Kaash aisa ho-Concluded...Pg 39... - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
oh Autumn it was sweet, touching,excellent and slepndid job you and other writers out there are awesome do continue. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Autumn, back with a bang!!!

ahhh, everytime i read this passion building etweeb DK, their eyes locking, their hands touching, their selfs sruching into another, i feel my heartbeat stopping.

Love can sometimes have such an empowering affect on a person. DK has that affect, for one, on me. everytime i will think of love, i will think of Dev and Kaajjal, everytime i will think of Passion, i will think of Apoorva as Armaan and Dev.

and your words just completes it all. i loved the way DK are way from everyone and Dev says we deserve time alone Damnit. ahhh, chocolate babay and his damnit. and the kaajjal roll over dev ... o man, it takes a long time for girls to actually get out of that shyness wall. slow and steadily, we do cover that distance, kaajjal will dot hat too 😉

Loved it Autumn. this was really great!! 👏 and yeah you are right there, i have also decided to give just romance for the next week. nothing but roamnce, afterall our dev isnt here and we are all already too tortured to read something torturing as well. 😊

Oh yes Kashish, it sure does take a lot of courage for a lady to show such boldness. But you see they try to dominate but always wish that they can't....😳 Here too Kaajjal tries to dominate but shyness overcomes and wins but then too he is at her command. Those unspoken gentle commands is her wish and his commmand.....😳

Thanks Kashish, I always love the appreciation coming from you.😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

mind blowing!!
👏 👏

Thanks Ruhi, you are not bad yourself....😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwwwwwww Autumn the entire DK suhaagraat was just so beautifully and aesthetically described by u 😳 😳 😳 ..superb stuff 👏 👏 👏ufff some positive protons of dev's naughtyness 😛 and some positive protons of kaju's hidden desires 😉 both mixing together in the chandni raat and forming an ionic bond 😳 which will remain binded till eternity 😳 😳 ...just loved the way dev slowly is making his presence felt over kajal's body 😳 😳 ...ishhh the thought itself is giving me goosebumps 😛 😛 now I m definitely saving this part in my favourites for future reference 😉 😛..Autumn we want more yaar 😛 ..do continue with their honeymoon also 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Awwwwwwww Autumn the entire DK suhaagraat was just so beautifully and aesthetically described by u 😳 😳 😳 ..superb stuff 👏 👏 👏ufff some positive protons of dev's naughtyness 😛 and some positive protons of kaju's hidden desires 😉 both mixing together in the chandni raat and forming an ionic bond 😳 which will remain binded till eternity 😳 😳 ...just loved the way dev slowly is making his presence felt over kajal's body 😳 😳 ...ishhh the thought itself is giving me goosebumps 😛 😛 now I m definitely saving this part in my favourites for future reference 😉 😛..Autumn we want more yaar 😛 ..do continue with their honeymoon also 😳

I can see bukhaar utar gayaa hai. 😛😉😊 I hope you are feeling better mishti dear. I was a bit worried for you yesterday. 😊Take care and expect a scintillation for you to save in your favourites today......😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: dudleysam

hey autumn...dear...green...eh...is that green for...go for it 😉 or green for...grassed.. 😆
but yes...it is your comeback.alrite did you and misthi sign a secret contract of disappearin together she with he piya to be and you...with your family....kya...conspiracy hai bhai...hum he iss tarah se akela chhod ke jathe ho... 😭
but no more tears like kaju in your FF is having a blast...part 1 delivered...and part 2...all of 10 days eh...autumn...breeze
😆 sammy 😛

Green for everything Sammy. Take it however you like.....😆😉😳

Here comes the next scintillation! 😳

Originally posted by: superstar9

oh Autumn it was sweet, touching,excellent and slepndid job you and other writers out there are awesome do continue. 😊

Thanks Ellina.... here it comes.......😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

I can see bukhaar utar gayaa hai. 😛😉😊 I hope you are feeling better mishti dear. I was a bit worried for you yesterday. 😊Take care and expect a scintillation for you to save in your favourites today......😳

oh yes bukhaar kal raat ko hi utarr gaya hai😛..right now I m only depending on your and Kashish and sammy's FFs for some drooling sessions😳..because in the serial all we get to see is some mad comedy circus

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Posted: 18 years ago
#98

Part 6 Honey Moon continues....Part III.............

Kaajjal wakes up with a light breeze bringing back familiar fragrances and the memory of their coming together yet again on her homeland......😳 She feels his heavy arma round her and without looking can feel his steady breathing fanning her face. She shyly looks up to his face and silently admires his handsome features. Thos brows, those eyelashes that shadow the love lying within, those lashes that could hide or reveal million secrets, that nose... She smiles as she remembers once calling him her nakchada raajkumaar....😳 Well he sure has a royal nose..... She dissuades the urge to twinge his nose fearing to wake his peaceful satisfied slumber. Her gaze travels to his lips and the dimple that grooves its way even in his sleep..... and she gets this naughty thought.... and her face turns a flaming red.... Gosh what effect this man has on her even while he is asleep..........

