n buts…

A: kt yaar……..maan bhi jaa

Kt: we'll see…

PART 10:

Next morning (prom day n its Saturday):

Birds chirping…sun rising…blah blaah…

Anjali wakes up…wears her gown n opens the window to get a morning breeze…she goes in kt's room to wake her up but nobody was there…

A: arre…yeh kt kahaan chali gayi??

She goes in the rest-room…dressing room but shes nowhere to be seen…then she decides to wake saksham n wen she goes in his room…she sees kt wid saksham n both were already awake…

A: acha…toh tum dono yahaan ho!!

Kt: ji di…woh mein bhai ke liye dress select kar rahi thi…

A: for vt??

S: prom…

A: oh haan……acha…tum dono brkfast karne aa jao…im waiting…

S & KT: sure…

Anjali goes in her room n sees that kripa has given her a missed call on her cell…so she calls her up….

K: hello??

A: hey kripa!!!

K: hey anjo…kaisi ho??

A: im good…acha…u n angad r comin to the prom right??

K: ofcourse yaar…n theres sumthng special that I need to tell u guys…

A: vt???........jaldi bata!!!

K: abhi nahin…in prom…

A: see ya then

K: bye

On the other hand…p2 n lakshya r helping kunal dressed up neatly as a prefect man not a sportsperson…kunal takes out the muscle-shirts, baggy trousers n jackets for himself but p2 insists him not to wear that n she gives him a black suit wid a red shirt n a red tie wid it…

PROM:

Evry1 is in the hall but theres still no clue of lakshya n p2. saksham, kt n adi r already there in the party…kunal n anjali, together, hand-in-hand, enter the party n they r followed by lakshya n p2…lakshya, on one hand, goes towards kt n p2 remains standing there, waiting for saksham.

Lakshya (wearing black jeans wid red t-shirt n a sexy black jacket on it…looking veryyyyyyy cute n red-hawwwwwt) goes to kt (wearing a hot red top wid black skirt, having a red/black scarf around her neck n open hair, looking very beautiful) …

L: hi kt…

K: hi why chhoro…tum yahaan kyun aae?

L: kya matlab??

Kt: maine tumhe bola tha ke jab tak Tumhari chott sahi na ho tab tak prom pe mat aana…aur Tumhari chott toh sahi hi nahin hoyi…

L: who cares kt…by the way honey… (while touching her hair)…ur looking very beautiful…red hot!!!

Kt wonders that how cum lakshya was talking like that wid her…lakshya was such a simple guy but today he was flirting…whereas lakshya is

L (thnkng to himself): maine saahi toh kiya naa?? Jaisa kunal bhai ne kaha tha waisa hi kiya liken….pata nahin kit mere bare mein kya soch rahi ho gi…

On the other hand, saksham (who is very black trouser wid a red shirt…looking very handsome) goes to p2 (who was wearing a black shalwar-kameez wid red work on it)…

S: may i??

She agrees n both go on the dance floor…they both dance to the song

"baahoon ke darmiyaan….do pyaar mil rahe hain…" from the film khamoshi….

P2 feels little uncomfortable while dancing as this was the first dance she was dancing wid a guy on the dance floor…

S: kya hoa p2??

P2: nmmmmm…kuch nahin…

S: batao…

P2: actually…maine pehle kabhi kissi ladke ke saath dance nahin kiya…

S: bass…….itni si bath…dunt get nervoused…take a deep breath n thnk that u r dancing wid the one who u love the most…

She does the same n now they dance very romantically…

The DJ announces: hey all the beautiful couples out there…theres a very special couple who'll be joining us in this party…this couple had completed the college n so, they're ex-students…………so……………………all the sexy guys n hot girls, put ur hands together for the most cute couple of our college times, KUNAL & ANJALI!!!!

N there enters kunal n anjali, hand-in-hand…kunal was wearing the suit that p2 suggested while anjali was wearing a red saree wid beautiful work on it n looking simply amazing…

Evry1 claps n so kunal n anjali, including all the couples in prom, to dance…so now, kunal-anjali, lakshya-kt along wid saksham-p2 r dancing to the tunes of

" in dino…

Dil mera, mujhse hai, keh raha"-from the movie, LIFE IN A METRO.

Lakshya to kt…

L: kt…mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai……

Kt: haan bolo…

L: i…i…

Kt: I, I ke elawaa kuch nahin bolna hai kya…kaho toh…

L: actually kt…tum mere saath zarra garden mein chalo gi…

Kt: kyun?? Kya hoa??

