Memories of Love Part 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi! i'm a new reader! i like ur fic! its really good! don't get discouraged about the comments, the more you write the more readers you'll get! i can't believe they want to force ishaka into a marriage! anyways continue soon, looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

Hi guys.Please comment and try to ignore my mistakes.Thanks.

Garewal Masion

It was morning in Garewal mansion.As usual Prerna was running around the house and was trying to wake everybody up.After waking them up she was setting the breakfast when suddenly her husband called her

Anu:Prerna where is my wallet?I can't find it.

Prerna smiled after hearing it,even after so many years of their mariage he was still dependent on her for everything.But she loved doing these small thing for her husband.Just then her son started to tease her.

Angad:Mom go quickly or else dad will start shouting again

Prem:Yes mom and take your time.

Everybody started laughing.She was really embarressed in front of her kids but then she gave them a stern look and went to see her husband.

Prerna:Anurag what happen?Why are you shouting?

Anu:Prerna i can't find my watch and wallet.

Prerna:Here is your watch and your wallet.Anything else.

Anu:Yes a kiss

Prerna:Anu have some shame.You are father of grown up kids.

Anu:But i don't look like it and,If you don't give me i can take it too.

Prerna:Let's go or else someone will come, and you are getting late.

Anu:First my kiss, then i am going to come.

Prerna gave him a kiss on cheeks.

Prerna:Now let's go.

Anu:ok

Both of them came downstairs.Now everybody was on brekfast table doing breakfast.

Anurag and raj and kavya were talking.Prem and Angad were teasing kumkum and sneha.

While Prerna was looking at her happy family.She didn't want anything else in her life.She had a loving husband and wonderful children.She prayed that nothing bad should happen to her family.When all of them were busy talking she interupted their conversation.

Prerna:Aren't you guys getting late?Stop talking and finish your breakfast.

When all the kids left Prerna told Anurag something which shocked him.

Anurag:Prerna why did you do that without asking?

Prerna:Because i can't see him mourning over past.I want him to move on in life.

Anurag:You should have talked to him before calling the girl's parent for his marriage.And don't forget he won't agree for it.

Prerna:Leave that to me, but for right now let's see the girl.Girl's parent's are coming here today.So we need to send the kids out in evening.

Anu:Ok i will talk to them.

Anurag went and called Raj and told him that he gave a party for the project.

Anu:Raj you guys need to be there to host the party because me and prerna can't come.

Raj:Ok dad me, kavya and kumkum will be there.But sneha prem and Angad can't come because they are going to their friend's party.

Anu:Ok beta as long as you guys will be there. I have no problems.

Raj:By the way Dad where are you and mom going?

Anu:We have an important meeting at home to attend.And one more thing after party can you guys go to our farmhouse and spend the night there,because i don't want to get disturbed when i am in meeting.Can you also tell this to Prem,Angad and Sneha?

Raj:ok dad.Bye

Anu:Bye take care.

Walia Mansion:

Janki and Rishab are geting ready to go see the boy for Ishika.They are going to the boy's house

Janki:Rishab let's go.We are getting late.The will be waiting for us.

Rishab:Ok let's go.Did you see the address?

Janki:yes i did.Now let's go.

Party

Prem:Shit ! Bro, i forget something.

Angad:What are you saying Prem?

Prem:I forget to tell mom, that a phonecall came for her from M. bureau and they said that the girl's parents can't come today.(Guys don't get confuse M bureau is a Marriag Bureau.)

Angad:But Prem what does that mean?

Prem:I don't know but who are these girl's parent?

Angad:So why don't you call home and tell mom right now?

Prem:Her phone is off right now, and the landline is busy.

Angad:Ok then tell mom when we go home.

Prem:I think you are right.

Just then Sneha comes

Sneha: Prem, Raj bhayia called right now and said that we are going to our farmhouse after the party.

Prem:But why Sneha?

Sneha:Bhayia told me that dad said that some delegates are coming home for meeting,and he doesn't want to get disturbed.

Angad:Ok.But are we going alone?

Sneha:No we are going with raj bhayia, kavya bhayia and kunkum di.

Prem:Cool, so we are going to spend our night at farmhouse.It's going to be fun because Mom and dad are not going to be there.

Sneha:Yeah but Raj bhayia is still there, so don't even think about doing anything bad there.

Prem:Yeah still but bhai is not strict like mom.

Garewal Mansion

Prerna:Anu when are they going to come?

Anu:Relax Prerna.They will be coming.

Rishab and Janki in Car

Janki:Rish drive quickly.The weather is not so nice.It's going to rain today.

Rish:I am driving as quickly as i can.

Just then it start raining, and their car got struck in the middle of the road.

They tried to start it again but it didn't move.When the car didn't move they decide to walk because they didn't see anybody there.Now both of them were all wet, and their car was struck in middle of the road.They called the girl parents and told them that they couldn't come today.Both of them decided to find some help.They started to walk, after walking for half an hour they saw a big mansion.They decided to go in there, and ask for help.When they went there and rang the bell , an old man open the door who looked like the servant of the house.

Back at Garewal Mansion

The doorbell ringed so Ramu kaka (their servant) went to open the door.Just then we hear prerna's voice,who was in her room.

Prerna:Anu i think the girl's parents are here.Let's go

Anu:You go .I am coming in two minutes.

Prerna went downstairs and called Ramu kaka

Prerna:Ramu Kaka who is it?

Before Ramu kaka could say anything Prerna came there.When she saw who was at the door she became shocked.

Edited by asifashafiq - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
awesum.hey plzz make d couplez meet soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey, i know i didn't post a comment for the 3rd post but
now i HAVE to say that the last 2 parts was AMAZING! can't wait till all the young lot meet, do continue real soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that was a great update plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
Great ff
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey when u continuing the ff?
please do soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Sorry guys for not updating.Actually i was really busy with my school that's why i couldn't update.But now i will try to update as soon as i can.Thanks for the wonderful comments. 😊 😊 thank you.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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where are u yaar 😭 😕 😭????????????..........waitting eagerly for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzz............can't wait !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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updating any time this year?!?! 😆

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