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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
wow. im so xcited 2 read another fan fic 4m u. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay ur starting a new ff...i LOVE dosti mein pyar 😃 😃 ...awesome prologue!!! poor kripa..angad get ready cuz kripa is coming for some sweet revenge 😆 😉
plzz cont soon!! i love it already 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
i thiunk so i will love this kripa...
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow really interesting cant wait to read more
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Prologue cont soon


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Yep Brilliant!!! 😆 👏

Love this concept. Hate the way her heart was broken though 😭 😭


thanks soo much!! yea i feel bad for her too!

Originally posted by: angel_tia

awsummm!!!!
luvv the prologue!!!!
n im sure ill luvv the ff too
poat 1st part soon!


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

oooo i saw the title n was very very intrigued....awesome sketch 4 angad n kripa n woah angad is a jerk!!!!!! great prologue.....dnt believe i wud ever say this but i hate angad 🤢 🤢 🤢 poor kripa......will b waiting 4 the first part 😃


thanks soo much!! yea angad is a jerk lol! thanks huN!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

YAY!!! me excited!!! i LOVE the the title & i LOVE LOVE LOVE the
concept!!! god, Angad is such a jerk!!!! poor Kripa!!! why is it always the
girl & never the guy??? sad!!! well, Angad is gonna get wht he deserves!!!
go Kripa, YAY!!! i really wanna know how she will do it though!!! i think
she will give herself a makeover, coz Angad called her behnji... nd if Kripa
does hate Angad after 8 yrs, nd after they meet or whtever, nd during the
revenge Angad falls in love with Kripa... wht willl happen??? coz Kripa wud
never take him back... but they r meant to be together!!! lol... soooo many
questions!!! lol... CANNOT wait to find out more... continue soon!!! i am
already in love with it!!! lol... 😛


glad you like the title, i was a little unsure about it! lol hmm i'd rather have a heartbroken kripa who is vulnerable than a heartbroken angad who is weak cuz we all know angad isnt weak lol 😉! yup you'll c if ur right! lol thanks soo much! lmao yea... about those questions even i havent answered them yet LMAO! yea thats whats bugging me or i would write for this ff more often! thats kinda what i have to figure out, the specifics lol but i know the general direction of it lol so thats good!

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great
cont soon
its sounds verry interesting
awww poor kripa


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: jdsean

That was great. First off I love the title its so apt. And Angad is really a jerk in this story. Can;t wait for the next part.


thanks soo much!! i was unsure of the title but im glad ppl like it! yea he is lol!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

yippieeeeeeee hey numera i'm so happy u've started another ff of ak they r my fav jodis i'm so happy
and i really loved the concept and intro it's amazing
poor kripa i felt bad for her.
cont soon will be waiting for the first part 😳

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sana


lol my favorite couple too!! thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 hey just read it awesome dear 👏


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

Wow awsome prolouge and character sketch..


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: banju

sound interesting
gr8 part
cont soon


thanks soo much hun!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

i remember you telling me the title to your new ff so as soon as i logged on i was like yayyy!!!!
aawwwww poor kripa, wonder what happens 8 years later.......

cont. sooooooooooon
ishuu?


yup yup! glad u like it!!

Originally posted by: komi2006

i love it 👏 👏 👏 waiting for the first part... cont. soon 😳


thanks so much!

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

i love da story so far.

angad is so mean 😡 i feel bad for kripa 😭

great amazingly fantastically fabulous beginning, cont soon please!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

your loyal reader 😃
<3 kiran
E> GA <3


hehe thanks hun!!! im continuing now k! glad u like!! and ur definitely a very loyal reader so thanks!

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

numeraaaaa i love it!
its better than i thought heehe
poor kripa angad is so mean it reminds me of fanaa lol 😛


thanks soo much! awww thanks!! lol fanaa LMAO don't worry im sure i wont kill them off... but u never know jk!

Originally posted by: dood10_158

wow! this sounds gud, can't wait 4 the rest....its much more mysterious n umm....whts the word "unsweet" unlike DMP, i like it, continue soon!


thanks soo much!! yea its apart from DMP, its not as fun and light hearted but i like this story for different reasons!

Originally posted by: pmrockz

AWwwwww AWESOME!