L: chalo toh…

Kt: kk…

Lakshya takes her to the college garden which is all in dark n no-ones there…

Kt: aab bolo…

L: actually……

Kt: im waitin…

L: i…………….i…………….i……………I mean i………

Kt: tum socho ke tumhe kya kehna hai…mein tumse prom khatam hone ke baad baat karongi…

She turns around n starts to leave when lakshya grabs her hand, stops her…so she turns around n finds lakshya bending on his knees n a rose in his hand…

L: I love u kt!!!!!!!!!! J…main tumse pyaar karta hoon…

Kt cant believe that sum1 told her the three magical words n the one who told her was no other than the one she loved as well, but hidden it from evry1, lakshya!!!

Kt takes the flower, lakshya gets up n suddenly, lights get open n there were red balloons saying "I love you" on the ground…kt was amazed………………kt kisses the rose's petals, puts her hand on lakshya's cheeks, brings his face forward n kisses him on his, both the cheeks………n then, both tightly fall into each others arms…

On the other hand, in the party, while dancing, anjali catches up wid kripa's face so kunal-anjo both go to welcome angad-kripa…

A: hi angad n kripa…shukar tum dono party khatam hone se pehle aa toh gaye…

AD: is mein meri koi galti nahin hai bhaiy…yeh…(pointing to kripa), tayyar hone mein itna time waste kar deti hai…

KR: yah rite…acha angad…inhe batao toh jo tum batana chahte thhe…

K: kya??

AD:: woh…I wanted to invite u, n ur families to (while putting his arms around kripa's shoulders), kripa n my wedding week…

A: wooooooooooooooooooooooow!!! At las…tum dono ke shaadi toh ho rahi hai!!!

K: yeah..but vts this wedding week…??

KR: pehle humari engagement, phir roka, mehndi, shaadi aur end mein reception…toh ek hafta lag hi jaege…

A: oh…

AD: acha…wheres lakshya, p2, saksham n kt??

K: yaheen kaheen honge…

Just then, lakshya n kt re-join the party after their love confession……

L: hey angad bhai…kripa di ya bhabhi…

KR (laughs): anything is fine…

A: hey lakshya n kt…by the way…ek sawwal pochhoon…lakshya, tum kunal ke bhai, kt jo anjali ki behen ke saath??

KR: haan!!!???

Kt: actually we're even good frndz like di n kunal…

Kunal goes to saksham-p2 n tells them abt ak's marriage…the four couples, gather together n all were discussing abt ak's marriage…

A: acha angad…tum mehndi ke baad kripa se do dino tak door kaise raho ge??

AD: haan…..yeh toh maine socha hi nahin tha…usko kuch intezaam kar hi longa…

Evry1 laughs…

K (on the mic): ladies n gentlemen…I have an announcement to make…prom nights pe zyada tar couples ek dosre ko propose karte hain…toh aaj bhi…ek ver cute couple ne love confession kiya hai so tak a look…

The video of lakshya proposing kt n kt kissing n hugging him plays in frnt of evry1…anjo gives an evil smile as if she new abt this…saksham, angad n kripa were stunned while p2 was surprised…n don't ask abt lakshya-kt………

They were feeling soooooooooooooooooo shy n they had no words to express thei nervousness n shyness……

-to be cont…

PRECAP: p2 imagines saksham everywhere…angad-kripa engagement preparations…

I tried to fit in all couples' romance n I hope I did that…hope u all liked my romantic n cute prom part……

Do comment n stay tuned for more romance…😉

Luv

Hoor

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Posted: 18 years ago
nice prt again!
continue soom 👏
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beautiful part 👏 continue soon
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that was an awesome part.
Edited by drashti26 - 18 years ago
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Thx evry1 for liking n commenting on my ff…as u all must be noeing, im really busy wid my skool that's y I update the ff wid a lot of "kanjoosi".

