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sharna2k6 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh myy! How much I have missed 😲

My little vacation has gotten me so behind with all the wonderful FF's here! 😭 See, I was away to visit relatives for the weekend, and I got back yesterday. But even late night, I stayed up reading your ff's catching up till 3 am 😆 😆

I didnt have the energy then to comment on the fabulous continuations, so I just read, and now i'm commenting 😃

Fabulous as always my dear, and so naughty 😆 But I loved it! This is all we have to rely on till Apu comes back. This is what is keeping us sane 😆 So, I can't wait till you come back from your 2 day weekend and continue again 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
..Gr88 FF autumnleaf..Till Apu cums bac m readin all the wonderful FF...waitin for him to cum bac so den this serial wud be so gr8 😃 😃
Lottsa luv: Hira 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: gambi

Autumn!!!! You have become soooo naughty!!!! Haiiii..... tumne to mujhe maardaala!!! Wow!!! What a sizzling scene that was!!!!!! Oooooo.....I am tooo 😳 to speak,by the way it was amazingly fantastic superb and breathtaking!!!!!!!!!! Continue on forever!!! I was having soooo much fun imagining the scene, kaash you could write a little bit more,so don't forget to continue as soon as possible.

Love,
Zareen.

Zareen..... I am touched. Thanks dearie...Glad you thought it to be so breathtaking. Believe me I was breathing quite fast when I cooked the ice-cube part.....😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_rashi

Wow, autumnleaf g88 job!👏 U did a fantistic job!😳 Continue it soon!😳😆

Thank you Rashi, for all the encouraging words and yes, soon.......

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Posted: 18 years ago

Autumn Honeymoon part 3 was absolutely Fantastic!!!👏 It was very Romantic!!😛 Hai.. those ice game, kissing Aawww....😍 Now that the ice has melted i m sure as soon as kaajal gets up she will fall in the bed again😳😆 They again they will get naughty naughty!😛 Autumn do continue as i m waiting!😳😆 Now is it going to go to Part 4 or straight to 'what comes next?'😆 Autumn 👏 Hope u can hear them!😳👏👏

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Oh myy! How much I have missed

My little vacation has gotten me so behind with all the wonderful FF's here! See, I was away to visit relatives for the weekend, and I got back yesterday. But even late night, I stayed up reading your ff's catching up till 3 am

I didnt have the energy then to comment on the fabulous continuations, so I just read, and now i'm commenting

Fabulous as always my dear, and so naughty But I loved it! This is all we have to rely on till Apu comes back. This is what is keeping us sane So, I can't wait till you come back from your 2 day weekend and continue again


Thanks a lot rangeelee. Thanks for the compliments. 😳 😳

Originally posted by: hira_786

..Gr88 FF autumnleaf..Till Apu cums bac m readin all the wonderful FF...waitin for him to cum bac so den this serial wud be so gr8
Lottsa luv: Hira


To you too hira thanks a lot. 😳 😳 😳

[Quote=Anoli]Autumn Honeymoon part 3 was absolutely Fantastic!!! It was very Romantic!! Hai.. those ice game, kissing Aawww.... Now that the ice has melted i m sure as soon as kaajal gets up she will fall in the bed again They again they will get naughty naughty! Autumn do continue as i m waiting! Now is it going to go to Part 4 or straight to 'what comes next?' Autumn Hope u can hear them!

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

Anoli...... I only say that you are a very good creative. Never let it go waste. You did a fabulous job and a very ingenuous one for that matter. So coming from you, i appreciate it very much. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

O my my Autumn. how did this skip my eyes. yar please mujhay PM kar diya karo. sometimes the forum is soooo crowded that i miss many posts.

ok, ICECUBE!!!! ahem ahem .. now how beeautiful is that . o i am still lost in that beautiful moment whe dev places it in her lips. ufff, naughtiness at its max .. cuteness as it max.

awww, i loved it, loved it, loved it.

still lost in it!!! 😍

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Posted: 18 years ago

I was bored and decided to continue before I left for my 2-day break. Enjoy bhootnis.....