I cant wait till Chapter 1 its AWESOME alreday.
Kripa said she will break Angad's heart and i'm sure she will after 8years! Angad is just SOOOOOOOOOO MEAN!

Cont soon!


thanks soo much!! yea he is!! i like mean angad though... hehe reminds me of zaib... sigh LMAO!!

Originally posted by: mz.jess

Love it, new concept wonder what will happen, cont. soon darling 😊


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan

Nice introduction! Can't wait foe u to post the next part. <3 the title lol. and awh feel bad for kripa...angadddddddddd behave!!😆😳


thanks soo much!! LMAO thanks!

Originally posted by: misshotshott

wow!!! this is such a amazing start.. i cant waitt to read moreee.. wow!..XOXOXO


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. im so xcited 2 read another fan fic 4m u. cont soon. 😃


hehe thanks hun!

Originally posted by: subhag

yay ur starting a new ff...i LOVE dosti mein pyar 😃 😃 ...awesome prologue!!! poor kripa..angad get ready cuz kripa is coming for some sweet revenge 😆 😉
plzz cont soon!! i love it already 😃 😃


yup that i am! LOL! thanks!

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

i thiunk so i will love this kripa...
continue soon


thanks soo much!! lol shes a little sadistic just since she wants revenge lol!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

wow really interesting cant wait to read more


thanks soo much!!

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hey guys thanks for the wonderful comments! i thought it would mostly just be DMP readers, but there are new readers as well so thanks guy!! hmm so yea this story is really different from my first fan fiction, its a little darker in comparison i guess and probably not as much comedy. However the story is written in kripa's point of view so its a little comical. anyways the next part should be up soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1

Kripa

Present Day

I promise… I promise… I promise… I had awakened as the words from my past rang in my ears. It was something I had repressed deep within my mind, but for some time now I have been having this reoccurring dream. It is the most painful memory I possess, one I had no intention to relive. Even today I still remember his exact words. His every word had cut through me like a dagger. I do know that those words, his words have molded me into the person I am today. I am no longer the traditional, quiet, and innocent Kripa Sharma. I have become an argumentative, sophisticated, and modern woman. His words have changed me not exactly for the better, but not exactly for the worst either. In those awful moments of heartbreak I learned a lot, more importantly I learned to never let anyone take advantage of me ever again.

My take on love completely changed. I used to believe that love and trust go hand in hand. I can't seem to find myself trusting anyone completely, let alone give my heart away. I gave it away a long time ago only to gain rejection from the one I loved. I can't risk feeling vulnerable anymore. So obviously you can tell now that I no longer believe in love anymore. I vaguely remember the feeling of being in love with him, which is probably because the pain I received was greater than my love for him. I always felt like I lost a part of myself that day, along with my love.

After surpassing so much misery, today I head an entire fashion house and interestingly enough so does he. I know this because he has made many waves in America, but now he has come back here, to India after 5 years. So it's no surprise that soon enough we will be working with one another. I would have gladly rejected the offer, but somewhere in my heart I wanted to come face to face with the man that had broken my heart so many years ago. Well that and I father asked me to merge the company with my competitor. Why would he do such a thing, you may ask… well it's because my father is friends with Dilip Khanna, his father and they think that if the two best fashion houses get together our designs will be by far the best in the markets. My fashion house has already undergone construction to fit his employees as well as mine. In any case, I don't really like saying no to my father, so I accepted the proposal… whoa wait not proposal, bad choice of words umm I'll go with offer! Him and proposal… ugh NEVER!

Today, all I feel for him, is pure hatred and a desire for revenge, nothing more. Maybe I would have let this hatred pass through me had he not become the Casanova he is today. Yes, he has conformed to his ways of being a heartbreaker. He is quite a famous personality nowadays, as am I though I don't like to brag as much as him. He is on the television for some reason or another, mostly for his return to India and making everyone proud for his excellent work in America. Why wouldn't he be, after all he is the owner of a major fashion house, not to mention has several other large corporations under his belt, well his father's belt. He is filthy rich with the body of a Greek God and killer looks, which makes him the most wanted bachelor in India. You would think with the reputation of his womanizing behavior, women would stay away, but I guess money does talk. Anyways what gets me the most is that he is still quite proud of the fact that he can get any woman he desires with the snap of a finger. It's the worst feeling in the world to know that the man who has wronged you, continues to wrong other women as well. Sure, I make him seem like the devil, but really is he anything less than Satan himself? I think NOT! Nevertheless, my point is that he didn't change his ways, but he did change me instead. He changed my personality completely, but never bothered to perfect his own faults. For that, I had promised myself years ago that I would make him suffer through the same pain I went through and now it is time to fulfill that promise. I know by now, I sound like a broken record… but it's the story of my life.

