Memories of Love Part 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone! Sorry about updating after such a long time. I am just really busy with school stuff. Hope you guys enjoy this part and thanks for liking my fic.

Walia Mansion

At the breakfast table every one is sitting and janki whispers to Rishab about telling the kids about Garewals.

Janki: Tell the kids that they are coming to our house today so they know that should be at home. You also have to talk to Ishika because she is after all your "laadli"

Rishab clears his throat and tells everyone that he has an announcement to make.

Rishab: Actually me and Janki met our old friends yesterday and we invited them to our house for today so all of you have to come early. Ishika beta I need to talk to you about something so why don't you come with me to the office.

Ishika: okay dad I don't have any problem.

Anjali: Mom, actually I have an important meeting today so I have to go for that so I won't be here this evening.

Janki: But, anju please try to be here, I will really like it.

Anjali: Mom it's a really important meeting and dad and summi bhayia will also be absent so I have to do it all alone. I promise you I will try but I can't say if I will come okay so please don't be mad.

Janki: Okay as you wish. I am only letting you go because it's about your work.

Rishab: Janki let her go now. She is doing all this for our company. She has brought some very big projects to our company and I am really proud of her.

Mukti: Dad, now that's not really fair that you only praised anju di and forgot your other daughters and by the way how can you even forget the great "MUKTI" dad.

Omi: Yes Dad, how can you even forget our princess. Also, by the way that was really not fair to me and bhai.

Janki: Why are you guys taking it so seriously? Your dad and I are proud of you all.

Rishab: Yes that's absolutely right. Not only our anjali but I am proud of all my daughters. My daughters have made me really proud but I get sad when I think that someday they will leave me and go to some other house. I just have one wish that you guys always stay happy and wherever you go you make other people happy too.

Mukti: Dad now say some words for your sons too or else Omi bhai will turn black because of jealousy.

Everyone smiled at this comment because they knew that Mukti was changing the topic to make Rishab smile.

Janki: Mukti, he is your elder brother so behave yourself.

Omi: Leave it mom. I don't mind any thing she says. You know I love her a lot, and I always want to see her happy.

Mukti: I was just joking bhai, you know. I hope you didn't feel bad.

Omi: Come on, mukti stop being sorry and smile because I can never see you sad. Our mukti only gives orders not says sorry.

Mukti: So bhai, will you drop me to the college?

Omi: okay let's go. Bye everyone, and kripa you can come with me I will drop you too.

Kripa: Okay bhai. Bye mom and dad, and bye di. I will see you in the evening.

Janki: Kripa you come home early okay. You have to help me get everything ready since the guests are coming.

Kripa: Sure mom. I will just come after some time.

Kripa, Omi and mukti leave together.

Mukti goes to the college, while Kripa teaches at a music academy, while Omi works in his family business.

Summit: Ishika you are coming with me and dad right.

Ishika : Yes bhai let's go. I am ready.

Summit: Dad, you can come later; me and ishu are going okay.

Anjali: Bye everyone, I have to leave now too.

Janki: Bye beta and I hope you get success in your work.

Janki: Rishab, try to come as much early as you can okay and call me after you talk to Ishika.

Rishab: Janki, should I tell her the truth or not. And how will I convince her Janki?

Janki: Rishab, don't say anything about the proposal right now, just ask her if she loved anyone before and what does she wants to do with her life in the future. It seems like to me that she does not wants to live her life anymore. When I look at her, I feel like I am looking at a corpse, who doesn't have anything to do with happiness or sadness.

You know Rishab, when she smiles it feels like she is not smiling from the heart but she is forcing herself to smile just to show us that she is happy. But I am her mother and I can look through her Rishab. I have felt the pain of love and somehow I feel that my daughter is going through the same thing. I know her, she will not share her pain with me or you but you try to ask her about it maybe we will get a hint.

Rishab: I have also seen the pain in her eyes Janki, but I am still waiting for the day when she will trust us enough to tell us about her pain. I will try to make her understand to get married and I will even ask her to share her pain with me because I am her dad and I know I will have to take the first step. I will try my level best to take away her sadness and I promise you that we will bring happiness in her life.

Rishab: Now I am getting late. You make preparations for the dinner and it should be best because Prerna and Anu are coming to our house for the first time.

Janki: Don't worry everything will be ready when you will come back, and have a nice day Rishab. By the way I forget to tell you something you are the best husband, best father and best business man and the most handsome man in my life.

Rishab: Oh, WOW! So many good things about me. Thank you and now I will go.

Janki: Ahem Ahem! Aren't you going to say something about me Rishu?

Rishab: I will say if there is any, my Jan. Only that you have grown old, you have gained a bit weight and you have got some wrinkles on you face.

Janki: So mean Rishab. Okay go, I have so much work so don't waste my time. Go to someone who is slim, young and beautiful.

Rishab: Okay, Sorry Sorry. I was just kidding. I don't care if you have grown old or you have wrinkles on your face or you have gained some weight because I still love you from the bottom of my heart because you taught me the meaning of love. When I look at you my heat beats and I realize that you are the only person that can make me strong and that can make me weak. You are the only woman that has changed Rishab Walia and only you have that effect on me that can make me go on my knees.

Janki: Thank you Rishab but was it necessary to tell me that I am grown old and all other things.

Rishab: Now don't get mad, that's my way of praising someone.

Janki: Okay my old hubby, I won't mind anything you say. Now go or you will get late.