Part 7 DK refresh their memories...........

Dev and Kaajjal enjoy the coffe and are about to leave when Anupam is waiting outside by the jeep Dev first used while in Mussourie. He is standing there and gaping at the skies waiting for DK to emerge from their haven.

"Arre Anupam, andar kyun anhin aaya tu?" He smirks and says "Marna hain kya mujhe? I am a very seedha-saadha saadhu-sant sa aadmi. If I would barge in onto you two love-birds. mera brahmachaarya to gayaa kaam se....." Kaajjal giggles while Dev slaps his shoulder saying "tu kabhie nahin sudhrega... Chal ab, der ho rahi hain. Teri bhabhi ke ghar chalna hain." Kaajjal stops him and says "Dev... suno...(She whispers..) Dev mujhe pehle wahaan jaana hain. Phir ghar chalenge." So Dev looks into her eyes and realises her silent plea. He winks at her and bites his lower lip again smiling seductively into her eyes. She feels shy and looks down prodding Dev to tell the change of plans to Anupam. Dev stops Anup[am and says "Yaar thanks for getting my jeep. I will drop you off here and you can walk the rest of the way. Its very close by. We shall join you in some time. Teri bhabhi ko mandir jaana hain......" Anupam is aghast but used to Dev's abrupt ways and smiles saying under his breath "Bewakoof samjha hain mujhe... Mandir...." But he smiles at their retreating back and smiles to see them finally happy and united.

Dev stops just at the foot of the cliff and puts out his hand. She looks lovingly at him and puts her hand into his without any words their eyes speak volumes. The walk hand in hand towards that spot where they first met.......... Both have the scene flash in front of their eyes. A breeze blows just like it did on that auspicious night. Kaajjal feels a shiver due to the cold breeze and Dev immediately takes off his jacket and puts it around his doll. She smiles up at him and he cannot resist a quick peck on her quivering lips. He puts his arm around her and holds her hands with the other free hand. She rests her head on his shoulder as if she had reached home....... and they walk to the spot.

It is still early in the evening, the sun has set but has lit the sky with its orange and purple hues. The breeze is now strong and has a mind of its own. His hair are flying and that errant lock of hair falls out of place, just as ziddi as its owner. Kaajjal's hair are whipping and lashing about her face. Dev then looks into her eyes and raises his hand and removes that lock of her hair from her eyes."Us din main yehi karna chahta tha Kaajjal. Tumhare maathe par jhoolti yeh lattain, mere dil ko cheer kay jaati hain. Inko dekhta hoon to mujhe jalan hoti hain. Yeh tumhaare itne kareeb kaise ho sakta hain..." Kaajjal is mesmerized by his husky rasping seductive voice. She drwons in the velvetty depths of his eyes and hugs him tightly muttering fiercely.."Hamaare beech koi nahin aa sakta Dev...koi nahin...koi nahin......." He too hugs her and buries his head into the curve of her neck and for moments they are lost into one and another...............

They break after eons...... and Dev mutters rather reluctantly still hugging her close to him..."They will be waiting for us. I promise you we shall come here again tomorrow and I shall........" Kaajjal puts her fingers on his lips completing his unspoken promise with her eyes and he smiles the promise back to her and they leave.

Preview : Bua welcomes DK by doing their aarti.......

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Posted: 18 years ago

Arre wah.....someone boredom can prove very lucky for us.......😉

May you have many.many more boring days....moments...et al....😆

This was a short piece but ohlalalala....bet far from sweet....it had all the elements of proper Masala Manufacturing type scenarios.....and I LOVE that....😉

Autumnji...if you ever need a shisya.....you know where to look......😛

Excellent.... beau...... merveilleux......!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Aw Autumn, I have melted with the wonderful continuation you have done. 😳 It is soo cute, and romantic. Kaaassh, I wish I found my Dev. 😍 😆 😳

Haaiii! Dev is so romantic. I loved the way you portrayed the passion, and romantic side in him! Wonderful autumn! Each detail, each scene, the sunset, DK hand in hand! I could just imagine every bit of it!

Waiting intently for your next part when you return!

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