Setting these thoughts aside, I finally muster up the courage to get out of bed after that horrid dream. I set foot into my shower to ease away the pent up anger and aggression I am feeling for him at this very moment. As the warm water touches my shivering soul, I feel the anger melting away. I can't let myself dwell on these thoughts for long because they only seem to infuriate me further. Today is no ordinary day at the office either, today I would be meeting him face to face. For years now I have only seen him on television about how well his fashion house is running in America. The moment I saw his face five years ago on television, I recognized him immediately feeling hurt seeing him so happy, so carefree, and so proud. I quickly throw on my bathrobe carelessly as I step out the bathroom, hugging to comfort myself in the process. I walk into my closet and pick out a short white skirt with pink flowers imprinted, along with a pink and black blouse and black knee high boots. I lightly apply some blush to my creamy skin and lightly apply kohl around my eyes to enhance the beautiful light brown orbs of my eyes, batting my naturally long eyelashes when I'm done. I style my thick dark brown hair with loose curls giving it that wavy look. Passing through my bedroom, I look into the mirror as his words ring into my ears, "have you looked in the mirror, shakal dehki hain aaine mein… ek dum behenji laagti ho!" I smirk as if challenging his statement, thinking, "Watch what this former behenji does to you Angad Khanna… just wait and watch!"

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Hey guys! So hoped you like the part! So the whole story is will be written in Kripa's point of view. The next part is when they finally meet, so Kripa will meet Angad and all his glory LOL! til then leave comments while i figure out specifics with this story! Oh and i know its quite short, but until I get a feel for the story, it will be sort of short, though im working on trying to make them longer k! oh and more characters will be added later!! LEAVE COMMENTS GUY!!!!

Edited by Numera* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok, AWESUM prt!!! i LOVE LOVE LOVED it, like always!!! i LOVE the fact
tht it is in Kripa's POV & i also LOVE the way she kept on saying 'he' &
'him' instead of saying his name nd also the fact tht it was italisized, it
makes it even more clear how much she despises him!!! lol... u know, no
matter how much she hates him, she still appreciates his killer looks, lol...
well, who cant!!! lmao... i totally loved Kripa's outfit, i cud visualize it by
the way u described it!!! lol... ohhh, nd i also loved the last prt where she
FINALLY said his name!!! lol... tht has got to be the best prt in the whole
prt!!! lol... anywazzz, i TOTALLY nd COMPLETELY loved the prt, again, nd
CANNOT wait to read the next prt, so u have to continue ASAP!!! lol... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow what an awesome first part!!!! man kripa does sound so much different than what she was in the prologue....thanxx the guy with "the bodt of a greek god" angad khanna.....wow their companies r merging....n they'll come face 2 face.....man angad tu tho gaya......i wud love 2 see what kripa does 2 him lol tht will b so fun......angad hasn' changed at all....idiot is proud of what he does....ugh hating him stilll.....plz dont make the hate continue but i know it will
my prediction - angad will see kripa n wont recognise her....he'll start 2 flirt n maybe kripa will string him along.....angad will fall in love n when he confesses....kripa will let him know who she is n tht she was the girls whose heart he broke......only then will angad realise his mistake
lol it sounds like a fab ff anyways n dnt matter if the parts r short...lol ur still gettin a feel 4 it....well i guess thts coool......neways will b waiting 4 the next part....so do continue soon!
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Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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numera!!!! omg, u cont too AMAZE me wit ur loads of mad skill...and mite i add, angad ki to wyatt lagni vali hai. excuse my spelling... 😆

omg, i lyke da new kripa...she's feirce, and modern. just da type of woman it takes to set a casanova str8...

cont soon, ill be waitin...

loyally ecstatic bouncing off the walls reader,
<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved this part
i liked the way u wrote from kripa's point of view
i'm waiting to see angad's reaction after meeting kripa
waiting for their confrontation 👏
awesome part loved it 👏 👏
cont soon




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sana



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