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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
WOw autum u make my weekends..Waise Dev ko hum saab miss Kar Kahe hai but your FF with H moon plans make us think DEV DEV and only DEV!!!! 😳 😳 😳 Pls continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dudleysam

hey calm down girl...bache log hain yahaan. 😉 ...gosh....am glad i closed my eyes then... 😆

looks like 10 days without APu will turn everyone nuts...

before besharmi ke saare hadd poore kar do...and some censors come in from the censor board....you and kashish shud run a 19plus AAA...only topic....for 10 ways DEv will try to capture those 10 days he missed Kaju...and no holds barred...shower...bed....garden...all ways you can think off....

sammy 😛

My God Sammy.... marvaogi....😆 I don't know if thats possible here...😃

Originally posted by: gambi

Autumn we are waiting, please continue soon. 😳

Sooooonnnn, I am updating now....😃

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Oh my Autumn ... that was just ... breathetaking! All three parts ... 👏

By now, you must be tired of me trying to praise you and yet still not achieving the level of praises that you truely deserve! Simply exquisite 😳 😳 😳

Coming from the suuhg raat part, to the morning part, where pyaari Devu makes Kaajjal tea -- haaiii, hope someday 'm just as lucky 😍 to the bathroom scene. Loved all three parts ... they all have left me breathles. And I also apologize sincerly 😳 that I couldnt read your parts earlier. I was away for a few days ddue to immense pain, but i'm back again! 😃 😃 Oh, that also reminds me, how are you feeling? Better, I take it with the three absolutely marvelous parts 😃 😃

I just love the bathroom scene with Devs naughty plans. And how he pushes Kaajjal to the shower and turns the shower on ... with his intentions clearly on his face .... 😳

Too good autumn! Please continue soon, and oyy Jyoths! Saamalkar! Have loads of fun with jiju on your vacation, but not too much fun 😉 Waiting for details as soon as you come back 😃 😉

Take care of yourself girl. You are still recovering girl....😡 But I hope all your pain has gone away now!!😃

Originally posted by: sharmii

I wish we can make vidoes just as easily as we make Fan-fics. 😆 😆
Im tooo .... 😳 to speak !!

Awww sharmii, I wish we had those special video rights too...😳

Originally posted by: india05

WOw autum u make my weekends..Waise Dev ko hum saab miss Kar Kahe hai but your FF with H moon plans make us think DEV DEV and only DEV!!!! 😳 😳 😳 Pls continue soon!!!!

Thanks Shanti!!! 😳 I sure hope you like the Honeymoon episode equally. Here it will come as I am updating it right now.....😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#73

Okay bhootnis hold your hearts and I hope I am not crossing any limits...😈

WARNING : Adult material, not suitable for little ears and eyes below the age of 18......😊

Part 4.................HONEYMOON in Mussourie.........Part-I.😳

Dev and Kaajjal prepare for the rest of the day packing stuff. Kaajjal is actually doing all the work while Dev is simply following her around trying to touch her for some reason nor the other. He has that look on his face as if it is part of his features. NB seeing this winks at Kaajjal and says "Dev!? Dev.... Devarji......... Zaraa hamaari aur bhi aapki nazar rakhiye. My God, Kaajjal..Kaajjal..Kaajjal... Yeh kya baaat hui. You have her all to yourself for the rest of the 10 days. Look as much as you wish. By the way, we are all coming too..." That gets his attention and he blabbers "Kya, for our honeymoon?😡" Then NB laughs and says "Yes, Satya uncle has kindly invited us all and we will be staying at the kothi there, so.... we are definitely going to be there with you two.😛 Now Dev's mind starts working double speed. My God, I thought Kaajjal all to myself in the kothi....😕 and now the whole singh clan acting as KMH 😕 Soch Dev jaldi soch aur kuch kar...........😃 Then he brightens up and thinks Got it!!!!

