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Aww Autumn your scenes in part 7 were outstanding and so sweet excellent work 👏 and do continue.

OMGGG!!!..i'm still in a big shock thinking..how in the world did i forget to read ur FF..????..how come i never saw it posted b4!! ..i just read the current part n i simply LUVED it 😳 !! U've done an outstanding job in the description of the scenes 👏👏 ..it was SO romantic n sweet, i cud actually picture the whole thing in my mind 😍
U seriously got me hooked..Now, i'm so going back n reading it all from the beginning..And yes, do continue soon..I'm waiting eagerly to read further.
btw, do pm me wenever u write the next part.


Aliza❤️

That was sooooooooo damnnnnnn goooooood and terrrrrrific!!!!!! Awwww.... I loved the part where Devu was removing that hair lock from Kajju's face!!!!! chowwwwwwwwww chhhhhwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt!!!! Continue soon and don't stop. 😃 😛

Love,
Zareen.

Originally posted by: thesaint148

O my my Autumn. how did this skip my eyes. yar please mujhay PM kar diya karo. sometimes the forum is soooo crowded that i miss many posts.

ok, ICECUBE!!!! ahem ahem .. now how beeautiful is that . o i am still lost in that beautiful moment whe dev places it in her lips. ufff, naughtiness at its max .. cuteness as it max.

awww, i loved it, loved it, loved it.

still lost in it!!! 😍

Awww Kashish, well the next part is up. Sorry about the pm thing I am baaaaddddd at pm-ing so read whenever you could. I know you always appreciate my FF.😃

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Aw Autumn, I have melted with the wonderful continuation you have done. 😳 It is soo cute, and romantic. Kaaassh, I wish I found my Dev. 😍 😆 😳

Haaiii! Dev is so romantic. I loved the way you portrayed the passion, and romantic side in him! Wonderful autumn! Each detail, each scene, the sunset, DK hand in hand! I could just imagine every bit of it!

Waiting intently for your next part when you return!

hmmm rangeelee I am feeling low and depressed by the last episode and the preview and all, dreading and equally waiting for Monday. Dreading Dev's reaction, but eagerly waiting for Apu's comeback....😕

Well today at least I shall continue 😊

Originally posted by: Iloveapu

Arre wah.....someone boredom can prove very lucky for us.......😉

May you have many.many more boring days....moments...et al....😆

This was a short piece but ohlalalala....bet far from sweet....it had all the elements of proper Masala Manufacturing type scenarios.....and I LOVE that....😉

Autumnji...if you ever need a shisya.....you know where to look......😛

Excellent.... beau...... merveilleux......!!!

Ha ha ha okay then deal. I shall keep getting bored more often!

Thanks for the words of appreciation m'amie chere.😳

Originally posted by: superstar89

Aww Autumn your scenes in part 7 were outstanding and so sweet excellent work 👏 and do continue.

Thanks Ellina. Yes for sure till Monday at least....😳😆

Originally posted by: aliza

OMGGG!!!..i'm still in a big shock thinking..how in the world did i forget to read ur FF..????..how come i never saw it posted b4!! ..i just read the current part n i simply LUVED it 😳 !! U've done an outstanding job in the description of the scenes 👏👏 ..it was SO romantic n sweet, i cud actually picture the whole thing in my mind 😍
U seriously got me hooked..Now, i'm so going back n reading it all from the beginning..And yes, do continue soon..I'm waiting eagerly to read further.
btw, do pm me wenever u write the next part.


Aliza❤️

Yes thanks so much Aliza, waiting for Dev's return does that to all. I too am waiting but dreading it as well. Well I promised so I shall continue at least till Monday. 😳😳 Then lets see....😕

Originally posted by: Gambi

That was sooooooooo damnnnnnn goooooood and terrrrrrific!!!!!! Awwww.... I loved the part where Devu was removing that hair lock from Kajju's face!!!!! chowwwwwwwwww chhhhhwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt!!!! Continue soon and don't stop. 😃 😛

Love,
Zareen.

Hmmmm yes Zareen those locks of hair, take my breath away. Especially Dev's hair 😳😳

Originally posted by: IndianPari

OXYGEN...PLEASE....

Payal that was the sweetest and the most shortest but heart touching and warming compliment, Thanks sweety. Breathe deeply, as here comes more.....😳

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Payal that was the sweetest and the most shortest but heart touching and warming compliment, Thanks sweety. Breathe deeply, as here comes more.....😳

MORE?!?!?! I can't take more!!! I've been losing brain cells since last night! First Kashish, then Sammy, the you....god you all are out to KILL ME!!!!

Ok ok...let me go take a cold shower...then will come back and read more....

deep breaths...yes...and a brown paper bag!

Part 8..... Dev stalks his shy blushing bride.....😳

Dev and Kaajjal drive but talking relentlessly with their eyes. He loving every inch of her body and face with his seductive drugging eyes and she losing herself in his chocolatey depths. She smiles and pushes his face albeit lovingly and reluctantly to make him watch the road. (Kya karein, she alongwith us is a little nervous about his driving. Look straight ahead god dammit Mr. DPS. We don't want another accident...😆)

Dev bites his lower lip and smiles with a promise in his eyes that makes his blushing bride turn a deep shade of beetroot.... But leaves her anticipating for the thrilling experiences and more new ones which are yet to be experienced....

