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Posted: 18 years ago
ohhhh no poor kashish 😭 . kuch karti taknahi hai lekin phir bhi usse kitna bura lag raha hai . waise neelz why this sujal is not talking to kashish 😕 . bore nahi hota kya usse aise puri raat shant shant bita ta hai . i thought ki kuch bolega, dono apna mann halka karenge 😳 .lekin yeh toh kuch ho hi nahi raha hai 😭 . continue soon yaar plzz... can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
i must say itss a very differnt concept yet its just mnindblowing..the way u hv sketched!!!gr8 goin!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: belanila

thanxs 4 likin me,who was tht kind frd of urs can i knw?

Her username is easygold😊 I know u both r good frnds.

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Posted: 18 years ago
k rote rote so jaati hai

abb pata nahi kyun s wanna console her

tell her ki thts not the matter

k ke asooyon se dard s ke dil mein naajane kyun uth raha tha

paar k to so gai,to s bhi kya karta s bhi baitha baitha so jaata hai

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abb subah hoti hai to k ki ankh khulti hai

aur wo dekhti hai ki s jaa chuka hai

she feels bad ki kahin kal wali baat ka bura to nahi maan gae

k ka saara din isi tension mein bitta hai ki kya s aega ya nahi

akhirkaar shaam hoti hai

k ankhen band karke soch mein dubi hui baithi hui hai

ki s aega bhi ya nahi

achanak k feels somethin

jaise uske dil ne awaaz di ho ki ankhen kholo aur dekho

k opens her eyes

aur saamne s ko khada pati hai

wo hadbada ke khadi ho jaati hai

s turns 2 go twrds the room

paar ruk ke kehta hai

s-aao!

k quietly follows him

abb s phir locks the door

aur window ke taraf dekhke,aur k ko naa dekhe pina strt

aur k wahin bed paar apni jagah baith jaati hai

wo aata to hai,paar as usually dur rehta hai

doesnt even talk

she is felling really bored...

ushe kuch samaj nahi aah raha kya kare...

she is feeling he is quiet kados but a good person also....

so kuch keh bhi nahi sakhthe...
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she scared to tell him anything also..

kal kaise chik pada uspe...

but now 2 ghante ho gaye-

he is jst drinking n thinking

n she is bored..

uske sabar ka bandh tut chuka hai

she jst strts singing without realizing in her own dhoon..

kuch soochke.

she is singing

k ahram se aankhen bandh karr ke gaa rahe hai

but very sweetly

thode dher badh she happens to open her eyes

n she sees s lookin at her

s claps his hand 2 or 3 times bass {clap mein bhi kanjosi}

turns n says aacha gaate ho....

k is become pani pani..

daar bhi rahe hai n shocked also.

. shocked like "yeh bolta bhi hai"

itne pani pani ho chuke hai ke she jst turns n chup chap sleeps..

subha uthe hai by tht time s has gone...

but kal he spoke his first words to her
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow sujal roz ata hai kashish k liye par kuch kehta nahi i think he luvs kashish that the reason he comes daily nice part cot.Soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice part 👏 I hope they will start talking.
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Posted: 18 years ago
then nxt day...

evening..

patha nahi kyun but k is waiting.

. waiting like waiting for somebody.

.. somebody like special some1

but all his friends come..
.
wo nahi aata...

k is missing him thoda thoda..

. patha nahi kyun....

then after some time

he comes...

n again takes her to the room.

.... again wohi drinking

.. again k bed pe boared ho rahe hai

.... but tdy

she is trying to make her heart strong

to tell this kados something

means try to talk to him

... she also goes n stnds near the window

paar thoda doorr...

aacha then s goes away frm there

n sits on sofa

closes his eyes...

k is like "main bhi na... kise baat karne chale thi.. zara bhi yeh nahi hai ishe tho..... main hi bewakoof ho jo ishe baat karne chale thi"

{thoda rutke she is staring at him wondering how can anyone be so quiet}


phir wo jaake bed pe sits

k- "jao chup tho chup hi sahe"[murmers]

but she is now damn bored...

its really getting to her... so she says

k- "aap kya bachpan se aise hi hai?"

he opens his eyes

n looks at her..

first of all he dint understnd her question...

s- "matlab"

k tries changing the topic


k-emm emm.. main tho keh rahe thi ki aap kya bachpan se hi aise...

s- aise kaise?

{not rudely but his voice is only rude so k thinks he is getting angry

k- kaise wo.. pagal...

s-????

k- pa..gal..pagal main ho.. main pagal hoo bachpan se...mumma kehte hai.. sab.. main..[tryin 2 change the topic darr ke,pata nahi kya bol rahi hai]

s- Ok {he again pours another peg n stnds near the window}


k is making herself queit

thoda zor se bol rahe hai.

k-kashish kise aur ke sath hone se aacha iske sath boared hona aacha hai.. chup karr tu.. chup ho ja"


k ko patha nahi kya bol rahe hai

... she is quiet bored...

so gusse mein she called s pagal

but then she realized n changed it

s is staring at her..

k ko lagtha hai he heard..

she gives a cute baby smile means maine kuch nahi kaha...

. n sleeps again...

but neend nahi aah rahe hai


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Posted: 18 years ago
hehehehe ' yeh bol tha bhi hai' 😆 i loved that line! good parts!!!!!!!

continue soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
neend nahi aa rahi hai k ko

she gets up n sits

n is jst playing with her dupatta

either with her hair

either with the bedsheet

or walkin around....

she goes n stnds near the window.....

bahut bored hai

so she jst streach her hand {we streach na when we get up or boared}

without realizing

she litrally punches s

but it hurts his bottle n all sharaab falls on s

k is like opppppssssss emmmm errr

{dare hue bhi hai n nervous bhi

so nervousness mein

she takes a mug of water to clean the sharaab

n throws it on s}

s is like "wht the helll" his expression i mean...

k aur darr jaate hai

n phok marne lagte hai to dry s.. {she is nervous na so she doesnt knowht she is doing}

she stps phok marna n tries to wipe s with her dupatta...

s is lost it but keep cool bcoz its k....

s-"its ok its ok leave LEAVE"

k hat jaate hai

phir daarke chup chap bed pe baith jaati hai

s apna shirt nikal tha hai n goes to fresh n up

k gets up to takes his shirt to dry it..

so she takes the iron

n goes to iron his shirt

n ek jhagha pe iron zyaadha hota hai

shirt phat jaata hai

{aaj ka din ghadbhad hai}

k is like

k-"oh no.. aaj ka din hi kharaab hai ab kya hoga oh no..... plz help me koi tho .. mujhe bachao"

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Posted: 18 years ago
s comes out

n sees his shirt in k's hand

before askin anything k answers like a parrot

k-"maine aapka shirt liya .. iron karna tha.. take sukh jaye lekin lekin yeh phat gaya i am sorry.. lekin mere koi galti nahi"

s goes to scream at her

but is impressed by her honesty

n keeps quiet

jst smiles

n takes the shirt n wears it...

thode dher badh-

k looks at s wore the phata hua shirt......

lookin at him k ko hassi aah rahe hai upar se

but she is controlling {its lookin funny thik centre mein hi phat gaya}

she strts laughing loudly...

s is 😳

to k stps laughin,chup ho jaati hai

s turns away frm k & smiles 2 himself

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