It will be a great surprise for Kaajjal too.....😈 Let them all come.... While Kaajjal looks at him with perplexed eyes and wonders ...'Now what is he cooking.?????😕

The whole Singh clan alongwith Kaajjal and Dev reach Mussourie......
Satya and Bua welcomes them all. Kaajjal first simply hugs bua and cries and cries. Like a small girl she hugs her and says "Aap se main baat nahin karti. Aap apni Kaajjal ki shaadi kaise miss kar sakti hain? Aapka Jaallandhar itna zaroori tha, ki apni Kaajjal ko bhool gayin?😭 Bua has tears too in her eyes and says "Chup kar marjaniye. Eh le, main to tere saath hi thi. Tere dil mein." She smiles and and Kaajjal too smiles and then "Toote dhol, kitna dubla ho gayaa hain tu Dev...." Then she realises that he is her damaad now, so she sheepishly says "Maaf karnaa damaadji....." Dev then in his trademark style says "Na na na na na... aap to mujhe Dev hi keh kar bulaiye. achha lagta hain." 😉 And they all leave to go to the singh mansion. Dev and Kaajjal are riding alone in a different car and kaajjal is perplexed as she wants to go with bua and hottie.... but Dev pulls her and in the car she is sulking..." Kya sochte honge sab? Why a different car?" Dev smiles impishly and says "Wait and watch my dear. Wait and watch" We shall reach in some time. I have to meet someone first." She is all the perplexed now and her sulk is forgotten. The other cars leave well ahead of them and they turn into another lane. She says "Dev you have taken a wrong turn......." She stops when he suddenly stops the car into a few bushes and pulls he suddenly towrds him and kisses her. "Dev......." She is lost as his lips are playing havoc with her body. He then releases her and says "Sorry. But I had to do that since you are looking so beautiful. and then I have other plans. There is no way I am going to spend our honeymoon amongst our family members, no way..." Then suddenly "Dev! Okay buddy get out of the car." They both get out to see Anupam standing there with open arms. Dev rushes to hug his friend and then Anupam greets kaajjal, "Namaste bhabhiji" She shyly replies to his greeting. "Okay, Dev, all is arranged as you had said. Thodi mushquili aayi, par don't worry intezaam ho gayaa...."😉 Tu bas ab enjoy kar. Okay to phir shaam ko milta hoon kothi par. All the best" Dev hugs him again expressing his thanks and Kaajjal is all the while wondering what has Dev cooked!

They then drive upto a small cottage by the hill. It is ina secluded place, but a very beautiful scenic view from the cottage. It is a private property and then Dev closes her eyes and syas "All for you madamji. Walk slowly, aaraamse....... and when they reach the main door, he takes his hands away for her to see.

The view takes her breath away. It is the same hill opposite the cottage that they met and all the memories come ruching bringing tears of joy to her eyes. She simply turns and hugs him tightly and whispers through her tight throat "I love you Dev...." He hugs her tightly too burying his head in her hair and sighing in all her fragrances.......... They both stay that way reluctant to leave each others arms. Their nearness is like a soothing balm, a salve which brings relief to their being separate bodies but having one soul.

Preview : Honeymoon part-II Dev and Kaajjal enjoy their privacy...............

Edited by autumnleaf - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

I m waiting for part 2!😃

Hehehe😆 I know it says that u shud nt read unless ur 19 or above But i read it😳 I m only 18 bt i still read it😳😆 But there was nothin bad in part 1! I m sure part 2 will b very intresting to read😳😛 Aaww... Autumn really it was so awesome!👏 I liked the way Dev said to Buaji that Nonono u dun hv to ask for forgivness!😳 Aaww.. i thought that scene was very cute!😛 Dev kissed Kaajal in jungle...Aawww...😍😍 But who is this new guy? Dev's friend?😕 Anyways, So Dev & Kaajal r now alone in that cottage!😳 Um....😍😍😍 I m getting so impatient!!! Please continue with Honeymoon part 2😳😳😳

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anoli

I m waiting for part 2!😃

Hehehe😆 I know it says that u shud nt read unless ur 19 or above But i read it😳 I m only 18 bt i still read it😳😆 But there was nothin bad in part 1! I m sure part 2 will b very intresting to read😳😛 Aaww... Autumn really it was so awesome!👏 I liked the way Dev said to Buaji that Nonono u dun hv to ask for forgivness!😳 Aaww.. i thought that scene was very cute!😛 Dev kissed Kaajal in jungle...Aawww...😍😍 But who is this new guy? Dev's friend?😕 Anyways, So Dev & Kaajal r now alone in that cottage!😳 Um....😍😍😍 I m getting so impatient!!! Please continue with Honeymoon part 2😳😳😳

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

Ahem, anoli, I edited my above post and made it '18'!!!😛 Now you fir into the age-limite criteria. And thanks a lot as the best is yet to come my dear. 😳This was the trailer, a tickler call it that if you wish.