She slowly extricates herself turning a beet-red when she finds her clothes lying strewn by the bed alongside his........ She quickly grabs her clothes and runs for the washroom. she freshens up quickly and goes out leaving him still sleeping peacefully. She finds the kitchen and it is well stocked by Anupam. she quickly and efficiently prepares a Cold coffee and finds some Pineapple pastries in the fridge. She knows that Dev too shares a penchant of these like her. She arranges a piece on a plate gourmet style and lays it at the table. She fills the coffee into a tall glass and puts it back into the fridge to chill./ she hunts for the ice cubes and then suddenly gets very very naughty.........😈

Dev is still sleeping now has Kaajjal pillow in his arms, hugging it as if it was Kaajjal....😳 She enters and has a evilly naughty smile on her face. Her eyes are sparkling with the same naughty looks..... Slowly she nears Dev and sits by his side, gently so as to not wake him. She then slowly takes her hand and moves it gingerly towards his face. And carefully but firmly places a big ice-cube on his lips. The cold wakes him from his slumber and makes him jerk. she laughs out loud and his movements drop the icecube to the floor. He then realises what she has done and on seeing the evil mirth on her face.... turns equally naughty and with a killing expression grabs hold of her wrist and pulls her back onto the bed, thus successfully stopping her laughter that ends in a loud gasp. He places his lips on her face and says "Oh, so we are feeling naughty now are we? Well lets have a competition. Who is more naughtier?" she replies to him squealing his name out loud..."Dev... nahin Dev I am sorry....Please yeh to sirf ek mazaak thaa......Dev... nahin Dev....please..." as she sees his intentions. He brings his lips closer towards her's and she closes her eyes in anticipation of that electric current that shall soon pass through her like always when Dev kisses her. she anticiaptes that mindlessness, when suddenly instead of the warmth of his mouth she feels the cold wetness of the ice and she squeals again, her eyes flying open......... "Dev......sorry..." she then gasps as the ice is replaced by the warmth that she was first expecting........😳 She closes her eyes and again she feels the ice and she is completely mesmerised by this strange seductive game that Dev is playing....... After long moments, the ice-cube is lying in a small wet puddle on the floor. The only sounds that are coming is the breeze blowing and her soft whimpers alongwith Dev's satisfied husky rasping voice expressing his love for her in her ears.....

They are rudely awakened from their passionate embrace by Dev's cell. For a moment both are still and then she bursts out giggling at his soft "Damn this cell......." He wipes his lips and raises himself reaching for the damned cell. He first stares at it as if he could kill it by squeezing its throat. She is still giggling but is still lying in the circle of is arms. She rests her head on his shoulders and smiles like the cat who licked up all the cream. Dev Speaks "Hello Veerbhai.. aap bhi na..." After a pause Dev bites his lower lip and replies mockingly "Nahin Veerbhai, hum TV dekh rahen the....😆 of course disturb nahin kiya..." Again after a pause he says "Na na na na na, aap lene nahin aana, maine anupam se keh diya hain woh gaadi lekar aa jaayega. Hum dinner tak wahan pahunch jayenge. Ok, then see you all at dinner. Bye"

He then switches the cell off and says "Hmmmm to hum kahan the? 😈 "Nahin Dev....... maine kaha naa I am sorry baba...please..... Ab aap uthiye aur haat muh dho kar fresh ho jayiye. Maine aap ke liye cold coffee banaayi hain." She looks at him and with her eyes promises later on.....

He looks deeply into her promising eyes with a promise of his own. I will count you on that one Mrs Kaajjal Dev Pratap Singh........... and he sighs and leaves her reluctantly but not before he steals another passionate kiss...............😳

Okay bhootnis now go and take you chilling cold showers...after that single ice-cube must have made you all feel the heat.......😆😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
😃 autumn...you are getting naughtier by the way...

ice cubes..then what next ice creams.and choc fudges.....pooh jyo...her fever is goin to stay hi at this rate...and the rest are not goin to come down...now... 😃

but my dear....lady...rehem...khao...rehm....do you want....all the girls on this forum...to abandon 😃 😆 😆 ...their serious studying and careeers... 😆 and get married..ASAP 😃 .hum toh shaadi shudda hain... havin these naughty thoughts 😃 😃 makes no harm...par bechaari kunwaarriyan toh haai haaii karte reh jayenge.... 😃 😃

another masterpiece dear. 👏 ..the way you capture DPS passion and their romance is amazing....i could imagine naughty kaju....passing that ice cube over his lips with her eyes closed...imagining naughty things....

yes autumn... 😳 thanx a lot to you to be able ... 😳 to see kaju and devu having these moments is such a huge relief to that dumber dumbest track they are playin... 😕 i hope the vibes from your FF travel to their goat brains. 😡 😡 ..and give them a icy jolt...and give us back our DK...ASAP 😃
thank you so autumn...
sammyh 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey where was I???😕

How come I missed all this masti-ka-tadka........the real suhaag-raat and et al being unfolded for us the desperate readers by none other than the romance-queen.....😉

So this is new to me........Autumn Madam.......C'etait si beau!!!😛

L'a aime, l'amour le roman........uuuffffff...killing!!!👏

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