Memories of Love Part 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum intro and prt 1 luvd it. 👏 👏 keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome. loved it. please continue. cnt wait till prem & mukthi meet
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everybody.I am posting second part today.Please comment about it, and even criticisim is allowed.Thank you.Ignore the mistakes.

Part 2

Garewal Mansion

Kavya, prem, sneha, kumkum made all the arrangements for the party.Everything was ready and all the guests were there too.Suddenly kavya got a phone call and it was angad.

A:Bhayia we are comming.

KA:ok.guys they are comming.

They turn off all the lights and everybody was ready to surprise the couple.

Outside the house anurag prerna and angad arrive

Angad:Mom dad why don't you guys go inside while i park the car.

Prerna:Ok beta.Let's go anurag.

And they both came inside alone,and they saw that there was darkness all around the house.

P:Anurag why is it so dark and where are the kids.

Anu:I don't know prerna but let me switch on the lights.

Before he could do anything lights came on ,and everybody yelled "SURPRISE"

Both of them were really shocked and then happy.Everybody came upto them and wished them

Their kids came upto them

P:Thank you so much for the party.

Anu:Yeah.It was really wonderfull surprise.

Kum:come on mom no need to thank us .

Sneha:We did'nt wish you because we wanted to surprise you.

Prem:Now be happy and enjoy the party.After all it's your day.

Suddenly a voice came

Voice:Prem is absolutely right.

Everybody turned around and they were shocked , surprised and happy to see the person and it was none other than RAJVEER GAREWAL (Rajeev Khandelwal).

Raj:Hello everybody.Surprised to see me.

Everydody went up to him and hugged him.They were all so happy to meet him after such a long time.

Anu:Why didn't you tell you me that you were comming today

Raj:Because i wanted to surprise you.Come on now let's enjoy the party.

And then Raj and kavya started talking, while prem and angad were too busy flirting with girls,and enjoying their attention.Soon everybody was on the dance floor.Prem,Angad,Kavya,Raj rocked the dance floor and everybody enjoyed the party. Prerna and anurag were really happy to see their kids enjoying the party.Soon the party ends and they all went home.All of them were so tired they went to sleep as soon as they hit the bed.

Comming up:Walia Family

Sorry guys it's a short part but next time i will try to update bigger parts.Enjoy.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great fan fic plzzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow great i love to read ak scene 👏 👏 👏 and all also
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwww da kids r so sweet they gav their rents a surprise party 😛 lukin 4ward 2 da waliaz wonder wat there life is lik 😉 update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just read last two part
it is good
all are my favorite jodis
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

Hi guys.Thanks for the lovely comments.I am posting another part today.I hope this makes up for not posting for so many days.Please comment,and ignore the mistakes.Thanks.

Walia House

We see a big and beautifull mansion.We zoom in it and then we see a women trying to wake someone up.We can see her face and she is Mrs Janki Walia.And the man that is sleeping is Rishab Walia.
Jan:Rishab please wake up.You are getting late for office.
Rish:I am the boss janu i can go anytime.
Jan:But i want you to be on time.
Rish:Then just five more minutes jan.
Jan:Rishu this is the last time, if you don't get up i will pour water on you.
While Janki was trying to make him get up Rishab got up and hold her by the waist.
Jan:Rishu what are you doing someone will come.
Rish:Nobody will come but i forget to tell you something.
Jan:What is it?
Rish:That you are looking very beautifull today.
Jan:What do you mean i don't look pretty everyday.
Rish:I didn't mean that, sorry if you feel bad
Jan:Rishu i was just joking why are you taking it seriously.
Jan:Now hurry up.Go take a shower.You don't want to be late for office and she pushed him into the washrom.
Then she went to wake her kids up.(Let's see what the kids are doing.)

We see a girl sleeping peacefully and the other girl is trying to wake her up.
G1:di let me sleep.
G2:Anju stop whining and get up or else you will be late.(The girl that is sleeping is anjali, and the girl that is trying to wake her up is Ishika).
Anj:di you never let me sleep.
Ishi:Ok now stop complaining and, go and get ready.

While in another room another girl is sleeping.She is looking yery innocent.A girl came in her room,and moved the curtains to let the sunlight in.When sunlight hit her face she woke up.
G2:Good morning sleepy head.
G1:Good morning kipa di.(Yes that girl is kripa,and the other girl is mukti).
Krips:Go get ready while i am cleaning your room.

While janki went to woke her sons up because she knew her daughters will be awake, and getting ready.First she entered summit's room, and she saw that he wasn't there.So she knew he was already up and taking a shower.Then she went to omi's room, the room was so messy that she couldn't step in there.The walls were full of posters.On the bed omi was sleeping.She went inside and started to woke him up.
Jan:omi wake up beta.
Omi:Mom please let me sleep.I don't want to get up right now.
Jan:Then you will be late for your concerts.
Jan:After listening to the name of concert he jerked up and hurried to the washroom to get ready,while janki just laughed.

After doing pooja everydody was on the breakfast table.Summit and Rishab were having a discussion about business.Janki was busy scolding omi for not getting up in the mornings.Mukti,anjali,kripa and ishika were talking and teasing each other.When janki saw this
she reminds everyone that they were getting late.Omi get up to go but before he told his mom that he was going to come home late today.
Jan:But omi you come home late everyday.Before she could say anyting else Rishab spoke up.
Rishab:omi how are your reharsels going these days
Omi:Excellent dad.Bye everybody.Summit also got up.
Jan:Summit are you going?
Summit:Yes mom i have a meeting.Bye everybody.
Jan:Beta can you take mukti too.
Sum:Sure mom.Let's go mukti
Mukti:You go bhayia i am coming.Ishika, anjali ,and kripa also got up to go.
(Anjali worked in their family business, while kipa is an interior designer.Mukti was in collage, and omi is a rockstar.Ishika is a doctor ,and summit works in his family business).
Kids went to their work, while their parents were still sitting there.
Ris:janki i am going too.Give me my watch and wallet.
But janki was still sitting there lost in her thoughts.
Jan:What is it Jan that you are worried about?
Jan:Rishab i want to talk to you about something.Rishab knew it was something serious because whenever she calls him Rishab that means she was serious.
Rish:What is it Janu?
Jan:Don't you think Rish it's time for Ishika to get married and settled down.I mean she has a rocking career.I think she needs a life partner whom she could share her life with.She can't stay alone all her life.
Rish:I am thinking about it too.But it's Ishika's life and we can't force her into marriage.I don't think so that she will agree for marriage.
Jan:Don't worry Rish somehow i will convince her this time.
Rish:Are you sure Jan?You don't want her to be angry about this.
Jan:I know she will be angry but i am her mother, and i worry about her.She is old enough to get married now.
Rish:Ok don't worry i am with you.Then start guys for her.
Jan:Thank you Rishab.I am sorry that you are late for office because of me.
Rish:I will go but first i want a kiss
Jan:Rish behave yourself.
But he was her husband he got his kiss and then went leaving her in smiles.She also got busy in her day to day activities.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that wasa great update plzzz continue soon!...i hope PM meet soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys please comment.2 comments are not enough for me to continue the fanfic.Thank You.

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