On the other hand, Summit and Ishika are driving and they see a kid crossing the street, however, suddenly a car comes in front, and to save that kid it turns the other way and hits the tree. Summit stops his car and both him Ishika rush to the car to see if the person is fine or not. When they open they car they see a girl lying unconscious in the car and her head was bleeding too.

Ishika: Bhayia, let's take her to my hospital. She is injured and blood is coming out too.

Summit: Let me see her Ishika. Oh my god her wound is deep too. Let me tie this handkerchief so that the blood flow stops.

Ishika: I am holding her you tie it and then hold her to take it to our car because her car is not in the condition to move.

I will stop it here for now. Now I will try to update more quickly. Please comment and let me know if you like this part or not. Now the next part will start the meetings of the jodis because I now done with the introductory of the two families and some insight about them.

Edited by asifashafiq - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR CONTINUE
nice part
eagerly waiting for jodis meeting
pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey firstly...thnx for updating n also for the PM. The part was really nice....and am w8ing eagerly for Rajveer....hehe. But anyways....wanna see how Rishabh talks to Ishika.....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww yaar u updated after ages & that part roxxxxxxxx!!! Loved it(Specially Mukti's dialogs 😛 😛 )Can't wait till Prem-Mukti meets each other & fall in love 😳 😳 😳 Plzzzzzzzzz try to update as soon as posible...I'm a very impatient girl u knw 😉 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for continuing and also for the pm..................hope u will continue this ff more frequently now.................the family scene was very nice................wonder who that gal is.................cont soon dear................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
I hope you will enjoy this part and please ignore the mistakes and i will try to post as soon as i can.

Summit and Ishika on road

Ishika: Bhayia, let's go now. She has already lost so much blood.
Summit: I am trying to get her out of here. Here i am done, let's go and ishu go fast and open the door of our car for me please.
Ishika: okay i am opening it and you quickly bring her.
Summit while driving: Should i take her to your hospital?
Ishika: yes, that will be good. We will not have any problem in getting her admitted because everyone know me there so they won't ask questions.
Both of them take that girl to the City hospital, where Ishika works as a Psychiatrist.In the hospital the doctors are treating the girl while Summit tells Ishika that he is late for work so he will go to to the office and she should wait in the hospital till the girl gets her treatment.
Ishika: okay bhayia i will stay here but you tell dad about this and tell him that i will be late okay
Summit: Ishu, while going back i will go back to her car and maybe we will get some clue about her to inform her parents.
Ishika: That''s a good idea.
Summit: Take care of yourself.

Meanwhile Summit goes to check the girl's car. He finds her mobile phone. He couldn't identify her name from it, however, he started checking the numbers and he easily got her home phone number.
Summit to himself: This number has the name "home" on it, i should call on this to inform her house.
Summit calls on the number and a man picks it up.
Man: hello, who do you want to talk to?
Summit: Hi! My name is Summit and I would like to talk to the owner of this house.
Man: No one is at home right now but you can give me any message. Actually , I work in this house and I will inform my boss about it. .
Summit: I called to inform you that a girl from your house got into an accident and is in City hospital.
Man: Do you know her name?
Summit: No, I don't know her name, however, just tell your boss that she is in City hospital and my sister Dr. Ishika is in there with her so they should go to the hospital and ask about her and she will take them to the girl.
Man: okay, thank you so much I will inform them right away.

Meanwhile Ishika is waiting in the hospital and the doctor comes to her.
Doc: Ishika, she is alright now, we have treated her. By the way is she related to you? I mean you were here for her all this time.
Ishika: No doc , actually me and my brother found her on the road and i didn't wanted to go from here without knowing that she is alright.
Doc: I have bandaged her wounds and it will take time for her to heal, however, overall she is alright and is sleeping because of the injection that i gave her.
Ishika: Thanks doctor.
Doc: No problem that's our duty. I will go now and you take care.
Ishika: Doc i will go to my cabin now but can you please inform me when she will become conscious.
Doc: okay i will tell the nurse to inform you.

Rajveer is in his car deep in thoughts. He was thinking that why he is suddenly remembering the memories of his past again and again. He tried to jerk those memories aside but no wonder why today he was not able to ignore them.
Rajveer to himself: Why am I feeling her presence here again and again? Is she in Mumbai? But how can she be here? Who cares even if she is here. i don't have any relationship left with her? She is just a bitter past and nothing but a beautiful illusion for me today.
Meanwhile he gets a call and gets shocked.
Rajveeer: Okay Ramu kaka, i am going right now and you don't worry by the way the name is City hospital right.
Ramu kaka: Yes, and should i inform others about this too?
Rajveer: No, don't tell anyone right now i will tell them about it myself.
Ramu kaka: Rajveer beta one more thing you have to ask for some Dr. Ishika there that's what the man told me.
Rajveer: Doctor Ishika? What are you saying? Are you sure it's this name?
Ramu kaka: Yes Dr. Ishika. Are you all right beta?
Rajveer: Yes, I am all right. Okay , I will go right now.

In the hospital, the girl gets conscious and the nurse goes and tells ishika about it.

I know this is a small part but please bear with me i will try to update a lot more next time.
Edited by asifashafiq - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part...........
so rajveer too has a past and i think the gal is ishika...............hopefully..............and u stopped at the crucial point...............hope rajveer and ishika meet soon.................cont soon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Cool part...Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon..Can't wait for Prem-Mukti meeting.. 😉
Love u..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ohh....so Rajveer is having a past wid Ishika....hmm....and he is gonna meet her....thats realy interesting!! W8ing for their meet....and pls try to continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
awwwwwwwwww that is so cute and i am a big prem and mukti fan!❤️

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