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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey awesome part yaar...plz continue soon..it was rajs birthday... 😆

thx fr likin it ami bt y r u laughing at Raj's b'day???

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Posted: 18 years ago
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happy birthday shonaa 👏
are wah kya b'day hai rajveer ka...bichare soldiers b'day bhi bhagte hue mana rahe hain!!! 😭
ossome part aamna......n itna gr88 fic likne ke baad vaise bhi neend nahi aayegi tujhe.......but hve ur time of sleep........ur loyal readers can surely w8 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its too good yaar.naina aur raj ko plz jaldi milao yaar.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

happy birthday shonaa 👏
are wah kya b'day hai rajveer ka...bichare soldiers b'day bhi bhagte hue mana rahe hain!!! 😭
ossome part aamna......n itna gr88 fic likne ke baad vaise bhi neend nahi aayegi tujhe.......but hve ur time of sleep........ur loyal readers can surely w8 🤗

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i'll hav my time of sleep dear!!! luv ya

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: violence_peace

its too good yaar.naina aur raj ko plz jaldi milao yaar.

surely!!! thx fr liking it

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Posted: 18 years ago
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so alekh n ritu are set fr the mission....i hope everything goes fine n raj is spotted by them really soon 😊 😊

nice part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

so alekh n ritu are set fr the mission....i hope everything goes fine n raj is spotted by them really soon 😊 😊

nice part
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thxx dear!!! hp da mission get successful also in fetching me a few more readerzz

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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Hume bahut hoshiyaar rehna hoga!! Kyunki ye zaruri nahi ki Raj Keran pahunch chuka ho. Hone ko to ye bhi ho sakta hai ki Raj……." Aalekh tried stating possibilities.

"Tum apni possibilities apne tak he rakho samjhe??" Yelled Ritu as they began their journey.

"Ritu think practically!! Mere saamne unhone Raj ko shoot kiya tha……At least we shouldn't be driven solely by emotions!!"

"Mere case me emotions nahi, mera bharosa driving force hai"

"Lekin humari base approach kya rahegi???"

"Oh my goodness!!! Hum itne important mission pe jaa rahe hain isiliye maine tumse kaha tha vo file theek se padh lena…….how the hell can you be so careless Aalekh??"

"I read it Ritu, but how can you trust Colonel Chandra blindly???"

"Why not???"

"Can you give me any single reason for doing that??"

"And can you give one single reason for not doing that?? I can't believe hum ek itne important mission pe saath jaate hue is tarah ke basic matters pe lad rahe hain!! What has happened to you?? You should know that I take this as no joke aur kuch soch samajh ke he ye sab kiya hoga mainey!!!"

"I hope so Ritu!! Kyunki is mission me fail hone ka risk hum nahi le sakte….."

"You're right for the first time!!" She giggled.

"Nandini jee…"

"Hey Naina!!! Good to hear from you…..itne waqt se tum yahan ho par ye pehli baar hai jab tumne khud mujhe approach kiya….I'm so happy" She said and indicated her to sit. "Breakfast kar liya??"

"Haan!!"

"To bolo….kuch kaam tha?? Mujhe bula liya hota, abhi tum poori tarah se theek nahi ho!!"

"Mai theek hun!! Bas aapko thanks kehne aayi thi"

"Thanks…..the weirdest word ever created!!"

"Vo kyun??"

"Meri koi behen nahi hai Naina, I consider you as my sister……aur apno se thanks sun na mujhe bilkul pasand nahi"

Naina smiled and took a leave. She stepped out in the open air and took a deep breath.

"Mai theek hun Captain Mishra. Aap aur Captain Sharma kab nikalne wale hain??"

"Kal subah, finally!!"

This very thought of her conversation with Captain Mishra last night brought a smile to her. She believed firmly that she'll be with the love of her life very soon and that he would be fine. She closed her eyes with that smile intact.

"Nainaaaaaa…………" Rajveer shouted as he was shot.

Those dreadful moments began striking her once again!! She opened her eyes in shock and decided to divert her attention from all this. She asked Nandini and she allowed her to visit the nearby orphanage. As she entered, she felt light as she saw children playing around. But one child stood all alone in the corner that was looking at her constantly. She called him but he ran away…..Naina was amused at his innocence and was reminded of the child she met when she met Rajveer.

"Why the hell are you here Naina?? Tum is sab me kaise involved ho??" Asked Rajveer.

"First of all, as a journalist, and secondly, as your partner's sister!!" She answered.

"Stop giving me reasons all right!! I'll drop you at a safe place aur tum chali jaana…" He was literally shouting and due to that, the child started crying.

"Dekha!! Aapne ise bhi rula diya……Mujhe bhi rulayenge kya??"

Rajveer gave her a "What nonsense!!" kind of look as Naina explained her involvement through Navin's letter.

"Has he lost it??? Navin itni badi bevakoofi kaise kar sakta hai??"

"Look Captain Shekhawat, aap mujhe baad me daant lena!! But first of all, hume is bachche ko uski family ke paas pahunchana chahiye……Don't you agree with me??"

Rajveer stepped towards the child and went on his knees, "Kya naam hai tumhara??" He said while brushing through his hair.

The child stepped back, trying to hide beside Naina and held her arm tightly.

"Ye darr gaya aapse!!" She giggled.

Rajveer stood up and looked straight into Naina's eyes, "Navin was right……tum kabhi bhi kuch bhi bolti ho!!" Saying this he turned back again but to his surprise, the child ran and cling to him and Rajveer picked him up.

"Lagta hai ab ye mere mazak ka bura maan gaya!! By the way….you seem to be good with kids Captain!!" She commented.

Rajveer directed towards the exit but before leaving, he asked, "Tum chalogi??"

"Nahi………aap ise chod aaiye, mai yahiin intezaar karungi!!" She came closer, kissed the child and said, "Haan!! Ab aap jaaiye!!"

Rajveer smiled, trying best to hide it from Naina. And she was happy for that the child was safe and so was her brother's friend.

herez a small update coz i won't b updatng 2morrow!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
hey cool part....will be waiting for your next update... 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that ws a cute one....this child thing ws soo cute!!
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i really want to see naina n raj 2geder... 😳 😳 ....i hope raj is fine 😭
i m really worried!

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