Updates: pg.16 Part7 (Lakshentry)-KASHISH - Page 5

hmmm. i thinkk that hindi/english sounds better but yee english is wayy easier to write and read.

whichh ever way suits yu jess 😉

&& wow yr stories are awesome jess. lovee the characters. 😊 i cantt wait to findd out jais secret. 😲 so much suspense 😆

Originally posted by: sweet_puneet

hmmm. i thinkk that hindi/english sounds better but yee english is wayy easier to write and read.

whichh ever way suits yu jess 😉

&& wow yr stories are awesome jess. lovee the characters. 😊 i cantt wait to findd out jais secret. 😲 so much suspense 😆

thnks. 😊, but what ever gets the most votes so please you guys vote 😉

& thnk alot puneet.. 😊

Part 3

Bani- Raghu kaka, khana table per rakhlia?

Raghu Kaka- (doesnt the name keep on reminding you of the hunk raghu from Jab love hoa 😳) jee malakan.

Bani- teek hai, laksh beta ghar mai kal raat aya?

Raghu Kaka- nahin malakan, kal raat se woh nahin aya.

Bani- hai, baghban abh yeh baat Mr.Walia koi pataha chal gai-ee tho, 😕 👎🏼, Raghu kaka, aap kitchen sai juice laikaa aa-o.

Bani- pehla, mera pati abh mera beta. dono aaj kai din mai ghar rehna ka naam he nahin laihraih. laikun mai jaanthee hoi, kai mera barah beta nahin bhool -on gah. , Sujal!, sujal beta neechai aa-o.

Next the camera goes towards a messy but clean room. Papers, files, books, pens scattered everywhere but the clothes are neatly in the closet. On the bed, the bed sheet is made, but there are atleast 6 folders and a labtop covering the pillows. What kinda-of person lives in this room? None other then our unique, handsome, sweet, work-obessed, serious SUJAL.😳 🤗

Then the camera focuses on the bathroom door , where a handsome man like one below is shown. But only the body is shown not the face.

Comes out talking on his cell. Focus is on his hand with teh cell and side of his face.

Sujal- Mr.Malhotra, I do not care, mujhe woh contract chahee-aai. Aur Agar woh model nahin comprmise karaha hai, then kick him out. I do not need any delays with this fashion show. The delegates from Paris are coming next week, we need the foundation of this project done by friday. Understand, now i will talk about the rest of the details when i get to the office. Aur Mr.Malhotra, aaj mai thora saa late hoi jaaenga.

From Downstairs Bani- Sujal Beta! Nechai aa-o.

Sujal- yeh maa bhi naa, [ teh camera focuses on his lips 😳 😳]

Sujal goes to the dressingtable, and picks up his watch. Then takes his hand and goes through his hair twice. (MAN, THIS GUY IS TOO MUCH 😳) Then he grabs a package packed with wrapping paper.

Sujal- Maa, i hope you like this. Mai aa-rah hoon Maa. 😊 Then this handsome man runs downstairs, like how SRK ran towards his house in K3G. =)

Downstairs.

Bani- lagtha hai sujal office kehliya jaah gai aa. ( a sad expression falls on this mothers face )

She heads to the mandir inside the house.

Bani- Baghban, aap tho jaanthai ho, aaj kaunsa din hai. Mai sirf intha maangna chahthi hoon, kai yeh parivaar himaisha khush rahai. ( silence, all you hear are footsteps )

Raghu Kaka- malakan, mai chai table per rakhoon, laghtha hai malak agai-aa.

Bani- ( a smile is shown on her face and she drys off the tears on her face ) Nahin, Raghu Kaka, Mr.Walia nahin aya, tum ek glass dudh lai-kaaih aa-o, Sujal out gaya.

Bani turns around with the pooja dhali.

Sujal- (Smiles at his mother) Maa! aap koi himaisha patha kaise chal jaatha hai, mai tho kuch kehtha bhi nahin aur aap.

Bani- Beefakoof, mai tumahree maa hoon, tumharai footsteps (dunt know hindi that well, don't remember what its called 😆) se patah chal jaatha hai.

Sujal- aap bhi naa (goes and gives her a hug) He whispers in his mother's ear.

"Happy Birthday to Maa, Happy Birthday to Maa"

Bani- Tumhe jaad hai.