Anupam is Dev's friend in Mussourie as he is a real character in the serial when it began when Dev met Kaajjal in Mussourie. Go and look at all the Mussourie episodes and you will find that Anupam was a strong support to Dev.😉😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Autumn the warning should b bhootnis below 20 r not allowed 😈 😈 ...u see the bachha party can enjoy in Anoli's nanland 😛 ..while we can just write down our burning desire of Kajal getting the feel of dev's lips in words 😳 😳 ...u see as it is I m hving a temperature of 102 today 😭 and this masterpiece of passion and desire is not helping my temperature to come down 😕 😆 😳 ...Autumn I just hope that we get to see the complete uncensored version in your next part with the age limit of only above 20 😉 😛
Edited by jyoti06 - 18 years ago
Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Autumn the warning should b bhootnis below 20 r not allowed 😈 😈 ...u see the bachha party can enjoy in Anoli's nanland 😛 ..while we can just write down our burning desire of Kajal getting the feel of dev's lips in words 😳 😳 ...u see as it is I m hving a temperature of 102 today 😭 and this masterpiece of passion and desire is not helping my temperature to come down 😕 😆 😳 ...Autumn I just hope that we get to see the complete uncensored version in your next part with the age limit of only above 20 😉 😛

Awww mishti whats this temperature thing? 😭 Are you ill? Oh please do take care of yourself. Kya jiju ne yeh haal kiya aapka? But I am sure he will bring it down too 😃 Get well soon and tomorrow I shall edit the post for viewership criteria to above 20 😉😛😳 and uncensored. Shart hai ki you shall save me from all the mods!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Ahem, anoli, I edited my above post and made it '18'!!!😛 Now you fir into the age-limite criteria. And thanks a lot as the best is yet to come my dear. 😳This was the trailer, a tickler call it that if you wish.

Anupam is Dev's friend in Mussourie as he is a real character in the serial when it began when Dev met Kaajjal in Mussourie. Go and look at all the Mussourie episodes and you will find that Anupam was a strong support to Dev.😉😊

Aaww thanks Autumn!!!😛 wohoo.. i can now read without any trouble I m 18!😃😆😆

Aaww.. is it? yeah i missed couple of episodes of kaajal so i guess i missed that episode abt Anupam in it!😳😊 But thanks for telling me!😊

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Autumn the warning should b bhootnis below 20 r not allowed 😈 😈 ...u see the bachha party can enjoy in Anoli's nanland 😛 ..while we can just write down our burning desire of Kajal getting the feel of dev's lips in words 😳 😳 ...u see as it is I m hving a temperature of 102 today 😭 and this masterpiece of passion and desire is not helping my temperature to come down 😕 😆 😳 ...Autumn I just hope that we get to see the complete uncensored version in your next part with the age limit of only above 20 😉 😛

😲 Did u just say that age limit of above 20?😲😲😲

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😭 Autumn plz dont do that!!!😭 Jyoti 😡😭😆 How cud u say that?😭😆 I M DEFINITELY GOING TO READ PART 2 NO MATTER WHAT!😆

& By the way no one is allowed to enter my Nanaland without my permission!!!😆 It is closed for each of u & also for bacha party!😍😍😆 & Also i m not a bachi!😳 I m 18 which is a junior Adult!😕😳😆

Take Care😍

Anoli😍

xxx😍

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Awww mishti whats this temperature thing? 😭 Are you ill? Oh please do take care of yourself. Kya jiju ne yeh haal kiya aapka? But I am sure he will bring it down too 😃 Get well soon and tomorrow I shall edit the post for viewership criteria to above 20 😉😛😳 and uncensored. Shart hai ki you shall save me from all the mods!😆

Arre I got fever because of this sudden climate change😡..and jiju was actually more busy in getting some strawberries for me😉😛..I hope now he feeds me and try to bring my temperature down bec it might go further up after watching today goat-bander circus😡

and well I can save u from the mods😛 but who will save me then😕😆...i think the uncensored version can b best pmed😉😛

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