RECAP:

K (on the mic): ladies n gentlemen…I have an announcement to make…prom nights pe zyada tar couples ek dosre ko propose karte hain…toh aaj bhi…ek ver cute couple ne love confession kiya hai so tak a look…

The video of lakshya proposing kt n kt kissing n hugging him plays in frnt of evry1…anjo gives an evil smile as if she new abt this…saksham, angad n kripa were stunned while p2 was surprised…n don't ask abt lakshya-kt………

They were feeling soooooooooooooooooo shy n they had no words to express their nervousness n shyness……

PART 11:

Kt starts to leave the hall whereas lakshya is forced by kunal n saksham to say sumthng…lakshya gets very confused abt vt shuld he say so he cums on the stage n, along wid kunal, angad n saksham, starts to sing:

"rok jaaa…

o dil deewane…

pochhoon toh main zara…

ladki hai ya hai jadoo…………..

khushboo hai ya nasha………………………

.paas who ayee toh chho ke mein dekho zara…"

From dilwale dulhaniya le jaenge…

Just then…kt stops, turns around n all the 4 girls along wid the 4 guys, dance to the tunes of the song…

NEXT MORNING:

Angad wakes up n calls kunal

K: hello??

A: hey kunal…yaar…ek zaroori baat batani thi…

K: kya??

A: yaar…meri aur kripa ki engagement aab jaldi ho rahi hai!!

K: cool!!!! Kab???

A: kal!!

K: vt???

A: haan yaar…….actually, woh kripa ke father ko abroad jana para isi liye jaldi karni parri gi…

K: so…preparations ke liye kab aana hoga??

A: aaj…actually…abhi…

K: huh???

A: yup…asal mein…sagaai yahaan nahin goa mein hai!!

K: vt??

A: haan…aur yeh plan bohat jaldi mein bana toh tu aaj shaam theek 4 baje lakshya, kt, saksham, p2, anjali, apne parents aur anjali ke dad ke saath airport pohoch jana…humari 7 baje ki flight hai….

K: I'll try angad…

A: vt do u mean ull try??!?!!?!! U n evry1 have to cum yaar…

K: haan haaan…

A: bye…

K: see ya at 4…

In the khanna house:

Kunal tells p2, lakshya n his parents abt the trip…evry1 starts to pack but raj (kunals dad) was unable to go to goa due to sum circumstances…kunal, p2 n lakshya, together, r packing there stuff…lakshya runs to his room n brngs sum picz n starts keeping it in his suit-case…

K: arre lakshya…yeh kya rakh rahe ho??

L: ummmmmm…kuch nahin bhai…

P2 to kunal: zaroor kt ki pics hogi…

P2: lakshya bhaiyya!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JJ

L: abb tumhe kya hai??

P2: kt ki pictures hain naa???

L (while blushing): shut up p2!!!!

K: saahi batao lakshya!!!

L: kya aap bhi bhai!!!

Kunal, anjali, saksham, p2, lakshya, kt, angad, kripa n madhu arrives at the airport…all the couples check-in n coincidently, lakshya-kt get seats together, kunal anjali get, angad-kripa but saksham n p2 r wid madhu (kunals mom). Kt is very scared of take-off n landing…so, as soon as the captain announces that we r ready for the take-off, kt takes a deep breath n hold lakshya's hand tightly…

L: kya hoa kt??

Kt: actually lakshya!!!!!!! Im really scared of take-off n landing…(as the plane starts to take-off)OMG!!!!!!!! Lakshyaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Lakshya puts his hand on her mouth…

L: kt!!!!!!! Dunt worry sweety…main hoon na!!!

Kt: but!!!!!!!

L: ssssssshhhhhhhhhh…

He holds her tight n tells her to look in his eyes…they both, widout wearing the seat belts, stare each other throughout the whole take-off…the whole cabin crew was forcing them to wear their seat belts but they didn't cared abt vteva they were told or forced to…as soon as the take-off finished…lakshya n kt got released off themselves n realized that vt they were doing…

On the other hand, p2 goes to the restroom n while washing her face, she sees saksham who is holding her hands n helping her out…she gets confused n as soon as she turns around, saksham vanishes…when she is abt to cum to her seat…sum1 holds her hand n when she turns around, it was saksham!!!! They both stare into each others eyes…then….suddenly…p2 hears sum1 calling her…when she starts to leave then she realizes that she was only imagining saksham!!!

-to be cont…

PRECAP: angad-kripa's engagement!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very romantic!!!!

Hope u all liked this part…thx for commenting for the previous part……stay tuned n keep commenting……..

Luv

hoor

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Posted: 18 years ago
nice prt..cant wait for more.espcially ka and ak scenes.. 😆 .!continue asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome ff. 👏
Can't wait to read more of Lakshya-KT, continue soon! 😳
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wow!! 😛 😉
Hoor it was amazing yaar 😉 👏 👏
continue soon!! 😛
love,aliya
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey that was awesome.
Edited by drashti26 - 18 years ago

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