Sujal- of course Maa. Mai khabhi bhoola hai?

Bani- Nahin (laughs) Sab bhool gai tho islee ai,

Sujal- Papa, bhool sakthai ho, laikun mai khabhi nahin.

Bani smiles- mai janthi ho, aur abh tum dudh pee-o, aur nastha laga-on?

Sujal- nahin, maa, bhook nahin lagee

Bani- Khabhi lagthee bhi hai? (laughs)

Sujal- Maa, mai tho gaya.

Bani- Yeh apple aur banana bhi khalo nah

Sujal- of course maa, mai tho 5 saal ka bacha lagtha hoon. ( says sarcastically) Bye Maa. (bends down and touches her feet, WAAAAH KYA SANSKAAR. 😳 👏)

Bani- jeethai raho. Bye Beta.

Sujal- aur maa, yeh aap keh liya (He hands the gift to her)

Bani- yeh kya. (is about to open but Sujal stops)

Sujal- Wait, pehlai mai jaaon ga phir aap kholee-ai.

Bani- Bhagla kahin ka.

Sujal- aap ka bhagla hoon (laughs) Nah, yeh tho laksh kee line jaise laghtha hai. Waise humara bacha Laksh hai kahan?

Bani- Raat se ghar nahin aya.

Sujal- kya?

Bani- haan, mujhe tho bahitchintha hoorahee hai, agar tumhara papa koi patha chal gaya. tho..

Sujal- aap chintha math karo, apne dost ke saat hogo. Mai use phone karlon ga. Ok bye Maa.

Sujal leaves. Bani thinks to herself- Sujal tho mera chand ka tookrah hai, Agar Mr.Waila nai eshai adopt nahin keetha, tho mera kya hoga. Abh tho ithnee sai kwaishish hai, kai Sujal koi ek humsaafar mil jaay-ee. 😳

*Thats it, i know i do not get very far, but i just need to recollect my ideas. And i am not getting enugh comments , please do tell me if you want me to continue or no. I promise next time i will try my best to meet sujal/kashish. But you know it has to be the perfect moment. 😆😳, Please leave comments/feedback/suggestions/YourLove😳

iLOVEYU ALL. =) 😳😆

Originally posted by: fravashi

heu nice part 👏 . such a sweet and small family 😳 . kashish seems to be very responsible person as usual 😉 . anyway she is a sweet heart ❤️ . i really liked ths part too 👏 . u r a great writer 👍🏼 and yeah eaerly waiting for sujal and lakshya's entry and sujal kashish's meeting with each other 😳 . i wish kashish best of luck for her interview and i am sure she will get a good job in kashish magzine cause akhir sujal ki company hai yaar 😉 .

hey jessie u r punjabi. i really love punjabi's 👍🏼 . they are really outgoing personalities ⭐️ . i am marathi and i am from maharashtra province in india. i lived near mumbai city named nasik 😉 hey and u live in ontario that's great. even i live in ontario 😊 . it was really nice talking to u and may i know where do u live in ont. iam from hamilton. u must be knowing and i just finished grade 11th.will be heading grade 12th in sept. in which grade r u in and from how many years u r in canada. plz.......reply. and yeah!!! continue soon plz..... can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.

BALLE BALLE 😆, yups im a gr8 punjabii :P

oh, really hamilton. 😊 i live in mississauaga so were near eachother 😆

hey i ma sorry i havent catched lately but now i have read all ur parts....and awesome work yaar......cant wait to read more...KT AND DADUs part is quite funny.........adn kts leacture 😆 kahsish is gonna work in kahsish magazine(she will definately get the job)... 😛 and bani is so good...i am not so happy to know that mr walia didnt remembered her b'day.....but my sujal did so i am extra happy.......

plz continue soon...cant wait to read more.... 😛

ami_princess 😳

Just read all 3 parts even i m a gr8 fan of Sujal-Kashish and Laksh-Kt mmust say ur fan-fic is just mindblowing...keep goin!!

Originally posted by: sweet_puneet

HURRY UP AND CONTINUEE! imm so excitedd WANNA READ MORE AND MORE AND MORE 😆 😉

aw thanks puneeeeet 😆

im thinkin of an idea right now 😳