They reach her house which is all lit up and decorated with flowers everywhere. She smiles and Dev too happy to hold her arm proprieterily walks her towards the door. The door miraculously opens like someone would have said those magical words.."khul ja sim sim..." and Bua and the whole Singh clan with SP and Hottie and Anupam welcoming them with an applause. Bua does the aarti of the two and puts a kaala tikka behind the ears of both. She then welcomes Dev smiling and he bows down to touch her feet and take her blessings. Hottie takes the thaali from her hands and Bua raises Dev with tears for all the previous bad times that they had to go through. He hugs her and says "Na na na na na, aaj ke baad kissike bhi aankhon mein aansoon nahin hone chahiye. Aur vaise bade dino se aapke haathon ke laddoo nahin khaye. Buaji, kya hain na aap Kaajjal ko Laddoo banaane ko sikhaana bhool gayin. Uske haathon mein aapke haathon ka jaadoo kahaaan......😉😛😉 " Bua smiles and then pulls his ears and says "Oy toote dhol... tu kya yahan laddoo khaane aayaa hain aaj...," then she smiles and says softly in a theatrical whisper..."Waise mujhe patah hain. Use kuch khaana waana banaana nahin aata.. To laddoo khaakh banayegi. Issi liye maine laddoo, keer, gaajar ka halwa sab taiyaar rakha hain. Chal ab kha lo..." Hearing this Kaajjal gets angry and in a mock gussa says "Yeh lo aur mujhe lagaa ki bua mujhe miss kar rahin hain. Here she is missing you more than me..." Everybody laugh and welcomes them inside.

Dev pulls her to a corner and says "Kaajjal one minute..." NB doesn't miss that and she winks at them speaking in sign language "Lage raho.. devarji...Lage raho..." And he smiles smugly and Kaajjal gets a bit irritated "Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Kya sochenge sab? Ab chodiye bhi na. Sab andar intezaar kar rahein hain...." and she escapes from his imprisonment. And he follows her tongue in cheek and stalks her. All her friends, and well-wishers accost them. Then at a point she leaves Dev's side and Dev sees a new side to her old bubbly self amongst people whom she had known all her life till he entered her life.

He keeps following her while she is speaking to all around her. At one point she is standing near a curtain and he goes behind the curtain and holds her hand that is behind her. She is startled and tries to twist it away. But his grip is strong. She then almost chokes when he slowly bends down and kisses each finger. The lady to whom she is talking to asks if all is fine. To which Kaajjal replies "Haan kaaki, I am fine. But I think I was bitten by a bug." On hearing that Dev bites her little finger and she squeals... " She pulls her hand in front and Dev smirks. When he comes out she gives him "I will kill you for that " kind of looks and he winks smiling as if saying "When dear, I am waiting..." And she blushes and goes into the kitchen.

There bua and Hottie are arguing over something where she settles the argument amicably and bua orders Kaajjal to not do any work today. She smiles and bua and hottie leave the kitchen. Just then she feels two strong arms pull her into the store room. She almost screams but Dev cups his hand over her mouth and hugs her from the back. "So here I am ready to die..." She stops his words by cupping his mouth and he takes her hand in his and says "Hai... itni meethi maut kaun nahin chahegaa..... Kaajjal chalo yahan se bhaag chalein." She is so drugged by his nearness and replies something incoherently. She is distracted by his scorching lips which create a havoc of their own and elliciting a response where her body presses into his like a moth that helplessly gets attracted to the light......

He busies himself by burying his nose into the fragrant curve of her neck. Today she has worn a beautiful red and yellow coloured salwaar suit but with a kind of backless kurta tied together with strings. His lips play with her exposed skin on the back. Touching the smooth silk in between hindered by those small and thin doris. He irritatingly pulls on one end of a string and the whole knot comes undone and that is the last straw for kaajjal. She turns with a sharp gasp and hides her flaming face into his shoulders. He is straining to get closer to her so he hugs her to him even more tightly.

Both are breathing hard. He pries her face out and cups it in his hands and bends down to kiss her tremulous lips his gaze hot and burning with a passion and hunger, when bua says "Oy toote dhol.... Woh laddoo ka dibba to store room mein hi reh gayaa. Yeh Hottie bhi naa, ek kaam theek se nahin karti. Ab mujhe hi laana padegaa...." Hearing this Kaajjal and Dev jerk apart from each other rudely awakened from their passionate play. Kaajjal doesn't know what to do while Dev is trying hard to conceal his frustration as anytime now they will be discovered. Kaajjal is trying to pull those damned doris as fast as she could but her fingers refuse to comply and she frustratedly looks at Dev for help. He very slowly ever so langorously takes those errant ends and begins to tie the ends into a knot just before somebody calls Bua and she is waylaid and goes out muttering... "Toote dhol...bua ke bina koi kaam hi nahin hota..,Oy aati hoon..." And she leaves the kitchen. Kaajjal heaves a sigh of relief and looks admonishingly at Dev and he smiles slowly but intently looks into her eyes as if asking, "Hmmmm" nuzzling her neck again, "Where were we? Shall we continue?" She firmly shakes a finger at him and just then she sees a tiny lizard and screams and jumps into his arms.... He sighs and says "Thanks a lot Chipkaliji, thanks" and salutes it. "Dev, I am petrified of lizards, please take me out from here..." He murmurs into her hair 'Gladly my dear..." And as soon as they get out of the store room they run right into NB who laughs and repeats "Sahi ja rahe ho devarji, lage raho....." He too smiles and says "Thanks bhabhi." She smiles smugly while Kaajjal hides behind Dev mortified and blushing, and NB stops him saying "Pehle ise to mitao" He then shyly smiles as NB hands him a tissue ot wipe a little sindoor of Kaajjal that has left its mark on his cheek. Tongue in cheek he wipes it ans Kaajjal giggles and runs out from there leaving a laughing Nandinibhabhi and Dev with a silly shy smile pasted on his lips........

Okay bhootnis time for chilling cold showers......😃

Preview : Dev teaches Kaajjal to ride a horse......😳